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Penname: delilah69 [Contact]
Real name: kristin
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Member Since: February 16, 2010
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Summary:

When faced with a betrayal that could tear them apart, Edward and Bella must put their faith in the healing power of love. WARNING: this story deals with rape and its aftermath. 

Hurt/Comfort/Romance, ExB

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Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: No Word count: 165869
[Report This] Published: March 04, 2010 Updated: October 06, 2013


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

im glad that  they are working together now! it took them  long enough! will things be easier for them now?



Author's Response:

Yes, they are definitely heading in the right direction now. Everything will get better with each chapter! Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! 

 
Bitter Edge by ginginlee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 210]
Summary:

 

Edward and Bella have been best friends since they were children.  As teenagers, they both desire to further their relationship, but Bella's secretive home-life is keeping them apart.  What's really going on behind closed doors?  And can Edward save her?

 

 

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 88026
[Report This] Published: March 07, 2010 Updated: June 17, 2010


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

i feel so bad for bella! she deserves so much! maybe they could stage a kidnapping or her death? and they could get her far away from there! i hope their planning something!



Author's Response:

There are definitely some things in the works for those two...which you will find out soon!  The next chapter is being validated, so (fingers crossed) it will be up in a couple of days!  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
The Transfer by bannerday Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3911]
Summary:

 

Bella transfers to the University of Washington and lives in a dorm with the Twilight usuals. The incredibly beautiful guy with the coppery-bronze hair is such a jerk when their lives first collide, but they cannot ignore the fact that they are drawn to each other. However, Bella has a boyfriend back home and Edward doesn't plan to get involved. A terrible experience has made him reluctant to form any attachments. But sometimes you find what you didn't even know you were looking for.

A little angst and lots of romance. Humor with a nosy Emmett, Rose, Jasper and Alice. Add a potential stalker. Top it all off with undeniable sexual tension and eventually some very hot sexy-times. BPOV and EPOV

Drooltastic banner by the lovely ZEE_21.  


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 73 Completed: Yes Word count: 511466
[Report This] Published: March 07, 2010 Updated: July 10, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: January 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65: Post Traumatic Stalker Disorder

james was going to do something no matter what! it wasn't his fault! maybe some couseling could help him?



Author's Response:

Yes, delilah! You know James would have pulled somthing, I know it, Bella knows it, every character in the story knows it...except Edward...he thinks it's his fault and his fault alone. Poor Silly boy. He needs a cuddle and a kick in the butt. And then maybe one more cuddle after that. LOL

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55: The Waiting Game

their notes were so cute, and hot! i wish my hubby would write me notes like that! i wonder who let james in? and will they get in trouble? i hope it was an accident!



Author's Response:

Hi d!

Some spicy note passing, no? What the hell is wrong with our husbands? I wish my husband would turn into the Edward from Master of the Universe.... but I really don't see that happening. So, that being said, even note passing would be awesome. WHopefully we will find out who let James in. And why. And whether it was accidental or not.

Bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56: Flirting With the Long Arm of the Law

a.) the girls are too funy, and they are awesome friends! i love them! and wish i had some like that!  b.) emmet did a great  job of being serious and letting everyone know that they are kind of like a family while at school and that they need to take care of each other!  c.) tyler is an idiot! i wouldn't have said yes! you have flowers for a girl that i think might be with another guy and she's not even home!? hello!?  d.) charlie is charlie. hes an awesome dad! he looks out for his girl and does a great job!  e.) edward is going to make mistakes and it'll be even more difficult with bella assulting him everytime she gets a chance!    f.) im nervous about what james will go through to try and get to bella!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: March 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70: Outtake: A Window to the Soul

they are so sweet and edward has such a way with words! i hope that emmet performance makes is way to youtube! cause that is too funny to let go!



Author's Response:

Hey there delilah!

They ARE sweeties and Edward is such a wordy bitch...just like me, oddly enough. ;) I laughed when you requested that Emmett's display show up on YouTube---poor Rose, she puts up with so much crap with him. But it seemed like it had been a while since the gang cut loose...what else did she expect? You gotta believe Emmett had to make up for lost time. :)

Thanks for the review. Next update two or three weeks, and the new story will go up soon too.

