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Penname: fonsy [Contact]
Real name: fonsy
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Summary:

 

Bella Swan spent the first two years of her life in Forks developing a friendship with Jacob Black that finally turned into something more.  As she begins her senior year of high school, a new family moves to town and Bella slowly begins to question the path she thought her life would follow.  Sometimes there is a difference between what you think you need and what you never knew you wanted.  Takes place during the timeframe of New Moon and Eclipse.  J/B at first, but eventually E/B. 

 

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: No Word count: 170230
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2008 Updated: July 19, 2009


Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Acquaintances

Edward was soooo cute in the store scene, I love this Edward

 
Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Hallowed

oh my! what a perfect ending for this chapter, as cheezy as i may sound it was kind of magical, with what happened with the pumpkin, sp sweet.

 
Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Scarred

I love Pissedward. He's fantastic, love the scene when he gets all mad, and break the doors..the line when he said "i gave everything up because you where the safe choice" was so powerful, i just loved it. awesome chapter

 
Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 34: Tightrope

Definetly AFT!!!!!! :)

 
Wishing Star by Mystic_Ice24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 4550]
Summary:

WRITTEN REWRITTEN REWRITTEN REWRITTEN

After her parents are killed in a plane crash, a young girl is rejected again & again by foster families for being too old. She wishes on a star nightly, but will she find what she seeks? Will the Cullens be that family?

NC-17 for later chapters. Warning" Violence, and sexual aggresion may be part of this story.

Winning Summary:

"I wish I may, I wish I might, have the wish I make tonight."  With that one hope Isabella Swan faces life as best as she can.  The tragedy of her parents' death, leaves her alone in a system where her age leaves her undesirable for adoption.  That is until one day two people come into her life offering her a chance at hope.  The Cullen family takes to Bella like a long lost sister.  What happens when Bella is taken from the Cullens by a lost relative?  Will Bella's hopes be destroyed?  What happens when fate steps in years later to reunite Bella with the one's she loved and who loved her so long ago?

Bella knew what she would say, "Don't you want to be my sister?"

 

 

Thanks to Mrs C for the above Banner and my beta readergoof for the below Banner!Wishing Star Banner Readergoof

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 40 Completed: No Word count: 137752
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: April 12, 2011


Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Surprise

ok, slowly killing me with anticipation :) can't wait for more

 
Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Say What?

tanya, tanya, tanya...WHAT A BITCH!

 
Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Halloween

for some weird reason i don't want edward to be the hero...i want him to kick himself in the ass, for not helping bella, 'cause he might have done it but since he was all over tanya bitch he was not aware of what was going on around him, emmett did i think.....and why did bella not scream, or maybe she did but james was so into raping her that he did not listen?

 
Summary:

Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.

 

 

Hiding in Plain Sight

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012


Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: June 20 - June 24, 2008

thanks for the update!!!

 
Sanctuary by Jfly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2144]
Summary: Feature

Edward faces a monumental crisis and finds Sanctuary in the one place he refuses to look for it. All Human.

This story contains Religious themes and Mature themes: Edward is a priest struggling with his role in the Church and as a man.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: No Word count: 99900
[Report This] Published: October 11, 2008 Updated: February 03, 2010


Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Comfort

i hope that she's the most patient woman on earth and wait for him to realize he wants to be with her and leave the collar..well, that's what i'm hoping for.

 
Summary:

Edward's family hire Bella Swan to break the heartbreaker's heart in hopes to have him see the error of his womanizing ways. Bella realizes that they have a little too much in common and is having a little too much fun with this subject. EXB Lots of lemons later.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 43 Completed: Yes Word count: 322353
[Report This] Published: October 21, 2008 Updated: September 13, 2011


Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: The Gala

OMG!!!! Wow, Wow, Wow...Just freaking WOW!!!!! The shit hit the fan! OMG this was intense! I loved this story from the first chapter, but the last two just made me WOW!!!!! (If you havent noticed by now, I'm lost for words, that's how amazing it was) I can't wait for more. I won't beg, but it will be really nice if you update soon. Shit forget I said that...I'm begging, like crawling in the floor kind of begging for a quick update, pretty please please :)

 
D.I.D. by dollegirl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 341]
Summary: What happens when Bella saves Edward from the clutches of a skank in a coffee shop? He wants her to be his girlfriend of course! The problem is, they only just met. Will she say yes?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 48857
[Report This] Published: November 10, 2008 Updated: April 26, 2009


Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I think my hubby is ready to have me comitted from laughing out loud.... by myself. I just can't stop laughing since chapter 7. Esme is sooo crazy. And Rose is just psycho. Poor Edward. This story is just awesome.

 
A Person of Worth by tnuccio Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 456]
Summary:

Just a small town girl, livin' in a lonely world
She took the midnight train goin' anywhere
Just a city boy, born and raised in south Detroit
He took the midnight train goin' anywhere

After multiple chance encounters can two strangers find their missing pieces within each other?

