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Penname: RowanMoon [ Contact]
Real name: Kari
Status: Member
Member Since: February 04, 2009
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If I could describe myself in 3 sentences;
Head in the clouds, feet on the ground, hands reaching for the stars.
In more then 3 sentences I'm a 36 year old mother of two beautiful children with mild autism. My husband is my best friend and I am blessed with being able to stay at home with my children. I also look after my 97 year old grandmother Mimi whom I love very very much. She's my kindred spirit.
I am obsessed with all things Twilight. I read the series twice. Then read the parts I loved obsessively until I found fanfiction and discovered I could read about these beloved characters in thousands of scenarios by people as talented (and I might be so bold as to say more) then the great goddess Stephanie Meyer herself.
I hated the screenplay for Twilight. But I bought a copy of the movie, 'cause well R Patz IS the best physical representation of Edward and the sexual superstud of my most erotic fantasies. THAT makes me feel like such a cougar..but I don't care. Rrrrrowr.
Broken Doll is my VERY first fanfiction/short story and I am totally buzzing on the high of having it read and reviewed. It's like heroin I swear.
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Summary: 
AU Post-New Moon.
Bella never jumped, Alice never had her vision and Edward never came back. Six years later, Bella is struggling to make a new life for herself as a teacher in Rochester, New York. How will she fare when a very familiar student crops up in her classroom? Will she be able to remain professional, or will old ties get in the way?
Edward is convinced that getting Bella back is just a matter of 'persuasion', but Bella isn't prepared to be that cooperative. What's more, she's in the grip of a dark secret which threatens to prevent her from loving ever again.
Bella Swan is slipping under...
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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes
Word count: 124383
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2008 Updated: July 25, 2010
Reviewer: RowanMoon Signed
Date: February 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: A Meeting
Awesome premise. Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: RowanMoon Signed
Date: February 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Siberia
I love love love love this story....I'm so happy I came across it!!!
Summary: After college, best friends Bella, Rosalie and Alice have a run-in with their past. . .and maybe their future? A farcical, romantic comedy with a healthy dose of angst. Nominated for Best Romance & Best Edward Characterization (Incomplete) at the Twilight Awards.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes
Word count: 144638
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2008 Updated: December 29, 2008
Reviewer: RowanMoon Signed
Date: March 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
~rolling on the floor laughing~
OMG! That is the funniest chapter yet! LOVED the EPOV in this..FINALLY! Him standing there with a hard on and chocolate croissants made me laugh so hard I nearly peed my pants.
Reviewer: RowanMoon Signed
Date: March 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
AWESOME AWESOME chapter.
Reviewer: RowanMoon Signed
Date: March 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Edward and Bella in the office?!?!?
Haaaaawwwwwt!!
Reviewer: RowanMoon Signed
Date: March 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
I'm liking the sad story attached to Edward's adoption. Being that his father was a pimp and his mother was beaten literally to death...it's amazing Edward survived this ordeal without turning into a full blown misogynistic MONSTER. He does struggle with his morality though, but the way you write it mirrors the struggle SM's Edward has between the Monster and the Man. VERY well done.
Summary:  What would happen if the circumstances surrounding Bella's change were so traumatic, her human memories were completely erased? Could Edward make her fall in love with him a second time?
Thank you to Mistyrious Charades for the fabulous banner. Be sure to check out her other artwork at ramblingsandthoughts.com/twilight.
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jane, Jasper, Marcus, Rosalie, Sam
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes
Word count: 39972
[Report This] Published: July 06, 2008 Updated: July 09, 2008
Reviewer: RowanMoon Signed
Date: February 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 Home Again
Chilling.
Great story. I love that this is in EPOV. You do a fantastic job at that. I love BOTH of your Edwards....this one and Midnight Desire.
You ROCK!
Reviewer: RowanMoon Signed
Date: February 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 Comfort
~gushes~
beautiful.
Reviewer: RowanMoon Signed
Date: February 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue
~standing ovation~
LOVED it!
Summary: It was said of early vampire books and movies that vampirism was simply a poorly disguised substitute for sex. Back in the day, the entire genre was considered extremely risque'. With that in mind, this is a parody of Midnight Sun replacing all the vampirism with sexuality - no blood lust - just extreme human lust. AH/AU and consequently, OOC. Thank you to Debussy_This for the fabulous (and hysterical) banner!!!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes
Word count: 85040
[Report This] Published: July 14, 2008 Updated: April 24, 2009
Reviewer: RowanMoon Signed
Date: February 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I have seriously not laughed out loud this much reading ANYTHING on the internet.
I adore the humour and light hearted smuttiness of the inner working's of a teen age boys mind. I LOVE this.
I literally GUFFAWED when I read the paragraph:
"Feeling pleased, I rewarded myself with a quick wank before heading back to school..."
AND...
.."everytime I would think about how incredible it would be to have Bella lying across the bed, I would look up and see Emmet's fat ass."
Awesome. Just total awesomeness.
Reviewer: RowanMoon Signed
Date: February 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Awwwwww...I love that Alice and Esme helped Edward with his picnic lunch.
~sighs as she thinks of Edward in an apron with oven mits pulling cookies out of the oven~
Loooooooooove this story.
