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Penname: kal0797 [Contact]
Real name: Kim
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Readjusted by muggleinlove Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 986]
Summary:

Bella is a single mom who was jaded by her exhusband, Mike. She is struggling to put her life back on track when she meets Edward. Edward is a hot shot corporate lawyer who has sworn off love and kids. What happens when the two meet at a club?

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 92990
[Report This] Published: February 23, 2009 Updated: July 13, 2009


Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Morning After

Definitely a DIFFERENT Edward!! Can't wait for Bella to work her magic!

 
Never Again by superstarrh Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 509]
Summary:

Bella and Edward are reunited after breaking up five years ago.  Can Bella move beyond the pain he caused her to accept him into her life again or is the past too painful to overcome.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 64200
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2009 Updated: April 29, 2010


Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Six Months Later

Good one!! You did a good job of making me think that this chapter was EPOV.

 
Summary:

Bella takes a vacation to Hilton Head Island in South Carolina to meet Alice's new boyfriend, Jasper. Rosalie and Emmett come along, too, just in case Bella didn't feel like enough of a fifth wheel. With Jasper's roommate out of town, Bella has his nice big bed all to herself. Until Edward comes home in the middle of the night...

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes Word count: 163211
[Report This] Published: March 01, 2009 Updated: December 21, 2011


Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 S.T.37

I LOVE Southern Edward!!!  Just started reading your story and am thoroughly enjoying it.

 
Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Relations & Revelations (V)

I absolutely LOVE this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I think your Edward is my dream man!! not that I don't love my hubby, but WOW, just WOW!

 
Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Homecoming

I love this Edward....he can call he "Sugar" anytime!!!  :0)

 
You Found Me by brighteyes87 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 731]
Summary:

When her marriage began to fall apart, she ran into a beautiful stranger on the streets of London. Can he show her how love should be and help her move on?

 

A HUGE thank you to Falconcranelove for the amazing banner!

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Garrett, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Leah, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 154680
[Report This] Published: March 16, 2009 Updated: October 25, 2009


Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Beautiful Eyes

I definitely don't condone affairs either, but this story has definitely sucked me in. Can't wait to see where it goes!

 
Summary:

Diseased Affair

When Charlie is diagnosed with cancer, Bella decides to move to Forks to help him through his treatment and recovery. What happens when the resentful son of the new cancer doctor meets up with the reason he was dragged to this small town? AH. E/B.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 99780
[Report This] Published: March 20, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2009


Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Are You Ready For Some Football?

This story is great in so many ways. One minute I'm in tears and the next I'm laughing at someone's antics, usually Emmett's. You've put a lot of emotion into this story.

 
Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 35: Epilogue

Fantastic, heartfelt ending to a great story!!!  I loved that you ended in Charlie's POV.  Can't wait to read more from you.

 
Overtime by Dreamrider Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2242]
Summary:

Bella Swan is a writer for a Women's Magazine in Florida, a magazine that she writes the self help column for...Something she really wants to escape. The good news, she is escaping self help, the bad news, she's covering the lives of women behind sports stars...In Denver.

Here she meets three amazing women; the girlfriend, fiance, and wife to two players and the coach of the team, but what will happen when the team superstar, Edward, takes an interest in Bella?

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Warnings: It's NC-17, so basically... Smut, Language.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 129668
[Report This] Published: March 23, 2009 Updated: January 18, 2011


Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - A Not-So-Hot Start

Hee Hee!! Poor Bella!!

 
Summary:

 

Bella meets Edward when he picks up his nephew from her Pre-K class and the sparks fly.  As their feelings for each other grow, Edward has a prior commitment that he is convinced must be seen through. A commitment that is effectively keeping them apart. Are there some complications that even the strongest hearts can't overcome? Can they resist the one thing they can't have--Each other?

To get to the prize, they'll have to survive the temptation of one another, in this emotional waiting game.

Show and Don't Tell.

