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Penname: Bforqueen [Contact]
Real name: Bianca
Status: Member
Member Since: March 31, 2010
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A tiny bit of info about me:


I'm 32, fabulously single and intent on staying that way. I'm easily distracted, have a problem with authority and refuse to grow up. I have a preference for all things dark and evil, which is why I love to write about the Volturi men. If they're not evil, I at least want my men to be hot, so wolf boys would be second on my list. I mean, what's the point of being a hot vamp if you're gonna be all whiney about it?


Part of http://tazzsobsession.blogspot.com - recs from me every Tuesday


Part of http://www.misfics.com/ - here I rec Volturi fics


On Twitter: http://twitter.com/Bforqueen


Together with SusanAshlea I've created the Volturi Series here on Twilighted and on MVF. Want to have your fic be part of it? Let me know and I'll add it.


xoxo


For some reason I won a ridiculous ammount of prizes in the Ruby Round of the Gem Awards! Thank you to all that voted for me. And also a big thank you to all that read my stuff...I flove you...






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Summary:

Bella and Jacob are getting married tomorrow. While struggling to write their wedding vows, they receive a phone call that will change their lives from now on.

Expect insights in their newlyweds' life, worries about imprinting, familiar vampires, jealousy between husband and brother, pack life, road trips, college memories and more!

Rated for language and lemons.

Banner by Dazzled-by-Jake

 

 

 

 

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 41 Completed: Yes Word count: 255571
[Report This] Published: April 30, 2009 Updated: July 11, 2011


Reviewer: Bforqueen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: 1. Big news before the big day

Hey Melly!!! See, told you I was gonna read! I actually read this when I first started reading fanfic, but then lost track when I lost my old account. I don't think I ever reviewed either. Shame on me....

Your writing is so good! I love how us non-english peeps write good english fic :-) Loved Bella's reaction to the baby. It's good to read it again, forgot so much. Will read more tomorrow. Love you!

xoxo

 
Reviewer: Bforqueen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: 2. Everybody Has a Cousin

Ooooooooh!! I forgot Beth was from your fic! I liked her!! The wedding was beautiful, so sweet. Bella's dress is beautiful!! I loved this chapter honey!!

xoxo

 
Reviewer: Bforqueen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: 3. Sea, Sex, and Fun

Aaaw!! Such a sweet chapter!! You write good fluff, I love it!! I love getting to read this again, it was so long ago, I keep going 'Oh yeah!!' *lol*

 

Love ya hun!

xoxo

 
Reviewer: Bforqueen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: 4. I'm Pregnant So I'm Sick

Hey Melly-bee!

Poor Bella being so sick!! And now at her job even :-( I liked how she made Jake clean up after himslf, men can be such slobs sometimes...

xoxo

 
Phased by restlessxpen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 573]
Summary:

 

 "Don't forget me, Bella. I can't forget you."

"Jake."

Why couldn't she say that she wanted me?

I wished she'd say something other than just my name.

I needed to hear her tell me that she wanted me. 

I wanted to hear her tell me that she loved me. Just once.

Even if it was only in a dream. Even if it'd never really mean anything.

I didn't want to be a wolf. I didn't want to imprint.

I just wanted to be Jacob, and I wanted Bella Swan to be mine.

The edges of my dream began to blur.

Everything felt so indistinct, the quality of Bella,

of my feelings and her touch, going bland and unimpressive.

Even in my dream world, I couldn't touch her.

I couldn't be with her.

"Jacob," Bella called my name.

"I love you." It was Renesmee's voice.

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Driven away from his home by the sight of a wedding invitation,

Jacob Black has fled far from the boundaries of La Push to the sandy beaches of Florida—miles away from Bella Swan and the pain of his past. Cutting himself off from his old life, Jacob has become a new man, and he has also, consequently, lost the ability to phase.

Regardless of his own sacrifices, Jacob has found peace and a new life

outside of Bella, and spends his days carelessly free in the heat of the sun.

That is until a new and unusual presence stirs up the ghosts of his past and reawakens something inside of Jacob that he had hoped would lie dormant forever:

Love.

