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Penname: AMayes [ Contact]
Real name: Yuri Park
Status: Member
Member Since: January 27, 2009
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I'm an older Twilight fan and have just recently started writing fanfic.
I'm an elementary school teacher just having moved from Canada, where I was born and raised, to Australia.
I enjoy writing and am having fun with it! I hope you enjoy it too.
You can find alot of my other work at fanfiction.net, under the same penname.
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Summary: Bella travels to Alaska to vacation in the cabin Alice loaned her. What happens when Bella finds out she is not the only person staying in the cabin? 
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes
Word count: 88293
[Report This] Published: November 28, 2008 Updated: January 01, 2010
Reviewer: AMayes Signed 
Date: July 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: Decisons
Thanks for the chapter!
They're in love! Whee! I loved it when Edward pretty much shouted out he loved her. *sigh*
Lovely job!
Summary: "He reached towards me, and in one fluid gesture he tore the front of my shirt down the middle, like a child tearing wrapping paper off a gift. Despite the violence of the action, he had barely touched me. I trembled furiously as I recognized the import of his words, and my hands rose protectively to cover my exposed skin. James had found the surest way to obtain Edward’s vengeance. He would not merely kill me. His plans were much, much worse."
Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Edward, James
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No
Word count: 13957
[Report This] Published: December 10, 2008 Updated: May 20, 2009
Reviewer: AMayes Signed
Date: May 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight
This is great! I'm enjoying the storyline so far. It's different from a lot of fics out there.
I hope Bella and Edward start talking soon, though I understand that she needs some time away to figure things out.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Summary: A long and tiresome journey and a wrongly booked ticket later, Bella Swan finds herself sitting next to renowned actor Edward Cullen and learns that whether flying coach or first class, karma gets her way.
Exerpt:
“Well… that’s embarrassing.” I looked up in the direction of the male voice that was responsible for the comment and nearly died. Nearly. Instead, I shrieked and flung my glass of champagne right in the lap of the owner. I was clearly hallucinating, because the man sitting next to me could not possibly be… I closed my eyes and opened them again. But he was still there a slightly uncomfortable look on his beautiful face as he retrieved my glass from his lap and inspected the damage to his trousers.
“This is a new reaction,” he mumbled all the while I gaped at him and glanced at the magazine checking whether he had jumped out of it. But Edward Cullen was still gazing at me from the page, his eyes hypnotising and in addition the exact - slightly displeased - replica (with perhaps a bit more facial hair, and clothes) was undeniably sitting in the chair next to me.
“I’m so sorry!” I finally managed to croak out when I remembered how to speak. Before I could thoroughly think it through I grabbed a napkin from my backpack and dove to dab his pants. He was not the only one who jumped up as my hand came into contact with his crotch.
“I got it,” he said louder than I had heard him speak so far. For a moment he cast me an exasperated look and I almost felt the need to ensure him I was not trying to feel him up. He held up his hand as a stop sign and snatched the napkin from my hand, still hovering over him. I wasn’t sure whether he was mad or embarrassed. I was too busy trying to sink through my chair in shame.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Word count: 82552
[Report This] Published: March 16, 2009 Updated: January 30, 2010
Reviewer: AMayes Signed
Date: April 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Take off
I think you need to write/post the next chapter. Now! :)
Great start, and I'm looking forward to more!
Reviewer: AMayes Signed
Date: April 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Full House
Whoops! I'm still getting used to Twilighted and I see you did indeed have more chapters up! Goody. I look forward to reading more...
Reviewer: AMayes Signed
Date: April 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: A Bundle of Lilies
Okay, this time I'm at the actual end! Great story so far! I'm really hoping they get a proper date soon! Author's Response: Hi! Glad you enjoyed it so far! :) Thank you
Summary: Bella and Edward have been best friends since high school. One drunken night changes their relationship forever and two friends find there was a lot more hiding below the surface.
Thanks to readergoof for the banner!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, James, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Word count: 24470
[Report This] Published: March 18, 2009 Updated: August 11, 2009
Reviewer: AMayes Signed
Date: May 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - If It Kills Me
I'm ready for some fun as well!
Summary: 
A stalker is trying to get close to Edward Masen, a green-eyed 24 year old concert pianist.
He hires Elite Guardians to keep him safe from the one who is hunting him.
Bella Cullen is the owner/operator of the company. She's also a 110 year old vampire.
