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Real name: tami lane
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I am a 33 year old mother of 2 who has been married for 15 years to a wonderful husband. I have been a Licensed Practical Nurse for 6 years and love my job. I have been writing since I was ten years old and have had a number of my poems published in literary magazines when I was in school. I love to read and write especcially about Twilight. I tend to be a little OCD about spelling and grammar. I also tend to read things ten times before printing to make sure there are no typing errors. Forgive Me. I am new to the online thing and I hope that I can catch on fairly quickly. Hope to meet you all.
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Summary: 
Edward left Bella four years ago; two years ago, he dealt with Victoria and has been moping around ever since. He is a mere shadow of his former self, and the Cullens are at a loss for how to fix him, since he won’t go back to Bella. Bella’s life is a paradox; she both fell apart and flourished after Edward left her. She is estranged from Charlie and Jacob, is lead singer of an all-girl rock band called Hamartia (literary term meaning fatal flaw), and is living in Brooklyn, NY. She is now all about sex, drugs, alcohol, and Rock n’ Roll. Along with her new lifestyle came a new outlook and personality; she has a quick temper and sharp tongue and finally puts herself first. Long gone is the selfless, long-suffering Bella that Edward left behind. What happens when Alice has had enough and brings all the Cullen “Kids” to one of Bella shows? Will the “old Bella” ever come back? Will she and Edward reunite? Can he accept who she is now and what she has done? Does she want to be changed, if everything works out? Will he be willing to do it? Read and find out.
A big thank you goes out to FrozenSoldier who made this awesome banner!!!!!!!
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 50 Completed: No
Word count: 326044
[Report This] Published: June 17, 2010 Updated: February 15, 2013
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: September 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Sparks
Wow I think they all kinda screwwed the pooch on that one. Noone got it exactly right. I can't wait to see what they all do to correct it. Author's Response: I hope I did right by you, but yeah everyone reacted wrong except maybe EM.
Here is the teaser…hope you like it is an Alice POV
““Again, you underestimate me, Alice. I was going to ask if you were okay? It must be hard having your former best friend blow you off, shatter your brother and basically tell you to fuck off,” she explained.
I gave in at her display of sisterly support. I collapsed in her arms and sobbed.”
Thanks for dropping by and reviewing. I hope you continue to both read and review it means the world to me.
Peace,
~E
Author's Response: I hope I did right by you, but yeah everyone reacted wrong except maybe EM.
Here is the teaser…hope you like it is an Alice POV
““Again, you underestimate me, Alice. I was going to ask if you were okay? It must be hard having your former best friend blow you off, shatter your brother and basically tell you to fuck off,” she explained.
I gave in at her display of sisterly support. I collapsed in her arms and sobbed.”
Thanks for dropping by and reviewing. I hope you continue to both read and review it means the world to me.
Peace,
~E
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: November 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Fireworks
I loved Emmett kicking Doucheward's ass. He so deserved it. I can't wait for everyone's favorite big brother to go and tell his little sis that he is on her side. I can see it happening. Author's Response: Hey Camiremom1221,
LOL I know I did too and yes he did. I think i might need to add some scenes....
Here is the teaser, hope you like it:
“Edward POV
I pulled my cell phone out as soon as I knew Carlisle was out of earshot, which meant when I could not longer hear his thoughts.
I quickly dialed her number before I could change my mind.
It rang once—and my pinched the bridge of my nose.
It rang a second time, and I ran my hand through my hair.
It rang a third time, and I stood and started pacing.
I was expecting her voicemail to pick up when she suddenly answered the phone.
“Hello?” Bella said.
I love her voice.
“Hello, Bella,” I responded.
“Edward?” She didn’t sound pleased in the least.
“Yes, Bella, please don’t hang up.”
“I wasn’t going to.”
“You weren’t?” I was shocked.
“No, but if you want me to I will,” she said sarcastically.”
Thank you for taking the time to not only read but also review, it means a lot to me.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: July 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Alice
I just love interferring aggravating Alice. She is the best. Look forward to more. Author's Response: I love annoying Alice too, little know it all :)
Thank you for reviewing.
~E
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: July 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Rough Day
Wow, I can't wait to find out Edward's reaction to Bella onstage. I am so looking forward to reading more. Author's Response: Thank-you so much. I'll tell you he does have to be restrained, that's all I'll say!
