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Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1968]
Summary:

 

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes Word count: 146076
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2010 Updated: February 03, 2011


Reviewer: fonsy Signed
Date: October 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

loved, loved the ending! amazing story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! I have it on good authority that it's a *squeal*-worthy one!

I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is so much freaking fun. Check it out if you get the chance! We had a bunch of new players this past week, so I figured I'd mention it one more time. I won't bring it up again for awhile.

=)

Shel

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Bella sighed and smiled, her eyes closed and facing the sky, as the classical notes of Tchaicovsky's 1812 Overture swirled around the air. She felt Edward's hand gently begin to play with her hair and she bit her lip to stifle a sigh. He had been nothing short of amazing today and she didn't want their date to come to a close any time soon.

She opened her eyes and turned her face slightly to the left.

Edward's fingers still held onto a strand of hair as he smiled down at her.

"Enjoying the concert?" he asked, in a low husky voice. She smiled widely and nodded happily.

 
Bella's Butler by DingoesAteMyBaby Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 115]
Summary:

 

Big adoring thanks to Lisa254 who surprised me with this little beauty:)

Bella's parents die and suddenly her world is upside down. A beautiful, clearly insane man claims she's a wealthy heiress and he's her personal, very efficient butler and that she's his world. What's a girl to do? Inspired a bit by Mei-Chan No Shitsuji


Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 29162
[Report This] Published: April 29, 2012 Updated: March 05, 2013


Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

in this page i can not read the chapter if i don't highlight everything, is it the format or problems with the site? love her name for the horricopter..the pink horror", jiji, she should at least let edward paint some skulls and bones to it. :)



Author's Response:

First off, thanks for All the reviews, even just the smiley faces:D They made me...well, smile and I appreciate the rating as well:D

As for the mess of the last chapter, it has been fixed and I'm sorry it was so weird. I noticed it, but it was apparently something that went wrong in the validation process:D

Anyway, just wanted to say one last thing, it's sooo hilarious that you think Bella should have skulls and bones on her Pink horry, especially since (and I'm letting you in on a little secret here too), that's one of the other young ladies preferred style. Oh, okay, it's Alice's chopper that's like that, but I just thought it was funny our minds sort of worked in the same lane here:)

 

Thanks again for all the comments!

 
Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

:)

 
Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

To quote someone that shall remain nameless, “I pity the fool.” love this line. and i can just imagine your edward holding the brush, adorable :)

 
Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

:)

 
Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

:)

 
Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

:)

 
Reviewer: fonsy Signed
Date: July 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

I'm really enjoying your story. your bella is amazing, love her sarcasm. can't wait for how the story is going to evolve; the telling of the mysteries. i was looking through the lists of stories, trying to find somethin new and exiting; and i was like "bla, bla, bla...more of the same...bla, bla, bla...done before...bla, bla"; and then THIS. thank you for taking the time to write this and for sharing :) now i'll go back and put at least a smiley face in the reviews, 'cause this deserves all than it can get. thank you

 



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