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The Transfer by bannerday Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3915]
Summary:

 

Bella transfers to the University of Washington and lives in a dorm with the Twilight usuals. The incredibly beautiful guy with the coppery-bronze hair is such a jerk when their lives first collide, but they cannot ignore the fact that they are drawn to each other. However, Bella has a boyfriend back home and Edward doesn't plan to get involved. A terrible experience has made him reluctant to form any attachments. But sometimes you find what you didn't even know you were looking for.

A little angst and lots of romance. Humor with a nosy Emmett, Rose, Jasper and Alice. Add a potential stalker. Top it all off with undeniable sexual tension and eventually some very hot sexy-times. BPOV and EPOV

Drooltastic banner by the lovely ZEE_21.  


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 73 Completed: Yes Word count: 511466
[Report This] Published: March 08, 2010 Updated: July 11, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: The Movie Fades to Black

i think that she should just tell him now. hes already upset. i think that he should realize that things have changed. and that he needs to let go. i feel bad for him, but hes immature and has a lot of growing up to do! i hope bella is ok!!



Author's Response:

Stay tuned for chapter 21. Things will resolve the way you are hoping. And by the time he leaves, he will already have grown up somewhat. Bella is not going to be okay--well, physically she will be, but emotionally, not so much. But there's someone waiting to soothe her and protect her from her own thoughts.

Thanks for reading and reviewing again.

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: A Black Day For All

jake was pretty mature after he cooled off. and edward and even emmet. i hope that bella doesn't feel bad for too long! she deserves to be happy! i think that edward can make her happy!



Author's Response:

I didn't want Jake to come off like a total jerk. there was more to him than the irritating phone calls, and I wanted readers to feel that.  Bella will be able to move on slowly. how can you not move on if you're going on a non-date with Non-Dateward? And, I too, think Edward can make her happy!

thanks for taking the time to review.

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: A Jury of Our Peers

go bella! im so happy she was able to hold her own against those fools! and emmet is such a dork! i loved their ideas of studying! classic!



Author's Response:

Bella got backbone! Emmett has been stunned into submission. There's more coming down the road. Emmett is a dork, but he's a lovable man-child dork. Studying went right out the window, didn't it? At least they can be honest about their inability to stay focused on anything other than each other. ;)

More in a few. Thanks for the review, delilah

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: December 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63: Reality, For Better or Worse

i can't wait to see how james got in the dorm and if he gets bella and hurts her in anyway!



Author's Response:

I think you're going to get all that information in chapter 64...in an unusual way. It should post any day now, it's just waiting on validation.

Happy New Year!

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Everybody and His Brother

that was so funny! and mike and tyler, i womder if one of them is gonna say something to edward or bella and edward is gonna wail on them?! that would be awesome!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it delilah! It would be sort of rewarding to have Edward beat the shit out of Mike and Tyler because you know either one or both of them is fully capable of making some totally inappropriate comment to/regarding Bella. Hmmm. I'll have to think on that. ;) Then again, Edward is probably above them and their tiny minds.

Thanks for the review,

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Points of View

sorry no essays from me, i just wouldn't know when to quit! but it was so funny! i hopet that bella goes with them for the birthday. i can't wait to see what happens with that!



Author's Response:

Well, okay, delilah. One less essay from you means one less paper for me to grade. :)  Glad that you enjoyed the chapter. Of course Bella will be going to the Cullen Homestead. You can't wait to see what happens there? Oh, delilah, soooooo much will happen there. ;p

Thanks for reviewing once again

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Comparing Notes

so bella has let alice un her ragged. will there be anymore drunk dialing or anything of the sort from jake? i hope that they will be happy together, not too much drama...

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Weekend Plans

i can't wait to see what happens with the brithday! im so excited and happy for them! young love is so wonderful!



Author's Response:

Hey there delilah! You sound awfully excited. You weren't recently making out with Edward on the sexually predisposed bed, were you? The b-day will be fun, but we've got to get from Sunday to Friday. Lots of stuff will happen in between. ;) Young love is pretty damn wonderful!

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Mood Lighting and Ambiance

that dinner wsa so sweet! i loved it! i wish my husband wasn't such an asshat!



Author's Response:

Glad you loved the dinner-date in the dining hall. I got a similar review from another reader. Let's just say you and she and I need to go out on a triple date with our hubs and make them read chapter 29. Actually they need to read the whole story, maybe the whole frickin' fandom of stories. There, I feel better. At least we have THIS romance, right? And we'll always have each other. ;)

Thanks for the review and the giggle.

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Leave Them Wanting More

i hope that she knocks his socks off! and they talk about labels? gf/bf labels



Author's Response:

Hi there delilah,

labels are coming up in the next chapter. Well, at least one chapter. Edward spills it inadvertantly. Bella goes shopping for sock-knocking world-rocking clothing. Oh...and there's an evening bed situation with Bedward. Things are getting out of hand and I love me an unravelling Edward. ;)

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Expect the Unexpected

i wonder what will happen with james, and how the date will go? im so excited to see his reaction to bella's outfit!!



Author's Response:

James doesn't seem gone, does he, delilah? Nope, he just doesn't. Hmmm. The date? It will be a good one. it's with Edward Cullen for goodness' sake! You will adore his reaction to her outfit. I hope. ;)

Thanks for reviewing again,

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Rocking His World

i loved it! edward is such a cheesy goony guy! i love it! i wish my husband would bring me flowers!



