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Penname: fonsy [Contact]
Real name: fonsy
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Member Since: February 04, 2009
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Summary:

Edward Masen is a former NFL football player who was injured and could not return to playing. After taking some time off to figure out what he wanted to do with his life, since playing football was out of the question, he decided to go with coaching high school football. He leads a simple, quiet life with his friends in Forks until he meets the woman that will change his life forever. Bella Swan decides to move back home with her younger brother when she gets a teaching position at her old school in Forks. AH/Canon Couples/alternating between Edward and Bella POV. Rated M ;)

Huge thanks to Jessica1971 for being my beta once again.  I could not do this without her. :) 

Disclaimer: SM owns Twilight.

Thank you to Heatherdawnc for making another terrific banner for me. =)

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie, Seth
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes Word count: 170353
[Report This] Published: August 09, 2009 Updated: March 02, 2010


Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Broken

wow, thanks so much for all the updates, really nice x-mas present! it sucks what they're facing, hate that lauren bitch, really sweet that seth and edward think of the other as their brother.

 
Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Cookie Deception and Caught Red Handed

thanks for the update, i hope he'll have the balls to jump in and say that yes he was dreaming about her

 
Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Thunderstorms and Cookies

hmm, i wonder if i could help too... :)

 
Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Cheap Wine and Rum

love the interaction

 
Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: The Skank and the Biker Babe

yay, love the ust!!!!

 
Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Blushing TILF and Naked CILF

awesome, that is all i have to say....AWESOME!

 
Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: A Rainy Kiss

liked it a lot! although i didn't get why edward ran away, is not like he don't know how she feels, she told him right before the kiss, well not exactly told him, but he should know

 
Gates by amp23 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 441]
Summary:

Edward with book

Do you like stories where Bella is sweet and kind and mature beyond her years?  And when she and Edward meet they fall in love immediately and have lots of smexy times? And Jake is their dog?

If yes, then this is NOT the story for you.

But if like stories where Bella is insecure, moody, argumentative and occasionally thoughtless, or stories where Bella is kind of involved with both Edward and Jacob at the same time and dealing poorly with the situation - then you might like this story.

Here's what it's about:

Bella has just started her freshman year at Yale after taking a year off between high school and college. She is trying to balance her relationship with her long distance boyfriend, Jacob, while making friends at school and dealing with her classes.  She is also trying to manage the problem that caused her to take the year off before starting college.

And then she gets a ride from a Yalie named Edward Cullen . . .

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 121361
[Report This] Published: August 19, 2009 Updated: June 10, 2010


Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - The All Nighter and Toad's

wow, was not expecting edward to kiss her, i thought he'll wait for bella to dumb jacob, he does not look like a guy who would like to share his girl...or maybe he is confused, likes bella, but don't want a steady girlfriend? thanks for the update!

 
Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Slipping and Falling

can't wait for next chapter. edward confuses me, i mean, does he want bella for a quick wham bam thank you mam, or friends with benefits, or does he really cares enough to pursue a relationship with her? i don't get mad if he's sleeping with someone else right now, bella has a boyfriend, he does not owe her anything 

 
Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Halloween

love the interaction between them, i was missing it, bella should call him out about that girl who was with him in his room, the other day thaat his friend thought it was bella, not that he did something wrong, he is single.

 
Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Taking it Back

i understand the whole moral thing, but can't help it, i want edward/bella action, but will patiently wait, all good things come with patience, and it is a great story, so no rush from me.

 
Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 The Language Lab

I refuse to acknowledge godfather III existence too, LOL. Really enjoyed the chapter, i like the pace too, i mean, of course i want them to be together but in real life stuff like that do not happen overnight, she has a boyfriend and an eating disorder, and depression, so yeah, i will patiently wait for a resolve. don't mind if she slips and kiss him again, just saying ;)

 
Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - The Game

yay!!!, i know cheating is bad, but when it comes to e&b, i just don't give a fcuk, i know, evil of me but what can i say, i love this couple, so this is progress for me. i'm worried though, of bella's reaction next morning, also want to know if edward wants her for himself and hates that she has a boyfriend, or if he just want to mess around with her...love the chapter

 
Summary:

Two strangers, two computers.... one night.

Lonely ER doc Edward Cullen goes online one night to relieve some tension, never expecting to find what was awaiting him. AH/possibly some OOC. Rated NC-17 for a reason.

