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Summary: Edward is desperate to keep Bella away from La Push, and specifically away form Jacob Black. Much to Edward’s dismay, Bella made her move while he was busy hunting and went to see Jacob. Now Edward and Alice have devised a scheme that is sure to thwart Bella’s wayward travels in the future, but what do the rest of the Cullens think of the plan?
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes
Word count: 12719
[Report This] Published: June 04, 2010 Updated: February 14, 2011
Reviewer: msouris Signed
Date: July 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 ~ Homecoming ~
I always thought that Edward and Alice got off a little lightly for their little kidnapping scheme, and I always thought that had the rest of the family knew about it they would have disagreed, esp Esme. Well done lovely missing moment there, loved how you portrayed Edward's fears and insecurities. Author's Response: Stephenie never did tell us how the rest of the family felt about the incident. In the course of writing BLS, this just seemed to make the most sense. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Summary: 
Edward left Bella four years ago; two years ago, he dealt with Victoria and has been moping around ever since. He is a mere shadow of his former self, and the Cullens are at a loss for how to fix him, since he won’t go back to Bella. Bella’s life is a paradox; she both fell apart and flourished after Edward left her. She is estranged from Charlie and Jacob, is lead singer of an all-girl rock band called Hamartia (literary term meaning fatal flaw), and is living in Brooklyn, NY. She is now all about sex, drugs, alcohol, and Rock n’ Roll. Along with her new lifestyle came a new outlook and personality; she has a quick temper and sharp tongue and finally puts herself first. Long gone is the selfless, long-suffering Bella that Edward left behind. What happens when Alice has had enough and brings all the Cullen “Kids” to one of Bella shows? Will the “old Bella” ever come back? Will she and Edward reunite? Can he accept who she is now and what she has done? Does she want to be changed, if everything works out? Will he be willing to do it? Read and find out.
A big thank you goes out to FrozenSoldier who made this awesome banner!!!!!!!
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 50 Completed: No
Word count: 326044
[Report This] Published: June 17, 2010 Updated: February 15, 2013
Reviewer: msouris Signed
Date: March 27, 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Morning Sunshine
:( poor Bella
Reviewer: msouris Signed
Date: March 27, 2011
Title: Chapter 9: You Can't Go Home Again
“Maybe tomorrow. I will tell you this once and only once, Edward Anthony Masen Cullen, I answer to no one. I do as I please. I’m a big girl who is more than capable of looking after herself. I do what I need to do to feel and stay alive. If you have a problem with that then you can join the long list of people I cut out of my life and hope to see rotting in hell.” I didn’t raise my voice; but spoke in a calm and even tone. My measured words sent a chill down even my spine. I think he understood that he was standing on ever thinning ice and had just undone the majority of the good he did upstairs.
You go girl :)
Do feel sorry for Ed in this chapter though, clearly worried about her.
Author's Response: Hi Msouris,
Thanks.
I know, but he is VERY judgmental.
I love your reviews, thanks for taking the time to leave them and re-read this story.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: msouris Signed
Date: March 27, 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Saturday's Performance
Lots of angst. Good chapter. Edward needs to stop being such a controlling arse or Bella's going to just rebel against and he'll lose her. Author's Response: Hi msouris,
I know, I kind of love angst (incase you can't tell lol)
True and true.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing, it really brightens my day.
Thanks,
~E
Reviewer: msouris Signed
Date: March 27, 2011
Title: Chapter 7: War Rooms
Glad that Ed decides to fight for her. Author's Response: Hey msouris,
Me too, he had too.
Thank you for reading and reviewing, it really means the world to me.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: msouris Signed
Date: March 27, 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Sparks
Cruel Bella, cruel. Eddie deserves it though. One of the things I love about this story, Bella isn't so ready to forgive and forget. One of the things I always found hard to accept in New Moon. Yes Bella would most defiantly run to save Edward but when someone hurts you so badly how do you just let them back it you life so easily? Author's Response: Hello there msouris,
Yup she was down right evil, and he does deserve it.
I know I hate when she just ends up in his arms and all is forgiven, not matter if it was the original or ffs I want to scream "make him work for it, have some self-respect."
Thanks for re-reading and sharing your thoughts I'm very much enjoying them.
Best,
~E
Reviewer: msouris Signed
Date: March 25, 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Showtime
This chapter re-reading it actually find it very difficult to read which is a good thing really because it just shows how well you writing conveys the emotions of the characters at their awkard renioun. The tension is so thick and by the end of it the atticpation of what is going to happen is nearly painful. (Even though I know what's going to happen)
Love that Ed gets to see Bella as a strong independant woman, doing her stuff. Love that he sees she's broken, he knows it's his fault and he wants to fix it. Love, love, love Bella :D Author's Response: Hi again Msouris,
Thank you, that is a high compliment- wow, I'm humbled.
Yeah Bella can't decided who to be, she wants him to know she's moved and that she hasn't.
Thank you, thank you, thank you.
I can't wait to read your next review.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: msouris Signed
Date: March 25, 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Rough Day
:D Ooh the tension Author's Response: hey msouris,
I know.
Thank you for re-reading and reviewing-I apprecaite it.
Best,
~E
Reviewer: msouris Signed
Date: March 25, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Okay I'm gonna 'fess up. Read your story all the way through, after catching up on the many chapters, became hooked but never reviewed. Feeling bad, and whilst I anxiously await the next chappie I've started re-reading again thought I'd give you the reviews you derserve :)
Your Bella grabbed me. I'm a sucka for no nonsense no bullshit taking badass Bella. I loved that instead of the weepy broken Bella that's so closed in on herself, she's sort of the opposite yet at the same time still very much broken. I Love seeing a different way of seeing Bella cope. Author's Response: Hey msouris,
WOW that is so kind of you. Thank you I would love to hear your thoughts.
Thanks, I am too, I hate wishy-washy Bellas.
Exactly she is very broken, but dealing with it differently.
Thank you for reading and reviewing, it really means the world to me.
Cheers,
~E
Summary: 
Bella and Alice have survived everything together, including the infected, or as some call them... 'zombies'. How much longer can they survive on their own. Can they trust anyone else they meet on the way? cannon, ExB
Warning: Graphic violence, dark themes
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No
Word count: 43269
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2011 Updated: October 22, 2011
Reviewer: msouris Signed
Date: March 25, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
Oooh very intriguing. Sounds interesting, can't wait for the update. Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for reviewing.
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