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Summary:

 

 

Bella finds her artistic muse and total embarrassment in life model Edward.  How can she get him to model for her when he thinks she is a sex-crazed flake?  AU-AH, M for graphically described nudity, language, lemons.  Canon pairings.

 

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Original artwork by farkle

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 139989
[Report This] Published: July 11, 2009 Updated: December 01, 2010


Reviewer: tone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: 24 Schnabel

Oh dear Emmett's dad is an ass.

Why didn't Edward turn up?

 
Summary:

Bella Swan is in for the shock of her life when Edward Cullen comes back into her life 7 years after graduation.  Can the scars from her past be healed by the reclusive musician, or will she shut him out like she has everyone else since the fateful accident four years ago?

 Thanks to evilangel813 for making my beautiful banner!!

 

TRIBE won The Emerging Swan Award for best complete E/B and Romance story

Thanks to Christag_Banners for the amazing banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 119139
[Report This] Published: August 26, 2009 Updated: December 20, 2010


Reviewer: tone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: At Last

lovely ending.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!!  Thanks for the review.

 
Seeking Asylum by crazy1 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 414]
Summary:

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Bella Swan never thought she would return to Forks after leaving in 9th grade when her parents divorced. She remained in Arizona for college, medical school and residency, pushing herself towards an unknown goal. When she heard that Jacob had died in a motorcycle accident, Bella returned to Forks and to a world of old ties and new opportunities. The Cullen Retreat was recruiting for a new psychiatrist and Bella found herself accepting the job. Perhaps returning to her roots would be just the asylum Bella needed to find herself. But the founders of this mental health respite were quite a mystery to Bella and the people of Forks. The most intriguing part of the job was not the opportunity itself, but the benefactor’s youngest son Edward.  He seemed to ensnare Bella’s thoughts and decisions from the moment she arrived....


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 110127
[Report This] Published: January 23, 2010 Updated: January 27, 2011


Reviewer: tone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Truths and Tanya

He better!

Honestly I'm more worried that Tanya will find Bella first.

Loving Rio's new collar. Did Tanya nick the old one? Is she hiding in the bushes!



Author's Response:

Good questions tone!

But do you think Bella is in trouble, or Edward?

thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: tone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Family and Football

Oh yay! They found James! *does happy dance*

Loving jealous Edward.



Author's Response:

thanks tone!

Jealous Edward is hot!

*nods*

 
Reviewer: tone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Seattle and Smegs

guh. is dead..... With the sweet-best date ever-Edward and then the smexing

So glad Mr Pulsifer might get better.

Hope Creepo stops calling. But also doesn't get worse!



Author's Response:

thanks tone!

only 9 chaps left, so i will start tieing up loose ends, promise!

 
Reviewer: tone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Appetites and Alcohol

So who the hell is the creepo calling Bella?

Loving the smut. Loved up, jealous blue eyes is so hot.

 
Reviewer: tone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Reality and Rehab

oh no he didn't! Creepo doesn't get to call her Bells!

Loving that Edward's the psychiatrist. And Bella's pep talk.

 
Reviewer: tone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Insecurities and Intrusion

OMFG! Are you trying to give me a heart attack?

Please tell me she didn't kill Rio.

O.o How screwed up are my priorities?

Anyway brilliant dun dun DUNNN moment.

I hope Edward and Bella make it through the next chappie OK.

P.S. How crappy is the security there? Or is Tanya like a crazy spy?



Author's Response:

Tone,

hahah. You are my kinda reader. Im such a dog lover I would have asked the same thing.  ANd great question about how she managed to navigate the retreat.  Maybe she had help..... ;)

 
Reviewer: tone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Delusions and Death

Mwa ha ha ha hah!

Doggy vengeance! I'm glad Rio is OK. I was worried.

I'm definately a dog person. (Although my jack russell cross is really antisocial)

Oh no Edwards shot. I hope he's OK.

The insider was James. Dun dun dunn! Did they not change the locks or something?



Author's Response:

James was a true sociopath, with connections to other staff like Ramona, etc, on the inside.  So I always pictured him using others to still sneak around.  But I will admit, I didnt think too hard about the ultra-security and why they didnt see him/or the crazy duo coming. Great questions!

 
A Rough Start by itzmegan73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 877]
Summary:

Overnight, irresponsible Edward goes from bachelor to father of a 5 yr old boy. Meanwhile responsible, prepared Bella begins her first job as Kindergarten teacher at Forks Elementary. When irresponsible meets the epitome of responsible, sparks will fly!

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Completed: Yes Word count: 250550
[Report This] Published: February 11, 2010 Updated: August 31, 2011


Reviewer: tone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Time After Time

Well now I'm a blubbering mess.

