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Penname: IlCantante527 [Contact]
Real name: Liza Ventura
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Member Since: February 03, 2009
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Realize by Goo82 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 640]
Summary:

Edward is a hot up and coming actor and Bella is his ever faithful best friend and personal assistant. Bella's feeling for Edward have changed over the years, but he is oblivious to her feelings. With the help of her friends, will she get the courage to tell him how she feels before it's too late, or will she just stand by and watch him fall in love with someone else? How will Edward take the news of these feelings from the girl he has always thought of as a sister? Will the obstacles along the way ruin even the best of friendships?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 93126
[Report This] Published: June 29, 2008 Updated: November 09, 2008


Reviewer: IlCantante527 Signed
Date: February 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue

Wow. This story was so gripping, so heart-wrenching, so emotional that my heart actually hurt and I cried more than once. It's no wonder you won so many awards. The angst in this story really ripped at my heart. I guess that means you're one hell of an author. I loved this story. Thank you for sharing! You rock! =)

 
Unemployment by LeechLover Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 85]
Summary:

Bella finally has enough of her dead end job and her annoying boss, Mike Newton. Join Bella on this crazy ride of love, fun and friends as she struggles to find where she truly belongs in the world.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 32897
[Report This] Published: September 07, 2008 Updated: November 13, 2008


Reviewer: IlCantante527 Signed
Date: February 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

This story was so beautifully and tastefully written. I love how you didn't make the characters be so much like the book. I loved your character development of Esme. It was sad, but it was different, and it made me appreciate Edward so much more. If I may say so, and I hope you don't take offense, I think this story is worthy of a better title than the one it currently has...something like "Worth The Wait"? Because that was what most of it was about. I REALLY enjoyed reading this story, so much that I inadvertently skipped lunch because I wanted to get through the whole thing in one sitting. It kept me wanting more. And I'm glad there wasn't an overly dramatic plot. It was just right. I can't say enough =) Now, I'm not sure if you COULD change the title, or even if you would, but I really do believe this story deserves a better title than "Unemployment." Thank you for sharing your version of these wonderful characters with us. You made my day =)

 
Summary:

I just wanted to be a normal girl, well as normal as you could be with a werewolf for a boyfriend and a family full of vampires. Normalicy may escape me, but i can still have fun. These are my Misadventures.

My favorite Review for the chapter "An American werewolf in....":

Thank you Panda!

Ok...so other than the fact that I think you have completely lost it, HAHA, it was an amazing chapter.  I love that Jake and the pack are legendary in the werewolf world.  Go Quiluetes!  waiting for part deux...

Manda

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Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 49213
[Report This] Published: September 11, 2008 Updated: February 06, 2009


Reviewer: IlCantante527 Signed
Date: March 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Kissing in the mooonlight....oh crap

That was cute! I can't wait for Like It, Love It, Gotta Have It...and now you're making me want Coldstone haha.

 
Summary:

Bella took on the task of seducing Edward, much to Alice's delight and much to Edward's dismay.

Warning: cursing, raunchy-ness, and sex is what my story revolves around. Extremely OOC, just to be safe. :)

This will be a short, multi-chapter story.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 11989
[Report This] Published: September 30, 2008 Updated: November 11, 2008


Reviewer: IlCantante527 Signed
Date: February 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Phase One

Haha...this is brilliant! ::beams up at you:: but how is it that alice and bella end up at edward's? i'm confused =/ but i will read on to find out more =)

 
Reviewer: IlCantante527 Signed
Date: February 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Phase Two

Haha. Little Edward is funny! and that means you are too =)

 
Reviewer: IlCantante527 Signed
Date: February 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Phase Three

Little Edward...so funny! I'm LOLing over here...my sister thinks I'm crazy. But she laughs too when I read the dialogue between Edward and Little Edward out loud. Pure genius! And just plain freaking hilarious =)

 
Reviewer: IlCantante527 Signed
Date: February 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Phase Four

HAha. How could we not support Little Edward? He knows all. =) YEs, this story is good. But it's even better because of the internal (or rather EXTERNAL) conflict Edward has. But it's great therapy for him...AND me since it makes me laugh so much =) You rock!

