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Penname: delilah69 [Contact]
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At Your Own Risk by xrxdanixrx Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 531]
Summary:

Everyone at school knows the infamous, rebellious Bella Swan, even straight-laced Edward. But who is she really, apart from the rumors? Edward finds himself stumbling down a dark path trying to understand her.  But in the end, will it be worth it?

ALL EPOV, OOC, Dark themes, Crude Language

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 194783
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2010 Updated: October 12, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

i hope that edward can find balance and that bella tells him what is going on with her? is she in trouble? why won't carlisle back the eff off?! will edward ever be able to be friends with the old crew again? like i said balance...

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

i hope that they don't catch them for wrecking that stupid car! and i feel so bad for bella! i wonder if it was carlisle who hurt bella?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: January 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

i had a feeling that something like that was going to happen! i hope that edward does get revenge!! they deserve it!!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: November 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

i have a funny feeling that edward is going to either screw lauren, or try to attack jake!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

oh bad things are headed edward's way aren't they?! and why do esme and carlisle keep going to seattle? is carlisle dying from cancer? cause that would be just super!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: November 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

why do i have a funny feeling that bella is the bar tender? did she really break up with jake? is the baby tanyas carrying someone from the rez?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

i feel so bad for edward! and are we gonna find out whats going on with bella soon? and i think that things are gonna get hairy with tanya and edward here soon.



Author's Response:

Hi! We'll find out a little about Bella, but if we found out everything, the story would be over. Haha. All in due time though. :-)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

i think that something should happen to jasper and everyone ignores edward for a while and he gets let off the hook. maybe he could save jasper and look wonderful?



Author's Response:

lol. This isn't the Jasper Edward story, otherwise maybe. Jasper and Edward have an interesting relationship that'll be developed/explained more later, but right now, it's pretty black and white that Edward resents him. As for Edward saving Jasper...no. Haha.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

so ella really did get in trouble in a bar in port angeles? that sucks for her! when will tanya be back and when will edward not be in trouble anymore? and what is going on with bella?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

oh man i wonder when edward will realize hes been high for a couple of hours? i hope that bella keeps her promise and is at least human to edward!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

so who was it that outside of edward's class room? jasper? rose? one of the la push guys? i really hope that edward gets rid of tanya. and that whatever jasper and carlisle are planning that it falls apart and they don't take money from edward for his spoiled 'brother'!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

so not all that glitters in the cullen household is gold? i really hope that carlisle doesn't get away with whatever hes trying to do! and i hope that esme is pro-edward! and why is bella making an effort now?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

cute tatoos! im sure when his parents find out what he did they are going to freak! when is edward going to get his crap together?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: December 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

im sure that thomas was they guy that hrut her!! will tanya keep in contact with bella, will bella stop freaing out and let edward in? will he ever be friends with the old crew again?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

that was too hawt! i hope that tanya cheated first!! and that's why rose doesn't want to hear anymore. what will edward do?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

so tanya was possibly attacked in italy? and she's feeling bad? why doesn't she just break up with edward then?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: September 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

who was jake talking to? was it bella? or was it tanya? who hurt her? and what is going on with edward's dad? what a douche!?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: September 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

im still curious what happened to tanya? and i think that if emmet heard about edward and bella, im sure that tanya has heard the rumors too and tats why she came on so strong after their date! but what does bella want from edward?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: September 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

i hope that edward can figure out whats up with bella soon! and what was going on with tanya?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: November 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

poor edward! i hope that he gets a car back! and that his record stays clean!! and bella?! shes still just a kid and shes engaged to black?! wtf?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: December 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

so who was it that hurt her? was it someone like carlisle? that wouldn't surprise me! and then poor bella and jakes leg. i alomost feel bad for him. i hope that meeting the chief isn't too bad!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

that poor baby! maybe he passed away cause the lady caring for him had an accident? and they both passed away in the accident? i hope that edward can give her the support shes going to need!

 
Summary:

 

Told in a series of communiqués, Bella recovers and heals herself from the Cullens’ influence by living her life, not as if they never existed, but as one chapter from her human life.

"You told me that you would never change me, but it’s too late, Edward. I was changed from the minute our eyes met."

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Jacob, Jessica, Lauren, Renee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 32688
[Report This] Published: April 18, 2010 Updated: October 17, 2010


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25: Happy Home

who burned down the cullen mansion? i love that bella and jake got to be happy after all of that and that they had a happy and full life together!



Author's Response:

Were all of your questions answered? I'm glad that you love the ending. I do too.

Thanks for reviewing.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue: Sleep

i feel so bad for edward! if he had come back there might have never been a fmily for her. i wish that he could get another chance to see her, in the next life, i feel so bad for her. poor thing!



Author's Response:

Edward brought it upon himself, really. I think Bella had her happy ending; love, family, career...

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

 

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: September 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: So Like a Rose

will the cullen's ever see the letters? will they try to find her? do they even care anymore?



Author's Response:

You'll have to wait and see...

 

Thanks for reviewing!

 




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