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Penname: LissLove [Contact]
Real name: Liss
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Member Since: March 03, 2010
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Hi,


i'm Liss... I'm from the Netherlands, Holland, the little country next to germany and north of Belgium...  i like dancing, singing, writing, reading, twilight and lots of other stuff no one is interested in...


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Wishing Star by Mystic_Ice24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 4552]
Summary:

WRITTEN REWRITTEN REWRITTEN REWRITTEN

After her parents are killed in a plane crash, a young girl is rejected again & again by foster families for being too old. She wishes on a star nightly, but will she find what she seeks? Will the Cullens be that family?

NC-17 for later chapters. Warning" Violence, and sexual aggresion may be part of this story.

Winning Summary:

"I wish I may, I wish I might, have the wish I make tonight."  With that one hope Isabella Swan faces life as best as she can.  The tragedy of her parents' death, leaves her alone in a system where her age leaves her undesirable for adoption.  That is until one day two people come into her life offering her a chance at hope.  The Cullen family takes to Bella like a long lost sister.  What happens when Bella is taken from the Cullens by a lost relative?  Will Bella's hopes be destroyed?  What happens when fate steps in years later to reunite Bella with the one's she loved and who loved her so long ago?

Bella knew what she would say, "Don't you want to be my sister?"

 

 

Thanks to Mrs C for the above Banner and my beta readergoof for the below Banner!Wishing Star Banner Readergoof

Thanks to Sleforever for below banner!

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 40 Completed: No Word count: 137752
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: April 12, 2011


Reviewer: LissLove Signed
Date: December 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 37: We Agree

Hiya,

Here´s  a new face. Yep, I found your story while browsing through the top tens and gave it a shot! The shot took about a day and a half, in which I read everything that´s on! I read for way too long, actually, I think I quit reading yesterday at 1 am. You´re probably thinking I should get a life... It's Christmas holidays, I'm sorry!

I got lucky you updated yesterday night, so I could read an extra chapter! Your last chapter was broadcasted in October, I recall, so you must've felt it ;)

No, that's too much honour for me. You keep doing what you're doing, because I'm liking it!

Well, that was about it, you haven't read one thing of this, probably, but anyways, thanks for the great story!

xxxLiss

 
Reviewer: LissLove Signed
Date: January 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 38: France

the drums have arrived... Nice cliffie.. Not!

Well, I´m waiting for your next chapter!

xxxLiss

 
Summary:

Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.

 

 

Hiding in Plain Sight

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012


Reviewer: LissLove Signed
Date: April 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: September 4 - December 23, 2008

I love this story!  But you really need to keep going, because i'm dying to see how it goes on!

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen made Bella Swan’s life a living hell from age ten to twelve. Finally fed up with the torment and teasing, she moved to Phoenix. Now she’s seventeen, beautiful, and has a new sense of confidence. When her mother sends her back to Forks for her senior year, she is determined to shake things up.

NC-17 for sexuality, underage drinking, and language. OOC, just to be safe. Some canon pairings, some absolutely the opposite.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 55461
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2008 Updated: August 21, 2009


Reviewer: LissLove Signed
Date: April 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: The Snow Ball

oh man.. i don't like this cliffhanger... i wanna know whats gonna happen

 
Summary: Feature

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Hilarity ensues when Edward and Alice come back at the end of New Moon and convince Mrs. Cope to change their schedules so that they're in Bella's gym class. How can they manage to remain human when their superhuman athletic abilities keep getting in the way? Because people keep asking, I'll answer: yes! There is a Princess Bride reference in every chapter. Some are more subtle than others.

 


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Jacob, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Rosalie, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 67849
[Report This] Published: January 10, 2009 Updated: March 09, 2009


Reviewer: LissLove Signed
Date: May 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Carlisle Treats Athletic Injuries

i'm totally laughing through this whole story! it's just brilliant!