Reviewer: RowanMoon Signed
Date: February 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
This chapter was mindblowing.
I was quite...enthralled and..responsive, by the FIFTH PARAGRAPH!!
~wipes brow~
This talent of yours takes me on a rollercoaster ride of good..primal feelings. It's sexy hot, it's funny as hell and I'm really enjoying it.
Reviewer: RowanMoon Signed
Date: March 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
omg...excellent chapter....PUHHHHHLEEEEEEEEEZE update soon. That's a major cliffie.
Reviewer: RowanMoon Signed
Date: March 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
I am so happy to hear the monster will not leave us. He is the ORIGINAL afterall, many have tried, but none have managed to capture the hilarity of your naughty little beast.
I adored this story. I laughed out loud, I fell in love with horny trying to be proper Edward, and more BPOV would be greatly appreciated.
As busy as you are with being an awesome beta, I really hope to read more of your writing. I love your style!!
Summary:
A running smutline of Edward and Bella's honeymoon . . . and everything afterwards.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes
Word count: 100790
[Report This] Published: August 10, 2008 Updated: March 21, 2011
Reviewer: RowanMoon Signed
Date: March 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Warmth
Very steamy!
Reviewer: RowanMoon Signed
Date: March 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Light
Th skill of this chapter has inspired me to rename my vibrator Edward.
Summary: Seven original members of the Olympic Coven, and seven deadly sins. Coincidence? Edward has lived too long to believe in coincidences.
He reluctantly relays the deaths and subsequent turnings of each member of his family to his new bride. Each death represents a deadly sin.
An astounding amount of praise and thanks to MrsC for the beautiful banner!
Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight, Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Word count: 42807
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2008 Updated: June 03, 2009
Reviewer: RowanMoon Signed
Date: March 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Canto 1: Conspiracy
Edward the Bard.
Edbard.
I am so excited about this story. MY NEW FAVORITE!!!!
Author's Response: Ha ha! I never thought of it that way! It made me laugh though. Thank you!
Reviewer: RowanMoon Signed
Date: March 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Sins of the Father
That was the most beautiful, all encompassing, heart wrenching reveal into the VERY SOUL which is Carlisle. I don't even think SM herself could have rounded out his character so succinctly and with such passionate prose as you have just done.
This story gives me goosebumps. Your premise and turn of phrase is hypnotic.
I'm enraptured.
Author's Response: Carlisle's sketch was one of my favorites. Who am I kidding, I've had a weakness for all of the Cullen boys! Thank you so much for reading!
I have a feeling that by the time I get done responding to the reviews, that you're going to get sick of hearing that though!
Reviewer: RowanMoon Signed
Date: March 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Pride (2)
Amazing skills. Mad, mad skills at writing, I must say. You have deepened these beloved characters to the point of fathomlessness.
You have the rare ability to weave bittersweet beauty into a tragic tale.
I am ENTHRALLED and hopelessly addicted to this story.
Author's Response: That's what I love to hear! A nice healthy addiction...the stories on this sight are VERY easy to get addicted to, aren't they? I'm so happy that mine is among your poison! Thank you again!
Reviewer: RowanMoon Signed
Date: March 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Envy (2)
Breathtaking.
You paint these characters with bold strokes of vampiric colors.
Author's Response: Thank you! I had a great time for a moment there exactly how one would describe the difference between normal colors and vampiric colors :)
That was fun! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: RowanMoon Signed
Date: March 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Greed (2)
Mythic. Truly.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm most worried about Emmett's chapter so I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: RowanMoon Signed
Date: March 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Wrath (2)
~shivers twice~ Author's Response: (smiles slyly in anticipation...twice)
I love wrath...
Thank you.
Reviewer: RowanMoon Signed
Date: March 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Sloth (3)
~shivers~
Beautiful. Author's Response: (smiles calmly)
Thank you. ;)
Reviewer: RowanMoon Signed
Date: March 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Wrath (1)
I love the relationship of Edward and Carlisle going back to when he was a child...you bring a believable history into play with ease.
Author's Response: A lot of people have commented on that and told me that they never would have thought of it. It had never occurred to me that Carisle WASN'T already his doctor. I guess I learn new things from other perspectives every day.
Are you sick of hearing how much I love the reviews that you are giving me yet?
Reviewer: RowanMoon Signed
Date: March 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: Wrath (4)
That was a terrifyingly beautiful ride of words. Wrath is truly masterful. You have Edward down..and even added more depth if that's possible.
The resurrection of Esme as a strong character in her own right in this chapter is inspiring. SM could never have made her so fierce and wise.
That last part of the chapter beginning with " The blood on her lips was painful..."to .."the memory of her predatory smile in the darkness never will" was chilling and mindblowingly perfect. Your imagery is astounding.
This story is coming to an end?
~sniff sniff~
Author's Response: I share your sniffles RowanMoon! I don't want it to end! What will I do to destress now?
It was always hinted that Esme had killed before, so I couldn't imagine a better way to bring her into a little of her own respect than to do my best to justify that death...hope it worked!
I always love your reviews! They literally push me into the next chapter...I think I'll start writing it right now, by the way...
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