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Penname: MommasLittleMasochist [Contact]
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Member Since: April 01, 2010
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Beta-reader: Yes

Okay so I used to write a bit, but it got way to hard to keep up with it and I decided it just wasn't for me. So now I read and review mostly, but I am trying to get more involved as a Beta-reader. I am currently Beta-ing a story called Feral Blood by CarlislaCooper. I am always looking for more work. I have a very flexible schedule.


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Reviews by MommasLittleMasochist
 
Summary:

Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.

 

 

Hiding in Plain Sight

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012


Reviewer: MommasLittleMasochist Signed
Date: September 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: September 4 - December 23, 2008

i love it keep going!!!!

 
Reviewer: MommasLittleMasochist Signed
Date: June 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: February 29, 2008

Please update soon!

 

 
Breathe Again by Ysar Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5438]
Summary: Feature

You know those fics where Edward doesn't come back and Bella forgets about him and five seconds later she's in bed with Jacob and none of it makes any damn sense?
Yeah, this isn't one of them.

This story picks up from the moment in New Moon when Jacob has driven Bella home after the cliff diving incident, right before he catches the scent of Alice. Only in this telling, Alice wasn't looking, so there's no sudden appearance at Bella's house, no Rosalie calling Edward and sending him on a suicidal mission to Volterra, and no reason for Bella to do anything but believe that Edward didn't love her anymore. This is simply a story of what might have happened if everyone stayed mostly in character and Edward's return was delayed. Yes, delayed. Because we all know that he was "this close" to coming back on his own anyhow.
So what would have happened if Bella had tried to move on with her life?  Would she have found happiness with Jacob?  And would Edward be too late?

* First in a series of stories


~I thought of Jacob’s warm arms wrapped around me, his infectious laughter, and his ability to keep me from falling to pieces again… The pain choking my heart relaxed and I could breathe.~

 

~“More than anything,” I whispered, not caring what I'd just agreed to. When it came to Bella, it didn't matter what the question was. I just wanted.~

Winner of:

Best Author, Most Romantic, Favorite Jacob, Most Suspenseful, & Best WIP in the Wolfpack Awards | Best Non-Canon Pairing (Incomplete) and Best WIP in the Moonlight Awards | Best During the Series in the Razzle Dazzle Awards | The Storyteller Award in the Shimmer Awards | Best JacobxBella in the Silent Tear Awards  


Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: A Blazing Sun
Chapters: 76 Completed: No Word count: 164405
[Report This] Published: December 07, 2008 Updated: September 11, 2010


Reviewer: MommasLittleMasochist Signed
Date: January 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Diversion: Jacob's POV

dear lord post already!

i like it okay! i like it alot! dont make me stroke your ego any more, just update!!!

 
Summary:

One Christmas, Alice and Rosalie invite Bella to join them and their boyfriends on a vacation at Lake Tahoe.  Little does Bella know that Emmett and Jasper have cajoled Edward into going along as well.  Will it be a Christmas to Remember or a Christmas they both wish to forget?

Rating due to Emmett's and Rosalie's foul language and lemons.

Part II (Fool Me Once, Fool Me Twice) has started.  I cannot disclose the summary because it may give away the ending to the first part.

christmas


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 44210
[Report This] Published: December 19, 2008 Updated: January 18, 2011


Reviewer: MommasLittleMasochist Signed
Date: January 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 4: I'm Not That Strong (v)

Woot awesome chapter! I have to admit I kinda like mike a little more.

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen is an Army brat, who has his entire life planned out perfectly, and can't wait to get out of this utterly dull town of Forks, WA. But then a whirlwind in the form of Bella Swan enters his life and before long, he can't imagine his life without her. Will he sacrifice his chance at what could be a beautiful life with her? And is Bella willing to make that same sacrifice... AU/AH, possibly some OOC

Rated for situations and lemons later on...

 

©2009 kyla713. All rights reserved worldwide.

ABC

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 121063
[Report This] Published: January 17, 2009 Updated: September 10, 2009


Reviewer: MommasLittleMasochist Signed
Date: February 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Building Up A Future

woah! i just started this  and read it all and love it!! im starting the sequel in a few minutes!

 
Summary:

Edward is the retired right hand man for the infamous mob boss, Charlie Swan. When asked to train a woman to help to protect herself and her daughter, he had no idea the trouble he'd find himself in. She's the boss's daughter, can he keep his hands off?  OCC/AH

banner by: emerald_rosalie


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 59124
[Report This] Published: May 04, 2009 Updated: October 23, 2010


Reviewer: MommasLittleMasochist Signed
Date: January 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Leah

I love it!!!

 
Summary:

What happens at Charlie's wedding is hot and unforgettable for Bella Swan. Charlie's best man has her moaning and melting everywhere from her father's living room to the coat closet at the rehearsal dinner. But great no-strings-attached sex suddenly becomes complicated. And what will happen when Bella meets someone else who just happens to be the best man's son?

