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Penname: justinsgrl22 [ Contact]
Real name: Pam
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Summary: Ten years ago, circumstance interrupted their destiny. Now it's time for everyone to go back to Forks for their 10 year high school reunion to face their past with hesitation, hope and maybe even regret. Can they reclaim what was lost? All human.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes
Word count: 166805
[Report This] Published: May 06, 2008 Updated: June 01, 2010
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 Signed 
Date: July 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: Never Felt This Way
I just found this story and read it straight through, start to Chapter 26. What a great writer you are! and what a wonderful story. Actually I am probably MORE in love with Edward than anyonr else could possibly be... I'm also loving Emmett and Rosalie's story as well as Alice and Jasper's. Second chances can be a miraculous thing. Have fun at TwiCon and happy writing when you return!
Summary: Renesmee is finally "fully grown" and ready to start living. How do the people she loves most react when she is ready to be a woman?
Gravity Gravity!
So, I recently was reading through Gravity, and I realized how bad some of the begining (like the first thirty :]) chapters kinda...well, SUCK! so i'm going to be reposting the edited chapters of Gravity over on FF.net. same story, just better!
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Jacob, Renesmee
Challenges: Series: Imprint Me: The Jacob and Nessie Archives
Chapters: 47 Completed: Yes
Word count: 174580
[Report This] Published: October 09, 2008 Updated: February 24, 2010
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 Signed
Date: January 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43: Hell Might Actually Have Frozen Over
Awesome chapter....full of twists and turns and quite an exciting ride. Thank God the calvary has arrived...so...what's Jake gonna do to Caius now? Can't wait to see! Author's Response: more twists await my friend!
oh, the Cullen Calvary. is there any better? haha.
more soon!
Summary:
"In a moment’s time, I’d be his, entirely. The one thing I’d wanted more than anything itself. The pain, the pleasure- it was worth it knowing I’d be able to claim to be his…at long last.
"The silence in the room was deafening. The intimacy of this moment made the world hold its breath in anticipation. Time ceased to exist; the only fathomable concepts were Edward and me."
For all of us who read Breaking Dawn, closed the back cover and said; "Yeah...not what I expected..."
This is my version, my ending of the Twilight Saga. In short, it's purpose is to show how Edward and Bella meet the trials and tribulations of being newlyweds, Bella being a newborn as well as other things life has to offer. It's meant to highlight their love, devotion, the strengthening of their bond as well as how they grow together emotionally and physically.
Rated NC-17 for Mature themes, language and adult and sexual content.
WARNING: quite a few lemons here ;]
ON HIATUS!! LOOK FOR MY NEWEST WORK AND THE FOCUS OF MY ATTENTION, "Love Story" !!
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Phil, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: The Beginning
Chapters: 20 Completed: No
Word count: 132794
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2008 Updated: November 15, 2009
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 Signed
Date: June 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 16 - Vile
This story is so amazing~ the writing so detailed and intense. I love how this relationship is growing and developing and how the words leap off the page and paint such vivid images to describe what is happening between them. This chapter did that and then some. Your description of Bella's bloodlust and Edward's desperate attempts to hang on to her were incredible. Very powerful. I just wanted to let you know how very much I enjoy what you're doing ~ looking very forward to the next chapter. Happy writing!
Summary:  "Once upon a time, there was girl that just wanted to get swept off her feet. Little did I know my co-star would be the one to do it. And with texting no less."
A fictional tale of Rob and Kristen realizing their feelings for each other and getting their signals crossed.
Thanks to falconcranelove for the banner!
Sequel: Behind the Lens http://twilighted.net/viewstory.php?sid=11639
Categories: Other Characters: Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson
Challenges: Series: The Robsten Files
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes
Word count: 193022
[Report This] Published: December 24, 2008 Updated: April 09, 2010
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 Signed
Date: March 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
AWESOME!!!!! TAKE THAT SHARK BOY!!
More? Soon? PLEASE? Author's Response: If you liked that SB moment...just wait. Once they get back to the set, my personal favorite one will happen. Teaser alert! LOL.
Yup, more is on it's way. It's waiting for validation!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! It really means tons!!!!
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 Signed
Date: April 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Perfect!...I love the way you wrote that...it was just the way these two would do things...loving this story...can't wait for the next chapter..... Author's Response: So glad you liked it and it felt it was how they would do things. And I am thrilled you love this story! Sorry for the delay in responding to your review. I hope to have a new chapter up in the next week!
