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Summary:

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What if in the beginning Edward lied to everyone about being in love with Bella? What if originally it actually was all about Bella's scent? And what would happen then if accidentally, much against his will, Edward kind of sort of fell head over heels in love with this not-so-dull human girl?

This is an AU of the Twilight Saga using an entirely different plot as to how, why, and when Edward and Bella fell in love. It offers a different explanation for what was so special about Bella Swan, why Edward vigilantly enforced those physical boundaries, why there's tension between the Cullens and the wolves, and why Edward behaved the way he did not only with Bella but with his family. Expect romance, mystery, angst, and humor. Dark Edward.

Canon Pairings, No BxExJ, OOC.

This story is rated NC-17 because of occasional naughty language, violence (or implied violence) against humans, vampires, werewolves, animals, insects, minding-their-own-business-pajamas, entities, books, coffee tables, leather recliners, bridges, sword ferns, shrubs, rocks, and worst of all....trees. It is also rated NC-17 due to excessive snarkiness by Edward, references to underage drinking, practical jokes and/or enthusiastic tormenting of secondary characters particularly Mike Newton, Jacob Black, and Charles Swan. It also is rated NC-17 due to sexual content.

 Thanks to Mizra for the banners.


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Lauren, Leah, Other Character, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya, Victoria
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Series: None
Chapters: 74 Completed: Yes Word count: 1085631
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2008 Updated: June 01, 2011


Reviewer: ellenah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter Eight: Heart of Darkness - Part Forty-Five - Mated: Dead or Alive

I'm sitting on the edge of my seat! please update soon!



Author's Response:

Well hello there ellenah!

Thanks so much for the review! I'm happy to hear you are enjoying the story! I sent the latest chapter off to both betas, and should hear back from them soon. I'll get it posted as soon as I can. :)

 

Best,

 

Books

 

Douglas is blowing a kiss at you.

 
The Tutor by itzmegan73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1658]
Summary:

School is in session and there are lots of lessons to be learned. Bella Swan, the newest student at Forks High School, needs to amend her shy and introverted ways and her guidance counselor has just the thing: tutoring! Besides, newbie Bella is probably the only student naïve enough to tackle Edward Cullen, a juvenile delinquent in training. Edward’s main pastimes include avoiding school and hanging out with his lovelorn, best friend Jasper Hale. In Edward’s opinion, Jasper needs a tutoring session of own in order to get over his ex- Alice. However Alice is too busy trying to console her friend Rosalie –who is only interested in one lesson: how to win the affections of Edward Cullen.  


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Rosalie
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Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 162183
[Report This] Published: April 19, 2009 Updated: December 28, 2010


Reviewer: ellenah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Breakin' Me

Oh my god so sweet!

 
Help Wanted by jaxon 22 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3046]
Summary:

Bella Swan applies for the job of PA to the rude, arrogant Hollywood film star Edward Cullen.

Can Bella keep her feelings for her boss in check so she can do her job?

A/H, OOC, luscious and graphic lemons and bad language.

A million and one thank yous to Rachel1313 for the spectacular banner! You are my hero, bb!!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 52 Completed: No Word count: 473901
[Report This] Published: May 26, 2009 Updated: March 29, 2011


Reviewer: ellenah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: In the Know

Oh my! I laughed so hard I had tears rolling down my face. This is by far the funniest thing I've read in awhile. 

 
Summary:

My usual prey are the strong. I like to tear them apart, bring them down to the same level as everyone else. But I wanted something different for once. I wanted to kill someone weak. I chose Bella Swan. Too bad I misjudged her strength. AH. One-shot.

WARNING:  Contains GRAPHIC scenes of violence.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, James
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 13318
[Report This] Published: November 05, 2009 Updated: November 05, 2009


Reviewer: ellenah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That  was great! I didn't know if I'd like it at first but once I started it I had to finish. I like the way he kept making excuses to himself, his inner conflict. It was wonderful. 