Thank you for reading and reviewing
~E
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: August 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Showtime
I do love me a biitchy Bella. She is freaking hilarious. I am so glad that little Eddie boy realized that he is responsible for the change in her attitude. Hope he can fix it. Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing all I will say is that he'll try!
Here is the un-beta'ed teaser "“It’s fine, he’ll be leaving in a moment, he’s good at that” I sneered looking right into Edwards burnt caramel eyes. He must not have hunted recently or at least not well, normally his eyes were clear gold like honey. Fuck! Why did I remember this? Why did I still fucking care?"
I hope you keep R&Rinh
~E
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: November 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: You Can't Go Home Again
I think that there is so much pain on both sides. I don't know who is right or wrong. I think that it is a little of both. I can't wait for more. Author's Response: Hey Vampiremom1221,
There is pain and yeah I blame one party more. :)
Thanks more is on the way i put the next ch in for validation today so it could be up any time.
This is the teaser for ch 10. This scene is in Bella’s POV:
“Aspirin, a glass of water, jeans and a white t-shirt.
“I said, I didn’t need anything,” I told her and started to turn away.
“Yes, I have seen that you desperately need the Aspirin, so take it.” Her tone was harsh.
“No!” I knew I was acting like a petulant child, but it was what I needed to do to stay aloof and detached.
“Why are you making this so hard? Take the pills, Bella,” Alice repeated in a severe and loud tone.
“Fuck! Not so loud! Don’t take that tone with me, and why are you being a bitch?” I volleyed back at her.
“Excuse me? I’m trying to save you from a pounding migraine and you insult me? Take the pills or I will call Carlisle!” She looked menacing and stepped closer. I might not like it, but I knew that damned pixie vampire could overpower me and asking was just her way of humoring the human.”
Again thank you for taking the time to not only read but review.
Best,
~E
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: November 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: What Now!
Way to go Esme. I am so glad that she chewed both of them out. Great job. I hope that Edward and Alice can learn how to eat crow and swallow their pride and beg. That is what they need to do. Can't wait for more. Author's Response: Hey Vampiremom1221,
YEAH W2G ESME!!!!!!! Thanks, I'm glad u liked it, as always I was nervous. I hope they can too but.... I've said to much once again LOL
Here is the teaser for ch 12, it has not been beta’d so be kind.
“Alice-POV
I don’t know why I was so anxious, Esme gave me Bella’s number and I knew she was going to allow me to come over. I guess it was the formality of it all.
I dialed her cell number it rang, once, twice on the third ring she picked up.
“Hello,” she said she sounded horrible and sleepy.
I guess I woke her up even though it was noon.
“Hi Bella, it’s Alice,” I chirped.
“I know it’s you, Alice. What do you want?” Her tone was weary.
“I wanted to know if I might be able to see you today? I could come over to your house?” I asked tentatively.
“Just you?” she pressed.
“Yes, just me. He knows not to come,” I informed her.
In my vision of this conversation using his name didn’t help. In fact, she would not let me come over at all. Beyond this phone call though I saw nothing.
“Okay, I’m sure you already know the address,” she said as if she really didn’t care.
“Thank you, Bella; I’ll see you in an hour or so?” No sooner did I finish my sentence than she hung up the phone. There was no “goodbye” or “see you soon.”
Maybe it’s because you never said goodbye to her four years ago? Only difference is she never thought she would see you again, I thought.”
I hope you enjoyed the teaser. Thank you for taking the time to not only read but also review this story, I appreciate it more than you know.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: December 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: The Line Between Love and Hate
I'm guessing that Jake has found Bella and is there to confront her. Can't wait for him and the Cullens to get a wiff of each other. Author's Response: Hey Vampiremom1221,
ding ding ding, you hit the nail on the head, but as you can tell Bella is not happy about it. Oh it'll be something.
Here is the teaser for the next chapter, it answers the question of whom Bella was speaking to after the show.
“Bella POV
I exited the stage and knew I would be seeing Edward soon. He just didn’t know when enough was enough. I would have to ask him if he had fun emotionally toying with me. I must have been distracted with my thoughts because when I went back to the dressing room with Lola and Liza, I suddenly heard Liza ask someone, “Who are you, gorgeous?” I hadn’t noticed anyone by the door.
I looked up, and standing before me was none other than Jacob Black.”
I hope you enjoyed the teaser, I know it’s shorter than usually but I didn’t want to give out any other information.
Thank you so much for taking the time to not only to read my story but to review it. These reviews mean the world to me. Thank you again
Season’s Greetings,
~E
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: December 31, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: It's A New Dawn, It's A New Day!
