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Penname: fonsy [ Contact]
Real name: fonsy
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Summary:  
Bella is devastated by the loss of her mother and is forced to go live with Charlie, her Mom's best friend, when there is no one else to take her in. She gives up on living, too lost in her own anger to let anyone close to her. Enter Edward, the handsome teenage vampire, and the beginning of a complicated love-hate relationship. Neither can deny the connection between them, but can their love survive the fear that rules her and the secret he hides from her? AU and OOC, Rated NC-17 for language and sexual content.
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 47 Completed: Yes
Word count: 292396
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2009 Updated: December 25, 2009
Reviewer: fonsy Signed 
Date: July 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 41: Juxtaposition
Happy B-Day!!!! Hope you have a wonderful day with friends, family and peple who loves you..I toast for your health, happiness, and many B-days to come.
Poor Bella, she's been through so much in one day, plus the news of Edward and Charlie.
I was laughing so hard from your response to my review, the one from abbu turning like an elephant with fangs, lol. my hubby thought I went nuts :)
Reviewer: fonsy Signed
Date: August 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 43: Decsion
and thanks to you for sharing your amazing story with us. <3...does charlie suspects something, he was begging for edward to fix it, maybe he sensed something in edward, maybe like edward's real mom did when she asked carlile to save him?(was that part even in the book or am i reading a lot of fanfic?, the part about edward's mom)
Summary: Bellas been burnt in her past, so to get over it she pours herself into her work as a chef. Shes gotten her own show and Edward, the worst cook, is set to be her cohost. Bella's not looking for love, but she just cant resist the heat Edward has caused in her kitchen.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Word count: 65394
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2009 Updated: May 06, 2009
Reviewer: fonsy Signed
Date: April 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Gossip
i was laughing my ass off when edward was been atacked by the flour, and then the girl trying to clean him up. I hope they don't get in trouble, maybe the ratings will be huge because of the new chemistry. thanks for this chapter!
Reviewer: fonsy Signed
Date: April 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chemistry
i'm so happy for them, i thought bella would have to choose her job over edward, it was realllly great that it worked out. Yay! bring the lemon recepies! Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I'm so happy you're enjoying the story so far! :)
Summary: 
While hunting one afternoon, Emmett, Jasper and Carlisle stumble upon what appears to be a corpse. When they learn it's a severely broken vampire, they take him home to do what they can to help. But of course, fate has plans for this man. Canon Couples. AU. DARK Themes.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes
Word count: 158872
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2009 Updated: October 31, 2011
Reviewer: fonsy Signed
Date: May 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: The Dance
I'm amazed. This story is amazing. One of my top 5. I started reading it yesterday, and I'm so intrigued by everything that's going on. Just WOW. Author's Response: Thank you so much! Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: fonsy Signed
Date: June 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: The Reunion
Oh my god, you almost killed me with anticipation for that kiss. But it was priceless..loved it. And when he said "I need you too"...oh my god. I squealed like a little girl too. Can't wait for next chapter, and more kisses. I was wondering..are you planning on writing some chapters on EPOV, or maybe outtakes for some chapters...I would kill to know what Edward was thinking when she told him she loved him, or when he thought about kissing her. Great chapter as always. :)
Reviewer: fonsy Signed
Date: October 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: The Bracelet
hope everything is going well for you in real life, and can't thank you enough for the update. this is one of my fave fics, and from what i've read, this is true for many others. i was reading the new moon boards at imdb(dot)com, and everytime there's as thread of people asking recomendations for fics, this story always comes up as one of the must reads...so, thank you again
Summary: 
Bella takes a vacation to Hilton Head Island in South Carolina to meet Alice's new boyfriend, Jasper. Rosalie and Emmett come along, too, just in case Bella didn't feel like enough of a fifth wheel. With Jasper's roommate out of town, Bella has his nice big bed all to herself. Until Edward comes home in the middle of the night...