Thanks to Leslie (red delicious) for the awesome banner!

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 112144
[Report This] Published: June 19, 2009 Updated: April 21, 2010


Reviewer: MommasLittleMasochist Signed
Date: April 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing

0o0

 
Summary:

Edward is dared to do something stupid by his older cousin, Emmett.  Jasper and Emmett stand back and watch.

"Yeah, but do you think we should've told him that she's the police chief's daughter?"

One dare, one purse and two unsuspecting vicitms lead to a series of pranks and events that will change their lives.

 

 

 

Photobucket banner created by heatherdawnc


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 87422
[Report This] Published: August 22, 2009 Updated: May 16, 2012


Reviewer: MommasLittleMasochist Signed
Date: January 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Acceptance

wooot!! i love genius/kick ass bella!!

 
Reviewer: MommasLittleMasochist Signed
Date: January 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Acceptance

wooot!! i love genius/kick ass bella!!

 
The Cullen Girl by evieeden Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1103]
Summary:

Bella's family is attacked by vampires when she is young, leaving her the sole survivor. Rescued by Dr Carlisle Cullen, she is adopted into his 'vegetarian' family, consisting of him, his wife Esme and their three sons Emmett, Edward and Jasper. Struggling with her trauma, Bella finds herself developing special bonds with each of the Cullen boys.

This story has no Alice or Rosalie (or at least, not as vampires or Cullens).

The Cullen Girl Banner

Thanks to m81170 for the banner.

Cheers to the lovely ms_ambrosia and CatMasters for the gifs.


Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 61118
[Report This] Published: September 03, 2009 Updated: March 23, 2012


Reviewer: MommasLittleMasochist Signed
Date: April 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: High School Beauty Queen

OOh this is good! update soon!

 
Summary:

Perhaps, after all, romance did not come into one's life with pomp and blare, like a gay knight riding down...perhaps...love unfolded naturally out of a beautiful friendship, as a golden-hearted rose slipping from its green sheath. (LM Montgomery). A Jacob/Bella romance. AH/AU

NOMINATED for BEST FLUFF in the Sparkle Awards.

NOMINATED for BEST ONE-SHOT in the Silent Tear Awards

WINNER of Second Place in the 'Best Friend' Jacob category in the Sort of Beautiful Challenge

Jacob/Bella Chronicles Banner

 

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3706
[Report This] Published: September 12, 2009 Updated: October 03, 2009


Reviewer: MommasLittleMasochist Signed
Date: January 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

that was cheesey. it was kinda romantic but also cheesey.



Author's Response:

I'm sorry you felt that way - you are the first who has said that as most people really loved it and it has actually won awards. I can't say I agree with you that it is cheesy (spelt without an 'e'), but I acknowledge your right to have a different opinion to me.

 
Summary:

Bella, Rose, and Alice are nurse's in Seattle's top trauma emergency dempartment. Edward, Emmett, and Jasper are Firemen. What happens when they meet through tragedy. Their initial attraction to each other become and infatuation, trending towards obcession reather quickly. Will it be too much for them both to handle. And what happens when Edward discovers who Bella is. Will he be able to stay away from her and melodic voice? Betaed by Hibbleton78 (author of Sway) and Neliz.

I wanted his hands on me, on every part of my body. I wanted to feel him pressed up against me, his skin touching mine. I wanted our passionate kisses to escalate until I was panting and trembling, on the precipice until I was begging for more. And yet, it still wouldn't be enough to squelch the desire I felt for him in that small space of time. 

I didn't know what was worse: waiting on the edge of oblivion or the sense of it never being enough...

Rated for language and graphic lemons...with yummy firemen...

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Ben, Caius, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Kate, Mike, Paul, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 186144
[Report This] Published: October 27, 2009 Updated: May 21, 2011


Reviewer: MommasLittleMasochist Signed
Date: June 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Clumsy

that was awesome!!!

 
Reviewer: MommasLittleMasochist Signed
Date: April 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Classic Aversion

yeah its totally love just cuz she wasnt dying to have him in her pants! right.

anyway good chap! update soon!

 
Reviewer: MommasLittleMasochist Signed
Date: May 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Smile, My Angel

keep going cuz i love it!!! btw sexiest banner ever!!!!

 
Reviewer: MommasLittleMasochist Signed
Date: May 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 ACLS

B B B B.

because if E&B blow off thier friends, while that has smutty possibilities, you get sex and less story and you hardly get to know what happens to the other couples.

and if bella sings it isnt as special for E&B.

 



Author's Response:

You might be right about that. And Bella hates singing in front of people she knows, too. Maybe there is something about that though that she needs to work out. Hmm, who could help her with that? Mwahahahahaha!

