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Penname: ElleCC [Contact]
Real name: Elle Chambers
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Member Since: January 28, 2009
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Summary:

First installment of the More of that Ladders Crap series.

 

The night Edward decided to go lie in the road with a bottle of JD


Categories: AU-Human, Crackfic Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: More of that Ladders Crap
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1571
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2008 Updated: September 26, 2008


Reviewer: ElleCC Signed
Date: February 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Only Edward would try to kill himself in a cul-de-sac.  You know you've hit bottom when Emmett points out to you the idiocy of your suicide mission. 

Good stuff :)

 
Summary:

Marve's Edward meets Wish_girl's Bella in high school. Hilarity and hijinks ensue.

 

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Categories: AU-Human, Crackfic Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 88732
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2008 Updated: December 14, 2008


Reviewer: ElleCC Signed
Date: February 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Writing To Reach You

Ah, look at our boy!  Being all deep and observant and chivalrous.  It's lovely :)  Puppies have nothing on Edward Cullen.

 
Reviewer: ElleCC Signed
Date: February 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Teenage Kicks

Holy crap.  I never thought I'd say this, but the idea of Hotward in eyeliner... well, I may need to go take a shower.  Of the cold variety.  Like now.

 
Reviewer: ElleCC Signed
Date: February 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Teenage Kicks

Holy crap.  I never thought I'd say this, but the idea of Hotward in eyeliner... well, I may need to go take a shower.  Of the cold variety.  Like now.

 
Sanctuary by Jfly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2150]
Summary: Feature

Edward faces a monumental crisis and finds Sanctuary in the one place he refuses to look for it. All Human.

This story contains Religious themes and Mature themes: Edward is a priest struggling with his role in the Church and as a man.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: No Word count: 99900
[Report This] Published: October 11, 2008 Updated: February 03, 2010


Reviewer: ElleCC Signed
Date: January 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Wine

I just read this - what you have available - this afternoon.  Your writing is amazing - quality, good flow, good pacing, good voice.  Really excellent.

 

I think what I am enjoying most is that I feel as if I am truly feeling what Edward is feeling (sorry for the lame sentence).  You paint his thoughts and emotions so strongly that I suddenly want to look upon someone as he does her.  Your writing is captivating and I hang on each word, waiting to see what happens next.

 

Truly excellent.  Maybe for the next chapter I can manage a slightly more coherent review than this.

 
Reviewer: ElleCC Signed
Date: March 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Turbo

You write so beautifully; half of that chapter was prose poetry. 

So finally he gets her in bed ;)  I honestly have no idea where this whole thing is going but I'm enjoying the travels.

 
Loss by MuffNbutter Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

"I'll love you forever, no matter what," I always said.
"I know. Nothing can ever come between us and nothing will ever make us forget our love for each other. That's not a promise, Bella, that's a fact," he always replied.

They were born to be best friends, and born to love each other forever. But when tragedy strikes, will Bella remember that love will survive through all? Will she be able to learn how to live without the one who taught her how to love in the first place? Can love be found again, after it's  been ripped away so suddenly?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Charlie, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2325
[Report This] Published: October 23, 2008 Updated: October 24, 2008


Reviewer: ElleCC Signed
Date: February 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Loss

The eulogy part (not that I realized what it was, right away) was so hard to read.  So sad, even though it took awhile to realize why it was so sad.

Very good, very moving.



Author's Response:

Aw, I'm glad that it touched you... And I'm glad that you understood the tone of the words before the point was even reached... I worked hard to not just summarize that little bit up without it seeming too happy, because that would detract in my opinion.

Thank you for reading and reviewing, hon

 
Let Me Ease You by flibbins Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 414]
Summary:

Edward realizes it is a struggle for Bella to deal with the physical boundaries in their relationship, so he enlists Jasper's help.  Set during Eclipse.  Edward/Bella and Jasper/Bella

Let Me Ease You


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 20931
[Report This] Published: October 24, 2008 Updated: July 03, 2009


Reviewer: ElleCC Signed
Date: May 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Look, Bella. No Hands.

Oh, I love it.  Really well done - well executed, well written.  I've read a few other Jasper-helps-Bella (he talks her through touching herself, he's human and takes care of her, he's vamp and takes care of her...) but this is the first I've read in which he uses his power to do it.   Looking forward to more :)

 
Reviewer: ElleCC Signed
Date: May 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: It's a Dirty Job, Jasper

Love the JPOV!  I actually like that he's reluctant, that Edward's only agreed because he knows J won't be into it (not at first, at least).