Icon Created by: ms_ambrosia


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Jacob
Challenges:
Series: Imprint Me: The Jacob and Nessie Archives
Chapters: 34 Completed: No Word count: 105279
[Report This] Published: October 08, 2009 Updated: April 05, 2010


Reviewer: Bforqueen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 33: How to Beat a Vampire

That was FAN-TAS-TIC!! Epic!! Love it!!

I loved the different points of view, it was really angsty. I'm still on the edge of my seat here. Good idea sending Bella there as well, since Aro can't read her.

Can't wait for the next one! Also can't wait for your collab with BellaFlan, that should be interesting!

xoxo

Bianca.



Author's Response:

Thanks! =) I'm glad you liked that. I thought the different Points of View would make it easier to portray the fight scene, considering fight scenes are usually best in third person point of view, which I couldn't do, since I've been first-person the entire story. xD

The next chapter should be out fairly quick. I'm almost done with it. I'm looking forward to your next chapter too. ;)

It's going to killllll me not to be able to tell anyone about our fic or which contest it's in. xD Since it's a blind-vote contest, so we won't be able to reveal ourselves until after it's over. Hopefully, once we can fess up and you get to read it, you'll enjoy it. It was fun to write. ;)

Thanks for reading, reviewing, and rating.

 
Reviewer: Bforqueen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: My Life in Ruins

Wooooooow again! How is Jake going to get out of this?? You just keep throwing out cliffie after cliffie, my poor heart can't take anymore! So, once again, I anxuously await your next update. In the meantime, I'll go read you new fic :-)

Smooch,

Bianca

PS: Thanks so much again for r & r my story. It means a lot to me to get feedback from authors I admire, such as yourself!

 
Summary:

 

 

Years have passed since Edward left Bella in the forest. She's finally worked through her heartbreak but has never moved on to another man. She treats her best friend, Jake, like a beloved pair of old jeans. Jake is not happy with this situation. When he takes matters into his own hands, Bella's resulting epiphany makes her realize she needs to learn how to seduce a werewolf.

 

I looked across the room in shock. My beautiful Jacob was smiling down into the eyes of that witch! He was giving MY smile to somebody else. MY smile! His hand was on her arm. How dare he?

 

 

 

                                                                                             

                                                     

 

                                                                                             

                                                               

                              

                                                                                                                      

 


Categories: New Moon, Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Brady, Charlie, Claire, Collin, Edward, Embry, Emily, Jacob, Leah, Other Character, Quil, Sam, Seth
Challenges:
Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 140728
[Report This] Published: November 21, 2009 Updated: June 23, 2012


Reviewer: Bforqueen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Wolf Bait

HI Lee!!

It took me a while to read this since Twi forgot my password and once I got it up and running again, I'd forgotten about the update (*gasp* I know!!) Anyway, I just remembered tonight and rushed to read it.

LOVED being in C's head! It may have been hard to write, but it was hella funny! As for everything else...it was hot, funny, hot again, then even funnier and dang...did I mention it was hot?

Loved it. Now don't go away again for another decade!

xoxo

Bianca.



Author's Response:

Hey Love Button! So good to hear from you! Thanks so much for the review and the rating. I'm so happy you got a kick out of my silliness. This one was a hard one for me to put out there. Just wasn't all that happy with it, but then, what else is new? I promise to hang around for the rest of the decade, though, okay? Love you. xox 

 
Reviewer: Bforqueen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 To Ride a Wild Wolf

Wow, that was once again a brilliant chapter in true Leelator style!! I think Bella and Jake are both completely stupid and should just get to the schmexin already, but I am a durrty girl that way. I have totally slept with guys who I knew didn't love me, and I've never regretted it, it was always worth it.

On a serious note, I have to say I'm happy you decided to include the explanation about Sobibor in your a/n. I'm very passionate about WWII ( not in a freaky way, I just think it is an important part of our history, my country celebrates our liberation from the Germans every year) Sobibor was a horrible, dreadful place and it should be known that places like that existed at one point and that terrible things were done there.

I really, really can't wait for the next chapter, so please, tease me!!

xoxo

Bianca

PS: Thanks again for your wonderful reviews on my little fic, it made my day!