Thanks!!
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 Signed
Date: April 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 33
Wow...what an amazing story. This is one of the first stories I read and favorited when I first discovered Twilighted...and I have loved it all the way through. I love Robsten and you captured what I imagined them to be perfectly. I can't tell you how excited I am about the sequel....and the preview vid rocked by the way. Keep up the awesome writing...I'll be along for the next ride!
Summary: 
Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...
Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.
Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 Signed
Date: August 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
I have loved this story from the very first chapter but you REALLY outdid yourself on this one. This was nothing short of amazing. The notebook...absolutely incredible. And sweet precious Jasper...helping out Bella no matter what the reason. Just everything about it was wonderfula and I can't wait to read the rest.
We WILL get to hear Edward's list...right? ;)
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 Signed
Date: August 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Awesome...fucking amazing. I am so sad this is almost over, but once it is...I'll read it over and over again.
Summary: Bella Swan moves cross country to take a teaching job, trying to escape the man who broke her heart. Edward Cullen is the school's music teacher with secrets of his own. Bella and Edward find themselves thrown together trying to work through their issues and unexpected feelings for each other.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 40 Completed: Yes
Word count: 272412
[Report This] Published: January 01, 2009 Updated: June 26, 2009
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 Signed
Date: March 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23
Okay..I know cliffhangers and plot twists are a writer's bread and butter...but I have to say this ~
I really have loved this story. I loved it when Bella finally got that backbone and decided that she was over Jacob. I loved the way she moved on and fell in love and I can even hang with the relationship struggles with Edward. But I'm begging you....PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE do not let this story head off to "now Jacob decides that he wants Bella, and because she's upset and hurt by Edward she gets confused and feelings are rekindled" land. Because that would make me very stressed and I need this wonderful story to help me escape from my OWN messes. I swear if she ends up in any kind of relationship with Jacob it's gonna ruin this story for me. DON'T GO THERE...PLEASE!
Thanks for letting me share my angst and letting me vent. I look forward to what comes next.
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 Signed
Date: April 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25
I loved Bella in this chapter...so grown up and different from the girl who left Forks and ran away from Jacob Black! I really love the fact that she's making decisions for her life based on what SHE wants..not what the boys want. I also like how she's keeping it simple with Edward..even though the committment is there, as well as the love, she's not going to lie down and be a doormat for him either. Again...love the empowered Bella who wants to be in charge of her own destiny.
Happy birthday....have fun!....and looking forward to chapter 27.
Summary: 
Edward and Bella are friends who have known each other since they were kids. When Edward finds out about a "pesky little secret" of hers, of course he wants to help. Isn't he just the man for the job?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Word count: 16128
[Report This] Published: January 30, 2009 Updated: December 07, 2010
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 Signed
Date: March 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Lesson Four: Pleasuring Edward
Very hot and extremely sexy...I love how Bella's confidence is growing and how Edward is realizing that his emotions are much more involved than he could ever have anticipated...looking forward to all that lies ahead! Author's Response: Thank you for the review11 Before we get to what lies ahead though, we will have to find out what lies behind us. The intermission will explain some things about Bella's new confidence and about Alice's take in it all.
Summary: Bella has given up her whole life for those around her. What will she do, who will she be, where will she go with no one and nothing holding her back anymore? AH/AU, canon pairings eventually - NON-canon pairings initially.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Word count: 134201
[Report This] Published: February 13, 2009 Updated: July 02, 2010
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 Signed
Date: July 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
What an amazing story! The last 2 chapters struck me as particularly wonderful. I loved the theme of this one. A journey of self realization is something we all need to do. You wrote a truly wonderful, funny, romanctic and real love story. I love your work and look forward to whatever you have planned next. BTW...the ending was perfect. Author's Response: Thank you so much for this very kind review. I'm so glad you thought the ending was perfect; I was so worried. Up next is finishing Paper Moon, which hasn't been posted at all here yet. And, the outtake for DBS of course, and my Fandom Gives Back auctions :)
Summary: What would Twilight have been like if the roles were reversed?
Edward, Emmett and Jasper Swan are humans living in Forks with their dad, Charlie and they all work at the police station under their father.
Bella, Rosalie and Alice Cullen are vampires, sent to Forks by their vampire parents, Carlisle and Esme, as punishment.
