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Summary:

Bella never jumped, Edward never returned - but Victoria did. Not even the intervention of the wolf-pack can stop her from attacking Bella. Now entering her first year of college, Bella has some major decisions to make about her life.

 

The Ugly Ducking


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Edward, Jane
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 43094
[Report This] Published: December 13, 2009 Updated: October 29, 2013


Reviewer: lanigirl95687 Signed
Date: October 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Futures

looking forward to the next chapter 

 
Summary:

Once their lives were intertwined and stuck together with superglue, but now Edward and Bella are a million years apart. Bella, a highly successful author, lacks the inspiration to begin her second novel. Edward, a resident doctor, suffers a nervous breakdown from the stress and heartbreak his job brings. Through a strange twist of fate, they are brought together again and are given the change to gain what they have been subconsciously searching for all along and to overcome their fears... if things go according to plan.

 

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Kate, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 38516
[Report This] Published: December 13, 2009 Updated: October 05, 2010


Reviewer: lanigirl95687 Signed
Date: May 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Tranquil Moments

its really cute so far cant wait to read on ! 



Author's Response:

Thankyou! Cute is what I was aiming for so its good to hear that I hit the mark. More soon. Hope to hear from you!

 
Summary:

It’s been months since Bella Swan showed up on the doorsteps of the Cullen home resembling little more than a broken doll. It’s taken her a long time to get to this point in her life; the point where she feels safe at night, where she feels loved and accepted. But her demons aren’t far beneath the surface. What will she do when life throws yet another challenge in her path and those demons come back to haunt her in the flesh? AH, AU, OOC.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No Word count: 87723
[Report This] Published: December 15, 2009 Updated: December 19, 2010


Reviewer: lanigirl95687 Signed
Date: August 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Green Eyed Monster

well it was bound to come out some time cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Sorry this has been so long in the making! I've had a tougher time than expected writing Emmett, but here's a little teaser!

EmPOV
It was a slow process and I know that I scared her at first. I will never forget the look of sheer terror in her eyes when she awoke in the hospital to me sitting beside her bed, all bulk and muscle. I remember how the heart monitor’s beeping practically went through the roof as she sat bolt upright and tried to scramble backwards. Her movement had caused her to put pressure on her broken ribs which probably caused a considerable amount of pain based on the way her face went pale but that didn’t stop her. She was working on pure instinct and that was telling her to get as far away from me as possible. I knew that if I stood up and showed her exactly how big I really was, she would probably pass out or try to jump out of the bed and hurt herself so, instead, I just sat there and smiled at her. I didn’t say a word, didn’t hold up my hands and promise not to hurt her, I didn’t even tell her where she was though she probably deduced that one for herself. We stared at each other for what felt like forever and I listened as the heart monitor slowly went back to a healthy pace. Finally, when I figured that she wouldn’t bolt, I crossed my arms over my chest and said, casually,

“You know, you bled all over our stairs.”

It was the beginning of a lot of laughs between the two of us. I still say that it was my charming dimples that won her over in those first few minutes, she says it was my complete lack tact. She says tomato; I say potato.

 
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 Signed
Date: September 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The Other Guy

well im upset that shes been taken! i cant wait to see the outcome of this story! 

 
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 Signed
Date: May 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Discussions

great chapter cant wait till the next one 



Author's Response:

Next one should be coming up soon times! Glad you enjoyed it!

Here's a tiny teaser from the next chap, sorry it's so short, I couldn't find a bigger chunk that didn't give away too much:


EPOV
“I know what we can do! I’ve been thinking about doing it for ages,” Emmett said, a glint in his eye.
“Are we going to get in shit for this?” I asked warily.
“Nah. Mom will love it.”

 
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 Signed
Date: May 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: The Banshee

well he found her! cant wait till the next chapter ! 



Author's Response:

So, you're sure this is James eh? You don't think Bella's crazy? Hmmm... ;)

Here's your teaser:

BPOV
Later I would have no idea how long we stood there, probably making quite the scene, as Jasper attempted to sooth and I trembled steadily. Later I would barely remember Edward and Emmett coming out of the pharmacy and telling us that there had been no sign of a man fitting James’ description in the pharmacy and that none of the staff had recognized such a description either. Later I would only remember the feeling of the panic swelling up through my stomach, making me feel nauseous, and clawing at my throat as it suffocated me. Later I would only remember Jasper’s arms and his sweet scent.

