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Penname: delilah69 [Contact]
Real name: kristin
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Member Since: February 16, 2010
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Summary:

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Bella meets Edward while she is a pre-kindergartener, and Edward becomes her best friend.  When Bella’s life is in danger, Edward is forced to leave to prevent her death.  As Bella grows older, Edward is forgotten.

A new family moves to Forks at the start of Bella’s senior year and changes Bella’s life forever.  What the mind forgets, the heart will always remember.


Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 69283
[Report This] Published: March 12, 2010 Updated: December 20, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Right Where It Belongs

so victoria and james are hunting and waiting and hunting bella. they have been for years and i wonder what will happen when they try to eat her again?



Author's Response:

Excellent observation, and that IS the question!!!  They are definitely not finished with their eeeeeeeeeevil plans...

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Secrets Are Sinister

so maybe jake has phased and and he and leah will end up together! that would be cute! im glad that james didn't eat anyone yet! you are a sneaky one!



Author's Response:

I plead the fifth...

(But I'm glad I had everyone convinced that Lauren and Jessica had become dinner and dessert...)

;-)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Protège Moi

poor frusterated bella, and repressed edward! i hope that he doesn't do the i hate myself emo crap for too long!



Author's Response:

Not for too long!!!  I can't stand too much angst... I'll have to sick Alice on him!  ;-)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Two Steps Back

i really  hope that he quits being a baby and nuts up and just kisses the girl!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Somewhere Only We Know

good luck on your job! and i loved that bella finally remembered! will she ask to be with him and the family forever? how will they react now that she knows what they are?



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the well-wishes on my new job! 

Yes, I have had most of Chapter 13 written for a long time now, and couldn't wait to post it!!!

Will she ask to be made a vampire?  Stay tuned...

They already consider her family.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Death and Destruction

so, they were able to save bella from james. i hope that the others are able to catch victoria! but edward won't chane bella? i hope that she can change his mind!  i mean whats the point in continuing a relationship if youknow it's going no where?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Dead Man's Party

i hope that edward gives bella what she wants!!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: September 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: All My Senses

so will edward change her? or will the whole soul thing get in the way?



Author's Response:

Edward has finally realized that his soul is still intact, it just took a lot of encouragement from Alice, Jake, and his interactions with Bella to come to the realiztion.  He definitely plans on changing her, they just have some negotiating to do on the terms and conditions of said change...

 
Summary:

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What happens when two separate souls find each other when they aren't looking? Will Bella be able to overcome all that has happened to her and learn to trust fate and love again?

Thank you to annamorphos for the awesome banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 52529
[Report This] Published: March 12, 2010 Updated: September 16, 2010


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

so was there another person in her room that night? who was it? do they want to hurt her? and will edward help bella to heal so that she can live on? was she pregnant when the accident happened?



Author's Response:

Sometimes it is so hard for me as an author to just not gush out everything you are asking, because I leave the same types of reviews.  There is much that will come clear in the next chapter, which I hope to have up this week sometime.  Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

so was she pregnant with twins? and does she think its her fault that they died and jake? i feel so bad for her to carry around all this guilt! i hope that she tries again too!



Author's Response:

Bella carries a great amount of guilt, which is why it is so hard for her to move on.  There are also underlying factors that you will find out about soon.  Thank you so much foreading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

so we was pregnant with twins? is she in denial, or one of the other stages of grief? i don't know if i would even be able continue living. i hope edward can help her!



Author's Response:

She isn't in denial, but is definitely grieving and feels a terrible amount of guilt.  She lost everything she knew, Edward is already helping her.  Thank you so much for reading and leaving me a review :)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: September 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

they are becoming closer now! i love it! and she told her story to him. i hope that they can help each other!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  things are hopefully going to pick up, as long as they let it.  haha  Thanks for reading and leaving me a review!

 
Summary:

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Bella Swan witnesses a crime and is unwillingly and unexpectedly thrown in to the world of The Mob.

What happens when things quickly spiral out of control and before long she meets the boss, Mr. Masen?

Will Bella stick with her instincts? Will she fight or flight?

AH/ Mobward :)

Rated NC-17 for the obvious reasons.

Thanks to MissTwilightSweden for the amazing banner :)


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 25035
[Report This] Published: March 15, 2010 Updated: June 15, 2010


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

i think that bella should go on strike! maybe she shouldn't eat for a while? and when she's too sick to move then they can take care of her. won't her family or firends notice that shes gone? who will save her?



Author's Response:

Hi :)

Thank you so much for your review.

Have you read the next chapter? Lol...I think you'll be suprised.

Her family and friends come in to the story a little later but this Bella is a bit of a recluse so her friends and family don't think anything bad if they don't hear from her for a few weeks. Plus, remember in chapter one when she told Angela she was going away for a while?

As for who will save her?...You'll have to wait and see :)

Thanks again xoxo

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

i can't wait to hear what edward does about this?! will emet be in trouble for not paying attention? is edward interested in her?



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review :)

The next chapter has been validated (I'm a bit behind on replying to reviews) so all your questions will be answered soon enough :)

It is a Bella/Edward story, keep that in mind :)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

im excited to hear what edward is thinking. however, what did bella do that made christine and jane so upset?

 
Summary:

After Jasper’s attack on Bella during her birthday party, he leaves the Cullens and sets out to find a way to get his bloodlust problem under control.  Meanwhile, the Cullens leave Forks. Bella is alone and vulnerable.  When Victoria comes for her, Jasper is the only one she can reach for help.  

 

For every action, there is an equal and opposite reaction.  Jasper and Bella find that there are consequences, even for acts of redemption. 

 

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Amazing banner by ReachingAsIFall.  Thanks so much! 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 29507
[Report This] Published: March 15, 2010 Updated: July 14, 2010


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Soul Proprietor

im sure that alice has seen all of this. is that the real reason that she left and told jasper to stay away from bella/who will be the one for edward? and will alice find happiness with someone else?

 
Summary:

Sequel to Blackout. Bella has experienced an unexpected heartache and returns to Charlie's farm hoping to move on with her life and is met with a reunion that she never could have anticipated.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 55802
[Report This] Published: March 26, 2010 Updated: November 01, 2010


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: November 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: The End

im so happy that it all ended so well! i feel for rose, but at the same time she makes the greatest adult friend to the kids!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: She Thinks My Tractor's Sexy

well, bella hurtherself, what was she supposed to do? besides im sure that edward will protect her!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Spin the Bottle

i hope that edward wins! maybe jason isn't really a good guy? i hope that they can work it out and get back together!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Miss Me

i wonder if she's too late. now that he's seen her and she looked happy, but he can't see her on the inside. i hope that jason takes it ok when she dumps him. will edward have her back?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Stormy Reunion

i hope that they can fix up everything and get back on track! its worth working for!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Swan's Sweet Ass Barn-Raiser

they are so cute! i just wonder what edward's planning?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Dr. Phil's Therapy Babble Bullshit

yeah dr phil freaks me out! the only time i have ever cared about anything dr phil was a joke on scrubs! he is an idiot! and i agree with the whole angry sex, works for me and my hubby!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: September 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Non-Plan Plan

man edward is such an idiot!!! she'll be lost to him forever now.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: September 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Realize

why do i have a horrible feeling that he might have picked up a friend on the way to his place? and their timing really sucks balls!

 




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