 
Summary:

When Alice and Jasper decide to have their bachelor and bachelorette parties together in Las Vegas, the crew finds out that 'what happens in Vegas' does not stay in Vegas.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 41 Completed: Yes Word count: 247024
[Report This] Published: November 08, 2009 Updated: July 23, 2010


Reviewer: MommasLittleMasochist Signed
Date: May 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Recovery

tanya sounds lonely. like shes sick of turning down guys and wants to get close to one.

anyway keep up the awesome work.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Tanya is lonely. She loves Edward but now knows that it isn't enough.

 
Summary:

 

 

Years have passed since Edward left Bella in the forest. She's finally worked through her heartbreak but has never moved on to another man. She treats her best friend, Jake, like a beloved pair of old jeans. Jake is not happy with this situation. When he takes matters into his own hands, Bella's resulting epiphany makes her realize she needs to learn how to seduce a werewolf.

 

I looked across the room in shock. My beautiful Jacob was smiling down into the eyes of that witch! He was giving MY smile to somebody else. MY smile! His hand was on her arm. How dare he?

 

 

 

                                                                                             

                                                     

 

                                                                                             

                                                               

                              

                                                                                                                      

 


Categories: New Moon, Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Brady, Charlie, Claire, Collin, Edward, Embry, Emily, Jacob, Leah, Other Character, Quil, Sam, Seth
Challenges:
Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 140728
[Report This] Published: November 21, 2009 Updated: June 23, 2012


Reviewer: MommasLittleMasochist Signed
Date: April 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Wolf Bait

Wow your not dead!!! Welcome back to the world of the horny twilight obsessed living!

great chapter update soon!



Author's Response:

I'm alive! I'm alive! Thanks, it's good to be back. Next chapter coming soon. :)

 
Reviewer: MommasLittleMasochist Signed
Date: June 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Dances with Wolves

omg i loved it and im favoriting right now!! or after im done writing this.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, MLM! Hope you got your sneak peek. Let me know if not, okay. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Hope you enjoy the ride. :)

 
Reviewer: MommasLittleMasochist Signed
Date: July 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Il Mostro di Milano (The Monster of Milan)

totally awesome! i cant wait to see how this plays out.

BTW i know when you sent out the clip for this chapter that you said you couldn't find any one who would beta a 20,000 word chapter so im officially offering my services as a beta for long chapters. see i have all these great ideas for stories but i don't have the attention span or the time to write them out so i really like to beta. unfortunately i hate beta-ing short chapters because it gets boring and its over to quickly.

anyway, long review, awesome story, keep it up.



Author's Response:

Howdy Ma'am! You are so sweet to volunteer to beta my endless chapters! You are a saint! Are you interested in content beta'ing or grammar beta'ing?

 
Reviewer: MommasLittleMasochist Signed
Date: March 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Eau de A*shole

I love your writing, its really awesome!!! But you suck at updating!!!

 

 
Reviewer: MommasLittleMasochist Signed
Date: July 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Wolf Warriors

I loved that!!! Amazing chapter! I wish i had seen it sooner! I was totally fooled, I thought you wouldnt put the volturri in this story! Update soon please!!!

 

 
Stranded by Beth818 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1229]
Summary:

Edward and Bella get on the same plane, but it crashes in the middle of the Atlantic Ocean. Bella and Edward are the only survivors, and they luckily find a deserted island to stay on until someone finds them. But can they survive each other? All characters are human and OOC.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 95080
[Report This] Published: December 31, 2009 Updated: January 10, 2012


Reviewer: MommasLittleMasochist Signed
Date: April 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I love me some fluffy!

Way to go update soon!

 
Reviewer: MommasLittleMasochist Signed
Date: May 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

love it !!! keep going!!

 
Summary:

After four years of running, Bella finally returns to Forks to face up to her future as a 'wolf girl'.

A fluffy Bella/Seth one-shot written for sparagus as part of The Fandom Gives Back.

Thanks to Readergoof for the banner.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 8228
[Report This] Published: January 06, 2010 Updated: January 16, 2010


Reviewer: MommasLittleMasochist Signed
Date: April 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: His Imprint

aww that was sweet! i want a werewolf too!( pouts)

you should make this into a story, it would be really good! i can promise you at least 1 reader!

 
Summary:

 

Emily is throwing Sam a surprise party for his 30th Birthday. Against everyone's better judgment, Leah's on the guest list, and she doesn't plan on coming quietly. When she starts to disturb the order of the party, Jacob takes it into his own hands to reign Leah in before she can ruin everything and make a fool of herself. However, Leah doesn't plan on making anything easy, and Jake soon finds that he may be getting in over his head. Sam's birthday cake won't be the only casualty when Leah's provoked.

*Banner by Reachingasifall


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 77282
[Report This] Published: March 11, 2010 Updated: March 09, 2011


Reviewer: MommasLittleMasochist Signed
Date: April 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 26: The Last Cake Standing

OOOh that was awesome!!!

you should write a sequal or something. or you could write awhole new fic. either way!

 




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