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Penname: vampiremom1221 [Contact]
Real name: tami lane
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     I am a 33 year old mother of 2 who has been married for 15 years to a wonderful husband.  I have been a Licensed Practical Nurse for 6 years and love my job.  I have been writing since I was ten years old and have had a number of my poems published in literary magazines when I was in school.  I love to read and write especcially about Twilight.  I tend to be a little OCD about spelling and grammar.  I also tend to read things ten times before printing to make sure there are no typing errors.  Forgive Me.  I am new to the online thing and I hope that I can catch on fairly quickly.  Hope to meet you all.


  Tami


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The First Time by Todream Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 145]
Summary:

Twenty years ago, Edward and Bella were married, and a heartbroken Jacob fled his home.  Shortly thereafter, the happy couple became parents to a beautiful baby girl and soon moved away from the place they had called home.  Jacob eventually returned back to La Push, vowing to never utter Bella's name or keep tabs on her life.

Now fast forward twenty years to the wedding of Seth Clearwater where Jacob is a groomsmen, and Mr. and Mrs. Edward Cullen are guests.  Jacob knows nothing of their arrival and flees the wedding after seeing Bella for the first time after all these years. He tries to escape to the comfort of his hotel room, trying to forget the pain that has found him again.

In another part of the hotel, a young Renesmee, who skipped the wedding altogether, has been wronged by the man she thought loved her.  She runs to find solace in the privacy of her hotel room, wanting to drown her sorrows in a warm bath.

But what happens when Jacob and Renesmee have a chance meeting on the hotel elevator? Will sparks fly? Read to find out...


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 52634
[Report This] Published: August 31, 2010 Updated: May 13, 2011


Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: October 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 So Cruel

I'm thinking that he found her ID in her bag when getting the condom.  I think that he is freaking out by the fact that she is a Cullen,  Can't wait to read more.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: November 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 All I Want Is You

Wow Edward took it like I thought he would.  Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Edward loves Nessie more than anything, and it pains him greatly to see her so hurt.  He's going to have a little issue when he finds out it's Jacob.  Oh, and Bella might have a teensy weensy problem, as well!

Thanks so much!

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: December 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 The Fly

Wow who knew that Paul would be the voice of reason and that Jake would actually listen to him.  Can't wait to find out what happens when Edward learns that it was Jake who pulled the fuck and run.  Good times are a coming.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I am so thankful to you. Here's an extra long teaser:

I hid myself in the other room, getting away from everyone because I didn't want to be social. I was only here at my mom's request.

"Jacob should be here with Billy at any moment." I heard my grandfather say to my mom and dad as I took a big swallow of the water I had just poured.

I choked mid-gulp, and water squirted out of my mouth. I was glad to be in the other room, out of the site from the others. This couldn't be the same Jacob, could it?

"Good. Maybe he'll actually talk to me," my mom said.

"I'm pretty sure he still hates me. The way he looked at me at the wedding before he left was a little scary." I heard my father say.

"I don't know about that boy sometimes," Charlie interjected, "but he's our Jake. He's done well with his life. He's just has had a rough time finding a girl and staying with her."

"I guess a kiss from you can ruin a guy for life, huh, Bella?" my father joked.

"Edward! That's not true. I did kiss Jacob, but it was a long time ago. I'm not that good."

I stopped wiping up the mess of water I had made all over the kitchen. She was kidding, right? This wasn't the same Jacob, and he surely didn't kiss my mom. Did he?

"I beg to differ, Love." My father's smooth voice rolled off his tongue, and I was sure he was kissing my mother at that moment.

I took a couple of steps from the kitchen towards the living room, not sure I was hearing correctly. I saw my dad pulling away from Mom's lips.

"He was madly in love with you back then. I have a feeling he still is." My father's words slowly began to sink in, and I soon began shaking uncontrollably. I tried to convince myself that the conversation I had just heard really didn't happen, but it had. I knew better. There was only one Jacob that was the topic of their conversation.

It was my Jacob, too.

The room suddenly felt like the air had been sucked out of it, and my chest hurt, trying to catch my breath.

"Are you okay, Renesmee," my mother asked, becoming aware of my presence at the edge of the living room.

"I-I...I need air. I'll be back." I somehow managed to say, bolting for the door as quickly as I could, angered by her but still thankful for her shield. My father didn't need to know of my anguish.

Things had gone from bad to worse. My first time was with someone who was in love with my mom.

 
Summary:

Bella Swan has found her way into some trouble. Agent Cullen has been hired to make sure it doesn't happen again. Will the two find a way to work out their differences?