Beautiful banner by the awesome achelle131
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes
Word count: 163211
[Report This] Published: March 01, 2009 Updated: December 21, 2011
Reviewer: fonsy Signed
Date: April 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)
i totally hate, i mean, HATE Sam! what an ass. i understand the falling in love part, but like bella said he could have done tons of things before shit got out of hand (understatment of the century) loved the line when bella said that the thoughtss+ipod was a slideshow with a soundtrack. loved all the chapters. can't wait for more. you've got a fan here.
Reviewer: fonsy Signed
Date: May 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Ex Communication (V)
nooooo, not a cliffie! can't wait to find out about southerncomfortward skeletons
Reviewer: fonsy Signed
Date: June 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)
i really, really liked it. i thought edward was right for giving her the ultimatum; i'm sick and tired of bella's game, not been forward, not wanting to talk things trough. so yay for edward!
Reviewer: fonsy Signed
Date: July 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)
thank god you're only half-evil, i think i stopped breathing when i read jazz was on life support
Reviewer: fonsy Signed
Date: August 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Riptide
why is bruce pissed? didn't james explained why bella wasn't at work? or he did and bruce does not care about her excuse?
Summary: 
Winner of the Indie Twific Judges Awards for Special Merit.
After Bella's sister Alice is murdered, she can't find peace while the killers walk free. At the end of her rope, she seeks out a hitman, a mysterious man named Edward, to offer him a commission.
Edward is a vampire whose conscience has caught up with him - he is tired of hunting humans, but drinking human blood isn't something he can just give up. When a woman named Bella walks into his life, he finds that he may not have to.
Rated for dark themes, graphic violence and drug use.
Wicked cool banner by angelvamp
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No
Word count: 60619
[Report This] Published: March 08, 2009 Updated: October 15, 2010
Reviewer: fonsy Signed
Date: June 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Okay..okay, just okay!! Come on, you can't just leave it there. Please, pretty please update soon :) As behaviors go, maybe an insight of why Edward is worried about her, and following her around to see if she was safe. Author's Response: Mwah ha ha ha ha! Sorry to have left you hanging like that, but I'm secretly glad that you're this into the story :) I do have to leave it there for now because delving into Edward's head is exactly what I plan to do next, and I need some time to think it all through properly. Also, my mom's visiting for the 4th, so I won't get much writing done this weekend. I'll do my best to update by the 11th or 12th, but no promises...
Reviewer: fonsy Signed
Date: November 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
thank you for the update, loved it! i prefer EPOV, but with Bella expressing a little more of what she's feeling so we can also get an insight of what's going on with her, how is she reacting to him...does the sun harm him in this story, like all the other vamps?, or is it just the glitter effect that he does not want her to see? Author's Response: Yay! Glad you liked it. Bella is becoming more and more comfortable with him around and being expressive, so their interactions in the future should be more insightful. And to answer your question, the sun is in fact harmful (which is why he spends the days in a windowless room and feels like crap if he gets any sun exposure). It'll be his turn to be the vulnerable one next chapter.
Reviewer: fonsy Signed
Date: May 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
did i like it?....you bet I did, loved the interaction. Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad, thanks for reviewing ;)
Reviewer: fonsy Signed
Date: January 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
thanks for the update, happy new year!!! Author's Response: You're welcome, you too!
Reviewer: fonsy Signed
Date: August 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
"Is anyone still reading this thing?"...You bet I am!!!! I love this story, one of my fave. It brings somthing else to the fanfic table. Really, I don't care if you take your time between chapters, I'm a loyal fan! Author's Response: Aw thanks, that's so great to hear. I don't know how some people manage to update every week - for me, writing takes forever! Well, actually, the editing does. It's really comfroting to know that you don't mind the occasional wait. Hope it won't take so long for chapter 12, though. Thanks for the review and the support!