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In the MYSTIC AWARDS:
GUARDING EDWARD WON FIRST RUNNER UP IN THE
CUTE CATEGORY:
Story that makes you feel all warm and fuzzy!
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Other Character, Rosalie, Tyler
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 48 Completed: Yes
Word count: 200265
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2009 Updated: August 30, 2010
Reviewer: AMayes Signed
Date: June 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26~~Gifts~~
Edward should definitely go for love Bella for eternity as vampire!
And good for him on resisting Tanya! Not an easy feat, even with Bella's shield, I'm sure!
I'm also really enjoying the realization of Edward's potential gift. That's a great addition to the plot!
Great work, Kathie!! Author's Response: Yeah! Good choice! Also, resisting Tanya is a good thing...
Glad you like his potential gift...I do too! We need a good mind reader... ;)
Hope you had a great vacation!
Kathie
Reviewer: AMayes Signed
Date: May 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~
Ah Kathie, I strive to write like you!
I loved this chapter, it's building the suspense and you do a great job with the stalker's point of view. We can see how unhinged she really is.
Poor Edward, I can't imagine what he would be going through, knowing that a lunatic is after him.
Great update! Author's Response: Sweets...I strive to write like you! Lemons included... ;)
Yes, unhinged...makes YOU scared to be my friend, doesn't it? ;)
Kathie
Reviewer: AMayes Signed
Date: May 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13~~Taken~~
*sigh* Why does Edward always have to be such a gentleman?? :)
I love Jasper, I'm not sure what it is about him, but I love him!
Did I ever mention that I really like you making Edward a concert pianist? I just wanted to say that here.
Loved the chapter! Author's Response: I know! Such a gentleman...sigh...
Jasper...I love him too!
I'm glad you like him as a concert pianist...those long fingers....sigh....
Gosh, I'm BAD...
Thanks AMayes!
Kathie
Reviewer: AMayes Signed
Date: April 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4~~Who is She?~~
I love your story! Keep it up! Author's Response: Thanks so much! You know that I'm going to keep going...LOL!
Kathie
Reviewer: AMayes Signed
Date: April 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5~~Love Letters?~~
Loved the chapter! I liked that Mike and Jessica are sympathetic characters, a bit of a change from most fics! Hope all is alright at their house! Author's Response: Thank you so much...
I just had to write one story where Mike and Jessica weren't the BAD GUYS for a change...LOL, which doesn't mean to say that I haven't enjoyed a bit of Mike bashing that I've read in some stories...!
Ah, their house...uh oh!
Kathie
Reviewer: AMayes Signed
Date: April 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~
*shiver* Very creepy! That girl's got major issues! Not to mention her mother!
Great chapter Kathie, keep them coming! Author's Response: Thanks, AMayes...your name always makes me think: Amazing...which is what YOUR story is! Everyone should go and read her:
Elevators, Strangers and Surprises
While you wait for my next chapter!
Kathie
Reviewer: AMayes Signed
Date: April 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7~~How Fast Can This Baby Go?~~
Great Edward and Emmett bonding! I love their interaction.
Here's hoping everyone is all right! Author's Response: Thanks, Amayes!
I do love Edward and Emmett play time too.
I hope they are all all right too...wait! I know what's coming....LOL!
Kathie
Reviewer: AMayes Signed
Date: April 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8~~Too Close To Home~~
Great chapter! It's fun to read it again! It'd be too mean for anything bad to happen to your version of Jessica! She's sweet.
And I hear you on that half star! Mine went up to a full five and then back down to four and a half!
Here's to a quick update! Author's Response: Thanks Amayes...Yes, this Jessica is a sweet girl. That makes her unique in the Fan Fiction world, doesn't it? LOL
Hurray! I got that last half star!!!!!
Kathie
Reviewer: AMayes Signed
Date: May 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9~~Discoveries~~
Ah the portrait, little does Edward know...at least, I'm assuming that it's Bella. :)
Great chapter as always! I like the little (and large) moments the characters have together.
Also, I want to eat at this hospital with the four/five star chef! Sounds yummy. Author's Response: Thanks, AMayes...I like those little and large moments too.
The food really was good at that hospital. I don't even remember what I ate, but it was good! AND the cafeteria looked like a cute little bistro...and nothing like a HOSPITAL CAFETERIA!
Thanks again!
Kathie
Reviewer: AMayes Signed
Date: May 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10~~On Guard~~
I think I missed this chapter before! I'm not sure how I did that.