 
Reviewer: IlCantante527 Signed
Date: February 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Phase Five - The Finale

Wow. That was fun. And sweet. And cute. Well done =) Glad the Edwards finally got what they wanted and needed...Bella. I love love. haha. And I'm glad you made Edward to be the happy pussy we all know and love =) haha. Thanks for sharing. =)

 
My Sacrifice by Jennmc Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 257]
Summary:

Bella Swan is starting her freshman year in college. How will her new life change when her past comes back to haunt her?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 56575
[Report This] Published: October 07, 2008 Updated: January 24, 2009


Reviewer: LaSuaCantate Signed
Date: February 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 - EPOV ch 12&13

This was so beautifully written! Thank you for sharing =)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

 
Partners by gemmabobella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 19]
Summary: Originally written for Jayeliwood's Sexy Edward Contest over at FanFiction.net - this is a one-shot featuring Secret Agent Edward Masen.  After a brutal betrayal by his former partner, James, Agent Masen has spent the past five years without a partner - but that is about to change.  Has Edward finally met his match?  See what happens with Agent Masen meets Agent Swan.  AH AU and steamy ...
Categories: AU, AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7253
[Report This] Published: October 18, 2008 Updated: October 20, 2008


Reviewer: IlCantante527 Signed
Date: February 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I LOVED IT! It was freaking AWESOME! I'm still amazed at your brilliance...everything was perfect, just right! Thanks for sharing! Keep writing and I'll keep reading!

 
Reenactment by mrscullen17 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 11]
Summary: After moving everything out of her childhood home to live with her boyfriend Edward, Bella gets to learn what he wants by her one weakness. *Lemon*
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3086
[Report This] Published: October 27, 2008 Updated: October 31, 2008


Reviewer: IlCantante527 Signed
Date: February 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow that erotic. And being turned on by classical music isn't such an oddity...=) especially if you've ever played an instrument =)

 
Yes, Please by Coquette Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 82]
Summary: One-shot. While out of town, Bella devises a way to finally seduce the ever virtuous Edward – with a little help from an unexpected source.
Categories: AU, Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward, Renee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7768
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2008 Updated: October 30, 2008


Reviewer: IlCantante527 Signed
Date: February 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was AWESOME! I laughed out loud at one point then realized I should probably keep myself in check in a public place. Haha. I love the way you brought Renee out and Bella's shyness, and Edward's stubbornness. Quoting the Cosmo article was brilliant! I too am going to get a subscription to Cosmo once I become a nurse haha. Thanks for sharing. Again, it was AWESOME! =) Keep on writing!

 
The Elite by Fate_of_Gabriel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 509]
Summary:

"Doing what rich people do is easy."

Same old story, Twilight twist. St. Olaf's is a prestigious boarding school, dripping with money, sex, and social hierarchy. But there's really only one question you have to ask yourself: are you one of Them or one of The Elite?

Thanks to Patsy for the banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 149923
[Report This] Published: November 02, 2008 Updated: May 24, 2009


Reviewer: IlCantante527 Signed
Date: March 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Existing in Silence

Wow. This story is crazy. I don't usually read anything that strays from E/B, but you have me hooked on your crazy! I'm loving it! And I'm not ashamed to say so haha. Please don't keep me waiting too long! And thanks for sharing your brilliance! =)



Author's Response:

ANother non-canon convert!  Welcome to the fold! 

 

I'll try not to keep you waiting.  There's a large chapter coming this weekend. 

 

Thanks for reviewing and reading!

 
Art Model by dollegirl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 132]
Summary: Bella needs money.  Her friend convinces her to pose nude for an art class. 
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6937
[Report This] Published: November 07, 2008 Updated: November 09, 2008


Reviewer: IlCantante527 Signed
Date: February 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow...that was so HOT! That must have been excruciating sitting in that position for an HOUR! Not that I would know. But maybe I'll consider posing nude as a side job haha. Thanks for sharing =)

 
It's a Love Story by LeechLover Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

A sweet moment between Bella and Edward based off the song "Love Story" by Taylor Swift.  Pure fluff oneshot!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1754
[Report This] Published: November 14, 2008 Updated: November 16, 2008


Reviewer: IlCantante527 Signed
Date: February 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: It's a Love Story

Aww, that was cute...but too short haha. I love that song too. And I would have loved to see this play out, but I guess we got our wedding in Unemployment, although I don't know which came first. You are awesome =) I will read Gold Comes in Many Forms when it's complete...I don't like waiting for chapters to be posted. The anticipation kills me hehe. Thanks for sharing =)

 
Summary:

A fluffy, one-shot featuring our favorite vampire family. Post Breaking Dawn. Possible Spoilers. ExB


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1330
[Report This] Published: November 15, 2008 Updated: November 18, 2008


Reviewer: LaSuaCantate Signed
Date: February 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was cute! =) I liked it. So playful and innocent...perfect =)