Banner by Anne Cullen
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
Word count: 65420
[Report This] Published: February 13, 2009 Updated: January 15, 2010
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 Signed
Date: June 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Reunions
I just found this story and read it straight through and I absolutely LOVE it! You've done a great job with your "twisted little fic" as you like to call it. I love all the unexpected twists and turns and how the Swan family will all be together soon. Can't wait to read the next installment...soon! Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and welcome!! I'm so glad you are enjoying my twisted little fic ;-) Please, stay tuned!!
*MWAH*
Summary:
Edward Cullen needs to pass Statistics. Bella Swan is his tutor. She thinks he's a flighty, arrogant--albeit sexy--asshole, and he thinks she's Bipolar, but tries to win her over, anyway.
Can he change her mind, or do first impressions really last?
Thanks to my baby momma, Maximista, for the banner! <3
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Ben, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 34 Completed: No
Word count: 258464
[Report This] Published: February 20, 2009 Updated: January 14, 2011
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 Signed
Date: August 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
UPDATE THIS MOTHER FUCKER NOW! This was the most awesome chapter....PLEASE don't make me wait too long....I love it sooooo much....
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 Signed
Date: August 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 2
Yep...wasn't expecting this at all. Boy do these two move SLOW! It WAS funny though..VERY funny. Just keep him away from Adrian and I promise to be patient with the tortoise like movements of our favorite pair...they are a mess, but totally adorable.
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 Signed
Date: August 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You
OH you are SOOOO awesome...what a perfect chapter! They are so precious and I love how they're falling in love....it's so good!
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 Signed
Date: August 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked
Well...I knew this was coming, but man it sucked. I AM sorry you're going to take your "indefinite" break but I am encouraged that you have a plan to finish this. Please finish it though because I hate to think that I spent all this time reading your story when I should have been cleaning my house or something and then I never find out how it ends. I WILL stick with you though because
a. This story IS really good and I love the way you write the characters
b. Because you seem to think everyone is going to jump ship and I hate to be predictable.
See you around...eventually!
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 Signed
Date: September 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 23: Space
Oh thank you! Now even if I have to wait a REALLLLYYY long time it won't be so unbearable! Loved it...Rosalie should have hit him with the book multiple times though! Happy writing...can't wait!
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 Signed
Date: February 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 31: Coffee and Severing Ties
Okay..I know it's not my place to say but....PLEASE DO NOT LET THIS JACE PERSON GET BETWEEN BELLA AND EDWARD! That would suck beyond anything that sucks in this sucky universe. Please...back away from the "other guycomes along to try and distract our heroine from the one she really loves and wants because the hero was a dipshit and fucked things up" plot device. Yes, he was an idiot, yes he needs to grovel, but if she kisses Jace (or does anything ELSE!) I swear I'll vomit on my shoes. Or maybe yours. Just please don't...I'm begging here!
Summary: Scarred by events in her past, Bella relies heavily on her best friend and roommate, Jasper. When Jasper falls in love with a girl named Alice, Bella is excited for him but can’t help but wonder – where will she fit in? Her answer partially arrives in the form of Alice's older brother, Edward, but as their friendship grows, Bella comes to realize that she may be too broken to give Edward everything he needs. Canon pairings, AH/AU
This contains explicit content, elements which may be offensive to some, and dark themes. It is intended for a mature audience.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: No
Word count: 256064
[Report This] Published: February 21, 2009 Updated: March 09, 2010
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 Signed
Date: March 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Heresy
I just found this story today and read it straight through. I am totally and COMPLETELY hooked! I love your characterizations and the stories you are weaving flow beautifully. I am so rooting for Bella AND Edward..and although I know that the road to true love doesn't always run smoothly, I have a feeling that these two will find a way to overcome the demons of the past and fall madly in love with each other. Can't wait for the next update...! Author's Response: You sound like a girl after my own heart ;) I'm so glad you're enjoying the story, and I hope you continue to! There will be an outtake posted within the next couple of days and the the next real chapter. I'll post teasers for both at http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=2742
Summary: 
What were all of these feelings? He was supposed to be my friend and confidant, nothing more. I stole a glance at him from the corner of my eye. I instantly blushed when I realized he was staring back at me... How could a kiss that was completely structured and meticulous seem so entirely real? I closed my eyes, letting my fingers continue to dance across the stitching. Then I felt as if I had been shocked. My eyes opened and grew wide.