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56: Flirting With the Long Arm of the Law

a.) the girls are too funy, and they are awesome friends! i love them! and wish i had some like that!  b.) emmet did a great  job of being serious and letting everyone know that they are kind of like a family while at school and that they need to take care of each other!  c.) tyler is an idiot! i wouldn't have said yes! you have flowers for a girl that i think might be with another guy and she's not even home!? hello!?  d.) charlie is charlie. hes an awesome dad! he looks out for his girl and does a great job!  e.) edward is going to make mistakes and it'll be even more difficult with bella assulting him everytime she gets a chance!    f.) im nervous about what james will go through to try and get to bella!



Author's Response:

Hey delilsh-delilah!

I love the Hyena Girls too. Give Bella a little time and a little sex with Edward...she'll probably become a Hyena Girl herself once she's a little more comfortable and settled into the couple-ness with Edward and the couple-ness within the group dynamic.

I like Emmett being serious, but still being young enough and boy enough to say things like, "I know you all think I'm talking out my ass..." and waving to Bella and making her introduce herself to the dorm community in case someone doesn't know who she is.

LOL I had to get Tyler into this by making him be the one who unwittingly put her in danger---just like in Twilight, so he had to apologize to her just like in Twilight. ;)

You know Charlie didn't even want that glass of water that he went back downstairs to get. ;)

Apparently Bella is just as hormy as Edward---we just didn't get to hear her thought processes like we heard his ramblings.

James is indeed a worry, isn't he?

Thanks for the review. Hear from you again soon!

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: September 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48: A Slow Dance to Fix You

thats so sweet! and i loved them getting locked out and having to sneak back in the window! thats too great!



Author's Response:

Glad you thought it was sweet. They needed to talk about it a little. And I had to get the window thing in there a little. ;)

bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58: Part of the Build-Up

that sounds soo awesome!! im so happy for them! im glad that they got a lot done for a friend!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked how chapter 58 ended up. I think it bodes well for the future for all four of them.

Thanks.

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57: So Near and Yet So Far

im so happy that charlie saved edward! will their helping be good or will jakes friends be causing problems for them? will their evening be here soon?



Author's Response:

Chapter 58 should be up today or tomorrow. I think Edward helping will be a good thing, as long as people keep a lid on their emotions. So..there is more Edward and Charlie, some Edward and the bitches...I mean wolf-boys. And the evening is approaching, but it's not here yet. We still got to get through the day. No Saturday night until chapter 60.

Thanks for the review. And the patience...

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38: Say It...Out Loud

im glad that she didn't just take it lying down! that she went and confronted the problem! and that they talked. they are so cute together!



Author's Response:

Bella is a ballsy little thing. She gave him the perfect ultimatum---no way would he ever let her take off in a bus. That got him talking. she's a smart cookie!

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39: Let the Fun Begin

i so glad that they worked it out! they are so cute together! i love them! and alice and her nosiey ways!



Author's Response:

Thank goodness she got him to talk, right? They are awfully cute when things are on track. They just have to learn---maybe Edward more than Bella. Alice is just Alice, what can I say?:)

Thanks for the review. Take a read--chapter 42 is up now. Let me know what you think.

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Just Add Water and Stir

it was so awesome!! i can't wait to see what everyone starts saying?! its gonna be hilarious! i hope that bella doesn't freak when the rumor mill starts! and what are edward's fan girls gonna do or say? i bet they're gonna be jealous!



Author's Response:

Oh it will be quite the major news item! Can't say more than that. But it will be BIG! ;)

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Stepping Off the High-Dive

poor bella and edward! i feel so bad for her and the fact that she and jake are just together out of habit, or comfort. and the fact that hes using her insecrurites against her! its really not fair to either of them! i think that if he sows his true colors during his visit she should break up with him



Author's Response:

Poor Bella and Edward and Jake. Triangles are the most uncomfortable of relationships. Someone's going to get hurt---but it's never just one person---all three will be hurt by the time the situation is resolved.

It does seem like the exspiration date on her relationship with Jake has come.

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review.

Keep in touch, delilah,

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Non-date? Nonsense!

that was an awesome 'non-date' i need to do that sometime! i hope that the guilt doesn't get to bella and let it ruin their relationship!



Author's Response: Nope! Bella is just about to cave. How can she not with that looking back at her? Edward is going to make his move soon. Thanks for the review -bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: November 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61: Orbitting Celestial Bodies

they are so good together! i love it! i wonder if anything is happening back at the dorms? is james still plotting?!



Author's Response:

Hey there delilah!