 
Summary: For Jayeliwood's Sexy Edward Contest. Governor Edward decides to talk politics and other things with fiesty Protestor Bella. Let's see how much work they actually get done. R&R please :D NC-17 for lemon!
Categories: AU, AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2076
[Report This] Published: November 17, 2008 Updated: November 17, 2008


Reviewer: IlCantante527 Signed
Date: February 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Let's Talk Politics

No, it was not horrible. Not at all. That was AWESOME! I'd like to replace the Governator with Governor Cullen any day...and I would cause a ruckus so that Governor Cullen would take me to his office to scold me hehe. Hey, a girl can dream, can't she? I guess that's how this came to your mind? I'm glad it did. Again, AWESOME! =) Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

I actually just randomly came up with the idea. I literally was looking through the possible types of Sexy Edwards that could be used for the contest and since I had recently been watching or reading about some political issue, I think, I just chose politician Edward as my sexy Eddie and the story grew from there lol. I just remember I used to handwrite my stories in my journals at school before typing and posting them and I always felt self-conscious writing this one next to people in my classes, afraid they would read it and think I was some crazy perv lmao. Anyway, glad you liked it. :D

 
Summary: Edward finally gives Bella what she wants most: one night with him while she's still human. 
Categories: Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1521
[Report This] Published: November 25, 2008 Updated: November 27, 2008


Reviewer: IlCantante527 Signed
Date: February 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I liked it. A lot. That was nice to read...so simple but erotic. And the dialogue was cute. Thanks for sharing =)

 
Surprise by eibbil Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 29]
Summary:

Christmas is coming and Bella's still not fond of presents. What's a vampire to do?


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4047
[Report This] Published: December 18, 2008 Updated: December 23, 2008


Reviewer: LaSuaCantate Signed
Date: February 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice!

 
Summary:

Edward is a famous actor who isn't satisfied with his life. He and his good friend Alice are off to Chicago to film the newest superhero flick. After a fight with his boss, Edward ends up meeting someone who may just change the way he feels about his life.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 42339
[Report This] Published: December 21, 2008 Updated: February 08, 2009


Reviewer: IlCantante527 Signed
Date: February 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: From Here to Eternity

This was such a beautful story! It wasn't like most of the fics I've read (and believe me, I've read a TON!) and the movie themed chapters were well placed. I really just loved the story, and even if the lemon scene wasn't added (which I do not mind in the least hehe), it would still have been perfect. Thanks for sharing this with the lowly readers! Can't wait for your next one =)

 
Behind the Reel by jakeward Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1458]
Summary: Feature

"Once upon a time, there was girl that just wanted to get swept off her feet. Little did I know my co-star would be the one to do it. And with texting no less."

A fictional tale of Rob and Kristen realizing their feelings for each other and getting their signals crossed.

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Thanks to falconcranelove for the banner!

Sequel: Behind the Lens http://twilighted.net/viewstory.php?sid=11639

 


Categories: Other Characters: Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: The Robsten Files
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 193022
[Report This] Published: December 24, 2008 Updated: April 09, 2010


Reviewer: IlCantante527 Signed
Date: February 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow, I love where you've gone with this. Really. I am a BIG fan of getting Rob and Kris together. If I can't have him, then SHE surely should! Haha. But yeah. This is such a good read. I sorta wish it were fanNONfiction instead of, well, you know what I'm getting at. I am def adding this to my faves. Can't wait for the update =) Thanks for sharing my brain haha

 
Reviewer: IlCantante527 Signed
Date: March 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Nice twist! Damn that Shark Boy...gRr. I just wanna rip his head off haha. Please don't be away for so long...the suspense is killing me!

 
Out of Her Head by Blue25 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2757]
Summary:

Bella Swan moves cross country to take a teaching job, trying to escape the man who broke her heart. Edward Cullen is the school's music teacher with secrets of his own. Bella and Edward find themselves thrown together trying to work through their issues and unexpected feelings for each other.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Completed: Yes Word count: 272412
[Report This] Published: January 01, 2009 Updated: June 26, 2009


Reviewer: LaSuaCantate Signed
Date: February 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I'm hooked! I love the plot of this story. I can't wait to hear more. Please keep the chapters coming! Thanks =)

 
Reviewer: IlCantante527 Signed
Date: February 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 (K)

AWESOME! but aaAaaAahhh...the suspense is killing me! Who is Tanya? You better tell me...or I won't be your girlfriend. Haha. Please update ASAP...or I might die in anticipation. And you wouldn't want that on your conscience, would you?

 
Reviewer: IlCantante527 Signed
Date: March 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

I love the family. They are a bit like sharks, but whose fam isn't? Can't wait for the next installment! Please keep it coming. This story makes me happy! Thanks =)

 




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