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Penname: delilah69 [Contact]
Real name: kristin
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Member Since: February 16, 2010
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Summary:

Rebel Bella has been shipped around the U.S. for years to different foster homes after being placed in Child Protective Services. What will happen when she is placed with uptight Edward and his family? AU/AH/OOC/adult language and lemons ensue!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 131791
[Report This] Published: April 10, 2010 Updated: July 06, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Agent J

im not surprised at all, so were the fbi looking to have someone blend in and go to school with them and will jake be interested in bella? i hope not!



Author's Response: yes, jake will go to school with them, and he won't cause too much grief for ExB... but that's all i'll say ::wink:: thanks so much for the review, babes!! ;)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: November 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Confession

so will it eventually kill edward? i was right about the brain tumor! will bella be ok? how about edward?



Author's Response: bella and edward will work through this just like everything else. and yes, you guessed correctly! we will find out more about his diagnosis and prognosis next chapter. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Help

i think that he either raped her to tried to. he is a sick freak, and i hope that he gets his in the end!



Author's Response: you are on the right track, unfortunately. but don't you fear... james will definitely get his in the end! thanks for the review!!! ;)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: September 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Unexpected

who is this dude?! and what does he think hes doing? and where are the others?!



Author's Response: all very good questions. some we shall know the answers to in the next chapter, others will be down the road. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: September 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Escaped

im sure that jake is just fine! and i wonder if james has a bounty out on bella and riley just wanted to cash in. i think that aro is really a bad guy!



Author's Response: we'll find out about jake and riley next chapter. you have some interesting theories about the story. thanks for sharing! and thanks for reading and reviewing!! ;)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Unbelievable

im sure that riley is still out there! like those scary movies where that bad guy comes out for one more scare!



Author's Response: oooh, yeah. i like that description! and i think you're right, unfortunately. thanks so much for the review!! ;)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: November 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Information

i think that maybe edward might have been a foster kid too and carlisle and esme adopted him? is whatever is wrong with edward life threatening? will it cause him to die



Author's Response: edward's connection to tanya and irina will be described very shortly. and all i'll say about edward's secret is that i'm all for the HEA! ::wink:: take that as you will. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: December 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Regret

do you think that bella and emmet will be upset that the cullens have known all along who the people who saved them are?



Author's Response: great question!! i'm not sure if upset is the right term, though. we will explore that next chapter. it's more coincidence than anything else, really. thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: December 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Emotions

i hope that edward can be helped and made healthy again! and will bella and emmet be ok? or will it set them back?



Author's Response: edward has some of the best pediatric neurosurgeons, so he'll do great. and bella and emmett have made tremendous progress in their recovery. their acceptance of tanya and irina shows just how far they've come. not too much setting back for them at this point. thanks for the review!! ;)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: January 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Broken

i hope everything goes well for edward! and that maybe we can get some laughs when hes doped up! who was in their house!? will they catch whoever it is? i hope so!!



Author's Response: haha!! yes, a dopey edward would be hilarious! and the ?POV will be revealed soon. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: March 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Safe

it could have been worse! im glad that everyone else is ok!!



Author's Response: you're correct. it definitely could have been worse. more info to come! thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Complications

i hope that they are all going to be ok!!! i hope edward will be ok!



Author's Response: hang in there!! info coming shortly. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Fallout

i don't know about anyone else, but im on the edge of my seat!! bella is freaking awesome! i think that james deserved what he got! and poor alilce and emmet! i hope they'll be ok!! will anyone save them!?



Author's Response: help is on the way!! bella is totally awesome! hang in there! thanks for reading and reviewing!! ;)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Release

im glad its over and they are finally free!



Author's Response: yep, finally free of the bad guys... now for the HEA! stay tuned for the epi! thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Epilogue: Full Circle

im so sad that the story is over, but what a wild ride!! im so happy for all of them!! they deserved it!! wonderful!!! well done!



