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Real name: tami lane
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     I am a 33 year old mother of 2 who has been married for 15 years to a wonderful husband.  I have been a Licensed Practical Nurse for 6 years and love my job.  I have been writing since I was ten years old and have had a number of my poems published in literary magazines when I was in school.  I love to read and write especcially about Twilight.  I tend to be a little OCD about spelling and grammar.  I also tend to read things ten times before printing to make sure there are no typing errors.  Forgive Me.  I am new to the online thing and I hope that I can catch on fairly quickly.  Hope to meet you all.


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Summary:

 

It has been four years since Edward left Bella in New Moon.  There were no werewolves and Jacob was never more than Bella's friend.  Bella has just graduated from college when Edward accidently crosses her path and finds himself being drawn back into Bella's life.  But Bella is not the same teenager he knew. She is a grown woman with a very grown up lifestyle.  This tells the story of how Edward, realizing he can't live without the love of his existence, and with the help of all of the Cullens, endeavors to win her back.  There are some laughs along the way.  The story is EPOV and rated NC-17 for sexual language and content. 

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Edward
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Series: None
Chapters: 47 Completed: Yes Word count: 115917
[Report This] Published: June 12, 2010 Updated: January 15, 2011


Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: December 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 - Don't Talk About My Mom's Pie

Can't believe that he said that.  And he was making so much progress too.  Now he is just going to piss her off.  Oh I loved the double entendre in the title of the chapter and all throughout.  Emmett really nailed that one with Julian didn't he.  I can't wait to find out where this goes.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: October 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Welcome to Orlando, Now Strip!

Hell yea!  There you go Edward.  You don't get it any clearer than that.  I hope he doesn't freeze or overthink  anything.  Can I bet a thousand licks of Emmett's abs that Edward does ok.  You know I really would love to lick Emmett's abs.  (Have you seen the Calvin ads, the boy is fuck hot.)

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: December 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - Harlot

Oh yea!  Make up sex is the best.  I wonder if Edward has learned his lesson about listening to Emmett.  Can't wait for more.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: September 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Wicked Games

Wow, I am just in awe of Bella and her tormenting of Edward.  I think that is the best prank yet.  I can't wait to see what Julian thinks of Tanya.  Until then.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: October 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Bella's Real Fantasy

Well, I think that she got him didn't she?  I can't believe that he freaked over her biting fantasy.  Imean damn it is about him right and who wouldn;t want that hot ass man sinking his teeth into them.  I think about it all the time.  Can;t wait for more.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: September 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - One Step Forward, Two Steps Back

Wow, I know that Bella was hurt but she just stomped all over Edward and his feelings.  Does that make her any better than him?  Can't wait to find out what happens next.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: November 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Hanging On

Now why would Emmett want to do something stupid like starting a little trouble.  Oh wait a minute this is Emmett I am talking about, the king of something stupid.  I still love him though.  I know Edward is having a hard time with all of this but he also has to realize that this is who Bella is and she would never leave a friend in need.  Not even for the best sex in the world.  What is wrong with the girl?  Can't wait for more.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: December 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 - Not Again

Well I kinda wanted her to be pregnant.  Oh well.  Guess Edward kinda made himself look like kind of an ass in front of Julian and Charlie.  At least he's a cute ass.  Can't wait for more.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: July 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Incapacitate... Don't Decapitate

Dang, when did Bella get so kinky.  That is what Alice gets for looking where she wasn''t wanted.  How embarrassing for all of them.  Can't wait to hear the explanations.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: July 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5-WTF?

A sexual deviant.  I think that Edward is just a little sexually clueless.  I mean he does have no experience at all right.  But you would think with the mind reading he would at least know about sexual role playing.  Can't wait to find out what he thinks when he realizes his major fauz pas.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: July 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Consenting Adults

Wow he really doesn't want to accept that sweet innocent little Bella could be a closet freak does he?  I mean why would all of the times she pushed him when they were kissing have given him any clue that she was a sexual being. (that was meant to be sarcastic)  I hope he wakes up and gets a clue.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: August 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Emmett's Here

OMG!!! Who knew that Emmett would be the voice of reason in this situation.  I loved it.  He often gets the short end of the brain stick.  I love a sensible if a little raunchy Emmett.  He makes me warm all over.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: August 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - For Her Own Good

Clueless, Edward is so clueless.  I think that Alice's vision is about to come true.  I wish that he would listen to those that are so obviously smarter than him.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: August 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Since When Does Bella Use the F Word?

