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Penname: delilah69 [ Contact]
Real name: kristin
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Member Since: February 16, 2010
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Summary: Do you believe in fate and that two people can really be made for each other?
Bella moves with her family to a new town and meets a boy at school: Edward. While high school is the start of their passionate relationship, they still have a lot of growing up to do, and Edward breaks Bella’s heart, only to have them reunite in their twenties. This time Edward is the one left reeling from the break-up. Will a strange twist of fate bring them back together in their thirties? Can they finally have a chance at a future… and will it be together?

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: No
Word count: 154335
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2010 Updated: November 07, 2011
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: March 16, 2011
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - New Beginnings
im surprised that it took so long for bella to leave that jerk!! and poor edward! i hope that they both get their heads ut f their butts and do something!!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: January 11, 2011
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - When You Wish Upon a Star
will this birthday be bringing with it another kind of surprise? like the small, takes nine months to get here kind of surprise and edward freaks so bella runs? Author's Response: Oh my! Your review made me laugh and scratch my head at the same time. LOL! I would love to answer this for you, but somehow I think you might like to read the next chapter instead. It's ready to post, so it should be up soon. I really hope you like it. You'll have to let me know what you think. ;)
Thanks for the review, bb! XOXO!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Getting Acquainted
im worried about where this is going with royce and rose! will he hurt her? will the swans moving again? how will bella and edward get along? Author's Response: I love stories that move people. I have to admit, I like a little bit of angst and heartache in the stories that I read. I don't mind going to some darker places. I think it makes the end of the story even better when there is a happily ever after. I can't tell you too much about what is going to happen, but no one is going to experience the type of physical pain and trauma that Rosalie experienced in the real books. This is definitely not that kind of story. I don't know if that answers your question 100%, but hopefully it eases your mind some.
Will the Swans move again? Hmmm... The story is going to span three decades. It's possible. ;)
Bella and Edward will bond. You will have to stick with me to find out where their relationship goes.
Thank you for the questions and the review! I love that you're thinking about the story and hope you continue to read and reply. =)
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Beach Trip Fiasco
i think that royce really needs help. i mean he needs love, but at the same time he doesn't want to give up control. and whats up with edward? does he just not want to give in to bella because hes worried that he'll mess her and whatever they have together? Author's Response: Royce has some familial drama and issues he needs to deal with. He also needs a swift kick in the ass, but I'm not so sure that's gonna happen anytime soon. Edward is a whole other story. He has a lot going on as well. We just might not know what all that entails.
Thanks for the review, bb! Next chapter should go up later today.
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 (First Date)
if edward likes her so much why does he hurt her later? why would he give up on her? Author's Response: That's the million dollar question, bb! Does he give up on her? Only time will tell what really happens... ;-)
Thanks for reviewing, bb! I hope you stick with the story. =]
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Declarations
so exciting! i hope that whatever happens isn't too bad! Author's Response: Hey, sweets! Yes, young love is exciting. I can't tell you too much, but just know that I believe in happily ever afters! A little bit of angst and heartache always makes the final outcome that much better, in my opinion. I'll try not to be too hard on you, though! ;) Thanks for continuing to read and review! I truly love that. :D See you on Friday!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - A Busy Night
will royce end up hurting rose? and what about edward and bella? why would he leave her if he loves her? i can't wait to see where you take this magic carpet ride! Author's Response: I love that you are asking questions and wanting to know more. I don't know if you can tell just yet, but Royce has some issues. We will learn more about him as we go. As far as Edward and Bella, they are getting closer. Why does he leave her? Hmmm... that's the million dollar question. He may have some demons in his closet, as well. You'll have to stick with me to find out. ;-)
Thanks for the review! They always make me smile!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Too Much
so why exactly does edward not want to be with bella? is it something to do with royce? could it be that royce and edward have a bet going about who is gonna nail the girl first and thats how he leaves her with a broken heart? that would be sad and i would beat him to a pulp! Author's Response: Hi, bb!
Sorry for the late reply. I've been busy with the next installment. It was sent off to the beta today, so hopefully it will post soon. There's a teaser on my blog. Link posted below.
The questions you are asking are all valid, but Edward has me sworn to secrecy and I can't divulge too much just yet. All will be answered in due time. I promise. :D Thanks for eading and revieing, though. It makes me smile.
Blog link: http://notinforks.blogspot.com/ Come follow me. There's all kinds of cool stuff to check out.
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Ohh...!
what is he hiding? do his friends know? will he tell bella soon? will he ditch her soon? Author's Response: Edward's got some cobwebs in his closet. His friends know a lot about him, but they might not know everything. ;-) As for the ditching, he leaves soon. It's not necessarily to just Bella that he "ditches", though. Are you even more confused now than ever. Sorry, bb! LOL! I can't give too much away though.
I'm working on Chapter 10 now, so hopefully it won't be that long of a wait. We shall see. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
XO, Dinx
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Reconnecting
i wonder what it is that chases bella away? he seems xcited to get back together with her. i wonder if hes just setting himself up for heartbreak Author's Response: Ah, yes! So many questions. I promise they will all be answered as the story continues to unfold. Edward is definitely intent on getting her back. You'll just have to wait and see how it all plays out. ;-) Karma can be a bitch sometimes. Just know that I have a plan and everything will be as it should... in due time.
The next chapter is out with my pre-readers. Here's a little taste to get you by until it posts:
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We continued chatting and drinking, and before we knew it, we’d finished off two bottles of wine and it was after three in the morning.