Or will their past mistakes hold them back? 

 

Two strangers passing in the night, searching for nothing, but maybe finding everything. 

 

A story of learning to trust and forgive, finding a way to risk opening yourself up. 

 

Inspired by Journey's song Don't Stop Believing.

 

 

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4669815/1/A_Person_of_Worth

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 107099
[Report This] Published: November 22, 2008 Updated: July 10, 2011


Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: I Was Broken

loved every word of it! and the songs are great. thanks for the update



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I appreciate your support.  I love the songs that were in this chapter, I'm glad you liked them too!

Thanks for reading and leaving a review!

 
Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Flight of the Blackbird

amazing chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it!

 
Snowed In by eclipsedawn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5321]
Summary: Bella travels to Alaska to vacation in the cabin Alice loaned her. What happens when Bella finds out she is not the only person staying in the cabin?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 88293
[Report This] Published: November 28, 2008 Updated: January 01, 2010


Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Reunion

"A Team Jacob sign?" Oh my god, I can not stop laughing!!!!

 
Summary:

Edward is running from home, tired and lost he saves a beautiful hitchhiker from a terrible fate. They decide to travel the road together. Unknown to them there is a trail of brutal murders left in their wake.  The killer is closer to them than they think.  Lemons in future chapters

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 89315
[Report This] Published: December 03, 2008 Updated: August 01, 2010


Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: That Song

I give my vote to pregnancy...more angst, maybe a reason to stop running away and settle down. some may think is super fast the way they are moving, but i think it was meant to be, you know, with them caring for each other before even finding out who they were (at the psych hospital). So yeah knock her up :) I love every chapter and this was not different, it was great, more secrets revealed. Love the new banner too!

 
Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: The Pier

OMG, pretty please update soon. I really really can't wait fir next chapter, the suspense is killing me. This chapter was awesome.

 
Summary:

Edward,Bella, and Jacob are childhood friends who are now college roommates.  Edward, who only seems to care about one-night stands and his band with Emmett and Jasper, and Bella, who has always been studious and responsible, are constantly at odds with each other.  But everything is not always as it seems...

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 85140
[Report This] Published: December 10, 2008 Updated: July 04, 2009


Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: No One

i can't wait to read everyone reactions ro the news.

 
Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Mr. Brightside

I waited so much for this chapter, I was so happy when I saw the update, and then....The cliffy! not nice, bad girl..;) Is she having a natural abortion?, I can't wait for next chapter.

 
Eight Years Later by jmeyer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1238]
Summary:

It has been 8 long years since Edward left Bella on their wedding day. Bella has finally come back to Forks to visit Charlie, only to find that Edward has also returned, and he has been keeping a big secret from her.

Banner by allycubed

 


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 115303
[Report This] Published: December 15, 2008 Updated: August 05, 2009


Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

yay!!! he's human again, yay!!! right? for a sec i thought he died

 
Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Epilogue

I AM IN TEARS! red eyes, big fat tears running down my cheeks, almost sobbing, my husband is looking at me like i'm a crazy person, getting ready to have me commmited while i'm typing this. i understand why you ended the story like that, that is the way life is suppose to be, at least they lived happy long lives, except for rose i think. they all wanted to live a human life, and death is part of it. so sad to read how all of them died, when you come to love the characters. so sad when i read the part that alice fell appart when jasper died. at least the best friends are still together, helping each other. you wrote a beautiful, and real story(appart for the vampire thing) charged with feelings, and what happens to someone when life has to go on, time stops for no one, you just have to move along with what is left of yours. thank you for sharing this story with us.

 
Summary:

The much anticipated sequel to A Lesson in Release.  Jasper has won the girl of his dreams and they are beginning a new life together at college.  But what happens when fate intercedes?  Will he be able to hold onto her or will fate return her to Edward?

A Lesson in Fate


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: The Lessons Saga
Chapters: 49 Completed: Yes Word count: 171842
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2009 Updated: October 28, 2009


Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 40: Morta

OMG I'm speechless! WTF Jasper! (that's what I thought first).  And Poor Edward. Can't wait for what's coming next. Great and Amazing chapter!

 
Summary:

It was a moment of deliciously impaired judgment.

Bella thought she would never see her one-night stand again.

She was wrong.

E/B AH


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No Word count: 57020
[Report This] Published: January 15, 2009 Updated: July 15, 2010


Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: A Lack of Buoyancy

I really liked this chapter. I have the same embarassing issue with my husband. No one knows the real story of how we met :) Can't wait for next chapter!

 
Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

OMG What a surprise ending! What happened at the wedding was hillarious, loved the group interaction :)

 
Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 (vjgm)

can't wait to see how that meeting goes. and i love your alice, and prego whining alice is the best

 
Reviewer: fonsy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

thanks for the update!

 




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