 
Hopeless by JanCullen86 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 804]
Summary:

Summary: In a world where every marriage is arranged Bella Swan grows up dreaming of romance. Can she find happiness and love in a marriage that she never wanted?

 

Set in modern times AU/AH.

 

Hopeless

 

 Thanks to ms_ambrosia for the beautiful banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya
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Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 49654
[Report This] Published: February 12, 2010 Updated: December 18, 2010


Reviewer: tone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh that was beautiful. Almost had me in tears. All those misunderstandings all sorted out in the end.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it! I hope you continue to enjoy the rest of the story.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: tone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I'm really glad that Bella and her mother are getting along.



Author's Response:

Me too! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: tone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh no! Ohnoohnoohnoohno!

Mike's clearly a psycho how the hell did he and Bella get such a good match?

I hope this works out ok.

 
Summary:

An unexpected discovery reveals that Edward lied when he left Bella.  Now, Bella is determined to find a way to contact him, and in the process she learns more than she ever knew about Edward Cullen.

An Edward and Bella love story.

Thank you Mothlights for the fantastic banner!!


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 178682
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2010 Updated: November 12, 2010


Reviewer: tone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Tuxedo Time Part II

Those last few lines made me giggle. A wonderful almost-ending to a beautiful story.

 
Nineteen Canvasses by Carson1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 987]
Summary:

Bella thinks she finally has it all together after a life altering accident, but when she meets Edward, a once successful artist who has lost his inspiration, everything she thought she knew changes.  Rated NC-17 for a very good reason.

Many thanks to my amazing and talented beta xrxdanixrx for the wonderful banner!!!

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Many thanks to the incredible MizzezPattinson for the amazing new blinkie!

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Lauren, Mike, Phil, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 148145
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2010 Updated: November 23, 2010


Reviewer: tone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27(Shabbyapple)

One dayone of these Cliffys is going to kill me!

Poor Bella. And wow super Edward with the bump to the back to the head.



Author's Response:

Hi there!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

You know I love a cliffie-I can't resist!

These two have a lot ahead of them! Much more written and on the way.

XO

 
Reviewer: tone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28(Shabbyapple)

wow. No cliffy I'm in shock.

Edward should just tell Bella that the art lovers that Jane knows are all creepy perverts. And that's why he's not excited about New York.



Author's Response:

Hi there,

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

These two have a lot more to talk about, that's for sure. Jane, is well... a bit nasty, let's face it. But, unfortunately, Edward is stuck with her... for now.

Lots more written and on the way.

XO

 
Summary:

A chance encounter at the worst moment of one's life can leave a person wholly and permanently changed, but is it always for the better?

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: No Word count: 173584
[Report This] Published: February 27, 2010 Updated: November 20, 2011


Reviewer: tone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Psycho alert! Poor Bella everythings going wrong.

 
Reviewer: tone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

I love protective Charlie!

It's so weird how noone's realizied that Alice is Izzy's friend and Edward's sister.

I really hope there isn't Jacob trouble in the near (or far) future.

 
Bella? Marie? by Nyomi Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1290]
Summary: Feature

ON HIATUS. [sorry guys :-(]

Bella (22) longs for love and acceptance, yet her fear of rejection keeps her guarded and single. Her craving to feel needed is fulfilled by working as a live-in nanny to Rosalie, who's a single mom to four-year old Henry.

For months, Bella has been secretly infatuated with Rosalie's ex-husband, Edward (29), but he barely acknowledges Bella during their brief encounters. That is, until one night when she bumps into him at a club.

However, he doesn't recognize her at all.

Afraid for her job, she tells him her name is Marie. He acceptes her pseudonym, and feeling safe with anonymity, Bella reveals her wild side. 

She makes the most of the night, but what happens when he tries to find the mysterous Marie?

When Mr. Cullen gets to know Bella, will he still want Marie?

How will that one incredible night shake their worlds?

AH/OOC/MA

*Rated for language, adult situations and sexual content from early chapters.

 

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No Word count: 129626
[Report This] Published: May 01, 2010 Updated: September 30, 2011


Reviewer: tone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Massage

I much prefer Bella's conscience to scarring poor little henry for life. And you're right It's better that they stopped there, the guilt would crush Edward.

Evil stepmother eh? It's sad to hear that Charlie turned his back on poor Bella. And I love a good mystery. Where's Renee?

Using your dead brother to hook a man.....dispicable.



