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Wishing Star by Mystic_Ice24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 4551]
Summary:

WRITTEN REWRITTEN REWRITTEN REWRITTEN

After her parents are killed in a plane crash, a young girl is rejected again & again by foster families for being too old. She wishes on a star nightly, but will she find what she seeks? Will the Cullens be that family?

NC-17 for later chapters. Warning" Violence, and sexual aggresion may be part of this story.

Winning Summary:

"I wish I may, I wish I might, have the wish I make tonight."  With that one hope Isabella Swan faces life as best as she can.  The tragedy of her parents' death, leaves her alone in a system where her age leaves her undesirable for adoption.  That is until one day two people come into her life offering her a chance at hope.  The Cullen family takes to Bella like a long lost sister.  What happens when Bella is taken from the Cullens by a lost relative?  Will Bella's hopes be destroyed?  What happens when fate steps in years later to reunite Bella with the one's she loved and who loved her so long ago?

Bella knew what she would say, "Don't you want to be my sister?"

 

 

Thanks to Mrs C for the above Banner and my beta readergoof for the below Banner!Wishing Star Banner Readergoof

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 40 Completed: No Word count: 137752
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: April 12, 2011


Reviewer: vampfan173 Signed
Date: April 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Barbeque

just goes to show you, even our beloved Edward is still just a man! love this story. . . getting juicy now . . . thanks

 
Summary:

Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.

 

 

Hiding in Plain Sight

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012


Reviewer: vampfan173 Signed
Date: August 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: September 4 - December 23, 2008

Awesome story and cliffhanger but when will the next chapter post?. . . can't wait to read what happens next.

 
Summary: Feature

 

Edward Cullen needs to pass Statistics. Bella Swan is his tutor. She thinks he's a flighty, arrogant--albeit sexy--asshole, and he thinks she's Bipolar, but tries to win her over, anyway.

Can he change her mind, or do first impressions really last?

 Thanks to my baby momma, Maximista, for the banner! <3


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Ben, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 34 Completed: No Word count: 258464
[Report This] Published: February 20, 2009 Updated: January 14, 2011


Reviewer: vampfan173 Signed
Date: May 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Outtake 1: The Mission

Absolutely love this story.  I laugh out loud at some of the banter between the characters.  Rosalie is the best!  Love the humor, dialogue, the characters. . . so funny.  I admire that you have kept away from the overly played man-whore Edward and blushing tragic Bella.  These characters have depth . . . keep it up!

 
Reviewer: vampfan173 Signed
Date: May 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Mama's & Ex's

Did I already say how much I love the direction of this story.  OH, the anticipation is killing me in such a good way ; )  PlZ keep it up

 
Reviewer: vampfan173 Signed
Date: May 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 13: Fairy dust & Bubble butts

Best chapter yet. . . hilarious!

 
Reviewer: vampfan173 Signed
Date: May 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You

Freaking heaven. . . love this story!  Awesome writing when the characters truly become your own and are so real. . . the reader can feel all the emotions!

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen, graduate student and Biology instructor, has a wild night with a beautiful stranger, and becomes obsessed.  Bella Swan, his student, has a crush on her teacher...  Things aren't always what they seem,and people look different in the light of day.


NC-17 for lemons, mature themes.  Canon pairings ... kinda.


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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No Word count: 75384
[Report This] Published: March 03, 2009 Updated: June 27, 2009


Reviewer: vampfan173 Signed
Date: August 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1. Let's Dance

While waiting for update to ASC, I decided to try one of your other stories. . . just starting reading this story and, I love that you pay homage to Anne Rice . . . Lestat's Daughter. . . now back to the story!

 
Summary:

Edward & Bella's Second Chance at Love

 

What if Fate gave you a second chance at love?  What if you had the opportunity to start over? Would you take it?  When an attacker leaves Bella close to death and with no memory, can Edward save her from himself and the assassin before it's too late?  All  Human.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Phil, Renee, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: No Word count: 242564
[Report This] Published: March 11, 2009 Updated: June 07, 2011


Reviewer: vampfan173 Signed
Date: April 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Storm Warning

just finished the latest chapter, nice cliffhanger! please next chapter as soon as possible. . . thanks!

 
Reviewer: vampfan173 Signed
Date: May 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Gambit

Awesome cliffhanger. . . does Edward get there in time. . .oh this Jacob is pure evil. . . thanks

 
Reviewer: vampfan173 Signed
Date: June 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Adjudication

This is scary good. . . keep it up!