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Stephenie Meyer owns any Twilight characters and Twilight plot lines that may appear in this story.  The remainder is my original work.    No copying or reproduction of this work is permitted without my express written authorization.  Copyright 2009 by Brits23.
 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 124914
[Report This] Published: March 25, 2009 Updated: December 16, 2009


Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

LOVE this story and HATE Tanya (as usual)!!!!!!!!!!

Can't wait for the update!!

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen is Big Man on Campus at his high school in Port Angeles. Bella Swan is a quiet, sarcastic, marches-to-the-beat-of-her-own-drummer girl at Forks High. A part-time job brings them together, and an unlikely friendship and surprising feelings develop. Neither is brave enough to do anything about it, however, and they part ways when Edward heads off to college. Their paths cross again after a year of no contact, and Edward is determined to not only rekindle their friendship, but to man up and actually do something about his ever-present feelings for Bella.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 144739
[Report This] Published: April 02, 2009 Updated: October 08, 2009


Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Just started reading your story and I love it so far.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

 
Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Another great chapter!! 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! :)

 
Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

WHEW...I'm glad they've finally started being honest with each other about their feelings.



Author's Response:

They just needed a bit of time to get there. :)

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen has the life he always wanted - a beautiful fiancee and a great career.  But what happens when that life is threatened - what will he choose?  Will he choose what he has, or will he choose everything he always knew he never wanted?

Cannon pairings.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 59508
[Report This] Published: April 05, 2009 Updated: March 17, 2010


Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm definitely hooked.  Can't wait to see what happens!!

 
Guarding Edward by katmom Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1578]
Summary:

  Guarding Edward

 

A stalker is trying to get close to Edward Masen, a green-eyed 24 year old concert pianist.

 He hires Elite Guardians to keep him safe from the one who is hunting him.

 Bella Cullen is the owner/operator of the company.  She's also a 110 year old vampire.

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  In the MYSTIC AWARDS:

GUARDING EDWARD WON FIRST RUNNER UP IN THE

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Story that makes you feel all warm and fuzzy!


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Other Character, Rosalie, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 48 Completed: Yes Word count: 200265
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2009 Updated: August 30, 2010


Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4~~Who is She?~~

Loving your story so far.  I can't wait to see what you have in store for us.



Author's Response:

Thanks, kalo797!  I'm happy that you found us here....Look at all those NEXT buttons you get to click!

Hope that you enjoy the rest...

Thanks for the stars!

Kathie

 
Summary:

Edward leaves Bella, much like the beginning of 'New Moon', however, this time, they are all human and there is quite the twist.  Why did Edward leave Bella?  And what secret is Bella keeping when he leaves?

Can they make a nightmare turn into a dream?

THANKS TO EMERALD_ROSALIE FOR THE ABOVE BANNER AND ATHENALOVE FOR THE BELOW.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 61 Completed: Yes Word count: 155064
[Report This] Published: April 14, 2009 Updated: August 05, 2010


Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile

I started reading this VERY LATE last night finally turning off the computer near 3 am since I had to be up for work at 6:30 am.  I was so excited to see an update this morning so here I am at work reading instead of working and enjoying every word!! Absolutely love the story and can't wait for more updates!!!



Author's Response:

Oh my gosh! 

Well, thank you for reading!  I'm glad you enjoyed it and that you took the time to review!

 
Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30 - Little Girls

GREAT chapter!!!!!!!!!!!  I love the emotions that pour out from Edward and Charlie's realization that Edward is sincere in his love for Bella.  Can't wait for more!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

There is so much warring emotion here.  Edward’s torn between elation and terror.  Love for his baby and Bella and fear for Bella’s life.  Charlie is torn between hating Edward for hurting his little girl, and realizing this was a kid who made a mistake and truly loves his new little family.  All sorts to absorb!

Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

Another wonderful chapter!!



Author's Response:

I am glad you enjoyed it! 

Thank you for your patience and for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 58: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s

Great chapter....loved Elizabeth's POV!!!



