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Penname: LittleLisa [Contact]
Real name: Lisa
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Member Since: February 26, 2010
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The Night Before by evieeden Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 444]
Summary:

What if the first time Bella dreamed of Edward she wasn't really dreaming. Would their growing relationship be tainted by what had already occured?

Based on the 'that was the first night I dreamed of Edward Cullen' deleted scene from the Twilight DVD.

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Thanks to m81170 for the banner.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 54658
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2009 Updated: March 23, 2012


Reviewer: LittleLisa Signed
Date: August 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Tentative Beginnings

Great story - hope Bella figures out what he is soon. More sex without the pain would be great. Do you ever intend to do an Edward POV. It wouldbe nice to get his perspective - up until now he's kind of been a dick. Update soon!

 
Taken by BellaLovesEdward729 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1181]
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Thank you to Mkystich for the awesome banner!

Edward and Bella go to tell Charlie about their engagement when something happens that changes everything. Love is tested, friendships are torn, but how can Edward save Bella from someone they all trusted?


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 88773
[Report This] Published: February 10, 2010 Updated: August 31, 2010


Reviewer: LittleLisa Signed
Date: June 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

This chapter was good, but i still feel that Edward's being a bit of a dick by not having sex with Bella. Update soon - i can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

aww. he's just trying to help! i promise :)

 
Reviewer: LittleLisa Signed
Date: May 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Finally, he can be so obtuse! I hope Bella gets better. Good story!



Author's Response:

thank you so much! :)

as promised...

I laid down in my bed with my back to the window. I didn’t have to hear him to know he was there. My body always reacted when he was around. Tears threatened to spill but I held them at bay. I didn’t want to cry anymore. It wasn’t long before I heard the sound of Edward’s shoes being placed on the floor and felt the shift in the bed. I was glad I didn’t have to beg him to lie there with me; it would have just been another humiliation to add to the list. When I felt his arms make their way around my body, I had to bite my lip to keep from sobbing. The tears finally won and they started to stream down my face, silently. Edward held me close to his chest as he kissed the back of my head. He held me the entire night, never saying a word. I welcomed the silence, because then I could dream that he still wanted me.

 
Summary:

An old, dilapidated hospital residing in the outskirts of Forks, Washington, sits untouched - other than being the occasional setting of a teenage party. Everyone knows the rumors, and it's because of those rumors rebellious teens are lured there. They want to be the first to spy the young man who supposedly lives inside its walls, the man who's either a ghost or crazed maniac that murders those courageous enough to enter the building.

No one has ever seen him, or at least no one that's ever lived to tell the tale. But it's all just rumors, right? Well, Bella Swan is about to find out.

 

Rated for subject matter and content. OOC. Canon pairings.

 

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Gif made by the amazing RoseArcadia

Warning: There is mention of physical abuse in this story.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Marcus, Mike, Rosalie, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 89825
[Report This] Published: February 13, 2010 Updated: July 12, 2010


Reviewer: LittleLisa Signed
Date: May 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Realize

Love that they finally kissed - although more detail will be lovely. She's not going to leave him is she? Sad but lovely chapter - especially the ending. Update as soon as you can. I'm addicted to your wonderful words.

 
Reviewer: LittleLisa Signed
Date: May 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: A Piece of Beautiful

I've just discovered this story and i'm hooked. I'm hoping they'll kiss in the next chapter - Edward is adorable. Hope Bella can fix him and that she doesn't leave him. Update soon PLEASE!!! Love, love, love it!

 
Reviewer: LittleLisa Signed
Date: May 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Truth Unfolding

Edward is adorable. There should be kissing! I hope Bella's newfound knowledge doesn't adversely affect their relationship. Update soon!!!

 
Summary:

Edward Masen has lived the life of a nomadic vampire, travelling with James and Victoria since he awoke as an immortal. His ability to read minds has had the unusual side effect of making him a vampire with a conscience. Despite the ridicule from his coven mates, he's confident he's making the best of his existence and doing what's morally right... until he stumbles upon a brown-eyed girl reading in a meadow in Forks. As he attempts to befriend her and learns more about the sleepy town of Forks, Edward finds there's a lot more to being a vampire than he ever thought possible.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, James, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Completed: Yes Word count: 276627
[Report This] Published: April 22, 2010 Updated: June 26, 2012


Reviewer: LittleLisa Signed
Date: September 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Enlightened

Aww he's so cute! Is Renesmee going to be in this story? Great chapter.

 



Author's Response:

That's something that's yet to be decided. Some people are totally against her, and some have asked for her. I know I'm not going to make everyone happy, but I'm not a Nessie hater, so I'm not against having her in the story.

 
Reviewer: LittleLisa Signed
Date: March 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Panic

Wow! Love the chapter. Update soon! Hope you will put in more lemons soon... and more Rose and Emmett. They're awesome!!!

 
Reviewer: LittleLisa Signed
Date: May 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Optimistic

I prefer EPOV. Are they going to meet properly Is he going to start drinking from animals? Will Bella become a vampire? Good story - update soon!

 
Reviewer: LittleLisa Signed
Date: July 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Jealousy

Ooh, Edward's cute when he's jealous! I wish he'd tell her what he is though. Great story - update soon.



Author's Response:

Hehe, I feel like a broken record saying it, but soon :) We're only a short distance away from some big reveals ;)

 
Reviewer: LittleLisa Signed
Date: August 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Anxious

Love the new banner. Love your story. Hate that Edward pulled away. Hope that he tells her what he is and figures out he can hunt animals. Would love a HEA. Update soon!!!! You're a great writer.

 
Reviewer: LittleLisa Signed
Date: August 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Delirious

Aww, she's almost figured it out. Can't wait to see what's happened next. Update soon!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like the new banner :) I didn't think the old one said much about the story.

Edward and Bella will be making a few discoveries that I think you'll be pleased with in the next chapter ;)

I can assure you there will be a HEA for this story, no matter how we get there. I'm not really the kind of girl who can write something that doesn't end well :)

 
Reviewer: LittleLisa Signed
Date: September 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Playful

Yes to Nessie! There should definitely be sexing in this story. Great chapter - can't wait to find out what happens next.



Author's Response:

I can definitely promise you some sexing. Even if there's no baby, the sexing will happen! :)

 
Reviewer: LittleLisa Signed
Date: April 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Relief

Great chapter. EPOV, definitely!

 
Reviewer: LittleLisa Signed
Date: March 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Diversion

Great chapter. I'm FOR them having a baby. Update soon! I love this story.

 
Consumed by Kreative Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 303]
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Edward left Bella broken, but not alone. She still had her father, her mother, the pack and Jake. When a vengeful Victoria puts all her efforts into changing that, however, Bella decides to run before more damage could be done. But she soon realizes there is no way she can outrun a superfast vampiress bent on revenge. So...she stops running,... waits... and leaves it all up to fate.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, Jasper, Kachiri, Kate, Laurent, Renee, Rosalie, Senna, Tanya, Victoria, Zafrina
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 35396
[Report This] Published: May 28, 2010 Updated: August 25, 2010


Reviewer: LittleLisa Signed
Date: June 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: My own personal fireworks show

Good chapter. Is she ever going to find the Cullens?





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