Banner by tby789

Banner by Lindsi loolabell


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 132766
[Report This] Published: August 24, 2009 Updated: May 08, 2011


Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 ~Anxiety

yay, they're finally face to face, love it!!! have a happy new year!!!

 
Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Unknown

totally like it!! please continue this story, is something new i have not found in fanfic :)

 
Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation

yay!!!!!!!

 
Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Need

glad to see u r back! and hell yessss, bring the web cam!!!!!!

 
Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 ~ Not Backup

really enjoyed it, thank you

 
Facebook Friends by GreenPuma Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1208]
Summary:

Bella is shocked when her sexy but standoffish lab partner, Edward, friends her on Facebook.  Will her best friend, Alice, convince her to accept Edward’s friend request?  Or, will she write it off as a prank of the conceited, spoiled rich kid she knows Edward to be?

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 71379
[Report This] Published: August 26, 2009 Updated: April 23, 2011


Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: It's a Fire

i was going to ask u that same question, i have no idea what it means.thanks for the update.

 
Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Hallelujah

love this story, only "problem" is that i take too long reading the chapters because i keep going on youtube to search all the amazing music, lol. thanks for the update...why is edward fucked up?, he keeps saying that, but not sure why, he seems like he has a normal life

 
Bon Voyage by cchellez Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 27]
Summary:

Bella is trapped in the small town of Forks, lost in a world where she feels like she doesn’t belong. With a desire to get away from her now remarried family, what will the senior trip to Europe have in store for her? AU/AH B&E


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Charlie, Edward, Eric, Jacob, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Other Character, Renee, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 36933
[Report This] Published: September 01, 2009 Updated: December 12, 2009


Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: City of Love

thank you for the update. wonder if alice will keep her believing that she's edward's girl.....btw, where's edward?

 
Sway by Hibbleton Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 719]
Summary:

Single mom Bella finally has life under control again when a new PD starts working at the same radio station and teaches her that she doesn't have to be alone to take care of her responsibilities.

Epilogue posted!

Sway

Huge thanks to Shug for the banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 194808
[Report This] Published: September 02, 2009 Updated: January 06, 2011


Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Epiphanies and Clarity

"What kind of puppies does Maggie have?"<br />"Brown!" he yelled back.<p>lol!, for next chapter, maybe some heavy ust? thanks for the update!</p>



Author's Response:

Next chapter is almost all B&E (9 out of the 10 pages in Word), mostly the two of them alone, with mood music, so . . .

LOL!

Thanks for reading!

 
Volition by Rochelle Allison Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 423]
Summary: Feature

 

Belfast, Northern Ireland and the year is 1972. Bella's worried about her brother and his best friend, Edward, and their dangerous involvement in the Irish Republican Army. Is it really wise to fall in love with a rebel?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes Word count: 139090
[Report This] Published: October 22, 2009 Updated: May 16, 2010


Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

your story is amazing, never read anything like it, the setting is great, i mean, not happy about people getting killed and injustice, what i'm saying is that is very refreshing to se something new. love what you've done with the characters. this definitely deserves more reviews.



Author's Response:

thank you, fonsy! that's so kind. yes... for whatever reason the reviews have been much slower on twilighted. i love this site, which is why i post here as well, but the fanfiction dot net version of "volition" seems to get a lot more exposure... don't know why.

i'm glad you find this refreshing and new... this story has been so amazing for me to write; it's my baby now. :)

 
A Betting Man by mybluesky Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2594]
Summary:

A Betting Man 

Now Complete!

Just two weeks before her best friend's wedding Bella gets dumped by boyfriend James when she refuses to give him what he wants. The next night she discovers he's made a bet with gorgeous pal Edward Cullen that he can't bed her. She brilliantly decides to string Edward along for a few weeks...and subsequently land herself a hot date for the wedding. Things soon get very interesting...

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 166948
[Report This] Published: December 08, 2009 Updated: September 13, 2010


Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

and please you did! great chapter!

 
Summary:

College professor Edward Cullen is thoroughly annoyed by his student Ms. Swan. Everything about her bothers him, and he longs for the semester to be over. But what happens when he meets her one night when they aren't in school? Lemons and naughty language

 

 

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 78065
[Report This] Published: May 23, 2010 Updated: July 31, 2011


Reviewer: fonsy Signed
Date: November 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

loved rough edward, as much as i love your story, which is A LOT! can't get enough of proffesorward. i want to know what's the deal with bella, why she wont admit that she has feelings for him too, instead of acting nonchalant about it.

 




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