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Penname: Lynnlin [ Contact]
Real name: Erica
Status: Member
Member Since: February 04, 2009
Website:
Beta-reader: Yes
I came across this site, when I actually- believe it or not- got tired of reading the Twilight Saga over and over again. I figured I would give myself a break from reading the best books I ever read. So far- I have enjoyed reading the fanfiction so far.
I've been itching on reading stories from Edwards point of view- been really thinking about writing my own- I'm not sure how to actually go about that- but most likely I will post a HELP ME on the forum- I might decide to write first so I have something.
I'm interested in being a Beta- even though I am new to that as well! I love to read- and I plan on visiting this site as much as possible when I get off of work! :) email me at edayarts@yahoo.com
I dont know if anybody reads this- but I'm very friendly, looking for new friends, I am Married with a 7 month old (Time fly's with a babY!) I am 22- I feel much older. I guess that is it about me- please message me!
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Summary: Bella Swan meets a beautiful stranger, lawyer Edward Masen on a holiday in Rome. The chemistry is palpable, the sex passionate - and a physical relationship grows into something more. The days fly in a whirlwind of clothes, sand, sex and wine. After a painful realisation that the fantasy has come to an end, Bella returns apprehensively to Seattle, heartbroken at the loss of her love.
But, little does she know that the 'beautiful stranger' isn't such a stranger, after all.
A surprise awaits Bella Swan in Seattle.
Rated for explicitly detailed sex scenes and language.
Beautifully accurate banner by the beautifully talented MrsC. Thank you!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No
Word count: 65735
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2008 Updated: September 09, 2009
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed 
Date: February 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Swimming
Good so far! :)
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed
Date: February 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Spying Is Not Perving
Really good so far! Author's Response: Thank you for reading - you're such a cutie for reviewing every chapter!!!
See you on TwilightedChat soon - I'm sure!! xxo
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed
Date: February 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Incoherency and Milk Are NOT My Friends
hahaha- Hilarious!! I loved the Isabella-Bella explanation...funny!
It's getting added to my Favorites right now! :)
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed
Date: February 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: A Surprising Sliver Of Swimsuit
Cute- That was pretty good!
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed
Date: February 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Blue Kitchens and Hot Kisses
Really good so far! I love it!
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed
Date: February 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Alleyways have Consensual Fucking, too!
Phew- wow! Fanning self....
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed
Date: February 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Back to My Place?
Wow- Heat, phew..wow...
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed
Date: February 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: The Life of a Sex God and his Oh-So-Willing Whore
hahaha- I knew she was going to do something with his ass!
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed
Date: February 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Once bitten....
.....So is Bella going to get pregnant?
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed
Date: February 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: From AM to PM...
good :)
Summary: Vampire brothers Edward, Emmett, and Jasper are stuck at age 17 forever. Unfortunately, though all of them have lived for over 100 years, they have very little experience with dating girls, especially modern ones. What happens when their vampire powers and inexperience collide? Will the results prevent them from winning the hearts of the girls they love?
If you like humor, angst, and edge of your seat, nail-biting cliff hangers, you'll like this story.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 47 Completed: Yes
Word count: 108776
[Report This] Published: September 04, 2008 Updated: January 09, 2009
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed
Date: February 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Ride
Your Emmett is so nice! Seemed a little too wordy at the beginning - but that could just be me with reading so much!
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed
Date: February 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Officially Freaked out
Ok- I have to clear the Twilight Emmett from my head- I could never really imagine Emmett being THAT protective in at least THAT way- This chapter was ok- I figure Rose would kick Royce in the groin or something- I figured that was more her- but I guess she isn't a vampire in this story. Next Chapter :)
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed 
Date: February 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Not her
Pretty good so far- I cringed after reading about the blood being to strong and him wanting to go away. I know it's the original- I'm anxious to find out how you are going to go about it! Next Chapter!
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed
Date: February 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Mud Wrestling
I LOVED THE MUD FIGHT!!! Thanks for not sending Edward away!
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed
Date: February 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Adonis the Perverted
I loved this chapter- Emmett was a lot better in this chapter- sounded like "emmett" - Good so far!
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed
Date: February 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Notes
That what REALLY SWEET!! AWWW- I actually like it!
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed
Date: February 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Rookie Mistakes
I was thinking about this at the end- it's more of an edward to be telling jasper and emmett that its not good to have each class with the girls...but anyways- I love this Rose in this chapter- The last Chapter with Rose and Royce- Rose would have surely nailed him -consequences and all from parents.
Author's Response: Yeah, but that wouldn't fit the story. Emmett was the only one that got in good with his girl first. Jasper and Edward freaked their girls out, so this was how it had to be. I can see Emmett doing this, considering his success with Rose.
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed
Date: February 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: A Long Day
THAT IS A LOT BETTER OUT OF ROSE!!! YAY! Pretty good so far!
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed
Date: February 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Addicted to Love
When you said Volvo all I could think of was Edward- I was freaking out- but then I read that they were in a different car! IT'S a really GOOD chapter!
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed
Date: February 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Aftermath
Wow- I'm kinda hoping that Bella doesnt have the best of life- that way he will change her- how malice of me!
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed
Date: February 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: The Choice
WOOOO- he has to change her- I wouldnt want to live that way!! HAS TOO!!! You have some short chapters :P alright nexxt!
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed
Date: February 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Quality of Life
GGRRRR- Great- now the girls are going to think that they were the ones to run them off the road and then have an excuse to change them! GAH!
As you can tell- REally good so far!!
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed
Date: February 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Fight and Flight
This chapter was short- and they reacted the way they should have....Was really good- just really short chapter ...Next :)
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed
Date: February 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: What a Way to Wake Up
I must be a fast reader! Seemed really short again! This is the end for me tonight! :( I'll continue reading tomorrow!
Reviewer: Lynnlin Signed
Date: February 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Bella Finally Wakes Up
YAY! The girls are taking it so well! I love it!
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