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Penname: Lynnlin [ Contact]
Real name: Erica
Status: Member
Member Since: February 04, 2009
Website:
Beta-reader: Yes
I came across this site, when I actually- believe it or not- got tired of reading the Twilight Saga over and over again. I figured I would give myself a break from reading the best books I ever read. So far- I have enjoyed reading the fanfiction so far.
I've been itching on reading stories from Edwards point of view- been really thinking about writing my own- I'm not sure how to actually go about that- but most likely I will post a HELP ME on the forum- I might decide to write first so I have something.
I'm interested in being a Beta- even though I am new to that as well! I love to read- and I plan on visiting this site as much as possible when I get off of work! :) email me at edayarts@yahoo.com
I dont know if anybody reads this- but I'm very friendly, looking for new friends, I am Married with a 7 month old (Time fly's with a babY!) I am 22- I feel much older. I guess that is it about me- please message me!
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Summary: Bella Swan is different than any other woman you'll meet. She's intelligent, beautiful, clumsy, and a natural born witch. Her quiet life in Forks is shaken when a mysterious family of vampires moves into town, and one in particular may change her life forever.
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Word count: 25952
[Report This] Published: October 07, 2008 Updated: June 23, 2009
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed    
Date: February 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Answers and Complications (v)
Good So far- Cant wait for the next chapter! :)
Summary: Renesmee is finally "fully grown" and ready to start living. How do the people she loves most react when she is ready to be a woman?
Gravity Gravity!
So, I recently was reading through Gravity, and I realized how bad some of the begining (like the first thirty :]) chapters kinda...well, SUCK! so i'm going to be reposting the edited chapters of Gravity over on FF.net. same story, just better!



Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Jacob, Renesmee
Challenges: Series: Imprint Me: The Jacob and Nessie Archives
Chapters: 47 Completed: Yes
Word count: 174580
[Report This] Published: October 09, 2008 Updated: February 24, 2010
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed    
Date: April 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Changes
I love the description! It's GREAT! :D
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed    
Date: April 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Her
I could swear I read this story before....it's just better in the description so far :D
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed    
Date: April 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Age
Yeah- Really good detail, I like this version better then the other one...good job on working on it! It's great! :D
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed    
Date: April 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Damn! Didn't See that One Coming at All! Either
Pretty good
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed    
Date: April 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Conversatoins
doing good- on to the next chapter
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed    
Date: April 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: Hybrid Species
Really good- its a good thing you have her going to La Push- but I can't see Edward letting her out of his sight...he should know something is up...you would think that he wouldn't go far so that he could read her mind non-stop if need be....
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed    
Date: May 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: Calm Before the Storm
ok- it has been awhile :P - It took me awhile to figure out what the last chapter was about reading this one. I figured it out about the middle of it... Good story so far...PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Author's Response: im really sorry it took so long.
the saying "Life's a Beach" doesnt really apply to me. more like life is a four letter word that starts with B.
and i apologize if things were a little confusing. i hope it all makes sense now.
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed    
Date: May 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Flight to Fight
I LOVE IT! It is really good, I would like to have a jacob pov...and a edward point of view...or a Alice pov....that way we can see what is going on with the family. Very good so far, have to admit, I had to think about what the story was about at first, but you wrote the first few paragraphs good that I knew what had happened.
Alright- UPDATE SOON!!!!! Author's Response: i love you for loving it!
maybe i'll do a side shot from Edward's pov. i havent tried his pov, and i've been itching too. i think you've just made up my mind for me. i cant promise you when this will happen. its either delay of the next chapter while i write that. or wait a chapter or two before. i'll let you decide. if you want it after the next chapter, which will be up soon, [i'm going to post it when im done] or if you want the next Jacob POV then the next Renesmee POV then an Edward side shot. its up to you.
just shoot me an email or another review, and i'll get right on whichever once you want!
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed    
Date: May 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Changes
I think another Renesmee and a jacob pov first....and then an Edward. I think you would be great with the Edward Pov! Take your time with it...it will come to you....Just remember that Edward is a Dad now :)
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed    
Date: June 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38: Hiding in Plain Sight
Really good- I'm soooo glad that Bella made the connection that she was in ITALY!
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed    
Date: July 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39: Explanations and Confrontations
It has definatly been a long time!! Love what is going on with this...update soon...
Summary: 
a new take on Eclipse.
That's all I can really say without completely spoiling it.
rated R for intensity and violence.
Categories: Eclipse, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes
Word count: 14099
[Report This] Published: October 16, 2008 Updated: November 20, 2008
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed    
Date: February 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
good so far
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed    
Date: February 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
The story is good so far, I like the change.. :)
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed    
Date: February 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
haha- It was different, I like your writing style, I just get mixed up on whose point of view it is. Good Story so far! :)
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed    
Date: February 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I loved this chapter!!
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed    
Date: February 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
ooooo- good chapter!!
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed    
Date: February 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
It was clear as day to me, but I love this chapter. Great writing!!
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed    
Date: February 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Good Story so far!
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed    
Date: February 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
hahaha- love the end notes!
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed    
Date: February 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Cute story
Summary: 
Bella Swan starts her first semester as an English professor with just the right thing – a one night stand. But what happens when that one night stand shows up in the most unexpected place? All-human.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes
Word count: 41798
[Report This] Published: November 09, 2008 Updated: March 01, 2009
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed    
Date: February 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Waiting
When I first started reading I thought that Edward was going to be the professor- pretty funny for me so far-
Summary: 
So Nessie is a hormone-charged teenager who happens to notice the hotness that is Jacob Black. But then, (because life just sucks that way) a shady vampire enters the picture, determined to make Nessie his. So in summary: constant sexually charged banter between Ness and Jacob, Daddy-Edward on the fritz, sexy vamp stalker, and Nahuel squaring off with Jake. Around chapter six or so, the pace picks up very quickly. So read on!
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Jacob, Nessie, Renesmee
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes
Word count: 65711
[Report This] Published: November 18, 2008 Updated: April 05, 2009
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed    
Date: March 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Schooling a Half-Vamp
hahaha- cute! I think I'm going to like this Edward :P
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed    
Date: March 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Disturbed
haha
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed    
Date: March 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Snow and Sky
NOOOO- she has to show daddy! :D
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