 
Reviewer: LissLove Signed
Date: May 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Angela Runs Cross Country

i'm smiling through this story, it makes me laugh over and over again! Good job.. =D

 
Summary:

Bella takes a vacation to Hilton Head Island in South Carolina to meet Alice's new boyfriend, Jasper. Rosalie and Emmett come along, too, just in case Bella didn't feel like enough of a fifth wheel. With Jasper's roommate out of town, Bella has his nice big bed all to herself. Until Edward comes home in the middle of the night...

Beautiful banner by the awesome achelle131


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes Word count: 163211
[Report This] Published: March 01, 2009 Updated: December 21, 2011


Reviewer: LissLove Signed
Date: May 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found

this is so sweet! I feel so sorry voor Jasper, but I'm glad he has found a better family :)

 
Overtime by Dreamrider Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2250]
Summary:

Bella Swan is a writer for a Women's Magazine in Florida, a magazine that she writes the self help column for...Something she really wants to escape. The good news, she is escaping self help, the bad news, she's covering the lives of women behind sports stars...In Denver.

Here she meets three amazing women; the girlfriend, fiance, and wife to two players and the coach of the team, but what will happen when the team superstar, Edward, takes an interest in Bella?

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Warnings: It's NC-17, so basically... Smut, Language.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 129668
[Report This] Published: March 23, 2009 Updated: January 18, 2011


Reviewer: LissLove Signed
Date: November 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29 - Old Enemy, New Battle (V)

I do hate you!

no, of course not, well, not as bad as hating you! I was very excited to see a new chapter up! So now just send a new one and I'll be happy again ;)

Because I did love it.

xxxLiss

 
Reviewer: LissLove Signed
Date: July 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26 - Road to the Playoffs (V)

Edward is an ass he's not telling them. there's no point in keeping it secret... -.-'

I hope you update soon, I've been reading this story non-stop untill I finished it where you ended..

 
Reviewer: LissLove Signed
Date: January 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31 - A Center Ice Finale (V)

aaahw! that´s so sweet!

I loved the story! I look forward to the epilogue, but good luck for any new projects!

xxxLiss

 
Reviewer: LissLove Signed
Date: January 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Epilogue (V)

aahww.. and that was the end...

Thank you for this story, I really enjoyed it!

xxxLiss

 
Summary:

Bella owns a small bar in town and is fairly happy with her life so far.  But it all changes when he walks into her bar, looking lost and confused. He could be everything she has ever wanted and needed but is he who he says he is? Can she trust him? What happens when he leaves?  Can a relationship exist in the world he lives in?

Thanks to HeatherDawn for the SUPER awesome banner! 

Thanks to PTB for their awesome beta-services (HEAR & Sweetishbubble).

NC-17 rating for eventual lemons.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jessica, Marcus, Renee, Rosalie, Seth, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 172643
[Report This] Published: September 06, 2009 Updated: March 02, 2011


Reviewer: LissLove Signed
Date: January 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Leavin' on a Jet Plane

you sure it´s not going to take six months? (was it six months? wow, time flies!)

well, i really enjoyed the chapter and am already waiting for the next one!

xxxLiss



Author's Response:

Time certainly does fly...  one reason why I didn't realize it had been six months... until it had been six months!  The next update will definitely NOT be six months.  I'm hoping that I can get it done in a month.  I don't think I'll be able to update any more often then that unless I really REALLY learn better time management.

Here is your teaser for the next chapter.

Chapter 23: California Dreamin'

The rest of our drive to Marcus’s office remained The wall that I had started to peek over was back up again.  Jane’s instant formal tone pushed back any iota of progress I had made at cracking her shell.  I sighed, resigned, and sat back into the car cushions.

After a few minutes of silence, I turned towards her, my voice firm and unwavering.  “Fine.  If this is how it’s going to be between us, then I need to make a few things clear.”

Her head turned slightly towards me, the only indication I was likely to get that she was paying attention.

“Bella is flying out in a few weeks to spend Christmas and New Years with me.   I will be relying on you to make some necessary arrangements.”

Jane’s face remained stoic except for a faint tic in her cheek when Bella’s name was mentioned.

“I have not failed to notice how you react when I have spoken about her.  I do not understand what you could possibly have against someone you have never met, but I will not tolerate any disrespect or rudeness to her while she is here.  You are to treat her as you treat me.  Is this understood?”