Cinnamon. Old Spice. Leather.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 Signed
Date: December 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Taken

well leave it to the boys ! cant wait to the reasoning between the 2 of them and all of them realizing that shes missing! 

 
Summary:

 

Bella seeks refuge from horrible nightmares at a small all-night diner, where Edward is the new night-shift waiter. Together they help save and heal each other from their pasts and lonely existences, but can they overcome one important obstacle to be together?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 61125
[Report This] Published: December 20, 2009 Updated: January 25, 2012


Reviewer: lanigirl95687 Signed
Date: December 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

loved the chapter ! 

 
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 Signed
Date: August 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

looking foward to the next chapter

 
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 Signed
Date: January 25, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

loved this chapter!

 
blossom by ms_ambrosia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 638]
Summary:

 

Isolated and disheartened, Bella Swan struggles to relate to people her age. When a charming young man named James enters her life, she finally starts to feel like she belongs. But when an unexpected pregnancy leads her back to Forks, what at first seemed like a punishment turns into a blessing in disguise. Hope blooms in unexpected places.

AU-AH. OOC. BxE, JxA, EmxR.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: No Word count: 108516
[Report This] Published: December 27, 2009 Updated: September 03, 2010


Reviewer: lanigirl95687 Signed
Date: September 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: What Will You Blossom Into

im happy that james got a chance with ben even though he signed his rights away ... and i hope that in the end his in his life in some sort of way... its sad that this story is comming to an end but im happy shes gettiing her fairy tail ending! 

 
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 Signed
Date: July 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Only Gift

that was hot!! cant wait till the next chapter

 
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 Signed
Date: April 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Sweet Fire

at least she is starting to come around and become happier! i just think something is going to happen with james ! 

 
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 Signed
Date: June 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: I'm Ready to Learn

wow thats a bit different cant wait to find out whats jaspers problem!

 
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 Signed
Date: July 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Firecracker

great chapter ! loved charlie! cnat wait tll the next chapter 

 
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 Signed
Date: August 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: My Poor Heart Aches

thanks for the insite on james! hes still an idiot leaving her like that ! cant wait to find out what bella has to think about it 

 
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 Signed
Date: August 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Time (Keeps Flowing Like a River)

well looked at what the cat dragged in cant wait to find out who it is !!! keep the chapter comming !!

 
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 Signed
Date: August 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Somehow We're Always Waiting

aww man !!! i hate cliff hangers!!! cant wait till she hears why hes there ! keep them comming

 
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 Signed
Date: August 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Just Sit Down, Take it Slowly

im happy she became the bigger and let james the ben! i cant wait to see whats instore in the next chapter 

 
Stranded by Beth818 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1229]
Summary:

Edward and Bella get on the same plane, but it crashes in the middle of the Atlantic Ocean. Bella and Edward are the only survivors, and they luckily find a deserted island to stay on until someone finds them. But can they survive each other? All characters are human and OOC.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 95080
[Report This] Published: December 31, 2009 Updated: January 10, 2012


Reviewer: lanigirl95687 Signed
Date: September 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

well im excited that shes preggo it was bound to happen with all the sex they were having cant wait to see the out come of this pregnancy! keep the chapters comming

 
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 Signed
Date: October 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

well im excited that they are finally home and getting settled! cant wait till the next chapter

 
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 Signed
Date: February 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

well they are so cute togehter and i hope they made the right decision going on tv cant wait till the next chapter 

 
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 Signed
Date: April 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

im loving this story cant wait to see what happens next ! 

 
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 Signed
Date: May 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

yes i think bella should be preggo! it would add to the story! and he should of left a note for bella to let her know whats going on, cant wait till the next chapter and keep them comming 

 
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 Signed
Date: July 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

i hope shes preggers that would be the only reason they held off cant wait to find out 

 




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