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Penname: CherBella [ Contact]
Real name: Cheri
Status: Member
Member Since: February 09, 2009
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Summary: Edward Cullen made Bella Swan’s life a living hell from age ten to twelve. Finally fed up with the torment and teasing, she moved to Phoenix. Now she’s seventeen, beautiful, and has a new sense of confidence. When her mother sends her back to Forks for her senior year, she is determined to shake things up. 
NC-17 for sexuality, underage drinking, and language. OOC, just to be safe. Some canon pairings, some absolutely the opposite.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No
Word count: 55461
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2008 Updated: August 21, 2009
Reviewer: CherBella Signed
Date: March 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Radio Stations and Lab Partners
I just decided to read this today, and I really like it!! Can't wait to read more, and find out more, especially after your little teaser!!
Summary: "Doing what rich people do is easy."
Same old story, Twilight twist. St. Olaf's is a prestigious boarding school, dripping with money, sex, and social hierarchy. But there's really only one question you have to ask yourself: are you one of Them or one of The Elite?
Thanks to Patsy for the banner!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes
Word count: 149923
[Report This] Published: November 02, 2008 Updated: May 24, 2009
Reviewer: CherBella Signed
Date: May 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 27: Forks
Wow. I loved how you brought the year full-circle by bringing Rose back to the music room and the piano. And her fight with Edward, him forcing her to see how he and Alice and Emmett just wanted to be there for her all along.
Wonderful job.
Reviewer: CherBella Signed
Date: February 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: A Bit of Impropriety
WOW. Glad to see Alice and Edward finally had good sex! :) Been reading this for a while and finally got to the last chapter. I was SO sure Jackson was going to be the one that Alice eventually hooked up with, not because they are a canon pairing but just because their exchanges are hot and a bad boy like Jackson is hard to resist! :)
This story is very unique and I love how you reveal thiings. Can't wait to read more... I fear a little for Rosalie, what she may do to herself after the Carlisle/Connor discovery and having no friends to turn to... hopefully Alice will be there for her.
Reviewer: CherBella Signed
Date: March 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Fallout
Oh this story is just so gut-wrenching and angsty and emotional... I love it!! You write it so well, I am just so drawn right into everything. I was giddy when I saw there was an update. Great job, can't wait to read the next chapter. Author's Response: Why thank you! I'm so happy I can make other people happy just by letting my crazy imagination run wild!
Reviewer: CherBella Signed
Date: April 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 25: Borderline
Oh holy shit Alice!! I can't believe she's doing this for Rosalie. I can't believe she's going to do this to Emmett... cause it WILL come out at some point.
These characters are just so f-d up... I love it! I'm always excited when I see an update for this story. Author's Response: Thanks! new update should be up soon!
Reviewer: CherBella Signed
Date: May 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: A Good Man is Hard to Find
Wow, all i can say is wow. My heart breaks for poor Emmett. At first I thought Alice was stupid for attacking Jasper in the cafeteria, but it did lead to the conversation between she and Emmett which needed to happen. I'm glad Rosalie is now being there for Alice after all she has done for Rosalie.
Great chapter!
Reviewer: CherBella Signed
Date: May 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 28: i sing of olaf...
I had a feeling since the St. Olaf school year was ending, so would be this story. :(
I loved the office scene--they have, after everything they have been through, become a "one for all and all for one" group of friends. The Dean's frustration when Edward walked in and his asking for another chair was funny.
I can't believe Jax still trying to be with Alice. (though it's hard to fight the urge to want them to be together, it's good to see her be strong enough to resist)
Looking forward to finding out who told on Rose and Carlisle...
Reviewer: CherBella Signed
Date: May 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 29: Redemption
Oh wow. I didn't think Alice and Emmett would be able to "get back together." Glad to see they are trying.
Reviewer: CherBella Signed
Date: May 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 31: Epilogue
GAHHH!!! This is one of the best FF stories I've read, totally unique in plot and well-written. And though I hate to see it end, it does end perfectly, as it should be. The whole story was about their becoming their own little "elite" band of friends, so I can't imagine what a sequel could bring. (Although of course I would read it!)
I love that they all came to visit Alice over the summer, and that she and Emmett were able to get back together.
Thank you for sharing this story and following it through to the end. Will be watching for your next story!
Summary:
When Charlie catches Bella and Edward in a compromising position how will he react?
What tactics will Edward and Bella have to resort to in order to get time alone together again?
Thanks Mandi for the banner!
Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Charlie, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 43 Completed: Yes
Word count: 134267
[Report This] Published: November 16, 2008 Updated: December 07, 2009
Reviewer: CherBella Signed
Date: February 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Damn Manic Depressive Vampire
Go Esme!! In so many stories she is just the sweet adoring loving mother, barely there... glad to see her step up and get some attitude and put those boys in line!! :) Author's Response: Thank you. I just figured she takes her mother role seriously and someone had to put an end to this after they realized the toll it was taken on Bella. Hopefully it works and she won't have to throw down again.
