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Penname: delilah69 [ Contact]
Real name: kristin
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Member Since: February 16, 2010
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Summary: Edward - hot high school hockey player. Bella - shy high school student. They've admired each other from afar, so what happens when they finally meet? Are they strong enough to handle a threat from his past? No good deed goes unpunished...
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes
Word count: 153840
[Report This] Published: March 03, 2010 Updated: July 17, 2010
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: EPOV excerpt
im glad that edward finally grew a pair and told her off he needed to do it! but i bet that she'll try even more underhanded crap! Author's Response: Oh, I think she got the message loud and clear. he's pretty blunt once he finally loses his temper...!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Long Bomb
how did edward do that to emmets hair without him knowing? or did he know? i hope that emmet isn't too hard on him, and that they dont get caught! Author's Response: Not a lot of details about their pranks, but I may post something in the future that tells more of the story...Thanks!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Dump and Chase
i bet that who ever it is that edward is talking to in the next chapter is going to be the fool who hurt him in the game! i liked the hockey room scene! that was so hot! Author's Response: Glad you liked their equipment room fun time - thanks! Protectiveward next chapter...
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve
i really hope that james goes away for life! and that he never sees the light of day again! Author's Response: We'll get more details about James and Co. in an upcoming chapter...Thanks!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: One On One
they are so cute! i love reading the way they are together! Author's Response: Aw, thanks!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Give And Go
i love that they are getting cock blocked! its too funny! i can't wait until they do kiss! it'll be great! Author's Response: I love that you love it! Yay! I like their fist kiss - it is coming soon! - so you'll have to be sure and let me know what you think!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11:Power Play
i hope that their first kiss is a toe curler! i bet its gonna be hot! will she get drunk at the party? i wonder if a drunk bella is funny? Author's Response: I hope you think it's a toe curler! You'll have to be sure and let me know...
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Slow Whistle
i hope that no one is mean to bella when everyone finds out about them together! Author's Response: Hockeyward's done messing around - they're both ready to stake a claim and not care what anybody else thinks!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Deke
i hope that nothing too horrible happens between them! it would be so sad! they are so cute! Author's Response: Well, there will be some conflict, but these two are soild, so they'll deal...
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Home Ice
i love bellas reaction to edwards world and the family. and carlisle in the study, that was awesome! Author's Response: Thanks - so glad you enjoyed meet the parents. Carlisle in the study is one of my faves, too.
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Screen
that was hot! so when will bella tell edward that she her mom and stepdad saw edwards junk on tv? i think someone would've tivo'd it!! Author's Response: Glad you liked! There may be more detail about conversations about him being on TV in an outtake or another POV, maybe eventually...
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: The Point
naughty bella! i hope that charlie will let her out to play! and i hope that they don't get caught! you never know if his parents forgot something and need to come home, or a canceled flight? Author's Response: Oh, I've done enough cockblocking, right? They're going to make the most of their parent-free time at his house, don't worry!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Dropping The Gloves
i wonder if their intimate evening will be interrupted by emmet when he uses the shower? and the condom thing, priceless! Author's Response: I know, poor Edward! He'll get the sleepover plans ironed out, though, don't worry! Glad you enjoyed their antics.
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Clutch and Grab
i hope that the trampy girl doesn't cause anymore problems for bella and edward! what a slut! are they gonna have some fun together? Author's Response: Bella may have gotten a bit distracted at the bar, but she and Edward will have the discussion about Carole next chapter. Don't worry, they'll get it settled. Lots of fun and other interesting events coming up in future chapters...Thanks!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: Face Off
what do they say about hockey players? im so glad that neither bella, nor edward were injured in a fight. but im sure that we'll be seeing more of james won't we? Author's Response: Oh, we'll learn what they say about hockey players next chappie, as well as more about James and Edward's history. Thanks!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25: Backchecking
so what part does the chief have to play in all of this? and why is james so very interested in bella? will they be able to keep her safe? Author's Response: Edward (and Cahrlie!) will give Bella the scoop on James next chapter, promise!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26: Slapshot
man alive! edwad is such a drama queen! what is james planning? does he really want to hurt bella? or is it just to get a rise out of edward? will bella be safe? Author's Response: Isn't he always? Silly boy. At least he listened to Belaa and knew she was right! And James is a scary, dangerous bully - they're going to have to be careful...
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27: Hip Check
he is so sweet and beautiful! i wish i had an edward! and i hope that no one is watching them? if james just popped up before who's to say he won't again and they wouldn't notice him? Author's Response: I wish I had an Edward, too! Romanticward in the meadow - oh yeah...They'll have to be careful about James, that's for sure...
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28: Goal
so is james lurking in the shadows. im just terrified that he was watching and got it on tape or something and is going to use it against them?! Author's Response: Ah, James...wonder what he's been up to lately...? I can tell you he didn't tape them, if that makes you feel any better!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl
i really hope that he doesn't die! not many people die from those kinds of injuries! you're not killing him off are you?! i hope not! Author's Response: We'll get some more details of what happened next chapter - up on Tuesday, so bear with me!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30: Body Check
bella really needs to calm down! if she tells them in detail what james did, then he would go away to jail for attempted murder x2! i hope that he never sees the light of day again! Author's Response: She'll get it together, and give the police a statement. No way will she let James get away with what he did to her and edward!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32: Plus-Minus
i wonder if bella will smother james with a pillow in his hospital room? that would work fo me! and i hope that edward wakes up and hes ok! Author's Response: We'll get some info on James - and some Edward! - next chapter. Thanks!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33: Off-Sides
im sure that it will be a while before bella and edward can have any fun time and thatit'll be a while before edward is back to normal. i hope that he's ok after all of this! Author's Response: Yeah, he has some recovering to do - but he's in amazing condition and is a very determined boy!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34: Penalty Killing
im glad that she tried. and that she's stood by him all of this time. now what will happen with james? Author's Response: James is locked away in a criminal mental institution for good - no more trouble from him for these two. Thanks!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35: Game On
so good! im glad they got what they wanted in the end! Author's Response: Thank you! Oh, I'm a huge fan of HEA for E and B, always!They deserve happy, don't they?
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