when are you going to update again? im addicted to this story and really want to see more. please please please update again soon xx

i think, to be completly random, the lunchladys. haha since they are already in the lunchroom anyway.

heya, gotta say, im really enjoying your story. still loosly linked to steph meyers version, but different enough to maintain being a story of its own. im loving the way the characters are enveloped with each other showing their relationships more thoroughly. but (and this is probably me being very dense) im getting confused about bellas bubble. ive read the books and understood how it works, but im not entirely clear in your story with it. could you possibly give me a better explanation of it as im a bit confused. does bella always have her bubble around her. i understand how she uses it in relation to jasper, but what about alice. i thought in the original story that the bubble didnt really effect alice's visions. so whats the relationship there? and when the bubbles used as a barrier between bella and edward what exaclty happens#? is it supposed to effect the way he feels towards her and percieves her? as i dont see how it would effect the situation. id appreciate some more detailed explanation as other then this matter (which seems to be prominent) im really enjoying reading and find the role reversal fantastic. also the way you have intertwined what we are aware of edwards history into this story. anyway, ill keep reading, you keep writing and i hope to hear from you soon. thanks

personally, all the blood talk hasnt bothered me. im curious to know where the tattoo actually is, i think i might have missed where its been mentioned.

in regards to the menstral blood thingy, i think its an intriguing idea (although to be honest the whole topic is normally frwoned upon in society as a whole) you have answered some questions for me which i have had since reading the proper books by sm. such as can they smell it, does it bother them.

the idea about the blood donation to edward has me a bit perplexed. i understand fully what your intentions were with it and thats all fine, im just concerned with the way it will play out and if she'll end up drinking it aswel and when exactly it will happen.

im wondering if we are actually going to get to see bella post wedding and post change and if renesme is going to come into it or not. since this was supposed to be the trial before the wedding of what they can do, im wondering how far you would go with the story. i havent read ahead so i dont know. this is as far as i have gotten. to be honest i personally would like it if you stuck loosly to the story and showed post change and what happens and then how and what bella crosses off then.

anyways ive put my two cents in, on with the show

xx

bloody hell. sorry for the swearing, but im mesmerized. i didnt think i would enjoy this point of view. (baby bella etc) but i think its fantastic. roll on chapter 2 (or 1 if you discount the prologue) anyway, getting confusing now. keep the chapters coming. and ill keep reviewing when i can. im actually excited to see more of this perspective of things.

that made me laugh. well the ending of it did. i love your take on the twilight story. still loosly linked with the original story but you've made it completly your own. its truely fascinating. i love the way the whole family are pulling together to help edward out aswel. anyway, keep them coming. next chapter

apologies for not writing a review for the previous chapter. the last review id written pretty much covered that one aswel. wowee. fantabulous. loved this one too. they are moving quite fast but oh well it is a story and i find fast paced storys are more enjoyable to read as they dont get boring. plenty of mucky business going on and i have a feeling there is plenty more to come. no complaints. again im looking forward to seeing more interactions between bella and the cullen family as a whole. they are truely fascinating and the way you are portraying the characters, although very similar to the original story, they are themselves entirely different. its very plesant to already having a perception of what all the characters personalitys are like and having your portrayal to add in addition. it gives dept. my partner has also read some of this story. he isnt a twilight fan (although i forced him to go to the cinema and see the movie with me) he is pretty much a newbie and wanted to see why i like reading fanfics. a long story short, he asked me to include in my review that for him, being someone who isnt familliar with the characters, you have given good descriptions of the characters, the powers, and the vampire/werewolf thing. going into just enough detail to keep the story rolling and the reader understanding but not too much information to bore you to death. (which is probably what my review is doing now) anyway, next chapter. and thankyou for your lovely imagination!

ooooooo i say. bella moving in? what an surprising turn of events. and edward still being a mucky mister whilst bellas in a hospital bed. tut tut. moving on. still loving the story by the way

i apologise for being an idiot and realise that by the time you get this review, quite a bit of time will have passed since your friends funeral. im sorry that you have had to go through this. eventhough i dont know you id give you a hug if i could xx. hopefully when you read this you will have had enough time to start healing. i dont know what you do to keep your head straight so you can write, but whatever it is you are doing a fantastic job. the story is still very enjoyable and thought provoking. on a personal level i think you are doing a great job at dealing with bellas injury. i suffer spina bifida and know exaclty how bad back pain can get. you are portraying the struggles of a back injury/back pain beautifly. keep doing whatever it is you are doing. so onto the next chapter i think ...............

i have to admit, im a bit of an idiot. haha. i have only just found (randomly i might add) how to see responses to my reviews. so i have only just seen what you have written to me in the past. oh dear.

i stopped reading the story for a couple of days (im talking a couple of months back i think. i dunno) and then forgot which story i was reviewing. so bugger. but if its any consolation, i did read to the end of what you had posted, and wait eagerly, checking the site on a daily basis for new chapters. im loving this story that much!! also im onto my third time reading it, as im too impatient to wait for new posts of chapters and need more damnit, haha. but now i intend to pick up with the reviews. since you enjoy them.

my spina-bifida for me came very suddenly. prior to 18 i was very athletic, caving, swimming, rock climbling. etc. and didnt have a clue i had spina bifida. then everything went all down hill from there. but i coped. you have to dont you. haha. gotta keep strong, and keep smiling.

well chin up hun. and keep the chapters coming. your driving me insane with the waiting. haha

you really need to get that straight jacket...........oh and learn to type backwards.

honestly im not too sure of my opinions of this story yet. its not the kinda fanfic genre that i go for (anger and whatnot) but its growing on me. and i must say the werewolf skin thing is pure genius. its not something ive come across yet, but its such an obvious alice deterrant it should be criminal. im wondering how did bella know that it smelt the way it did to vampires though? i am liking the kick ass side of bella and i hope she hits edward with a hard object, maybe a nucleur weapon would do the trick or she could pay a vampire to bite him unawares, that would do the trick.

please correct me if im wrong but bella in the bar reminded me a bit of coyote ugly and the edward in a hole eating rats thing reminded me of interview with a vampire (gotta get your inspiration somewhere) it just seemed to scream at me. but i did like your variations of it anyway. im going to keep reading see if i cant pull a more decise opinion out of the bottomless pit which is my brain at 5am. haha.

yey!! im kinda getting back into the swing of things and am able to r+r

so okay, i love the descriptions of the waterfall and meadow. and also im very intrigued with the idea that they can read each others minds when they kiss. its truely fascinating.