 



Author's Response:

Hey Baby! Thanks so much for reading, reviewing and rating, love! Carmen Bianca is making her debut soon. Hope you enjoy! I'm so thrilled "Fallen Princess" is on Twilighted now! Whopee!! It's really a fun story, B. You should be very proud.

So where are you from? I, too, am very passionate about WWII and am concerned that most people under the age of 30 in the US don't even know who exactly was involved in it. Is that sad or what?

 
Reviewer: Bforqueen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Dances with Wolves

Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn............that was H-O-T!!!! Bella's got some fuckawesome moves...I could just imagine the look on Paul's face, hilarious!!And, yay for Carmen Bianca Silva! I giggled everytime she was mentioned :-)

Question: I am part of a blog that features a new fic every day. I rec stories every Tuesday and Thursday. I would absolutely love it if you would give me the opportunity to rec yours. Please say yes!!! If you give me the okay, I will send you en email with some questions and I will tell you when it's featured.

xoxo!!

Bianca



Author's Response:

Hey Baby! Thanks so much for reading, reviewing, rating, interviewing and sharing your fuckawesome name! I hope you continue to be amused by Carmen Bianca Silva in the coming chapters. She's being sooooo very naughty.

I loved being included in Tazz's Blog. That was too cool! What is a good web address for your site? I've been trying to find one and keep getting directed to other sites. I'm getting confused. That's not too tough these days, you know. ;p How is Fallen Princess coming along?

 
Reviewer: Bforqueen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Il Mostro di Milano (The Monster of Milan)

Hi Lee!!

I had to put off your update for a tiny bit because of internet problems. When that was finally resolved I needed to get a FP chappie out asap, and now I finally have time to read it and dang....!!!! MAJOR cliffie!!! Leah definitly must have known this might not end well, I mean, I think Jake had to do it right? And he didn't want to...And I'm starting to think I'm a bitch...;-) I can't WAIT to see what'll happen next! I honestly hope it involves red wine over some expensive dress worn by Carmen...

Eclipse! OMG How hot were the wolves????? Edward just sucked...Like sucked hardcore...I seriously dislike Edward, blegh. But Jake...oh yeah, sigh...Funny thing, when I went the first time (I've been twice) the whole theatre was Team Jake! It was awesome!! Major sqeeing everytime he came in!! And NONE for Eddie! BUYA!!

Another great update, honey!! Can't wait for the next one!

xoxo

Bianca



Author's Response:

Hey Love! How are things going? Great hearing from you. Thanks so much for reading, reviewing and rating. I know how busy you are and how difficult it is to find the time.

Everyone in our theater was Team Jake as well. Maybe it's just TL looked so gorgeous everyone couldn't help themselves. I really missed not seeing more of the wolves in human form. I thought they could have cut out an hour or so of Riley and put in some wolfpack stuff, didn't you? The CG wolves and battles looked great, IMHO.

 
Reviewer: Bforqueen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Hungry Like the Wolf

Lee.......fuck.........That.Was.Hot.

I'm a sucker for good, angry sex and woman, this was some fuckhot angry schmexin!! And YES! They finally got it on!! This was so worth the wait. I loved angry Jake and adored snarky Bella. Those two are a match made in heaven...or where ever...

Congrats on the win and the gorgeous prize banner!!! We're both award-winning now!

<3

xoxo

Bianca

 
Reviewer: Bforqueen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Hungry Like the Wolf

Oh!! I also totally forgot!!! I squeed when I saw you pimped my story!!! Thank you thank you thank you!!!

*mwah*

Bianca

 
Summary:

During the kiss Bella and Jacob have right before the fight with the newborns, something happens and because of an untold legend, Bella's life is changed forever. No one is prepared for just how much change will come and why.



"It was the last thing I could have ever imagined happening. It was the last thing I thought was possible. Here I had been worried about what I would turn her into; never in all my years would I have ever thought he would turn her into a monster too." ~ Edward


 


Categories: Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 95916
[Report This] Published: December 21, 2009 Updated: June 23, 2010


Reviewer: Bforqueen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

oooh...The Volturi are coming...Yay!!!

 

Gotta love Charlie! Men can be so clueless and so perceptive at the same time...I wonder what he would say if he knew the truth..

Loved it!!

B.



Author's Response:

You may find that out soon. =)

Thank you!