We were still on my couch, sitting sideways and facing each other. She had her head leaning on the back of it and she was looking in my eyes. The wine had me feeling braver than I had when we’d first arrived. Our conversation was great and we were so caught up in remembering the good times we had together. It was so easy to fall back into the familiarity and comfort of just being with her, even though it had been almost six goddamn years. I couldn’t resist. I had to let her know.
“What are you smiling about?” she asked me.
“You,” I replied, gently running the backs of my fingers down the side of her face.
“Me? What about me?” She smiled, gazing at me with hooded lids.
“How beautiful you are… how it’s so easy to talk to you… how much I really want to kiss you right now,” I replied, looking from her eyes to her lips.
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Eek! I hope you liked it! :D Thanks for reviewing, bb!
XO, Dinx
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: September 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Homecoming
i hope that she's dating someone and that he feels how she felt! did she wait for him all this time? Author's Response: You might be surprised at how Edward feels... about a lot of things. They have to make a reconnection, so I'm not promising that she's taken, but she definitely hasn't been waiting around for him. ;-)
Thanks for continuing to read and review, sweets. We didn't make it past 100 reviews this time, but maybe with the next update!
XO,
Dinx
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: November 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Surprises
so bella was a virgin? is edward gonna freak!? i bet he is! he just took her virginity. is this why she leaves? he freaks out about her being a virgin? or maybe something is made because of their evening together? and so bella runs? Author's Response: Maybe. Does that answer your questions? LOL! I can't tell you too much now or you won't want to keep reading. I am glad that you're excited about the story, though. This makes me so happy to hear as the writer. :D
Thanks so much for always reviewing. I really appreciate it. XO!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: January 24, 2011
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - What Goes Around Comes Around
poor edward! why did she just freak out and run away? is that the end? they are done? and then they meet again later right? is she gonna be pregnant or something?
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 24, 2011
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Shattered
poor edward!! what the hell was bella thinking?! and to think that he might wait 10 years for her?! will he go after her? and 10 years!? they'll be old by then!! Author's Response: Sorry I've been fail at review replies. I'm trying to get caught up now.
Yes, it will be 10 years before they see each other again. I know, it's a long time. However, sometimes that's just how things work out. I promise you that they won't be OLD. LOL! They'll be older, but they'll still be young and energetic. Trust me. They'll have lots of lost time to make up for. ;) I hope you stick with me. The next chapter should post soon. It's already been submitted.
Thanks for the review, bb!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 24, 2011
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Shattered
poor edward!! what the hell was bella thinking?! and to think that he might wait 10 years for her?! will he go after her? and 10 years!? they'll be old by then!! im totally gonna puke! its so sad! i feel so sad for him and i hate her! Author's Response: Ouch! I hope you forgive her. I think she might redeem herself. I hope, at least. I'll cross my fingers. LOL!
Thanks for reviewing, bb! :)
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 13, 2011
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - The Long Road Home
does edward know that jake was a jerk to bella? that shes divorced now? and i hope that they can get over past hurts and be happy! Author's Response: Funny that you should ask those questions. You’ll get answers to those and a lot more in the next chapter. I really hope you like it. You’ll have to let me know…
I want to say I’ve been completely fail at review replies here, and even more fail at posting. I truly apologize for that. Not sure what my hang up has been, but for some reason it’s been really hard to stay focused at Twilighted. It’s kind of crazy, because this used to be the only site I read on. Now, I barely ever do. Maybe it’s because of the lengthy process to post. Dunno. *shrugs* That being said, I’ve sent the new chapter in to be posted, but it’s been up on Fanfiction for a while. Not sure if you read over there, but if so, you can catch Chapter 25, titled Resolutions, now. Otherwise, you can wait until it posts here.
That being said, thank you so much for all of your support with this story. Your kind words and thoughts mean so much. It makes may day hearing what you guys think. XOXO!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 17, 2011
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Resolutions
i think that with all the verbal abuse jake doles out that bella should move to be with edward! he is so much better for the both of them anyway! i hope that things work out this time around!!! they will right? Author's Response: Yes, if I can't tell you anything else, I can at least promise you that. Things will definitely work out for them this time. :)
Thanks for the review, bb! :)
Summary: 
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Edward struggles to come to grips with his new life in Forks and a father he’s just met for the first time. He's unfamiliar with the easy going lifestyle he's been thrust into with the sudden death of his mom and step-father. Gone are the strict rules filled with harsh discipline and constant demands for perfection on the piano.
He finds a reason to fight his past demons when he meets a dark haired beauty that captures his heart. But then, his whole world is in jeopardy when a stalker threatens Bella and tries to destroy everything Edward now holds dear. LEMONS
"Our being is subject to all the chances of life." Katherine Anne Porter
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No
Word count: 54930
[Report This] Published: April 09, 2010 Updated: December 29, 2010
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 31, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
dang i had a feeling that aro would pull something like that! will he try to hurt bella? will he come after her? i hope that edward can keep her safe!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: December 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
i would tell him that emmet stopped by and that the girls wanted a tour and emmet said he needed a drink and that he told him where the kitchen was and that he didn't drink anything, or he could be honest and tell his dad?
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
i hope that if edward does follow her that he'll be able to save her from anything bad!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
i love to cook chicken scalopini. and alfredo sauce and pasta. its so good. i wonder when aro will make his move?
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
i don't think that they'll have sex, but she really needs to tell her dad! if she doesn't something worse could happen!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
man, bella should've gone first thing that morning to tell her dad! that guy will never give up till he hurts or kills bella! i hope that charlie can keep her safe!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
he called carlisle dad! and the cullen's are pissed at bella, just fabulous! they won't try to stop edward from seeing bella, will they? i hope not!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
will the cullens keep bella away from edward? how much trouble bella be in?
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