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Penname: kal0797 [Contact]
Real name: Kim
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Member Since: January 29, 2009
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These Dreams by jbluvs2sing Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 954]
Summary:

It's been three years since the day Edward left Bella in the woods...she is moving on but is still plagued by nightmares from time to time. Will someone from her past help her get through her difficult times? What danger lies ahead for her? Will her dreams eventually come true? Please read and review!

Dream sequences based on the hit song by Heart.

Thanks to the fabulous Mrs.C for the banner!

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 70891
[Report This] Published: August 14, 2008 Updated: April 05, 2009


Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Talk about a tear-jearker! First love - you never forget the person that touched you so deeply!! I'm loving this story!!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much. I actuallly wrote the letter before I started writing the story.

 
Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Epilogue

Great story!! Will definitely be adding you to my fave authors list.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your nice words.

 
Summary: After an emotional two week romance, Edward and Bella are finally together and enjoying their life and work at Cullen Institute for the Arts. What happens when someone wants to shake up their fairy tale romance? Can Bella have complete faith in Edward? Sequel to Lullabies Go On!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 30507
[Report This] Published: August 25, 2008 Updated: May 05, 2009


Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: The One Down The Road

Just finished the story and wanted to let you know that I REALLY enjoyed it.

 
Summary:

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Bella went cliff diving, but it didn't turn out so well. She broke her back. A decade later, Edward reappears in her life on the same night she loses her best friend and husband to a freak accident. Now a graduate student in Women's Studies, Bella isn't thrilled to see him. But when the Cullens re-enter Bella's life, they bring change, hope, and a new joint project that will require all their expertises.

Also, you can find a SPANISH version here:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4829851/1/En_un_parpadeo

AND you can find images for various things like Esme's house, Edward's piano, Bella's wheelchair and Rose's car on my ff.net profile page:

http://www.fanfiction.net/~thatwritr

OR in my LJ gallery:

http://pics.livejournal.com/that_writr/gallery/000010z2

Special Update:

For personal reasons (a ridiculously full teaching schedule and being recently put in charge of a bi-annual local conference and ongoing project), I am no longer able to reply to reviews and questions. But that said, I wanted to give a BIG THANK YOU to EVERYBODY for the wonderful feedback and kind words that have been sent my way since the completion of this story in August 2009. I do still check my messages about once every 1-2 weeks and read *every* review. I just have too many to reply to anymore, but I didn’t want anyone to think I was ignoring her/him in particular, or didn’t appreciate readers taking time to leave a review. Writing this story was tons of fun and I’m thrilled readers seem to enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed the chance to write it. I can’t tell you how flattering that is!!! As I used to reply to all reviews, I feel a little badly about this decision, but work has been requiring virtually all of my time since the new (academic) year began.

Best to all of you in 2010 and beyond!

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 68 Completed: Yes Word count: 221619
[Report This] Published: September 11, 2008 Updated: August 26, 2009


Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I kept putting off reading this story because of its length when I first added it as a favorite, but decided to start reading when I saw that it was finished.  That being said, I really love the take you have on the Cullens.  It's "real."  I look forward to seeing how all of this plays out. Great job!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  And yes, I wanted to write a story that sort of dealt realistically with vampires, which sounds like a non-sequiteur but was part of the fun! :-)

 
Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

This chapter really touched me and brought tears to my eyes. I love that their relationship has evolved into something more mature and lasting.

Your story continues to amaze me with the depth of the characters. You've done a great job and it's obvious that every detail has been well though out.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  And I did try to plot things and think them through, so I'm glad that's working for readers!

 
Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68: Epilogue

Thanks for sharing your wonderful story with us! You are a very talented writer!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

 
Summary:

Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.

 

 

Hiding in Plain Sight

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012


Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: February 29, 2008

I'm definitely intrigued!! I've got a feeling Jessica is going to cause problems down the line.

 
Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: April 7 - April 11, 2008

WOW!!! I didn't think Bella was actually going to get that close to going through with her "plan."  This definitely is going to get more interesting.  Can't wait to see what's coming up!!!

 
Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: June 14 - June 20, 2008

OHHHH!!! I have tears in my eyes!! I absolutely love this story.  Please update SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!

 
Summary:

Edward's family hire Bella Swan to break the heartbreaker's heart in hopes to have him see the error of his womanizing ways. Bella realizes that they have a little too much in common and is having a little too much fun with this subject. EXB Lots of lemons later.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 43 Completed: Yes Word count: 322353
[Report This] Published: October 21, 2008 Updated: September 13, 2011


Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Assignments & Introductions

Just started reading and I'm hooked!  Whoa . . . Edward doesn't know what he's in for! Hee Hee Hee!!!