 
Summary:

Jane has been the Volturi's loyal servant for centuries. She is feared by vampires throughout the world for her ability to inflict unbearable pain with a thought.  Jane was only ever concerned with maintaining her position as Aro's favorite among the Guard--until she saw a human who stole her heart at first sight. David Cain is a hardened soldier who knows the horrors of war.  He copes by never looking back and never planning ahead.

Jane and David meet under extraordinary circumstances, and their souls are irrevocably intertwined.  Can two lost souls find redemption, or will their collective pasts destroy them both?

Rated NC-17 for language, graphic violence, references to torture and some sexual content.

by *Beautiful Liar*

Big thanks to *Beautiful Liar* for my awsome new banner!


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Other Character, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: The Volturi Series
Chapters: 28 Completed: No Word count: 107454
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2009 Updated: July 28, 2012


Reviewer: Bforqueen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - The War at Home

Go Bella for setting Edward straight! I'm soooo curious about Jane leaving the Volturi, can't wait to read!

xoxo

B.

 
Reviewer: Bforqueen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - We Need To Talk

Ooooooooooooooh, exciting!! I would review better, but I wanna know what's gonna happen...

*dashes off to next chapter*

 
Reviewer: Bforqueen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - I'm a Soldier, Not a Diplomat

You gotta love Alice! She's always so sure of everything, wouldn't it be nice to have her power? There seems to be another thunderstorm heading this way, please keep your fingers crossed that I won't lose my connection...

xoxo

B.

 
Reviewer: Bforqueen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Lovers

Aaaw, Jane and David make my evil heart melt...They are so cute together! Also, Emmett made me giggle...

xoxo

B.

 
Reviewer: Bforqueen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Failure to Communicate

That was H-O-T....So funny as well, in my fic, Jane is a virgin too. Though in mine I doubt that will change any time soon.

xoxo

B.

 
Reviewer: Bforqueen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - First Sergeant Cain

By all means, let me not be the one that will keep a vampire from his soul mate. My internet connection is crappy today (there was a big thunderstorm last night) so I hope it will hold up long enough for me to read the whole thing.

Oh, and great chapter! Loving the Cullen angst :-)

xoxo

 
Reviewer: Bforqueen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - So Early, So Early, So Early in the Morning

Wow! Jane is a veggie now? I can't believe evil Jane has done a complete 180 for this man...Though he is pretty awesome...I can't wait to see what happens when the Cullens find her. And no doubt we haven't heard the last of the Volturi yet, either.

xoxo

B.

 
Reviewer: Bforqueen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Making a House a Home

Haha, it actually makes perfect sense for Emmett to want to go to military school! I suppose he would do well, even if he wasn't a vampire. Jasper would probably do very well in the army, even if it's not the same as when he was there first.

Reading on..

xoxo

 
Reviewer: Bforqueen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - My Name is Jane

Wow that was very very intense! And such a good way with words again, I could see it all. This story is really starting to own me, and I doubt I'll be able to put it down today...

 

xoxo

Bianca

 
Reviewer: Bforqueen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - I See You

You really have a way to make a story very visual, I could honestly see everything that was going on. I like how Jane seems to be slightly disgusted with the fact she's in love, it made me giggle.

xoxo

 
Reviewer: Bforqueen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Monster House

Oh my, scary little Jane is in love, and with such a nice guy as well...They seem to be complete opposites. I really wonder how this will play out.

Reading on...

xoxo

 
Reviewer: Bforqueen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The OTHER Hills

Hi!

I'm so glad I finally have the time to read this! The world should have more Volturi fic...I don't know if you noticed but the Volturi series are finally up. Paying Penance is already in there. I'm reading this for a reason also...

I'm part of the Tazz's Obession blog and I rec stories every Tuesday. My story for coming tuesday had te be cancelled and I'm kinda hoping you will take the slot. If you say yes I will email you a short list of questions for an interview and PP will be pimped. If you want to have a look to see what we do, visit the blog at www.tazzsobsession.blogspot.com

I'm already loving this! It's so hard to bring in your own original character and get people to love them. I speak from experience :-) David seems like a good kid, and I'm very VERY curious to see how he and Jane will come together. So I'm reading on...

xoxo

Bianca

 




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