Thank you for the review.
Reviewer: CherBella Signed
Date: March 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 25: Things to Remember When Playing Scrabble
I may never be able to play Scrabble with a straight face again! BWAH HA HA HA!!! That was hilarious!!!
Summary: Just a small town girl, livin' in a lonely world
She took the midnight train goin' anywhere
Just a city boy, born and raised in south Detroit
He took the midnight train goin' anywhere
After multiple chance encounters can two strangers find their missing pieces within each other?
Or will their past mistakes hold them back?
Two strangers passing in the night, searching for nothing, but maybe finding everything.
A story of learning to trust and forgive, finding a way to risk opening yourself up.
Inspired by Journey's song Don't Stop Believing.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4669815/1/A_Person_of_Worth
Banner by AngstGoddess003
banner by: Heaven's Immortal
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Word count: 107099
[Report This] Published: November 22, 2008 Updated: July 10, 2011
Reviewer: CherBella Signed
Date: June 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Breaking Traditions
Wow I'd kind of forgotten about this story...so good to see an update, I like this Edward and Bella.
Long long chapter...but very good! Nice to see Bella letting people into her life. LOL at Emmett trying to stump Edward. And the meeting of Bella and Hope was well done.
The French toast sounds incredible!! :) Author's Response: He CherBella! I'm sorry it was so long you almost forgot! Bad me! I'll try to get the next one up earlier! I'm glad you're liking Bella and Edward.
Yeah, it was a very long chapter....longest yet. But I couldn't break it up! And I'm kinda glad I didn't, I know as a reader, I LOVE long chapters!
Thanks so much for your kind words! I'm glad you're enjoying the read. And Eleven city...seriously go look it up on Google...the music on the site is just wonderful and you can just imagine them all sitting there eating the french toast...it's great!
Thanks for leaving the review! I appreciate it!
Summary: AU. Based off the events in the beginning of New Moon. Edward did not tell the truth when he left Bella in the woods five years ago. Struggling to make a life without him, Bella finds herself still alone in an entirely different forest. But what happens if they are accidentally reunited? What was the lie that Edward told? What will Bella do when she finds out? Rated NC-17 for language and sexual situations
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: No
Word count: 119106
[Report This] Published: December 18, 2008 Updated: December 28, 2010
Reviewer: CherBella Signed
Date: March 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Misty Mountain Hop
Oh my. I am both envious and in awe of your briliant talent. I love your writing. This was such a beautiful chapter and I am so glad to see them finally coming together after all the pain and heartbreak. PLEASE write another chapter soon!!!! :)
Reviewer: CherBella Signed
Date: April 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Shangri-La
I was so glad to see an update to this story I had forgottten how beautifully you write...this might be the most beautiful and natural scene between Edward and Bella I have ever read in fan fic. After all their time apart they finally get some alone time, just the two of them to just "be." To remember each other, to relearn each other, to be truthful with one another.
"So I pretended I was sleeping, and that this was a dream, because in all my life this is the best day I have ever had, and I never want it to end." He quickly dipped his head and kissed the inside of Bella's palm. "If this is all I ever get to have, I want to remember every second of it." -- so lovely and heartfelt.
Yay for Alice... looking forward to the next update.
Reviewer: CherBella Signed
Date: May 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Intermission: Electrocution
You HOPE you got it right? I am just in awe of your writing! The whole description and tale of Edward discovering the venom throughout the house and then Alice and her story and her emotions and Edward's emotions...all so incredibly real and captivating and heartwrenching.
Wonderful wonderful job! And I'm so glad to see another chapter for this story. I hope you will continue because it is one of the best stories out there.
Summary: 150 years after Edward leaves and 149 years after Bella's death, Jasper stumbles into a newly published fiction that isn't fiction at all. Who is Eve? Who are the Guardians? What are the concequences?
"May 17, 2153
Dearest Reader,
Come, pull up a chair and sit by me. Locked in these pages you will find my story, my memory, my secrets, my heart, my life, my death, some things that came after and everything in between.
Can I trust you with it?
It is truly fantastic and not for the faint-hearted. Not for the realist, not for the cynic, no never for the cynic, only the pure hearted will find purchase here. Lend me your ear, your open mind and heart and I will pull you to a myth you dare not dream of, a myth you unknowingly live every day.
Tell me dearest, do you believe in Angels? Not as Dogma, not as testament to whichever religion bears your faith, not fairies with wings and halos. Can you believe in the beings of light, of strength and power that govern here on earth, the beings that hold all things in order, beings that guard your humanity?
Perhaps Angels is the wrong word, a word they would see with distaste. So we shall call them what they are in essence, the guardians. Do you believe? Can you believe in the mythical? If you cannot, this is no place for you. I’ll give you a moment to ponder this. Please do not tread lightly upon my request.