It was then that I realized it: I was unconditionally and irrevocably in love with him.
The whirlwind that was Twilight has ended. Now, Robert Pattinson and Kristen Stewart are on to the next part of the story: New Moon. While filming Twilight, Kristen and Rob shared a deep friendship that Kristen believed was there to stay. Once Rob is thrown into the limelight, their friendship dissapates. Will Kristen give their friendship another chance, or will she finally be forced to confess the feelings she has been hiding for so long?
Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Word count: 15500
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2009 Updated: April 18, 2009
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 Signed
Date: April 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
This made me so sad. Boys are so stupid...they never know a good thing when it comes along. It was beautifully written..and I was proud of Kristen for having the nerve to speak up...even if it did end badly. I hope she shores up her defenses and the next time he sees her he realizes what a stupid boy he is. Make her strong.
Summary: Alice couldn’t see much of Bella’s future now. I had watched her try a few times this evening and she had been disturbed, even frightened by some of what she’d seen. But not frightened enough that she wouldn’t leave like Edward demanded. No, we were all going to leave. Some of us would just be kicking and screaming all the way to the airport. It was the only rebellion I would be allowed, for now.
An excerpt from Rebellion, the sequel to Dreamwalker
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Billy, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Marcus, Other Character, Rosalie, Sam
Challenges: Series: Baby Sister
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes
Word count: 55838
[Report This] Published: March 11, 2009 Updated: June 19, 2009
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 Signed
Date: July 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
I just found this series and read both parts straight through. (Yep...totally didn't do any housework today). Your writing is absolutely wonderful and Leia is an amazing original character. I am so looking forward to the next installment. Oh, and I'll just go ahead now and put in my vote for Leia and Adam having a relationship. I guess I'm just a sucker for a happy ending and want everyone paired up! Happy writing! Author's Response: Hehe...as much as I hate to be the instigator of non-housework, thank you for reading! I'm so in love with Leia as a character. She makes me smile and she's generally so easy to write. As for the relationship, keep your eyes open for Turning Point, the next installment. :)
Summary: 
All told from Edward's POV, The Acclimation Diaries, chronicles Edward’s struggles with learning to control himself and taking things one step at a time as he acclimates himself to Bella sexually in preparation of their impending wedding night. Can he keep his desire in check or will he snap?
A companion story for my one-shot, “Show Me”
TAD Banner by: falconcranelove
Indie Banner by: AngstGoddess
Categories: Eclipse, Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes
Word count: 84817
[Report This] Published: March 19, 2009 Updated: September 19, 2009
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 Signed
Date: June 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Painfully Slow
Awesome, amazing story...and SOOOO freakin' HOT! (fanning myself frantically) More please...soon! Author's Response: Thank you so much babe!! Please stay tuned!!
*MWAH*
Summary: Edward and Bella are recently engaged - happily too. There's just one problem. Edward wants to wait for the wedding, with no substitutes for sex in the meantime. So what does Bella do? Forms the MESS Plan, of course!
Step 1: Move in together.
AH/AU.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Word count: 9089
[Report This] Published: March 21, 2009 Updated: June 14, 2009
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 Signed
Date: June 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: So Long As It's "His" Idea
Love it so far! Can't WAIT to see what the next step of the MESS plan is!
Summary:
Bella meets Edward when he picks up his nephew from her Pre-K class and the sparks fly. As their feelings for each other grow, Edward has a prior commitment that he is convinced must be seen through. A commitment that is effectively keeping them apart. Are there some complications that even the strongest hearts can't overcome? Can they resist the one thing they can't have--Each other?
To get to the prize, they'll have to survive the temptation of one another, in this emotional waiting game.
Show and Don't Tell.
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Stephenie Meyer owns any Twilight characters and Twilight plot lines that may appear in this story. The remainder is my original work. No copying or reproduction of this work is permitted without my express written authorization. Copyright 2009 by Brits23.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes
Word count: 124914
[Report This] Published: March 25, 2009 Updated: December 16, 2009
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 Signed
Date: December 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue
This was the most awesome story! Thank you for sharing with it us. I can't wait for the last EPOV and I'm heading over to check out the new story just as soon as I hit submit. Love this story, love the way you wrote E & B and I can't tell you how much I love the way they love each other. You're the best, babes!
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