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Penname: momof2monkeys [ Contact]
Real name: Denise
Status: Member
Member Since: February 25, 2010
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Mom of two children, daughter 12 and son 3. I work full time and my children keep me running, during the little free time I have, I enjoy reading twilight related stories over at fanfiction but their recent "activities" has caused me to register here. I dabble with writing but nothing I have ever let anyone read, so I respect those of you with the courage to share your stories with the rest of us!!
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Summary: There are more secrets to the ‘new girl in school’ than even a family of vampires could have foreseen. What could the irresistible Bella Swan be hiding? There is more to the golden eyed girl than anyone could have expected.

Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes
Word count: 95376
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2009 Updated: January 28, 2011
Reviewer: momof2monkeys Signed
Date: December 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: 21: Tag, You're It
Loved the paintball revenge Bella put on Alice!
Summary: 
Haunted by her past, Bella is broken and alone. Starting over in a new city, can she let go of the guilt that consumes her when she meets a beautiful tattoo artist, or will his own personal demons destroy them first? AH/OOC
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes
Word count: 20367
[Report This] Published: August 23, 2009 Updated: February 16, 2010
Reviewer: momof2monkeys Signed
Date: September 19, 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 22-And the Volcanic Eruption
Hello, where can I find the rest of this story??
Summary: Bella Black and Emmett Cullen are co-owners of the Chicago Cubs Baseball Team. Edward Masen is a free-agent third baseman looking for a fresh start. Bella and Edward have a hidden messy past. Can they work out their differences on and off the field? Will they be able to find love again?



Thank you to flightlessbird11, sapphire.witche and juliamine for our banners and blinkie
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Phil, Renee, Rosalie, Tyler
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No
Word count: 128984
[Report This] Published: August 26, 2009 Updated: April 27, 2010
Reviewer: momof2monkeys Signed
Date: August 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Fool Me Twice, Shame on Me
When do we get the rest of the story?? Can't wait!
Summary: College student Bella Swan has been plagued with strange dreams for ten years. She doesn't think much of them, but when her dreams turn violent, she finds that there is something more to her dreams than what she thinks.

Thanks to bondgirl for this wonderful second banner above!!!!

Thanks to Angel (antebellum) for the wonderful banner!
*NC-17 rating just to be safe*
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Marcus, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No
Word count: 29004
[Report This] Published: September 07, 2009 Updated: June 28, 2011
Reviewer: momof2monkeys Signed
Date: September 01, 2010
Title: Prophecy
I'm still confused but intrigued at the same time. Can't wait for the next update! Author's Response: The confusion stops at chapter 13, so you don't have much longer to wait!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: momof2monkeys Signed
Date: February 20, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I was reading the other version of this story and will definitely read this one. I look forward to the updates and to see where this story goes as the first chapter was a wonderful opening! Author's Response: Thank you!!
Thank you for sticking with me and giving my story another chance. I really appreciate it. :)
I hope you enjoy the future chapters as well as this one.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: momof2monkeys Signed
Date: February 22, 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Rings? Please you have to let us know what that is all about soon! Author's Response: Don't worry, it will be explained. I don't know how soon, because my outline is kind of a mess, but I promise to try and not keep you hanging for long!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: momof2monkeys Signed
Date: June 29, 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Thank you for the chapter! I look forward to each chapter, I am really enjoying the rewrite of this story and can't wait for the next chapter! Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!!
I'm working on the next chapter and I hope to have it up soon.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Reviewer: momof2monkeys Signed
Date: June 07, 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
So excited to finally have an update, can't wait for the next. Was Bella and Edward married or engaged and these attacks take her from him? Is the Volturi part of this? Author's Response: I'll be updating very soon, so you won't have to wait long. ;)
I wish I could answer your questions, but I tend to give too much away when I speak (or in this case, type.). =) All I can say is that things will be revealed soon.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Summary: 

Bella Swan opens a bookstore in Port Angeles, which happens to be located right next to the music store owned by a young man named Edward Cullen. Watch as they meet and form a relationship.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Laurent, Other Character, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 50 Completed: Yes
Word count: 169441
[Report This] Published: September 23, 2009 Updated: September 23, 2011
Reviewer: momof2monkeys Signed
Date: September 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 50: Outtake 3 – Getting On with Our Lives
LOVED this story, hate to see it end, but Great job!! Author's Response: Thank you. hehehe
Reviewer: momof2monkeys Signed
Date: September 01, 2011
Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47 - Epilogue
I love this story and hate to see it end, but awesome story!! Author's Response: Thank you very much. :)
Reviewer: momof2monkeys Signed
Date: August 30, 2011
Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
I have honestly enjoyed this story!! Author's Response: Thank you very much. :) I really appreciate it!
Reviewer: momof2monkeys Signed
Date: September 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 48: Outtake 1 – Getting Back to Normal
I have really enjoyed this story, but that chapter was...well, you know! LOL Author's Response: Hehehehe Yup. :) Thanks for the review.
Summary: What if Victoria had gotten a hold of Bella in New Moon? What was she planning to do to her? What if what happens to Bella changes her life and the Cullens' lives forever?

Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Carmen, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes
Word count: 49091
[Report This] Published: October 16, 2009 Updated: January 14, 2011
Reviewer: momof2monkeys Signed
Date: September 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: 9: Sent Over the Edge
I truly hope you choose to finish this story as I have anxiously been waiting! Thanks!
Summary: What do you do when the one you thought would love you forever up and leaves you? You move to Vegas of course!
It's 3 years after Edward left Bella. She's discovered a new life, and made new friends, but has never really gotten over Edward's abandonment.
When a chance encounter with Alice at a local Vegas night club brings the Cullens back full force into Bella's life, how will she react? Is there any hope for them to rekindle their friendships? More importantly, is there any chance that she and Edward can work through her distrust and his shame and guilt to get back their undying love, or does attention from a new love interest have Bella distracted?
Come on in to the world of Crooked Halo's and Ink Junkies, and find out!



Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Lauren, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No
Word count: 96581
[Report This] Published: November 19, 2009 Updated: April 15, 2012
Reviewer: momof2monkeys Signed
Date: June 11, 2011
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Control & Compromise
So happy you haven't given up on the story. Can't wait for the next update and glad these two have opened up enough to work through some of their shit together.
Reviewer: momof2monkeys Signed
Date: September 27, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Going Home
Please don't make us wait that long again! :)
Reviewer: momof2monkeys Signed
Date: February 01, 2011
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Straws, Camels & Broken Backs
I am truly sorry for the hard times you have been through. I can't wait for the next update!
Summary:
Now Complete!
Just two weeks before her best friend's wedding Bella gets dumped by boyfriend James when she refuses to give him what he wants. The next night she discovers he's made a bet with gorgeous pal Edward Cullen that he can't bed her. She brilliantly decides to string Edward along for a few weeks...and subsequently land herself a hot date for the wedding. Things soon get very interesting...
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
Word count: 166948
[Report This] Published: December 08, 2009 Updated: September 13, 2010
Reviewer: momof2monkeys Signed
Date: September 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 34: Epilogue
I hate to have this story end but you did such a wonderful job!!
Summary: 
***BANNER BY READERGOOF. THANK YOU DARLIN'***
Bella needed to change it up. Moving to Savannah for a year after graduating from UGA seemed like a good plan. However, bills needed to be paid, and money was tight. Unfortunately, her playboy boss, Edward, doesn’t make her nights easy. After reconnecting with old friends, a pattern of miscommunication about engagements and one night stands, and a stalker dead set on keeping the pair apart, Bella and Edward find themselves thrown together in a whirlwind of events that will shape both of their lives in ways they never imagined. It's gonna get hot in the South!
Set in Savannah, Georgia. OOC, AU-AH. Canon couples. Lots of lemons. Some violence.
Thanks to lindsayraye for her input and suggestion regarding my story summary! Come visit us on the forum at http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=9389&hilit=Laws+of+Attraction%2FGeorgia+on+My+Mind
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes
Word count: 173214
[Report This] Published: February 09, 2010 Updated: August 23, 2010
Reviewer: momof2monkeys Signed
Date: October 09, 2011
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Epilogue: There You Have It and There You Are (shabbyapple)
Ok, so I loved this story. By the time I started reading this it was already finished but I am still so happy to have found this! Absolutely WONDERFUL job!!
Summary:   
Bella goes through the motions in life and finds herself always thinking about her past, her lost chance at love. Forces begin to compel her, but is she finally strong enough to go after the only thing she has ever truly wanted… even when that dream is farther out of reach than ever?
Excerpt:
“I don’t have any reason to break things off with you. I know this must seem crazy. I mean,” Edward had paused and jangled the keys he was staring at apparently hoping that they would give him some guidance, “we get along great. I always knew we would..."
Edward had reached over as though he’d meant to tuck a lock of hair behind my ear, but I felt myself shift toward the side window. Lit in an olive hue from the latest Volvo’s dashboard glow, I couldn’t avoid his face, which was now mutely reflected on the glass of every window. It was the first time I hadn’t wanted to look at him. Ever.
Thanks to beegurl13 for the amazing new banner!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes
Word count: 90614
[Report This] Published: February 10, 2010 Updated: December 16, 2010
Reviewer: momof2monkeys Signed
Date: September 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15-Rain Showers & Morning Glories
Ok, so I just found this story this weekend and would really like to have the rest of the story I can't wait! Great job! Author's Response: Thanks for the read/review! I'm working on the rest - hope you like it! ;)
Kathryn/QFX
Summary: A chance encounter at the worst moment of one's life can leave a person wholly and permanently changed, but is it always for the better?