Reviewer: fonsy Signed
Date: October 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
i did not like it.... I LOVED IT!!! He was so cute...and for ch.13 more E&B, please Author's Response: whew - you had me worried for a moment! Glad you loved it, then :)
Reviewer: fonsy Signed
Date: October 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - TZ
3)"@*#&$! cliff-hanger?!"
thanks for the update. still in love with the story
Summary: Bella's having a bad day. Edward's the telemarketer who so happens to cross her path on that day. How does Edward react when Bella gives him a piece of her mind?
AU/AH, all canon couples. Varying POV between Edward and Bella.
Fantastic banner by Danger_Magnet
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, James, Jasper, Laurent, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Word count: 48348
[Report This] Published: March 13, 2009 Updated: June 15, 2009
Reviewer: fonsy Signed
Date: May 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: General Pain is Tougher
It was perfect for me. So glad is all out in the open. Can't wait to see them interacting again. Is funny how she thinks that she might not get a chance to talk to him again, when he's just riding in the front sit, it just made me laugh. I love the comics too.
Reviewer: fonsy Signed
Date: June 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Call Me... Please?
I like this story, sorry to hear is almost ending, but it was a nice ride, really enjoyed it. If I'm right....Review=Lemon, right? :)
Summary:
Bella meets Edward when he picks up his nephew from her Pre-K class and the sparks fly. As their feelings for each other grow, Edward has a prior commitment that he is convinced must be seen through. A commitment that is effectively keeping them apart. Are there some complications that even the strongest hearts can't overcome? Can they resist the one thing they can't have--Each other?
To get to the prize, they'll have to survive the temptation of one another, in this emotional waiting game.
Show and Don't Tell.
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Stephenie Meyer owns any Twilight characters and Twilight plot lines that may appear in this story. The remainder is my original work. No copying or reproduction of this work is permitted without my express written authorization. Copyright 2009 by Brits23.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes
Word count: 124914
[Report This] Published: March 25, 2009 Updated: December 16, 2009
Reviewer: fonsy Signed
Date: June 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
oh, oh..problems=drama...yay
Reviewer: fonsy Signed
Date: July 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
big trouble, how are they planning on keeping hands off each other =)
Summary: 
Alice and Bella are in high school, and to celebrate the commencement of their junior year, Alice is throwing an end of the year party. After much begging, she gets Bella to attend. Unfortunately, someone spiked the drinks, and Bella gets drunk. She ends up being seduced by a beautiful bronze haired boy, who she can't remember ever seeing before. A couple weeks later, her mother, Esme, announces that she's remarrying. Bella's going to have a new stepbrother. This stepbrother is none other than the handsome stranger she fell in love with at Alice's party. And to top it off, she discovers that she's pregnant...
Rated NC-17 for teenage drinking-nothing explicit
Thank you to TaintedDarkInuShemeeko for the awesome banner!!!!!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Nessie, Other Character, Renesmee, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No
Word count: 44596
[Report This] Published: March 30, 2009 Updated: July 19, 2010
Reviewer: fonsy Signed
Date: June 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Decisions
I really like the plot, and I believe this is the first time I like Mike :), loved all his lines. That said, I think it was a little confusing; I know that there was a lot of things going on (loved the idea of a pregnant Esme, that was great, was not expecting that), I think the POV were all over the place, like when Bella was ready to leave with Edward, and then jumps back to when she was talking to Alice, and Rosalie. I do like the story, can't wait to find out if Bella will let her guard down. Author's Response: yeaaa, i just realized how confusing the povs were. i think i'll make it a little more chronological in the future, and i'll probably fix this up when i finish the whole story, clean it up a little.
and as for bella letting her guard down, well,.....there's a long way to go before that happens.
Reviewer: fonsy Signed
Date: July 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Confusion
I think Rose is been selfish, bringing a baby to the world because you feel lonely?, but then again, that baby will be loved. Not fair to Emmet though...As for Irina, maybe she's planning a fake pregnancy? Can't wait for more E&B interaction. Author's Response: well it's not a fake pregnancy, though a whole bunch of people have thought of that...it's actually something that will bring edward and bella closer together...
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