2ss


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 22514
[Report This] Published: September 03, 2010 Updated: November 01, 2010


Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: October 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I normally love Jasper too but he is a jerk here.  I love the shake weiht commercals too.  I am so glad I am not the only one to call the jack-off trainers.  Love the chapter.  Can't wait for more.



Author's Response: When I started this story I didn't plan on jasper being a rotten cucumber. It just kind of happened. :) thanks for reading and reviewing.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: October 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I wonder why?  Can't wait to hear that explanation.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: November 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

too cute.  great job

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: October 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great chapter

 
Summary:

*NOW COMPLETE*


Bella wanted Mr. Perfect, but he didn’t want her. When Mr. Imperfect comes along, can she look close enough to see just who is more perfect for her?

A story about falling in love with the imperfections.

 

Blinkie by the uber talented RoseArcadia


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 153293
[Report This] Published: September 09, 2010 Updated: May 12, 2011


Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: January 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: He Shocked Me

Wow I never would have thought of jasper as a complette douchebag but damn if he didn't achieve that honor with this chapter.  I am so glad that Edward clocked him.  Can't wait for him to sober up.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: October 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: He Showed Me

Alice is really something else isn;t she..  Can't wiat for more

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: November 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: He Bailed on Me

Why do I have this feeling that his mom was there and something happened and he just spent the evening with her in the hospital or something.  I think that Bella shoudl give him the benefit of the doubt.  Can't wait for his explanation.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: November 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: He was Patient with Me

I am glad that she got the nerve to leave the bathroom.  He is too damn sweet.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: November 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: He Saw Me

Boobs are hot.  'nough said. I am glad that they are finally starting to work out some of their shit.  Can't wait for her to get over Jasper though.  I think that he is just using her.  Can't wait for more.

 
To Save Us by eight_eleven Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 160]
Summary:

 

TSU2

 

Takes place During New Moon’s winter.  Convinced that Edward was lying, Bella sets out across the country to find the Cullens and confront Edward to gain the closure she needs.

 

Many thanks to Kaghanyou for the fantastic banner!

 

 


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 16441
[Report This] Published: September 19, 2010 Updated: January 03, 2011


Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: November 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Signs and Symptoms

I think that Charlie is just scared and unsure of what to do with her.  I think that when she is ok he will be ok.  Can't wait to find out what happens next.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: November 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Buoyancy

So Bella is going to have to be more than a little devious.  Can't wait to see what she does.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  The next chapter just got sent to validation, so you'll see it soon!

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: November 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Flight Plan

She did it.  And Charlie didn't go completely nuts yet.  Oh and the dream, totally hot.  Great job.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I have a soft spot for Charlie.  I don't want to hurt him too much.  :-)

 
47 Days by netracullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 465]
Summary:

Bella and Edward had never met until they spent 47 days in hell together. They can trust no one, except for each other. Now they're home, and trying to heal as they fight for the normality they always took for granted. Lang/Lemons


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Completed: No Word count: 102229
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2010 Updated: March 12, 2012


Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: December 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I love the sincerity and affection in Bella and Edward's relationship.  I don't think they will be able to keep their affection for each other secret for too long though. It is already kinda obvious.  Now for Alice's plan for Jasper that is too funny.  Classic Alice scheming.  I love it.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: January 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Good job Bella.  I am so proud of you..

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: October 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow, Can we sat therapy pronto?  I think they are both indesperate need.  At least they do have each other.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: November 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

God save us from creepy pedophile uncles.  I think there is going to be a family feud as soon as Edward catches him.  Can't wait.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: November 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I am so glad that it was her that kicked his ass.  I am so glad that she fought back and was effective in her defense.  I think that she is a little paranoid about him leaving her.  I think he needs her as much as she needs him.  Can't wait for more.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: November 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

And the awareness begins.  Fun fun.

 
Summary:

In defiance of her domineering boyfriend Edward, Bella decides to get her lip pierced at the new shop in Forks where she unwittingly gets up close and personal with free-spirit Jacob. Smutalicious. Slightly OOC.

 

First Piercing is the Deepest


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No Word count: 73801
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2010 Updated: June 10, 2011


Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: December 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I think that he will tell her if he knows what is good for him.  Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Fingers crossed, btu something tells me he doesn't know what's good for him. oh Jacob! 

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: November 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I don't think that she has forgotten him but I do think that she has been hurt by him and kinda feels used.  I think that she is angry with him and doesn't know how to voice that.  Can't wait for more.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: November 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Damn he is such a user.  I am glad that she is starting to see that.  She needs to have more confidence in herself.  I hope Jake can help her with that.

 
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 Signed
Date: November 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

That was a hell of a first date.  Can't wait for more just like it.  Maybe he can get his next time.

 




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