 

The list of things that would happen if Edward lost control is funny... in that funny-but-not-funny way.  Someone needs to write that fic (or maybe someone has) - Edward finally loses control and everyone dies.  How does he cope?

 

Really interesting to see this from J's perspective.  Thank you!

 
Reviewer: ElleCC Signed
Date: May 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: But Edward, Someone's Got To Do It

EPOV was good, too!  I actually feel bad for him, and I don't often, in a JxB situation :)  But you've painted the whole scenario really well.  Lovin' it :)

 
Reviewer: ElleCC Signed
Date: May 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Ignorance is Bella

Hmm, I am wondering who I have to bribe to have Jasper show up while I'm in the shower....

 

Can't wait to see where it goes :)

 
Reviewer: ElleCC Signed
Date: May 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Begwards Can't Be Choosers

I think I still love it :)  I can certainly understand Edward's ire.  The whole thing would be ridiculous, because everyone but clueless Bella is mierable, but you did a really great job laying a credible foundation. 

But hey, if Edward decides to take care of business on his own, maybe that will at least make it a little bit easier on him when he's around her.

Interesting to see Edward's side of the coin - the interaction in the bedroom, etc.

Loved it!  Really looking forward to more.

Love the chapter titles, btw - Begwards Can't Be Choosers - that's hilarious.

 
Kissing Bella by FatApolloLove Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 66]
Summary:

 

"Eclipse" EPOV. Mid-"Declarations" through "Wager". Jacob kisses Bella.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7523
[Report This] Published: November 12, 2008 Updated: November 13, 2008


Reviewer: ElleCC Signed
Date: February 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Kissing Bella

Awesome interpretation of EPOV for these scenes.  I think it fits perfectly with what he would have thought / how he would have acted.

 
Acting Out by eroticfan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 478]
Summary:

A story about the ultimate threesome: Edward, Bella and Jake. They're all juniors in Forks in this AU-human take on things. The story's very NC-17 with Edward and Jake both bi, but it's not PWP - there's actual plot and a fair amount of angst, humor and even occasional fluff, as these three messed-up kids figure out their complicated three-way relationship. Don't be put off if you're not a Jake fan - this story's converted some diehard anti-Jake readers.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Phil, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 117219
[Report This] Published: December 02, 2008 Updated: July 28, 2009


Reviewer: ElleCC Signed
Date: February 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Pas des Trois

That was hot and well-done.  Interested to see how things, uh, progress.  Both on a physical and emotional level. 

 
Reviewer: ElleCC Signed
Date: February 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Sunday

Yum.  Good sexin and I'm glad they talked it out a bit... well, a bit, at least.  Interested to see if they can make it work and curious to hear how everyone reacts.  Good update.

 
Reviewer: ElleCC Signed
Date: March 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Aftermath

"And while two may fit several times into three, three definitely won't fit in the Volvo's back seat."

I think that's my favorite line.

I'm glad that their family wasn't automatically hunky-dory with it.  It's just not realistic for everyone to be okay.

Can't wait until Mike Newton gets his ass kicked ;)

 
Reviewer: ElleCC Signed
Date: March 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Shit Happens

Haha: "Maybe they just put each other in head-locks and half-nelsons until they come."

I love that they are all feeling awkward.  I've read one too many Bella-Edward-Someone threesome stories where it's all just rainbow and bunnies and "I don't care who fucks whom as long as I get some eventually!"  But seriously, it has to be weird and strange.  Right?  So I'm glad they're all finding it weird and and strange.

Ah, Edward and the angry sex.  I feel bad that everyone's giving him a hard time - I think he's giving himself the hardest time - but he was only sticking up for Bella.  And himself.  I'm usually against fighting and whatnot, but I do feel bad for him here.

Curious to see how the concert and Jake/Bella stuff will go.  At least Edward told Jake how he was feeling, even if he was all pissy when he did it. 

Good chapter.

 
Reviewer: ElleCC Signed
Date: March 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Cunning Plans

I like that they're being open and honest.  I don't know what'll happen with Jake or what they'll end up telling him.  But this made me happy: "We listen to each other's breathing. This is real, this is what matters."

The phone sex?  Definitely hot. 

Glad Edward's punishment wasn't too severe, and it's so interesting to see a story in which Carlisle and Esme aren't heroes.  Kind of a nice change of pace.

