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Penname: vampiremom1221 [Contact]
Real name: tami lane
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     I am a 33 year old mother of 2 who has been married for 15 years to a wonderful husband.  I have been a Licensed Practical Nurse for 6 years and love my job.  I have been writing since I was ten years old and have had a number of my poems published in literary magazines when I was in school.  I love to read and write especcially about Twilight.  I tend to be a little OCD about spelling and grammar.  I also tend to read things ten times before printing to make sure there are no typing errors.  Forgive Me.  I am new to the online thing and I hope that I can catch on fairly quickly.  Hope to meet you all.


  Tami


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Summary:

Everyone makes mistakes and Bella is about to make the biggest mistake of her life. Will Edward be able to resist the temptation of Bella’s blood much longer? Will Jacob be able to save her in time? (Post New Moon, Bella still saves Edward, Edward and the Cullens still return to Forks but this story is completely AU after the end of New Moon.) Rating is set for graphic images, sexual content and some violence in later chapters.

 

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Paul, Quil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam
Challenges:
Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 36926
[Report This] Published: December 22, 2009 Updated: December 02, 2010


Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: July 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: So In Love

Her being with Edward was just a little bittersweet. Being with Jacob seemed just a little more friendly and natural.  I am glad that she is finding her way.



Author's Response:

I'm glad she's getting there too!

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: December 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: After The Prom: Bella and Jacob�s First Time ((il_suo_cantante))

Very nice lemon.  Great job.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I struggle with writing them but so worth it when I get responses like yours!

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: October 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Epilogue: The Prom (il_suo_cantante)

Very good even without the lemon.



Author's Response:

Thanks. I actually worked on that outtake earlier, it'll be up soon!

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: June 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Seeing Red

Wow talk about the battle of the newborns,  This time they brought it a little closer to home.  Can't wait to find out what happens.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: June 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10:Black Lines and Battlefields

Great fight.  Really enthralling and I love the part where Bella helps by cutting herself.  Can't wait to find out more.



Author's Response:

I figured she had to do SOMETHING instead of just hide in the Jeep. Even if she did do it by accident I just needed her to be involved as more than a commentator of the fight.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: July 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Ride

Excuse my language but that is so fucked up.  How could Sam do that to him.  I can't wait to see if he imprints on Bella.



Author's Response:

Indeed. I have nothing personal against Sam but to be honest I could see him doing this AND I needed a way to explain the whole Jacob-hasn't-imprinted-yet thing. Thanks for reading and reviewing, it means a lot!

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: August 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: I'll Be Waiting

Great chapter.  I am so glad that he had the courage to open his eyes.  I love that he imprinted.  I am so Team Jacob right now.

 
The Virgin Game by Alylyn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

Bella is good and ready to lose her virginity. It's just a matter of who should she give it to. Every girl wants their first time to be remarkable. So who will it be? Edward, the lusty sweetheart, Jacob, the friend, or James, the sleazy rich guy.

Lemons, Language, the usual.

 

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 11682
[Report This] Published: December 26, 2009 Updated: October 03, 2010


Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: March 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Is this the end or will there be more.  I look forward to maybe more.  Great job.



Author's Response:

This will be a multi-chaptered fic for sure, just not sure how long. I don't think it will be to long, though. :D

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: October 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

OOPs Busted.  But hey that isn't so bad.  At least they aren't naked.  Kissing and some heavy petting are expected when two eighteen year olds are left alone for any amount of time.  Can't wait for Charlie's reaction though,

 
blossom by ms_ambrosia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 638]
Summary:

 

Isolated and disheartened, Bella Swan struggles to relate to people her age. When a charming young man named James enters her life, she finally starts to feel like she belongs. But when an unexpected pregnancy leads her back to Forks, what at first seemed like a punishment turns into a blessing in disguise. Hope blooms in unexpected places.

AU-AH. OOC. BxE, JxA, EmxR.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: No Word count: 108516
[Report This] Published: December 27, 2009 Updated: September 03, 2010


Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: April 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: A Wish For Something More

Way to be protective Rosalie.   And Bella thinks that she isn't her friend.  I can't imagine someone who doesn;'t like you trying to protect you like that.  Poor Edward now had to deal with Rosalie and Chief Swan.  GASP!!!  I wouldn't be surprised if he jumped ship before she leaves the bathroom.  Can[t wait to read more.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: August 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Just Sit Down, Take it Slowly

She did the right thing for all of them.  I almost cried when she told Edward that he was Ben's dad.  Great chapter.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: June 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: I'm Ready to Learn

I still think that Jasper is jealous because he and Alice have not been able to have a baby yet.  I think that if Alice were to get pregnant that he would be fine.  I think that Edward is one of the sweetest and most understanding guys out there.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: April 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Break Down Here

That is what she gets for assuming.  Can't wait to read more.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: April 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Sweet Fire

Seth is a good brother, even if he isn't her real brother.  It's great to have someone like that,  I look foraward to reading more.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: May 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Confessions

Edward is perfect.  Bella could do alot worse.  I hope that he can understand that she is scared of not being a good parent and that they can work things out.  Great chapter.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: May 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Beautiful Brown Eyes

I'm guessing that Jasper is jealous because he and Alice have been trying to have a baby and they can"t where as Bella wasn't trying and she got Ben.  He is jealous that his brother might get what he wants.  A baby.  Edward does need to talk to Bella to figure out what her hang up is.  Then their relationship can progress. 

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: May 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Friend is a Four Letter Word

I can't believe that Jasper had such an attitude towards Edwards really bad date with Charlotte.  I don't know why he is such a jerk about this.  I am glad that Bella is going to talk to Edward about what has been bothering her.  Maybe their relationship can progress now.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: June 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Surrender

This was a great chapter.  She opened up and got her feelings out there and he asked he for a date.  Well done.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: June 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Crash

I knew what Jasper's problem was all along although I hadn't guessed that the problem was with him and not Alice.  That brings a whole new level of guilt onto Jasper's shoulders.  I feel bad for him.  As for Edward and Bella dry humping on the couch, we all knew there would have to be a release between them soon.  Can't wait for more.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: June 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: A Slow Climb

Nice to see their relationship blossoming.  It warms the cockles of my heart.  Can't wait to see what else happens.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: July 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Only Gift

I knew  that she would be more comfortable with Edward.  When things are right they are just right.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: July 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Firecracker

Well good she finally had a decent orgasm.  Bout time.  I am so glad that they told each other that they love them.  Great chapter.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: July 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Lie to Me

I wonder if Renee is going to make more of a menace in the future.  Edward and Bella having a quiet intimate weekend alone with no Ben.  Could be lots of fun.  Can't wait to find out.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: July 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Two Hearts

They are just so sweet.  I loved the whole chapter.  I can't wait to read more.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: August 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Time (Keeps Flowing Like a River)

I can't wait to find out if it is James or Renee at the door.  Until next time.

 




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