Glad you liked chapter 61. Ther ARE so good together. Two peas in a pod. Alice even made that comment long ago, she knew what she was talking about. Or maybe it was a vision. ;) We will find out shortly what's going on back at the dorm. E & B will head back in the next chapter. After a little more sexy! ;)

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40: Inquiring Minds Want to Know

their house sounds so awesome! and i wish i had one! and i love esme and carlisle and the reaction to bella's stampkini! that's too funny!



Author's Response:

I think the Cullens and their Cullen Compound are a lot of fun. Glad you liked the Postage Stampkini. Edward liked it too.

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47: Good Times Then and Now

the party sounded so awesome!! and the gifts were so great! but why is bella upset? does she feel like shes missing something?



Author's Response:

Glad you liked the party. I would have attended. And I would have accepted all of those gifts---well, the poetry book was a little sketchy. ;)

No, Bella isn't missing something...she's upset because the moment has caught her off guard---the song, the Edward in her arms, additional information she knows about him from this evening's banter. It's all just hit her hard. She's not angry-upset, she'd sad-upset.

Stay tuned for an all E & B chapter. 48 should be up today or tomorrow. Keep in touch.

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41: Heating Up the Pool

will there be clothes involved in this shower? or will there be some jasper style nudity? i hope that no one interrupts them!



Author's Response:

Hi delilah!

I can't remember who has already read and reviewed, so anyway....Clothing is optional in the shower. There may be nudity, there will probably be no poetry readings, limericks or haikus. Nope, no showerus interuptus. ;)

Get your read on if you haven't yet!!!

Let me know what you think. Keep in touch.

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71: Prepilogue: Same Window; New View Inside

i loved it!! it was so funny! and emmet is awesome and jasper and edward!



Author's Response:

Hi delilah!

Thanks for the Chapterlove! I'm glad you like awesome Emmett and his Potted-Plant-Of-Desire and Starving Students moving Company moving Pixie Alice out and Dashing Edward in. I'd happily come home to that. ;)

I'm so glad readers are still out there reading this. ;)

Thanks, bb!

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72: Epilogue: Seasons Part l: Fall Leaves

at christmas time will edward be asking bella to marry him? or at least asking charlie for his blessing?



Author's Response:

Hi delilah69!

O  M  G ! ! ! It's been a freakin' month! A MONTH! I have no idea what the hell happened with my EPIC FAIL on the replies to chapter 72 of The Transfer! I think between the school year ending and a new story continuing and having those stories on three different sites...I must have had some massive brain malfunction. I had no idea I never replied to so many reviews. That stinks! And now I've started another story...so I'll get even more behind because that one is so ridiculously absorbing because of its ridiculousness.

So...Christmastime in the Transferville...it's being written at the moment. You'll have to wait and see. Remember, they've only been together for three months at this point. and it's their junior year of college, so don't get your hopes up for wedding bells or wedding Bellas yet.

Thank you so much for the review, delilah and again, I'm so sorry I was soooooooo slooooooooooowwww.

xo

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: November 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60: Supernova

they are so sweet! i love them together! im just worried about their return to school, and james!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked the sweeties! They are cute together, aren't they? ;) I'm worried about their return to school too, James is a recurring nightmare, we've already established that fact, haven't we?  Hmmmmm.....

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: September 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52: The Gamut of Emotions

i didn't think about why james put his information in the card! so hes stalking her? i think that edward should tell the chief!!!



Author's Response:

Good---it was supposed to be a revelation when Edward realized...but they're going to discuss it more in the next chapter. And maybe Charlie should be brought into the loop. We'll see.

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Plunging Into the Deep End

i hope that she gets rid of jake and gets with edward!



Author's Response:

Oh, it's gonna happen. Just you wait and see. It just won't be neat and easy.

Thanks for the review, delilah,

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: This Might Be Working Out

will jake totally ruin her birthday? i think that she should spend sometime with him on saturday, but at the same time i think that it'll be harder for her if she waits too long. and maybe he is so worried about her cheating cause he's already done it?



Author's Response:

Hey there delilah....Well, we already know that Bella isn't that excited about her birthday rolling around because she doesn't like to be the focus. However, of course Jake will know that it's her birthday, and of course Edward knows that it's her birthday...although he promised her that he wouldn't say anything about it to the others. Still...he knows.

I can't tell you any Saturday specifics, however, they will spend time together, and Jake is just possessive, just like another Twilight character we've come to know and love and lust after. Hmmm.....could be interesting. Definitely interesting.

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'll update beginning of the week. Look for a somewhat yummy chapter 20.

-bannerday

 




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