GREAT CHAPTER.  I LOVE JASPER'S AND ALICE'S ADVICE.  I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE HOW EDWARD DOES IN FOLLOWING IT.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: August 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - The Plan

For an immortal creature he sure is impatient isn't he?  I love the plan.  It just might work if he can listen to Jasper and Emmett and get past some of his "issues" and become more comfortable with his sexuality and less judgemental of hers.  I really think he should listen to Emmett.  God knows I would love for him to teach me a thing or two.  It's good to fantasize isn't it? 

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: August 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Damn AT&T to Hell

I am so glad that she is making him obey her limits.  He needs them.  I love his reactions to the sex books.  I think that he is one of the most sexually repressed individuals there is.  Although I am glad that he does take the time to regularly spank the monkey,  It is good for him,

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: August 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Over My Already Dead Body

Light shines on yonder dunderhead.  No w he finally gets it.  About damn time.  I hope that he can get his shit together so that he can go and get her back in the manner that he needs to.  Can't wait to find out what happens.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: September 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Research

I love Emmett.  He is just too freaking funny.  I don't think that he got the insult that Edward was providing.  I liked the fact that Edward is starting to loosen up and flirt with Bella some.  I think that makes him even sexier.  Julian is stupid.  And I love that they were trying to figure out if the nipple piercing was for Esme or Carlisle.  Can't wait to read more.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: September 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Fall

Love the CFM lists.  They all had good suggestions.  I think that it was too hilarious that Carlisle got so into the Nine Inch Nails.  That is one of my favorites along with Saving Abel's unrated Addicted.  That would be on my CFM list along with Paralyzer by Finger Eleven.  I loved the kiss,  He is definately making progress with letting himself go.  Loved the whole thing.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: September 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Fall

Love the CFM lists.  They all had good suggestions.  I think that it was too hilarious that Carlisle got so into the Nine Inch Nails.  That is one of my favorites along with Saving Abel's unrated Addicted.  That would be on my CFM list along with Paralyzer by Finger Eleven.  I loved the kiss,  He is definately making progress with letting himself go.  Loved the whole thing.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: September 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Would You Give Me the Honor?

Hell we don't even have Amtrack around here.  No way on earth will I ever get to ride the E-train.  But it would be fun.  I loved the chapter,  I thought that Edward would have been a little more embarrassed by their talk.  I'm glad that he is coming to terms with his own sexuality.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: September 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Reconnections

Wow could the clerk have gotten any closer with his mental comment.  I am so glad that they have been able to reconnect.  I think this will help them to get closer in the future.  Can 't wait for more.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: September 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Testing Boundaries

OMG I so laughed my ass off at this chapter.  You know I really wish that were possible.  I could stand to lose a few pounds in that area.  But anyway, I think that if it were possible that poor boy would have had a stroke by now due to his family and their open nature.  I love it.  I am imagining that he feels somewhat like my son.  I have a boy that will be thirteen in a little over a month and I have tried to be really open about things with him.  I am glad that I have been. He told me yesterday that there is a girl in his sixth grade class that is pregnant.  What is going on with kids today?  Can't wait to read more.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: October 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Place Your Bets

Don't be coy girl.  Tell him what you want and then see if he does it.  Can't hurt to ask.  Can't wait to see what happens.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: October 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Second Chances

I agree with both of you.  Edward will take it slow but damn it is time for the boy to get some action.  Quit teasing and let him and her have at it.  By the way I did like the chapter and I thought that it was the way that Edward would go with his first truly sexual experience with Bell.  Now it is time to see how well he learned those tongue action lessons.  Let's make daddy Emmett proud.

 




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