Finally they are at least trying to get on the same page. I am glad he told her that she is a drug addict and an alcoholic. As they say the truth hurts. Can't wait for more. Author's Response: Hey Vampiremom1221,
they are trying. the truth hurts, I hope they can move on.
Here is the teaser of ch 18 as promised it is Bella’s POV:
“Then, we went back to our incredible kiss. Just before it was time for me to catch my breath again, he pulled away. I mourned the loss of his lips instantly, and I’m sure my expression showed it because he said in between pants, “Sorry, love, but some of my family are home.”
Firstly, I had made him pant! He doesn’t even need to breathe, and I had him panting! I knew I was good, but hot damn, that gives a girl an ego boost. Secondly, my stomach dropped— the Cullens were home. They had seen me in a fairly bad state last night, and well, I didn’t know how to act. I’m sure they have a low opinion of me anyway. But I didn’t give a fuck, or so I told myself. Also, I didn’t want to see that judgmental demon pixie. I was still mad at Alice for being an overbearing bitch, and that had not changed. I could feel my back arching, and I fought to not turn into super bitch Bella, again—not yet anyway.”
I hope you enjoyed the teaser. Thank you for taking the time to not only read but also review this story, I appreciate it more than you know.
Happy New Year,
~E
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: December 31, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: It's A New Dawn, It's A New Day!
Finally they are at least trying to get on the same page. I am glad he told her that she is a drug addict and an alcoholic. As they say the truth hurts. Can't wait for more. Author's Response: Hey vampiremom1221,
I think I already answered this, I not sure if the site delete my response or if you reviewed twice, either way thanks.
The truth does hurt and it is SO nice to see them on the same page. I hope they can move on.
Here is the teaser of ch 18 as promised it is Bella’s POV:
“Then, we went back to our incredible kiss. Just before it was time for me to catch my breath again, he pulled away. I mourned the loss of his lips instantly, and I’m sure my expression showed it because he said in between pants, “Sorry, love, but some of my family are home.”
Firstly, I had made him pant! He doesn’t even need to breathe, and I had him panting! I knew I was good, but hot damn, that gives a girl an ego boost. Secondly, my stomach dropped— the Cullens were home. They had seen me in a fairly bad state last night, and well, I didn’t know how to act. I’m sure they have a low opinion of me anyway. But I didn’t give a fuck, or so I told myself. Also, I didn’t want to see that judgmental demon pixie. I was still mad at Alice for being an overbearing bitch, and that had not changed. I could feel my back arching, and I fought to not turn into super bitch Bella, again—not yet anyway.”
I hope you enjoyed the teaser. Thank you for taking the time to not only read but also review this story, I appreciate it more than you know.
Happy New Year,
~E
Summary: "Go home, son. La Push is waiting for you..."
Sixty years have come and gone since Jacob decided that he and the remaining members of the pack could serve a greater purpose to the world as a whole. The Wolves of La Push became the protectors of not only the Quileutes, but of all, following a vision of freedom and everlasting life after the departure of the Cullens and ultimately, the departure of Jacob's heart.
This is the story of the warriors who never found their imprint and instead, decided to embrace the gift they had been given. Decades have passed since they followed Jacob unquestioningly out into the world, their bonds of friendship and family strengthened with every year that passed as they fought for humanity and secretly, for their Alpha's personal vendetta against vampires.
Journey with them as they find their way back to La Push, where time seems to have stopped while the rest of the nation progressed further into the future. There, on the remote beaches of the reservation, life goes on as though they had never left, and no one remains who witnessed their origins. Only the stories as told to the new generation are recalled, and could it be that theirs isn't the only one that is about to be rewritten?
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Brady, Collin, Embry, Jacob, Leah, Other Character, Seth
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Word count: 9241
[Report This] Published: June 18, 2010 Updated: August 08, 2010
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: July 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Cry Little Sister
Well after sixty years of being a wold a guy has got to get some somewhere doesn't he. And I think that Jake is the only guy that Leah would trust giving her body to. It kinda makes sense. Looking forward to more. Author's Response: That he does! =) In later chapters, I'll be digging into the pack and how they function after all these years of living as shapeshifters. Naturally, as I envision things, the instincts of the wolf will become closely integrated with the person and start directing both thoughts and behaviors. Should be a fun ride! Glad to have ya with me, more is on the way!
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: July 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: The Red.