 
Summary:

Winner of The Haunted Twilight Contest 2009

Edward and Jasper OS for the Haunted Twilight Contest


Categories: Twilight, AU, Other Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 11114
[Report This] Published: November 23, 2009 Updated: November 25, 2009


Reviewer: ellenah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: This Is Who I Am. This Is What You Are

Dark but sweet I liked this a lot.

 
Summary:

To see what I have seen, see what I see…” The words flowed like honey from his lips, and in just as brief of a breath, he was gone. The bell above the Record store’s door chimed and Bella saw the flash of bronze fly past the window. “He’s a Cullen, Bella. You can never…”

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 29187
[Report This] Published: December 14, 2009 Updated: March 05, 2010


Reviewer: ellenah Signed
Date: February 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Scene Four

I am really starting to warm up to this story! It's great it has made me laugh a few times already.



Author's Response:

im glad you're enjoying it. =] 

 
Hide and Drink by Savage Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7599]
Summary:

Now Complete!

Bella’s blood was just too tempting to be ignored.  In this version of Twilight, Edward takes Bella on a sadistic journey with his monstrous side.  While Edward drags her around the world, barely keeping a step ahead of his frantic family, Bella battles the monster for possession of the gentler vampire inside her captor.  EPOV.

Winner of the Faithful Shipper Awards for best Alternate Universe.

Winner of The Vampies, Twilight Vampfic Awards for Best Dark Vamp.

Winner of the Immortal Sin Awards for Best Darkward and Hottest Dark Vamp Fic!

Thank you Lace for the Banner!

“There was no other blood like this.  Once she was gone, it would no longer be within my grasp.  But if I stopped now, she would heal.  Her body would make more.  The blood would replenish.  I could drink again.  The promise of more – it was the only incentive that could have caused me to stop.”

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
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Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 249263
[Report This] Published: December 22, 2009 Updated: August 28, 2010


Reviewer: ellenah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Realize and Rationalize

That's great, Carlisle teaching Bella how to put on a condom! That actually had me laughing out loud sounding like a lunatic. I'm thinking what E is going through sounds a lot like a recovering drug addict. On top of that she's his mate so the time apart may also be contributing to his mental state. I can't wait until the next update.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it!  Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: ellenah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Pause and Persuade

hmm... I hope they find a way to make him drink. I wish Aro had not gotten a hold of him I think he made it worse.

 
Reviewer: ellenah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Mope and Hope

hmm... I'm left thinking and I like that.

 
Reviewer: ellenah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Try and Fail

I didn't "see" that coming hmm... a blind vampire. I think he should have used human blood. even though pigs blood is close to human it's not the same. Can't wait to see what happens next. 

 
15 Step by Jenny Jerkface Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 225]
Summary:

17-year old Bella Swan moves to Forks after being abandoned by her mother. With music as her only friend and a penchant for trouble, Bella just wants to be left alone. Unfortunately, her behavior attracts the attention of hot tempered Edward Cullen.

(Thanks Readergoof for the banner!)


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
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Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 72747
[Report This] Published: April 26, 2010 Updated: January 07, 2011


Reviewer: ellenah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Run, Devil, Run

Wow Renee is such a selfish bitch. I'm glad Charlie is there for her to lean on. Is Edward adopted or are the Cullen's his natural parents?

 
Summary:

Don’t go into the woods . . . That is the simple rule in Forks and all obey. No one questions it, no one challenges it. No one goes into the woods. Except, I have . . .


There’s a lot of secrets in Forks and Bella Swan is about to stumble into the biggest one, altering her life and all those around her.  


 


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 Huge shout out to Najo for all the help with my first proper banner!


 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Leah, Mike, Paul, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tyler
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Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 42682
[Report This] Published: April 11, 2011 Updated: November 05, 2011


Reviewer: ellenah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue/Chapter 1 - You'll Never Believe Your Eyes

nice start!





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