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Fractured Hearts by cfmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2406]
Summary:

We've all turned the pages on the four blank months in New Moon. Edward left Bella in the woods and told her didn't want her anymore; his arrogance expected that she would just move on with her life. What he never expected was that she wouldn't be able to move on any more than he would. An angry Bella is something he couldn't fathom. What he didn't take into account is that Bella believes that true love is worth fighting for, and she's going to fight to keep Edward and her family. The Cullen abandonment hurt her deeply, but she's turned that pain into rage. What will happen when Bella decides to let them know she's not willing to let them walk away and leave her behind? How will they handle one mere human girl that's extremely pissed off, and willing to do whatever takes to bring them back? The saying "hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" has never rang more true. Bella's angry and on the warpath. Not even a clan of vampires will be able to stop her.

Fractured Hearts

"My heart may have fractured when he left me, but I adamantly refuse to let it shatter. I'm stronger than that, and I'm ready to get nasty. This is going to be a side your family has never seen out of me. I hope you're prepared, because when I'm done taking your stupid, arrogant brother down a few notches, I'm coming after you. Yes, you heard me correctly. You may be small, fast, and graceful, but I'm filled with enough rage at this point to go vampire on your pixie, ballerina ass!"  ~Bella - Chapter 2: Voicemails

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Quil, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: The Dirty, Horny Girls Chronicles
Chapters: 30 Completed: No Word count: 225614
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2009 Updated: October 25, 2010


Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Learning to Listen

Love the garlic!!!!  And Bella's confrontation with Rose.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. That chapter has certainly been a fan favorite. Although I still get misty eyed over the destruction of Rosalie's pretty shoes. ;)  Thank you for reading and leaving a review - I appreciate it so much.

~Lisa

 
Summary:

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Single mom Bella is frustrated with how her life has turned out.  She finally gets the nerve to quit her job and open her own restaurant, taking with her some of her insane boss's best employees. 


Can she deal with the stress? What about her noisy upstairs neighbor?


As she struggles to be successful, raise her daughter, and deal with the pressures of daily life, can she finally find happiness and love for herself?

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jacob, James, Laurent, Mike, Nessie, Phil, Renee, Renesmee, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 110605
[Report This] Published: April 23, 2009 Updated: October 08, 2009


Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Add a dash...

Loving the story so far...and the recipes are a great bonus!! And yes, I'd love for Edward to come doctor my house!!!! ;0)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  Glad you're liking it!

 
Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Bear Food and Flowers

Fantastic chapter!! I love that Jacob is Nessie's age and the emotions that are played out between the 2 of them and Edward. Great job!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you like the puppy love dynamic.  I abhor J/B/E triangles, so Jake is usually a non-issue.  Thanks again for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: A Brand New Day

I didn't take the time to review the last few chapters since I didn't want to stop reading so here's one big review.

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!

Nessie being Edward's daughter is one of the biggest "unexpecteds" I think I've ever read...but thinking back to the beginning of the story I remember thinking "Why does Nessie have Edward's hair color? and Isn't it a coincidence that she's so good at the piano!" I thought maybe Eric was Edward's long lost twin brother! Hee Hee!!

Also the description of Jessica a couple of chapters back is hysterical. Even funnier is that we've used the word kankles in our family to describe ourselves when 8 or 9 months pregnant and then also when describing our precious pugby babies several months later.

Can't wait to see Esme and Renee's reactions! Update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Yep, there were clues sprinkled all along.  Glad you liked my uglying up Jessica.  Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Outtake: Man to Man

Great look at Jacob & Edward's relationship throughout the years.  I especially loved the ending.  How appropriate for Jacob to receive Charlie's shotgun.



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed that little outtake.  It was fun to write. Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Summary:

When the Cullens move back to Forks, Edward decides to follow in Carlisle's footsteps and become a doctor. As he becomes more and more frustrated with his monotonous life, Bella is admitted with a serious illness.

Will he be able to resist?

 

Thanks M81170 for the wonderful banner!

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 82473
[Report This] Published: May 07, 2009 Updated: October 18, 2009


Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Great story!!  Love Edward's interaction with Melissa and later with Bella.  Can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I am so glad you like it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!! :)

 




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