She nodded stiffly.  “Yes.”

“Good.”

 
Reviewer: LissLove Signed
Date: April 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Mistakes

oh i hope this will work out. i hate Tanya though!



Author's Response:

If anyone can help Edward, Alice can.  Thank you for your review.  :)

Here is your teaser for Ch. 14

“Man troubles?”

I was startled out of my thoughts by a beautiful petite woman sitting in front of me at the bar. I was surprised I didn’t hear her come in as I normally kept a good eye on the door. She looked up at me, a hint of a smile on her face, with an open and friendly expression. Her skin was pale and clear with high and delicate cheekbones giving her an almost elfin look. Her piercing, pale blue eyes had this mischievous twinkle in them that was hard to resist. I had no idea who this woman was, but I liked her instantly.

“You could say that,” I grudgingly admitted.

 
Reviewer: LissLove Signed
Date: May 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Pixiedust

oh holy crow! that's so sweet! I love it, keep going :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I hope to have the next chapter up in a few days.

Here is your teaser for Ch. 15:

We both pulled away at the same time, not wanting to get carried away while there was so much to talk about. Edward set me back down and I was glad my knees solidified. I had to hide the smirk I felt creeping up when I saw how truly happy part of his body was to see me. It was great to see that his body still reacted to mine after two months of separation.

“Bella,” he began hoarsely, “I am so sorry I put you through all of this. I should’ve told-“ I stopped him with a finger over his lips.

“I’m sorry too, but we have time for that later. I’m just so glad to see you again. I’ve missed you so much,” I said softly. I wrapped my arms around him and rested my head on his chest. I could hear his heartbeat. It helped calm me. Edward rested his cheek on the top of my hair as he tightened his grip around my waist, rubbing my sides with his thumbs.

“I’ve missed you too, Bella. These past two months have been horrible without you. I hoped every week that we’d get enough time where I could fly out here, but it never happened.”

“Thank you for the flowers.” I didn’t want to admit how crushed I felt when the flowers hadn’t arrived earlier. They were only flowers, but I had come to look forward to them every week knowing that it was because he thought of me.

 

 
Reviewer: LissLove Signed
Date: May 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Wonderland

so sweet, I'm glad they finally got back to each other!
I liked the Jessica-part :)

Author's Response:

Yeah, Jessica is pretty fun to write.  She's silly.  Thank you for your review.

Here is your teaser for Ch. 16:

Taking a deep breath and willing myself to be brave, I opened the bathroom door and walked back into my bedroom. Edward looked up at me, even more confused. I smiled at him shyly and hoped I wouldn’t blush when I spoke.

My hopes were dashed when I felt the familiar heat of a blush creep on my cheeks.

“You know, Mr. Cullen, the shower can comfortably fit two people,” I said softly.

Edward’s face broke into a huge smile as he got up from the bed, green eyes dancing, and walked towards me.

“Ms. Swan, are you implying that I stink?” he teased.

I shrugged my shoulders as I stood before him in my pants and bra, giggling. The back of his hand caressed my cheek as his other hand snaked around my waist, resting at the small of my back. He chuckled low in his throat as he kissed me softly.

 
Reviewer: LissLove Signed
Date: May 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Unexpected Surprises

I don't like lauren, but that's not that weird, right? xD

I hope the paps don't mess up Bella's life too much...



Author's Response:

Nah, definitely not weird to hate on Lauren.  She's a bitch, plain and simple.  Tanya is psycho, but Lauren's just a plain ol' bitch.

Thank you for your review.

Here's a teaser for Ch. 18: Reality

“This is bullshit!” Alec yelled, storming up to me, his face red and eyes narrowed with anger.  Jacob quickly sidled to me, his stance vigilant in case Alec tried to touch me.  I was not afraid of Alec.  Despite his attitude problems, he was not a violent person.

“I am not forcing you do to anything, Alec.  You have a choice,” I replied calmly.