Author's Response:

 

Hi again! I'm so glad you liked the chapter! Thank you so much for reviewing and rating :-) I'm thrilled that you can understand the guilt that Edward would have felt. He's just not at that point yet, unfortunately. Evil stepmother and sly piano teacher, indeed! LOL. More on them later... Chapter 12 is coming really soon, but here's a little taste to wet your appetite until then! It's from Bella:

 

My smile faltered as I got the feeling I was being watched. Cautiously, I raised my eyes and was instantly met with Edward's twinkling gaze. His happy expression quickly vanished, replaced with one of indifference as he stood behind the far end of the island counter. He looked down at the countertop, loudly clearing his throat, his eyebrows knitted together in a tight frown. His serious demeanor instantly engulfed us in an uneasy, awkward silence.

 

Quickly helping Henry to his feet, I dragged myself up from the floor, brushing my jeans off and straightening my plaid flannel shirt. I tried to ignore how my chest was constricting around my rapidly beating heart while nervousness rolled coldly in my stomach. The lighthearted and cheerful atmosphere quickly became so heavy and tense, it was suffocating.

 

 
Reviewer: tone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Friends

Yes! Bella should go after him. If only for to continue the awkwardness!

Who is this friend with girlfriend? It's not Ben and Angela is it.

Loved sheepish apologising Edward.

 

 
Reviewer: tone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Changed Perceptions

great chapter. Made me cry towards the end there. The changing point of views helped to keep the timeline clear and made it easier to read IMO.

 
Reviewer: tone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Fish & Chevy's

Oh poor Edward that's just heartbreaking.

Glad he opened up to Bella first.



Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and learning more about Edward's past. ;) Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and for your lovely rating. It means the world!

 

Hope you enjoy this short but important snippet from chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations, from Edward:

 

Going to Henry's bedroom window, I grasped the curtains to draw them closed, but I paused when movement out of the corner of my eye caught my attention. Looking down to the left, towards the pool, I froze, my hands fisting the heavy drapes. My breath caught in my throat and my heart began pounding wildly.

 

I could see...

 

Bella.

 

Swimming.

 

In a bikini.

 

Fuck.

 

 

 
Reviewer: tone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations

I'd just have to concentrate on not letting the stiffness her touch removed from my shoulders go to my dick. I could do that, right? I'd just pretend her hands were Emmett's or something.

Yeah good luck with that! Silly Edward torturing himself.



Author's Response:

 

Hey! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing as well as the awesome star rating! :D Yes, dear Edward is definitely a masochist at the moment! Ha ha. 

 

Here's a little taste of what's to come shortly. It's Chapter 11: Massage. In Bella's view:

 

"So... er... you still want me to give you a massage, or what?" I asked, half expecting him to tell me not to worry about it.

 

He smiled, raising his brow. "Are you sure that's okay? I wouldn't usually... But my shoulder is killing me."

 

I nodded. "Of course it's okay. I wouldn't have offered if...." My voice tapered off. This was really happening. I was actually going to touch him again.

 

"Thanks. I truly appreciate it. So... how do you want me?" His lips twitched, and if I didn't know any better, I'd swear he enjoyed placing that little innuendo in there. My nether region certainly liked it.

 

"Uh..."

 

I honestly didn't know how I was going to do it. Should I ask him to lie on his stomach, so I could sit on his butt? He had such a cute, tight ass... I remembered squeezing it so many times the other night... I even recalled biting him. He was just too delicious. I hadn't been able to help myself.

 

But just thinking of me sitting on him, my girly parts so close to his... My mouth went dry.

 

 
Summary:

Up-and-coming movie star Edward Cullen has a life-changing encounter at the premiere of his latest film. What will it mean for his career and for the women in his life? AH, canon and some non-canon pairings, rated NC17 for adult language and situations, drinking, drug-taking and sexuality.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 22763
[Report This] Published: May 25, 2010 Updated: February 03, 2011


Reviewer: tone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Homeward Bound

So how did Bella put James in his place? I hope it was with violence. The creepy weirdo.

It's great to read a really good fic with british characters. It means I don't have to look up every other word.

 
Teacher's Pet by Teeeessa Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 170]
Summary:

Bella is a beautiful, young, widowed mother. Edward is her daughter's handsome, witty, obnoxious teacher. Will Bella be able to handle her obvious yet inappropriate attraction to Mr. Cullen? Or will she become a Teacher's Pet? Rated for language and content.

Second place in 'The Best Rosalie Award'.

Thank you to readergoof for the banner!


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 20598
[Report This] Published: May 29, 2010 Updated: August 27, 2010


Reviewer: tone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The One With The Hot Bitch Fight

oh wow! Bella's bad ass! And a rather funny drunk.

 




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