 
Work In Progress by araeo Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1515]
Summary:

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Edward, Bella and the gang are adults living in Seattle.  Edward and Bella meet due to a klutzy accident in the restaurant where she works.  Bella's ovaries love Edward and they voice their opinions quite often.  There's an instant attraction between them, but Bella notices there's something that's troubling Edward. 

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Completed: Yes Word count: 240878
[Report This] Published: March 16, 2009 Updated: October 03, 2010


Reviewer: vampfan173 Signed
Date: June 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: The Obligatory Bella Barbie Chapter

just starting reading this and so far so good. . . and fun. . . love the banter and sexual tension already

 
Reviewer: vampfan173 Signed
Date: June 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 :Dyslexic Heart

You have my vote for mentioning Interview with the Vampire and the horrible casting of Tom Cruise as Lestat!  I thought, even after all these years, I was the only one who felt that way. . . That movie needs to be remade with RP as Louis and JR as Lestat . . . what do you think?

 
Reviewer: vampfan173 Signed
Date: June 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: Island in the Sun

This chapter had it all! Romance, comedy, cliffhanging drama. . . hahaha.  Loved the kstewart "oh" at the end of the chapter.

 
Reviewer: vampfan173 Signed
Date: June 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: Playing Hardball (vjgm)

I was really hoping that Edward had flown Charlie and Renee in for a surprise wedding on the beach at Twilight. . . that would have made the girls jump for joy!

 
Broken Doll by RowanMoon Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1435]
Summary:

Young woman, back to us, walking into the forest.

 

Nominated for Best Supernatural in The Silent Tear Awards!

           Voting ends June 20.

 

Please check out the other stories and vote for your favorites;

http://silent-tear-awards.webs.com/vote.htm

 

~Nominated for Best AU in the Shimmers Snowflake Quarter 2010.~

 

Nine years has passed since Edward left her cold and alone on the forest floor. She has become familiar with the darkness and has relied upon Jacob to be her warmth and light.  After nearly a decade of living in the shadows of others, a crushed and broken Bella wanders off into the forest in search of the place where everything had gone wrong. 

She's known the cold bite of Ice.  She runs from Fire's all consuming intensity. What she finds on her jilted journey will change the way she remembers both forever. 

 

~summary by the fabulous Spaniard, talented author of Purgatory and North Star Rising.

 

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 101571
[Report This] Published: March 31, 2009 Updated: May 27, 2010


Reviewer: vampfan173 Signed
Date: May 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I just starting reading this story while waiting for updates to some of my other favorites.  I cannot tell you how in awe I am of your writing style.  The dialogue and imagery makes me want to weep from envy!  Love the direction of the plot thus far. . . 



Author's Response:

Well vampfan, I'm pleased as punch you took a chance on my first attempt at writing fanfic and enjoyed it enough to let me know!  I'm totally digging my toe into the dirt with an Awww Shucks on my lips at your gracious compliments about my writing style.   Thank you so much! I'm still trying to find my way.  I love how much I've learned and the people I've met in this little slice of cyber space.  It's been so enriching for me.  Twilight fanfic enriching.  Who knew??

Be sure to let me know what you think of the rest of the story!  

Regards,

Kari

 
The Screamers by KiyaRaven Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1537]
Summary:

Living on the streets is hard for Bella Swan but not as hard as putting up with Edward Cullen when he drags her into his world of sex, drugs and rock’n’roll.  She needs a lucky break and he needs an image make-over.  Will they be able to help each other out before they kill each other?

 

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Kick-ass banner by Irritable Grizzzly.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: Yes Word count: 343376
[Report This] Published: May 14, 2009 Updated: August 20, 2010


Reviewer: vampfan173 Signed
Date: August 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Alley

Just starting this story today. . .gotta say, love stories make me laugh out loud . . . and can actually hear the characters screaming at each other . . . so far, I'm hooked

 
Reviewer: vampfan173 Signed
Date: August 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The After-Party

I love love love this smarky smutty mouth Bella!!!!!

 
Help Wanted by jaxon 22 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3037]
Summary:

Bella Swan applies for the job of PA to the rude, arrogant Hollywood film star Edward Cullen.

Can Bella keep her feelings for her boss in check so she can do her job?

A/H, OOC, luscious and graphic lemons and bad language.

A million and one thank yous to Rachel1313 for the spectacular banner! You are my hero, bb!!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 52 Completed: No Word count: 473901
[Report This] Published: May 26, 2009 Updated: March 28, 2011


Reviewer: vampfan173 Signed
Date: June 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Tipo Geloso

okay, jealous Edward . . .scary smoking sexy. . . that's all I have to say.. .