“Ha!” he laughed humorlessly.  “Some choice!  I either sign it or I don’t have a job.  Working for a few hours a week is not a job.”  He grabbed the stack of forms roughly and threw them at me, causing the papers to fly everywhere.  “I’m outta here.”  Alec turned and stormed out of the bar, slamming the door as he left.

 
Need to Escape by lostluggage Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5732]
Summary:

 

 

When Robert Pattinson needs to escape the crazy life of stardom- he finds an unlikely ally to see him to safety- a quiet bookshop owner who is secretly infatuated with Twilight, and a certain young British actor.


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 97 Completed: Yes Word count: 829399
[Report This] Published: September 07, 2009 Updated: September 07, 2012


Reviewer: LissLove Signed
Date: October 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69- London Fog

whoopie :D You get the best out of Rob and Jen!

I'm loving it!

xLiss



Author's Response:

thanks Liss!

they are getting back in the swing! 

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: LissLove Signed
Date: November 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70- Not as Easy as You Might Think

Hi,

Thank you for the next chappie! I love it!

one thing, you wrote mon chére. it is mon chèr. That's the masculine form, whereas ma chère is feminine. Just to let you know =)

I'm already waiting for the next update.

xLiss



Author's Response:

gah! I hate Word sometimes! i know i had cher there. LOL! ah well. thanks for catching it! 

so glad you liked it! 
MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: LissLove Signed
Date: July 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57-Mum is here

oh man.. poor Jen, she's totally - as I would say in dutch - 'in de war' I can't think of good way in English to say it.

I'm looking forward to next chapter, I can't wait to have Rob and Jen reunited!



Author's Response:

thanks my dear. She is at the bottom, at war with herself. Even the strong ones falter... but she has such loving support, it can only help pull her out... 

i cannot wait for Rob and Jen to be reunited either! hahaha!

thanks!

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: LissLove Signed
Date: July 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59-Stand Up Eight

pfff.. I thought this chapter was heavy, actually. (could have something to do that it's around midnight here, I just needed to read your update before going to sleep)

I'm looking forward to next chapter with some happier times (I hope)



Author's Response:

haha thanks hun! so glad you go to it before bed! happier times are on their way. i promise!

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: LissLove Signed
Date: April 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9-Excursions

you're hurting my dutch patriotism... heineken is good beer, just so you know xD I love the story though!

Author's Response:

HAHA! it's pretty good beer outside of the States for sure... there's just something about crossing the state lines that makes it...off... but I'll admit.... *looks around for KrisB and whispers* i drink it from time to time, absolutely.... it definitely beats Miller, Coors and Bud... LOL!

and i think Jen will discover its not so bad while in London...

glad you are enjoying the story! 

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: LissLove Signed
Date: April 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46- It Rains In London

you're horrible! i don't like this cliffie... :(

you'd better keep going, because im overcurious to know who Jen's meeting!



Author's Response:

I'm sorry dearest! I promise, it's not awful. you'll enjoy it i swear.

update will be up in a few days, I promise!

thanks my dear! 

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: LissLove Signed
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48- Happy Birthday Jennifer

oh man, that last part had me laughing for minutes! brilliant!

keep going please, i love it!



Author's Response:

thanks my dear! who knew answering someone else's phone could bring so much embarrassment... well,we did of course! 

so glad you liked it! 

more soon!

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: LissLove Signed
Date: May 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50-You Are My Rob

Like it! I'm looking forward to the Remember Me premier, I like theatregirl :)



Author's Response:

thanks hun! 

hard to believe we are a month away from the RM premier! seems like only yesterday... hahaha

glad you like theatregirl. Jen really does need a friend.

thanks my dear !

more soon!

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: LissLove Signed
Date: March 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78- Family Matters

I already had that feeling, that Meaghan was going to know Rob a little more than just know ;)

I haven't reviewed in a while, I believe, I know, you can kill me. But I'm still reading and still really liking it! Is it just me or do you update less regularly through the past weeks/months?

well, i'm gonna run, 'cause the news is coming up and there's something about our government sending planes etcetera to Lybia and you're really not interested in this shit... :o

xxxLiss

 




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