Author's Response: i'm sad, too, but they all got their HEAs. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

 
Summary:

Part of the Imprinting: The Mating Imperative Series, this is the imprint story that will rock the pack AND you!

If you have not yet read Wolf Girls 101, then you really need to do that. Like, now.

If you are familiar with the series, then this is the story that had you, my wonderful readers, sending me !!!!s galore.

New banner by evieeden!

Excerpt from Chapter Four:

To my surprise, Bella Call chuckled and claimed one of her children from Embry's arms. "You are so gonna need my help, Leah. Are you going to phase for him?"

"No!"

What was it with everyone trying to get me naked and furry in front of Charlie Swan?

 


Categories: AU Characters: Leah
Challenges:
Series: Imprinting: The Mating Imperative, Leah in Love
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 25451
[Report This] Published: April 10, 2010 Updated: July 01, 2010


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Trying It On For Size

they kissed! finally! it was so wonderful! i loved it! they are so cute!



Author's Response:

Good morning, delilah69!

Yes! I did promise a kiss, didn't I? ;-)

Glad it didn't disappoint.  I think they're quite cute myself!

Thanks for reading!

LJ

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: You. Did. Not.

i love this! i can't wait to hear what cheif swan thinks of all this! its soooo good!



Author's Response:

Good afternoon, delilah69!

Thanks! I am so glad you're enjoying this pairing!

Charlie will have quite a few things to say that Leah WILL hear directly or indirectly and then he'll get his say at the end. Promise.

Thanks for reading!

LJ

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Tell and Kiss

that is so exciting! i hope that charlie isn't too mad at bella, and that charlie will give leah a chance!



Author's Response:

Good morning, delilah69!

Charlie's reaction is forthcoming, I promise. He has to take time to talk to his daughter....later.  Our favorite Forks Police Chief has a few things to do before he's altogether committing himself, one way or another, so give him a little time. ;-)

Thank you for reading!

LJ

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Reaction

leah is so great! i really am happy charlie didn't shoot her! that wouldve sucked!! how will charlie take to all of this? i hope that he takes it as well as bella did!



Author's Response:

Good morning, delilah69!

I'm so glad you like Leah. :)  Yeah, I've never had an imprint whose instinct it was to go for a firearm -- thought that might be interesting. Charlie? Well, he's a cop, remember. He is going to investigate, like he said, and come to his own decision.

We'll hear from him in the last chapter of this story. Not too far away, now.

Thanks for reading!

LJ

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Can't Comfort by Remote Control!

i love leah attitude and the fact that shes so angry still, but she learning new things. and charlie is too!



Author's Response:

Good afternoon, delilah69!

I'm so relieved you still see her inherent temper and "issues" even while she's learning and trying to improve. :)

 

Charlie IS learning. lol Too true!

 

Thanks for reading!

LJ

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: That's My Girl.

im so happy that they got their happy ending! so sweet! and exciting! loved it!



Author's Response:

Good morning, delilah69!

Thank you! I was so pleased for them my own self. :)

Glad it met with your approval.

Thank you so much for reading and all of your reviews!

LJ

 
At Your Own Risk by xrxdanixrx Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 531]
Summary:

Everyone at school knows the infamous, rebellious Bella Swan, even straight-laced Edward. But who is she really, apart from the rumors? Edward finds himself stumbling down a dark path trying to understand her.  But in the end, will it be worth it?

ALL EPOV, OOC, Dark themes, Crude Language

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 194783
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2010 Updated: October 11, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

i think that bella wills top him and convince everyone else that he did jump and that hes cool! whats happening with jake and bella?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

what is going on with bella? will she ever care about what jake is doing? whats gonna happen with tanya? i think that jasper deserves to be yelled at! hes the golden boy after all.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: September 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

so how much trouble is edward in? i knew that would happen! it was murphy's law!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

i hope that edward doesn't completely take the easy way out! and whats up with bella? what does tanya want? its over. i hope that carlisle and esme don't freak when they see the car edward traded for!

 




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