 
Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Dinner Divine

 

This chapter is priceless!  Gotta love Emmett.  This story just keeps getting better and better. :0)

 
Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Serious Sunday

WOW!! This chapter had my feelings all over the place.  I LOVE that you had them be each other's "first."  What a twist!  I can't wait to see where you take us with the rest of the story!

 
Summary:

The sun snatched Edward in Volterra, and Bella's journey without him is tough. The grief, endless nightmares, and utter shock of a lost love takes on a heavy toll. Not all is lost to true love; It's What He Would Have Wanted. Alternate New Moon. ExB READ!


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alec, Bella, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Marcus, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 70383
[Report This] Published: October 27, 2008 Updated: February 22, 2009


Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Epilogue

All I can say is WOW!!  This was some story! I can't wait to read the sequel!!!

 
Snowed In by eclipsedawn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5322]
Summary: Bella travels to Alaska to vacation in the cabin Alice loaned her. What happens when Bella finds out she is not the only person staying in the cabin?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 88293
[Report This] Published: November 28, 2008 Updated: January 01, 2010


Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Knock, Knock-Who's there?

Started reading this yesterday and finally had to stop @ 2 am so I could function at work today (Yes, I'm supposed to be actually doing work and not reading). PLEASE update soon!!

 
Yes by deeemonayy Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 60]
Summary:

Thirteen is way too young to die and way too young to lose your best friend to cancer.

Edward has only one wish. The thing he asks Bella to do for him sounds simple in theory, but he knows it goes against her very nature. Her world is rocked when his life ends. Does Bella have the strength to complete his request? Yes.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2620
[Report This] Published: November 29, 2008 Updated: November 29, 2008


Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Crying BIG, FAT tears right now!!

 
Can't Let Go by madeleinejade Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 589]
Summary:

Bella ruins her friendship with Edward by confessing her feelings to him which he doesn't return. She goes back to Arizona for college but returns to Washington after graduation due to Charlie's illness. Can she and Edward be friends again?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 112590
[Report This] Published: December 01, 2008 Updated: March 24, 2009


Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: O Captain! My Captain!

I loved this chapter and can't wait to read more!!  Especially loved Edward's comment about not having a good feeling about the Native American kid.  Too funny!!

 
Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Wicked Games

Last two chapters were great!! I love the fact that you didn't drag out the "friendship" stage and had them be honest about their feelings.



Author's Response:

hey thanks for reading and for reviewing.  i hope you're enjoying it so far.  i just completed this story last night so you have a little catching up to do.  and yeah, i wasn't sure if i didn't drag the friendship thing out long enough, but i didn't want to make it so long that readers are like, "get together all ready" and start losing interest.  but then i didn't want to make it too quick either. i think i erred on the side of quicker, but that's just me being selfish and wanting them to finally get together.  anyhoo, thanks again for reading!

 
Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Oh God, MORE!

All I can say is "WOW"!!!!

 
Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Emmett the Great?

I LOVE Emmett!! My husband thinks I'm crazy since I keep laughing out loud and crying at the same time. :0)



Author's Response:

that's funny.  it's okay, my husband thinks i'm crazy for coming up with this stuff.  glad you're enjoying the story.  thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue: Beginnings

Loved this story!! Can't wait to read the sequel.

 
Summary:

A Breaking Dawn alternative story.  Edward and Bella marry and go on a very romantic honeymoon.  Complications interrupt and they return to Forks.  Decisions must be made and the family has to move quickly.  This story is an A/U from BD.  There is no pregnancy and no more love triangle.  It is about how Edward and Bella were meant to be together and then must stand together against all odds.

Canon Pairings.  Lots of romantic lemons.  AU because some story lines from Breaking Dawn were completely abandoned in place of ones that I like better! Rated NC-17 for the lemons and for possible future violence and occasional language when the characters get really stressed out and stuff!


Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Eleazar, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Leah, Mike, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes Word count: 193651
[Report This] Published: December 05, 2008 Updated: May 09, 2009


Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Bella's Revenge

HYSTERICAL!!!



Author's Response:

LMAO!  Glad you liked that chapter!  It was by far the most fun to write!

 
Eight Years Later by jmeyer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1243]
Summary:

It has been 8 long years since Edward left Bella on their wedding day. Bella has finally come back to Forks to visit Charlie, only to find that Edward has also returned, and he has been keeping a big secret from her.

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Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 115303
[Report This] Published: December 15, 2008 Updated: August 05, 2009


Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm definitely intrigued! Can't wait to see what Edward's been up to.

 
Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This chapter brought tears to my eyes for so many reasons.  You've done a wonderful job with the characters. I can't wait to read Alice's reaction to the phone call.

 
Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

My heart has been breaking for all of them for the last few chapters!!  This story is my new favorite!! Please update soon.

 
Reviewer: kal0797 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

This chapter absolutely broke my heart! I can't wait to read more....Hint, Hint!!!!!

 




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