Bella's human situation sounded terrible! I'm glad Esme found her and brought her into the family.
Hmm, Bella in the house with Edward...sounds intriguing! Author's Response: Thanks, AMayes...
Yes, Bella in the house with Edward...!!!!
I'm glad that Esme found her too...otherwise my story would not have gone anywhere...LOL!
Thanks again,
Kathie
Reviewer: AMayes Signed
Date: May 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11~~Before the Dawn~~
Mmm...I would stalk Edward too, though in a non-creepy way...I think.
Excellent chapter as per usual! I can see Bella starting to fall for him, even if she doesn't realize it herself.
Great work! Author's Response: I'm glad you would stalk him too, Amayes...we could do it together! Taking turns, you know!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Kathie
Reviewer: AMayes Signed
Date: May 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14~~Epiphany~~
Yay, she loves him! But really, who wouldn't??
You do a great job of writing the creepy mom and daughter duo! Very scary and dangerous! Edward is going to need all the protection that the vampires can offer!
Great update!
Author's Response: Exactly! Who wouldn't love him?
Even Lauren...creepy stalker girl that she is....
LOL!
Thanks for reading AMayes!
Kathie
Reviewer: AMayes Signed
Date: May 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~
Wow, Lauren's mother is all kinds of crazy! Those two need to be locked up and the key thrown away!
I am sad the chapter is over! Bella must be going out of her mind right now! Not to mention the predicament Edward is in...
LOL regarding what your daughter said! I think there was enough blood/trauma in the story!
Great job! Looking forward to more as always. Author's Response: Locked up and the key thrown away! That's one plan.... ;)
I'm glad you thought there was enough blood...ugh!
Thanks for reading and reviewing AMayes (everyone, go check out her story: Elevators, Strangers and Surprises!)
Kathie
Reviewer: AMayes Signed
Date: May 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16~~Interrogation~~
Great chapter as always! I like that Edward is strong! He can handle Mama, I'm sure.
I love Jasper too, he's great and you wrote his POV really well!
Lauren is a real piece of work. Not to mention insane. Whew!
Thanks Kathie! Author's Response: You are very welcome, AMayes!
Edward is strong...I just hope that he CAN handle Mama...
Ah, Jasper...I just love that guy!
Thanks Sweetie!
Kathie
Reviewer: AMayes Signed
Date: May 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~
Edward's hand!
Lorena is about ten times worse than Lauren...or so it seems. I'm sure they're actually equal parts crazy.
Bella needs to get there...soon! Author's Response: Equal Parts CRAZY! But Lauren is DUMB and crazy....I think Mama is worse...SMART(er) and crazy...
Kathie
Reviewer: AMayes Signed
Date: May 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~
I am very glad that Bella found him when she did!
And glad that Lorena got what she deserved! Evil woman...
Edward's poor hand...but Bella and/or Carlisle should be able to make it better!
Great chapter!! Author's Response: Thanks, AMayes!
I think that burning to death in her van was a precursor to what awaited her...LOL!
Hoping they can make his hand better... ;)
Kathie
Reviewer: AMayes Signed
Date: June 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19~~ Later ~~
I loved the reunion! And the fact that Edward isn't afraid even with Bella doing all those superhuman things!
You write the two of them together so well!
And I'm hoping that Edward's hand is all right...he's a pianist, his hands are his living.
Great update! Author's Response: Hey Girl! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing...and the pretty stars too!
Yes, Edward seems to be taking things well...whew!
LOL!
Kathie
Reviewer: AMayes Signed
Date: June 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20~~The First Question~~
Who could possibly resist kissing Edward?
That kiss was great, and makes me want more...
I'm off to the next chapter! Author's Response: Hey Yuri! I missed responding to this one! Probably because I was reading through YOUR story:
Elevators, Strangers and Surprises...
Readers, go check it out...HOT HOT HOT...!!!
Kathie
Reviewer: AMayes Signed
Date: June 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21~~It was time...~~
Wow, that's a beautiful house!
It's too bad they have to give up the business, though I more than understand why!
I'm sure Edward has his suspicions about the Cullens, though perhaps not that they are vampires. I'm looking forward to Bella revealing all so that she doesn't need to be secretive around him anymore.
Great update! Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and the stars, AMayes!
He does have his suspicions!
But he gets ANSWERS in the next chapter!
Kathie
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