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Penname: sonja2010 [ Contact]
Real name: sonja
Status: Member
Member Since: March 08, 2010
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Summary: When faced with a betrayal that could tear them apart, Edward and Bella must put their faith in the healing power of love. WARNING: this story deals with rape and its aftermath.
Hurt/Comfort/Romance, ExB

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Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No
Word count: 160351
[Report This] Published: March 04, 2010 Updated: November 21, 2012
Reviewer: sonja2010 Signed
Date: June 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
I absolutely loved this chapter!! Bella really needed a good laugh and Alice never disapoints! Edward really needed to get rid of some of the anger and I think he'll be A lttle better now! I can't believe Jacob called the Cullens looking for Bella though. Just can't wait until he is dealt with!!! Great job hun! Author's Response: I'm so happy to hear it! Yes, I thought it would be good to add something a bit lighter. You're right that Edward really needed to release some anger and he will certainly know now that he has to make sure he doesn't let his anger consume him again. Yeah, Jacob is very messed-up in the head. Thanks! Please know that your continuous reviews for each chapter are very much appreciated! So thanks again!
Reviewer: sonja2010 Signed    
Date: June 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Lisa, I really think you're doing an amazing job on this story!! And would love for you to continue!! Author's Response: Thank you so much! Don't worry, I do plan to finish the story. I just meant that things are pretty busy right now and it may take me longer to update.
Reviewer: sonja2010 Signed
Date: September 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
I really liked the chapter and think it was a fantastic idea Bella learn self defense moves even just to put her mind at ease! I bet Jake contacted Renee Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! I'm so glad to know you're still reading and enjoying! The next chapter has been awaiting validation for a while now. My beta must be busy. I'm hoping she will be able to validate soon.
Reviewer: sonja2010 Signed
Date: March 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Lisa,this is a terrific start to this story! I have to admit I am a Jake fan, I love Edward, but I'm still a Jake fan so I'm very interested to see where this goes! I might be crying on your shoulder later,LOL!!! Please update soon Author's Response: lol. Well, if you like Edward/Bella, this story focuses on them and then you can pretend that the Jake in my story is someone else. Because, I guarantee that you won't like him in my story. I don't really hate Jake in the books, but I am a Edward/Bella fan and I wanted someone that Bella trusted to be the villain (hence the story title), so Jake was the obvious choice. No hard feelings to poor Jake from the books, lol. Thanks so much for giving my story a chance even though you are a Jake fan :)
Reviewer: sonja2010 Signed
Date: March 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Lisa that was a really GOOD chapter! I can't help but hope that Bella finds a way to tell atleast someone be it the other wolves or the Cullens. I know that the wolves wouldn't be happy about what happened. I hope Jake gets what's coming to him!!!!! Author's Response: Thanks so much :) He will get what's coming to him eventually.
Reviewer: sonja2010 Signed    
Date: April 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I'm gonna try this again I just posted a review and it wouldn't let me send it. Great chapter hun!! I don't think I've ever HATED Jake as much as I do right know for what he has done to Bella!!! I'm glad Edward is back but kinda worried that Jake is going to want to see her again and what will happen. Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yeah, I think everyone hates this Jacob.
Reviewer: sonja2010 Signed
Date: April 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Oh my Bella better try alittle harder to hide this from Edward, so far she isn't doing that well! Author's Response: Yes, it is not an easy thing to hide.
Reviewer: sonja2010 Signed
Date: April 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I think the song was great for this chapter!! I can't wait for Edward to find out! I also hope Bella finds a way not to go to Jacobs Author's Response: Glad you liked the song!
Reviewer: sonja2010 Signed
Date: April 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Again terrific chapter! So Jake had the nerve to show up at her house or do I miss something? Can't wait for more Author's Response: I'm so happy to hear it! Thanks! Yes, Jacob did show up at her house. Thanks so much for reviewing each chapter! You're awesome! :)
Reviewer: sonja2010 Signed
Date: April 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
oh thank god Edward got to Bella before Jake raped her again! Great chapter Author's Response: lol. Yeah, I didn't want to put poor Bella through it again. Now it's Edward to the rescue! lol. Thanks so much for your review! Glad you liked it! :)
Reviewer: sonja2010 Signed
Date: April 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
another terrific chapter! I hope Bella is going to be ok and not have too many things wrong with her at the exam. I hope they catch Jake soon! And congrats on your nominations that's wonderful and good luck! Author's Response: Thanks! Well, I don't want to give anything away, but she will have Edward to help her through everything :)
Thank you!
Reviewer: sonja2010 Signed
Date: May 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
I think Bella did very well considering what she has been through! Well done!!!! Author's Response: Very true. She did do pretty well, considering. Thanks so much for your review!
Reviewer: sonja2010 Signed
Date: May 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Wonderful job!!! I'm so glad Esme talked to Bella, atleast she realizes that they all love her! Author's Response: Thanks so much!! Glad you liked it! :-)
Reviewer: sonja2010 Signed
Date: May 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
I think that the Cullens will help Bella heal more than she knows! Great chapter sweetie! Author's Response: Yes, the Cullens all really love Bella and will help her through this very difficult time. Thank so much!
Reviewer: sonja2010 Signed
Date: July 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
I loved the new chapter. I can't believe there might be a way to get rid of Jacobs wolf side, very interesting. Loved the Meadow scene. Can't wait to see who grabbed Bella Author's Response: I'm so happy to hear it! Yeah, well Carlisle thinks it would probably be impossible. But you'll have to wait and see what happens :-)
I'm glad you enjoyed the meadow scene. I thought that poor Edward and Bella deserved a bit of a break and I wanted to have some E/B fluff :-)
Thanks so much for your review!
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