Enjoyed :)

 
Reviewer: ElleCC Signed
Date: May 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Fix Me

Gooood stuff.  All of it.  The simple sweetness of Jake with Bella.  Edward starting to note hate himself quite so much.  Edward letting Bella comfort him, and him actually talking to her about what happened. 

 

The Gillian thing makes me nervous - something up with James that Bella needs to know about?

 

Really enjoyed it =)

 
Reviewer: ElleCC Signed
Date: May 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Life Support

"Just enough tits to go around."

"No teenagers were harmed in the making of this threesome."

Hmmm... there was one more line I totally loved but forget which now.

Ugh, poor Billy and Jake :(    I would think that something like this would make or break their little group.  I'm happy to see that so far, it seems to be making it.

Good chapter - sadness is okay, it happens.  Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review (and past ones too, much appreciated). Nice to have the reassurance that some of my readers can cope with life not being all roses. Or all lemons!

 
Reviewer: ElleCC Signed
Date: June 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Heart to Heart

Oh, that was so good.  Edward talking to Esme and then Alice and Emmett... I'm so glad he was able to get all of that out, after all of those years.  Yeah, Edward has a tendency to brood and Em's line was funny (unintentionally): "How the hell was I to know that you'd brood about it for the next twelve fucking years?"  I'm really glad this has been taken care of, and hopefully the therapy will really help him recover and move on.  It has to do a world of good for him to know his family doesn't hate him. 

The James thing... well. I'm not sure how I feel about that.  I am inclined, of course, to just jump and scream "Noooo!" because James = bad, yeah?  But with just a few chapters, left... I'm not sure.  Hopefully it means nothing... but does anything ever really mean nothing? A lot can happen in a few chapters.

Sooooo sad about Billy :(  That made me teary - the very end.  Ugh.  What will Jake do now??  :(  I think you did it really well, though - it wasn't trite or pointless.  It just... happened.  When someone has poor health, it can happen.  It's not unheard of.    Really well done.

Oh, and the sexin' was pretty good, too ;)  But I'm trying to write a serious review!

Loved this line: "Emotional free-radicals are zipping about all over the place like killer bees."

Not sure if I've commented on it befroeo - if I haven't, I'm a jackass - but I love your writing style.  It's just... natural and easy.  I'm a big fan of it.

I'll definitely be sad to see this come to an end.  I get hyper when I see an update come in.

Thanks for sharing it with us!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the detailed review, and I'm very glad you liked it. Sorry about the James scare, but again, the plot's cracking the whip on that one. And yeah, sad for Jake, but I'll look after him as best I can. Life happens, though, like you say. Appreciate your comments.

 
Reviewer: ElleCC Signed
Date: July 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Bitter-sweet

Ugh, so effing good.  Just... so good.  I know there's one more chapter, but you did a fantastic job giving us a wrap up here.  Tying up the things that needed tying.  I'm all teary and everything.  I love that it was in Edward's voice.  He was the most fucked up of them all and it's great to see himi having made such strides.

This isn't the huge, rambly review this chapter deserves... but know that it was certainly worthy of it were I not so tired.  I loved it =) 

Thank you!!



Author's Response:

Yeah, I guess for me, Edward is the center of the story although Bella and Jake are also very important. I'm glad it worked OK, was worried it might get a bit too mushy if I wasn't careful. Thanks for the great review!

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen is an Army brat, who has his entire life planned out perfectly, and can't wait to get out of this utterly dull town of Forks, WA. But then a whirlwind in the form of Bella Swan enters his life and before long, he can't imagine his life without her. Will he sacrifice his chance at what could be a beautiful life with her? And is Bella willing to make that same sacrifice... AU/AH, possibly some OOC

Rated for situations and lemons later on...

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 121063
[Report This] Published: January 17, 2009 Updated: September 10, 2009


Reviewer: ElleCC Signed
Date: January 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Friday Night Rituals

Hallelujah for not-a-doormat Bella :)

 
Reviewer: ElleCC Signed
Date: January 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Your Embarrassing 'Something'

“Dude, you play the piano?”

'Nuff said.

 
Reviewer: ElleCC Signed
Date: February 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Avoidance

I am seriously adoring this fic.  Love the Alaska/4th of July drama.  Tanya's a witch, regardless of how the story plays out :)



Author's Response:

Awww poor Tanya.. I thought I made her at least halfway decent haha But then I've written so much in the last couple of weeks, I'm surprised all the plotlines aren't melding together in my own brain lol.

 




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