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Penname: delilah69 [Contact]
Real name: kristin
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Member Since: February 16, 2010
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Summary:

Rebel Bella has been shipped around the U.S. for years to different foster homes after being placed in Child Protective Services. What will happen when she is placed with uptight Edward and his family? AU/AH/OOC/adult language and lemons ensue!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 131791
[Report This] Published: April 10, 2010 Updated: July 07, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Epilogue: Full Circle

im so sad that the story is over, but what a wild ride!! im so happy for all of them!! they deserved it!! wonderful!!! well done!



Author's Response: i'm sad, too, but they all got their HEAs. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

 
Summary:

Part of the Imprinting: The Mating Imperative Series, this is the imprint story that will rock the pack AND you!

If you have not yet read Wolf Girls 101, then you really need to do that. Like, now.

If you are familiar with the series, then this is the story that had you, my wonderful readers, sending me !!!!s galore.

New banner by evieeden!

Excerpt from Chapter Four:

To my surprise, Bella Call chuckled and claimed one of her children from Embry's arms. "You are so gonna need my help, Leah. Are you going to phase for him?"

"No!"

What was it with everyone trying to get me naked and furry in front of Charlie Swan?

 


Categories: AU Characters: Leah
Challenges:
Series: Imprinting: The Mating Imperative, Leah in Love
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 25451
[Report This] Published: April 10, 2010 Updated: July 01, 2010


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Trying It On For Size

they kissed! finally! it was so wonderful! i loved it! they are so cute!



Author's Response:

Good morning, delilah69!

Yes! I did promise a kiss, didn't I? ;-)

Glad it didn't disappoint.  I think they're quite cute myself!

Thanks for reading!

LJ

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: You. Did. Not.

i love this! i can't wait to hear what cheif swan thinks of all this! its soooo good!



Author's Response:

Good afternoon, delilah69!

Thanks! I am so glad you're enjoying this pairing!

Charlie will have quite a few things to say that Leah WILL hear directly or indirectly and then he'll get his say at the end. Promise.

Thanks for reading!

LJ

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Tell and Kiss

that is so exciting! i hope that charlie isn't too mad at bella, and that charlie will give leah a chance!



Author's Response:

Good morning, delilah69!

Charlie's reaction is forthcoming, I promise. He has to take time to talk to his daughter....later.  Our favorite Forks Police Chief has a few things to do before he's altogether committing himself, one way or another, so give him a little time. ;-)

Thank you for reading!

LJ

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Reaction

leah is so great! i really am happy charlie didn't shoot her! that wouldve sucked!! how will charlie take to all of this? i hope that he takes it as well as bella did!



Author's Response:

Good morning, delilah69!

I'm so glad you like Leah. :)  Yeah, I've never had an imprint whose instinct it was to go for a firearm -- thought that might be interesting. Charlie? Well, he's a cop, remember. He is going to investigate, like he said, and come to his own decision.

We'll hear from him in the last chapter of this story. Not too far away, now.

Thanks for reading!

LJ

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Can't Comfort by Remote Control!

i love leah attitude and the fact that shes so angry still, but she learning new things. and charlie is too!



Author's Response:

Good afternoon, delilah69!

I'm so relieved you still see her inherent temper and "issues" even while she's learning and trying to improve. :)

 

Charlie IS learning. lol Too true!

 

Thanks for reading!

LJ

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: That's My Girl.

im so happy that they got their happy ending! so sweet! and exciting! loved it!



Author's Response:

Good morning, delilah69!

Thank you! I was so pleased for them my own self. :)

Glad it met with your approval.

Thank you so much for reading and all of your reviews!

LJ

 
At Your Own Risk by xrxdanixrx Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 531]
Summary:

Everyone at school knows the infamous, rebellious Bella Swan, even straight-laced Edward. But who is she really, apart from the rumors? Edward finds himself stumbling down a dark path trying to understand her.  But in the end, will it be worth it?

ALL EPOV, OOC, Dark themes, Crude Language

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 194783
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2010 Updated: October 12, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

i think that bella wills top him and convince everyone else that he did jump and that hes cool! whats happening with jake and bella?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

what is going on with bella? will she ever care about what jake is doing? whats gonna happen with tanya? i think that jasper deserves to be yelled at! hes the golden boy after all.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: September 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

so how much trouble is edward in? i knew that would happen! it was murphy's law!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

i hope that edward doesn't completely take the easy way out! and whats up with bella? what does tanya want? its over. i hope that carlisle and esme don't freak when they see the car edward traded for!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

i hope that edward can find balance and that bella tells him what is going on with her? is she in trouble? why won't carlisle back the eff off?! will edward ever be able to be friends with the old crew again? like i said balance...

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

i hope that they don't catch them for wrecking that stupid car! and i feel so bad for bella! i wonder if it was carlisle who hurt bella?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: January 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

i had a feeling that something like that was going to happen! i hope that edward does get revenge!! they deserve it!!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: November 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

i have a funny feeling that edward is going to either screw lauren, or try to attack jake!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

oh bad things are headed edward's way aren't they?! and why do esme and carlisle keep going to seattle? is carlisle dying from cancer? cause that would be just super!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: November 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

why do i have a funny feeling that bella is the bar tender? did she really break up with jake? is the baby tanyas carrying someone from the rez?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

i feel so bad for edward! and are we gonna find out whats going on with bella soon? and i think that things are gonna get hairy with tanya and edward here soon.



Author's Response:

Hi! We'll find out a little about Bella, but if we found out everything, the story would be over. Haha. All in due time though. :-)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

i think that something should happen to jasper and everyone ignores edward for a while and he gets let off the hook. maybe he could save jasper and look wonderful?



Author's Response:

lol. This isn't the Jasper Edward story, otherwise maybe. Jasper and Edward have an interesting relationship that'll be developed/explained more later, but right now, it's pretty black and white that Edward resents him. As for Edward saving Jasper...no. Haha.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

so ella really did get in trouble in a bar in port angeles? that sucks for her! when will tanya be back and when will edward not be in trouble anymore? and what is going on with bella?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

oh man i wonder when edward will realize hes been high for a couple of hours? i hope that bella keeps her promise and is at least human to edward!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

so who was it that outside of edward's class room? jasper? rose? one of the la push guys? i really hope that edward gets rid of tanya. and that whatever jasper and carlisle are planning that it falls apart and they don't take money from edward for his spoiled 'brother'!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

so not all that glitters in the cullen household is gold? i really hope that carlisle doesn't get away with whatever hes trying to do! and i hope that esme is pro-edward! and why is bella making an effort now?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

cute tatoos! im sure when his parents find out what he did they are going to freak! when is edward going to get his crap together?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: December 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

im sure that thomas was they guy that hrut her!! will tanya keep in contact with bella, will bella stop freaing out and let edward in? will he ever be friends with the old crew again?

 




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