As I have learned all too harshly, prepared or not, one can never go back. "
Told in varying POV, with excerpts from the book Storm.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Word count: 92469
[Report This] Published: December 26, 2008 Updated: November 14, 2011
Reviewer: CherBella Signed
Date: February 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Letters
OH MY GOD! I just discovered this story, and it is beautiful! I can't even come up with any other words than that... your writing is wonderful. Can't wait to continue the story!
Reviewer: CherBella Signed
Date: February 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Loyalty
Ah! I'm so excited when there is an update!! Need to get to bed, but stayed up a few more minutes to read the latest chapter. Can't wait to find out why Bella has never contacted them, yet follows where they are... hmmm... :)
Reviewer: CherBella Signed
Date: February 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Honesty
Another wonderful chapter... I love Emmett standing up and being the one to just tell it like it is. Will be looking forward to more if your wonderful words, as always...
when you find what you search for, when you find your soul mate, your family, when you find yourself. Edward, you hold onto it. You cling to it with every fiber of your being. You fight for it with every strength you possess and damn the danger and the consequences. “
“Because that is all you have at the end of every day, at the end of eternity. All you have is the love that makes you the person you should be. And when the danger comes, when the consequences need to be faced, when things get so bad you are dead inside, that love will be your salvation. “
Absolutely beautiful!!
Reviewer: CherBella Signed
Date: March 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Torch
You definitely deserve many wonderful birthday wishes for all the wonderful and beautiful words you have given us! :) But don't celebrate too long, get back to writing and give us another chapter!! :)
Reviewer: CherBella Signed
Date: March 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Anticipation
NO!!!!!! Surely that ring cannot mean what it seems to mean, I refuse to believe it! :)
REALLY looking forward to the next chapter now!!
Reviewer: CherBella Signed
Date: April 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Unexpected
Whew! What a chapter!! Major major props to you for all that this chapter entailed--the research and the writing and ... and the writing... and the writing. :) I am in awe!
I had techinical difficulties with my browser not wanting to load this chapter so I had to go over to FF to read it, and I have to admit I had to read it in parts. I had a little trouble wading through this chapter. But this is ALL me and not at all anything against your wonderful prose--I had the same problems with Breaking Dawn, when it got into all of the different vampires all over the world visiting, and keeping straight their abilities, etc. etc. It just didn't interest me as much as the Cullens. But I was determined to make it through this chapter, because I know Bella's history is important and I knew this chapter would be important, somehow.
After they left Charles and she seemed to "lose" her first ability I began to guess what her real ability was, and I think I was right--she obviously takes on others' abilities when she is near them. I misinterpreted what would happen around Dar and Deepa though--I thought BELLA'S memories would be pulled back to her and that is how she would remember Edward and the Cullens. Obviously she will recall those memories at some point or else she would never be able to write the book. This ability also should make it interesting when she does finally meet up with Edward... will she be able to read minds? Will she be able to read his mind? Although I am sure after 150 years she has figured out a way to control it.
Really really looking forward to what happens next (even if I have to read about more vampires, LOL) This is so so well done and I can't rave enough about your talent!
Summary:
They were both seeking the same thing: An end. What neither of them expected to find was something to live for, something that would entirely change the way they viewed this life that had broken them.
Hope.
Mistakes were made and promises broken. Now they need to pick up the pieces and learn to live after chasing death for so long.
“I don’t want to break this spell. This delicate, fragile mess that we’ve woven from our pasts is all we have. All I have.”
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes
Word count: 25805
[Report This] Published: December 27, 2008 Updated: August 05, 2009
Reviewer: CherBella Signed
Date: February 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: The Precipice
Wow! i loved this! They're both such tortured souls, and written so well...can't wait to read more and find out Edward's story. Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I really appreciate you taking the time.
Edward's time is coming...
Hope you keep reading!
-Shanabella
Reviewer: CherBella Signed
Date: May 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Understanding
My God what a story from Edward, his whole family destroyed...So glad to finally hear his story and that he wasn't the one doing drugs. Ironic that he and Bella have now been in the same sitiuation--giving drugs to someone they love in a twisted way of trying nto help.
Summary: It's been three long years since Edward left Bella, and things within The Cullen family have changed epically. After Edward's final stand off with Victoria, Emmett is left heartbroken and alone. A chance vision sends him back to Forks, and into the healing arms of the one person he never expected. Why fight with fate?
New Moon AU - Bella/Emmett.
Categories: New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Kate, Laurent, Leah, Marcus, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya
Challenges: Series: Emmett Stories
Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Word count: 64433
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2009 Updated: February 22, 2011
Reviewer: CherBella Signed
Date: February 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Fix You
I have been staying away from some of the "non-canon" pairing stories, because I just thought they would feel too weird... I have been reading this one though and am enjoying it so far. You're doing a great job!
Reviewer: CherBella Signed
Date: March 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Cry
Ugh! While I am totally rooting for Emmett and Bella getting together in this story, it is still difficult to see Edward falling for someone else. :( (You did warn us though! :) I understand how it must happen, at least this way he will not be tortured by Emmett and Bella.
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