banner by emmacroxford

banner by moonlit wishes
banner by Mkystich
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: No
Word count: 173584
[Report This] Published: February 27, 2010 Updated: November 20, 2011
Reviewer: momof2monkeys Signed
Date: November 27, 2011
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29
Ok, I just started reading your story here yesterday and had to log back in this morning to finish it. I am loving this story and can't wait for the next update!!
Summary: When faced with a betrayal that could tear them apart, Edward and Bella must put their faith in the healing power of love. WARNING: this story deals with rape and its aftermath.
Hurt/Comfort/Romance, ExB

***Gorgeous banner artwork (above) was made by the talented Fernanda. Many thanks to her for allowing me to use this masterpiece for my banner. View more of her work here***

 
Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No
Word count: 160351
[Report This] Published: March 04, 2010 Updated: November 21, 2012
Reviewer: momof2monkeys Signed
Date: October 04, 2011
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
Where to start? First off, I am sorry someone took not only your story but your enjoyment for your success. Congrats by the way! Secondly, you were crazy missed here! Love your story and can't wait for the future updates. I have to say the "issue" with Renee's sudden new friend and Charlie being called away has led my mind down some crazy paths. I even thought maybe they were meeting up privately, but then squashed that idea figuring Edward would have caught that in one of their thoughts.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much for your kind words. It was very upsetting, but I'm going to try and forget about it. My muse came back, which is mainly thanks to all my wonderful readers. Reading all the wonderful comments reminds me what's most important!
I've missed writing and everyone here as well! it's so good to be back!
LOL, yes, I've gotten a very wide mix of guesses as to what's up with Charlie and Renee!
Thanks so much for not giving up on this story and for taking the time to review. It means a lot to me.
Summary:
Bella Swan is a tracker for the Witness Protection Agency. She devotes her life to locating people that need to testify in court. Her next target: Edward Cullen, a bad boy mechanic with a history that has gotten him into serious trouble with a dangerous Italian family. What happens when he ends up moving in with her on her farm so that he can stay close to his family? He may not be the guy she thought he was.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Word count: 69333
[Report This] Published: April 03, 2010 Updated: October 17, 2010
Reviewer: momof2monkeys Signed
Date: October 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Scars Remind Us
Ok, so this was well written even though the topic was harsh. I believe this was needed in your story and you did a wonderful job!
Summary: 
A quiet, young editor meets a brooding man hiding under the façade of a charming entrepreneur and follows him into a mutual agreement. Watch the couple as they come to terms with an incomprehensible living arrangement and begin the journey to accepting a life together. Do relationships really last when hardships make it impossible to......

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: No
Word count: 127026
[Report This] Published: April 06, 2010 Updated: March 06, 2013
Reviewer: momof2monkeys Signed
Date: September 05, 2011
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 22 - Closer
Please update soon! I just started reading this story yesterday and had to physically pull myself away, not to mention I stayed up late to finish the posted chapters and will now be sleep deprived for work tomorrw! LOL.
Summary: Do you believe in fate and that two people can really be made for each other?
Bella moves with her family to a new town and meets a boy at school: Edward. While high school is the start of their passionate relationship, they still have a lot of growing up to do, and Edward breaks Bella’s heart, only to have them reunite in their twenties. This time Edward is the one left reeling from the break-up. Will a strange twist of fate bring them back together in their thirties? Can they finally have a chance at a future… and will it be together?

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: No
Word count: 154335
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2010 Updated: November 07, 2011
Reviewer: momof2monkeys Signed
Date: October 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Beginning
I couldn't stop reading this until I had read all chapters. I can't wait for the next update. I hate that Bella let him back in so easily, but I have been there so I completely understand. Is Emmett going to make an appearance? I have tried to send this reveiw twice, my computer froze so sorry if you receive it more than once. Author's Response: Wow! That's a great compliment! I'm so glad that you like it. As far as Bella and being easy, you'll have to stick with me. She's definitely not easy, I promise. You still have lots to learn about her. Keep in mind that we still haven't fully addressed why they stopped talking. Just sayin...
The whole gang will eventually make an appearance, or re-appearance as it may be for some. I think you will like how it all plays out in the end. I hope you keep reading.
Thanks for the great review, bb! It keeps me going and puts a smile on my face every time! :)
XO,
Dinx
Summary:

Bella Swan has spent a lifetime putting everyone else's needs before her own. Could a chance encounter with a mysterious stranger begin to change all of that?
Warning: Some dark scenes and subject matter at times, will try to post warnings on each necessary chapter.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes
Word count: 172047
[Report This] Published: April 11, 2010 Updated: March 16, 2011
Reviewer: momof2monkeys Signed
Date: September 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Undisclosed Desires
Loved the car scene!! Can't wait for the next update to see how they get through dinner!
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