 
Vegas, Baby! by jslack0816 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3188]
Summary:

Bella takes a trip to Vegas with her roommates Alice and Rosalie. After one wild night, Bella's life is turned upside down. A marriage certificate, a pregnancy, and a best friend in ICU send Bella and her friends into a whirlwind of emotions. Canon pairings and future LEMONS!

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Much thanks to readergoof and annamorphos (respectively) for the awesome banners!  Also, to Project Team Beta for taking this story on!  You all are the best!

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 32 Completed: No Word count: 206944
[Report This] Published: June 12, 2009 Updated: December 01, 2011


Reviewer: vampfan173 Signed
Date: August 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 I Want This

having those cupcakes made to satisfy Bella's craving makes him just about the effing sexiest man EVER! plz don't let him screw this up bc I'm loving this guy just about now. . .

 
Reviewer: vampfan173 Signed
Date: August 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 The First Goodbye

I just wanna know who is the unknown number and why is it important?

 
Summary:

Both damaged, Edward and Bella meet and the chemistry is instantaneous.  Will she still love him when she discovers that he is the criminal defense attorney that got her rapist acquitted just two days before her attack?  Can he forgive himself enough to give her justice?

 

 

Turn to Stone has been nominated for top ten favourite fics for July at twifanfictionrecs . com. Please Vote!

http://twifanfictionrecs.com/category/top-ten-fics/top-ten-favourite-fics-jul-2012/

 

 

 

 

Thank you, padme35, for the beautiful new banner!

 

 

Finalist - The Faithful Shipper Awards

Fiction You Most Wish Was In The Spotlight

and

Best Secondary Character AH - Cynthia

Create your own banner at mybannermaker.com!

 

Much thanks to throwitaway45 for the new banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 52 Completed: Yes Word count: 248688
[Report This] Published: July 06, 2009 Updated: July 01, 2012


Reviewer: vampfan173 Signed
Date: June 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46 - Bella Continued

Yeah, Bella's testimony was great but I want to know if Carlisle is Edward's real father?  Just a hunch or am I way off.



Author's Response:

Sorry.  Carlisle is not Edward's father. 

 
Reviewer: vampfan173 Signed
Date: June 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26 - Mystery Solved

Definitely, the "sexy beast" comment disturbed me a bit and, yes, that comment should have been a catalyst for Bella.  I was surprised that the comment was mentioned later or did not cause Bella any distress.. . hmmm

 
Summary:

 

 

Bella finds her artistic muse and total embarrassment in life model Edward.  How can she get him to model for her when he thinks she is a sex-crazed flake?  AU-AH, M for graphically described nudity, language, lemons.  Canon pairings.

 

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 Banner by Irritable Grizzzly

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 139989
[Report This] Published: July 11, 2009 Updated: December 01, 2010


Reviewer: vampfan173 Signed
Date: August 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: 22 Close

okay, okay. . . "emo retard" can't tell Bella how he feels. . . so he takes the cowards way out and has her read it. . . he needs to man up, as your Bella might say, and make him say the words out loud! . . . love the story by the way. . .  who bought Edward two? hum? 

 
With Teeth by TalulaBlue Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5901]
Summary: Feature

Edward is a 27-year-old alcoholic/addict struggling with his recovery. Bella is a 23-year-old who's moved back home after college. This fic chronicles how they meet, fall in love, and struggle with the complexities of their relationship. Not nearly as maudlin as it sounds (I hope).

Rated NC-17 for graphic (and sometimes non-romantic) sex, drug and alcohol use and abuse, profane language, and brief (very brief) suicidal ideation (although NO suicide attempts). No sexual assault, no cutting.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 183053
[Report This] Published: August 07, 2009 Updated: August 22, 2010


Reviewer: vampfan173 Signed
Date: August 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Absolutely beautiful ending!. . . Don't get me wrong sex is fantastic but I'm so glad you made their relationship more than just that. . . There is such hope, serenity, and love for these characters future. . . .great job!

 
Summary:

 

She was standing by the bar looking beautiful. I hadn't seen her in two years. She smiled at me and tried to say hi. I couldn't say anything to her. Memories were racing through my mind, of a time when we were happy...

banner by heatherdawnc! Thanks hearther!

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 112640
[Report This] Published: August 13, 2009 Updated: May 12, 2010


Reviewer: vampfan173 Signed
Date: April 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 18- Comfort

OMG! All I can say is it's about effing time. . . update soon plz!

 




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