Wow I can't wait for Jake and the Pack to come back and realize that the guys of the Rez are treating young women this way. There will be hell to pay. Author's Response: I'm glad you pegged that one. At first, I wasn't sure if I wanted to get so 'intense' with this chapter. I was originally leaning towards a less brutal sort of bullying, nothing sexual, nothing overly physical. But then, after playing around with some ideas for future plot, I took the risk and pushed the limits alittle. Thanks for reviewing, it really makes me happy to see that someone is sticking with me through this. =)
Summary: 
Dealing with the abscence of the one she thought she couldn't live without has been anything but a walk in the park for Bella Swan. But with Jacob Black--her best friend--by her side, the shadows of the past seemingly disappears, if only briefly, momentarily.
After a cliff-diving accident Bella gets an unexpected visitor which puts her on the course of finally dealing with her past. A series of events brings Bella closer to the truth her heart has been desperately trying to tell her. But will she realize it; can she move on?
While Bella finally comes face to face with the revelations of her past and dares to look forward, the fact of the matter at hand is the world she was given a glimpse into. Once you look into the darkness, can you ever really, truly turn your back on it; will it let you--and at what cost?
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I just wanted to show off a banner someone made, inspired by my story. I am flattered and the feel of it suited so well that I just had to add it here. Thank you Mkystich! *hugs*
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No
Word count: 24518
[Report This] Published: June 18, 2010 Updated: September 01, 2010
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: September 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Another One Bites the Dust
I am a little fuzzy about something. Was it Edward that was in front of her truck or was she seeing things? I know she said there were red eyes and I don't think that he would have red eyes. I am so glad that Jake realized that he messed up when he took off. Can't wait to see him grovel a little bit.
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: August 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Reminders
Well isn't it normal for teenagers to get caught by their dad when they are making out on the living room sofa. I bet Charlie will be happy that she is doing something that is normal. Even if it is kissing. Esoecially seeing as how she was kissing Jacob. Can't wait for more. Author's Response: I suppose it is normal, although -I- never really did get caught doing anything; probably because I traveled to the other side of the globe to get up to mischief! Anyway, thank you for the review, and I am glad you want more! :)
Summary: 
Banner by Whatobession17
Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes
Word count: 149789
[Report This] Published: June 18, 2010 Updated: November 12, 2011
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: December 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Drown Out
Poor Bella. I wonder what made her think that she should try to go to a mall. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: October 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Shelter
I am glad that he is not letting his pride dictate everything. I think that it will be good for Bella to stay with Esme and Carlisle. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: August 31, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 I Was Broken
God bless him for making her remember her mother and all of the good times they shared. I think that he will be able to help her. I hope that she lets him in so that they can heal together. Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, I hope you like the next chapter!
Katie
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: September 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 The Only One
For someone who has had such a shitty life he sure is sweet and thoughtful. I am so happy that she is starting to get more comfortable with him. Can't wait for more. Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I hope you like the next chapter!
Katie
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: September 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 The World at Large
Poor babies. I feel bad for both of them. I know that everything is so hard. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: October 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Ungodly Hour
That was so hard. I know that Edward and Bella were both torn up after that horrible visit. I want to help him plan Alec's death. I can't wait to meet Alice and Emmett. I am also intrigued by what you mean about non-canon style. Can't wait. Author's Response: Hey!
Non cannon, it won't be anything too crazy. I'm just so so tired of the shop-aholic pushy Alice and idiot Emmett. I really want the Cullens to be a family that any of us could know, so hopefully that works out LOL
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Katie
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: November 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Crossfire
I am so glad that he and Emmett are going to get along and I am thrilled that she is happy with being reunited with Alice. I think that she is starting to get better. Oh and her little streak of assertiveness is great. It will only get better with time.
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: October 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 One More Time With Feeling
He's helped her not it is her turn. I hope that she handles everything ok. I can't wait for her to see her friends and her father again. Until then.
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: September 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Flying High
I loved the Clearwaters. They were so sweet to them. I can't wait to find out who has recognized her. I am also tickled that she doesn't object to bein his girlfriend. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: September 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Even So
That poor baby. I feel so bad for everything that he has been through. I know that they are so good for each other. It is great that they are starting to realize it.
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: September 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Sweet Talk
Poor Edward. I know he thinks that he is going to lose Bella but I don't think that she will ever let him go. I do think that he is right and they are going to need help. I think that it is time they both learn to ask for help. Can't wait to read more.
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