Author's Response:

I love cheesy goony Edward. I'd send him orange roses by the dozens. Yeah...the husband thing... I have an idea: you send me orange roses, I'll do the same for you. We'll both pretend they're from Edward. Our husbands will suspect we have secret admirers/lovers and will try harder to win back our love, or end things in divorce in which case we'll be available for Edward. It's a bold plan, but it's the only one I could come up with on the spur of the moment. Let me know what you think; I could run to the florist's later today.

;)

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Rocking Her World

so are they going to his room or her's and what will they be doing? will alice have horrible timing and bust in on them?



Author's Response:

The first question you ask will be addressed by edward in one of his stream-of-consciousness, overly-analytical, over-thinking moments in the next chapter. The answer to your second question is "No". But you question does have some merit.

Can't/won't say more. Thanks for the review. Next update on the weekend.

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34: A Change in Plans

man, jake can really ruin an evening! i hope that he wasn't drinking and driving! i wish that it was alice! but im sure that they'll get their chance to get busy. are jake or billy going to die?



Author's Response:

Apparently Jake's job in life is to make Bella upset, annoy and irritate all readers of fan-fictiondom, and make Edward's life just a little more anxiety-filled. I wonder what the pay scale is?

When you wrote: "I wish that it was Alice" I thought you meant that you wished that Alice had been in the accident. Boy was I confused for a moment. There are some readers who can't take a whole lot of Alice, but I thought that was going a little overboard. Then I snapped out of it and realized that you meant you wished it had been her on the phone. LOL

Relax, delilah. No one will die. But it will be life-changing. (Just to make you anxious like Edward.)

I'll post again soon. Thanks for the review and the giggles.

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: Past Tense

i wonder if jake is going to say something or try something stupid? i hope that billy is doing ok!



Author's Response:

What can I say, Jake will be Jake, even when he doesn' mean to be. Even when he has the best of intentions, he still can't get away from the fact that he is Jake. Billy--an update on him in chapter 37.

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Present Tense

i hope that edward tells her! and that they don't get into a big nasty mess! i hope that they can work it out! and will anything else happen with james?



Author's Response:

Hi delilah!

If he would just open up!!! There are so many ways this could all have been prevented!!!!!!!

James.........you just never know.............do you? I think he's a recurring nightmare. ;)

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: Highs and Lows

so wonderful! i hope that jake doesn't do something stupid like try to guilt trip bella into taking him back! or he tries to take advantage of her sweetness!



Author's Response:

Well, by now you know the stupid thing Jake did. ;) He can't help it that he still loves her, but she's someone else's now.

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54: Out of Left Field

james is a sick freak!! i hope that they can get rid of him and have him leave bella alone before something bad happens!!



Author's Response:

James is a sicko-psycho, what can I say?  I hope you like chapter 55. it should post tomorrow.

-bannerday    

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42: Cleanliness is Next to Ohmygodliness

they are so cute! i wonder what drama is headed their way? james perhaps?



Author's Response:

No drama for a while. Just good, clean, showery fun---oh and a really annoying shopping trip with the crazies. Check out chapter 43 if you haven't yet.

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43: Miles of Aisles

the thing with mrs cope! that was my favorite! and the thing with all the condoms! too funny! i see a lot of ladies from my church at target and just to mess with them i put random boxes of condoms in their carts! its so funny to watch their faces when they pull t out of their cart at the register and they are too embarassed to say anything about it!



Author's Response:

Hi delilah!

Glad you liked Mrs. Cope, I had to give a nod to my fellow cougars, even though Mrs. Cope is a scary cougar. Poor Edward, his bro, friend and dad all just trying to "protect" him with protection. I like your little Target/condom prank.  Too funny!

-bannerday;) 

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44: Just Desserts

that was so good!! the whole thing you are a genius! i was laughing the whole time! i think my husband thinks im crazy!



Author's Response:

Hey there delilah!

Glad you enjoyed that one! Thanks for making me feel like a smart girl! Sometimes I think to myself..."Is this toooooo much?" and then I answer myself..."Hell no! Go for it! Make something ridiculous out of this! LOL Glad you got a good laugh. Sorry for your hubs' concern. Mine thinks I'm certifiable.

Thanks for the kind words and the love!

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45: The Food Network

i loed the pantry jokes! too great! i hope that edward and bella really enjoy their alone time!



Author's Response:

Hi d-69

Glad you loved the pantry stories. these kids are pretty bright and resourceful when it comes to lying to each other, right? Alone time should be pretty good, I think. We shall see. I hope to update this weekend.

Thanks for reviewing again!

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46: The Business of Appetites

they are so sweet! i loved it all!! especially the party!



Author's Response:

Hi delilah!

Glad you loved them all and the dinner party. Gifts and music and silly memories ahead.

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: September 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49: It Was So Nice to See You

will james be reappearing on their return to school? i love that they are doing so well together! im just worried about them going back to school and not being able to spend as much time together. how long do they hae left till they graduate?



Author's Response:

James...I don't get the feeling he's gone for good. Do you? He's a nightmare. A recurring nightmare. We shall see. Going back to school will be a drag, but they will have to find a way to work with it. They will actually have that conversation next chapter. ;) Edward has a plan so they still get some special time together. And as it was, they were spending quite a bit of their freetime together already. That will just intensify. Stay tuned.

This is the end of September, their junior year. They have one more regular year and then if Bella gets a teaching credential or Edward pursues counseling, they will have more schooling ahead of them.

Thanks for the review. I'm glad you're thinking about the storylines and timelines. You take your fics seriously, and I like that in a reader. ;)

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: September 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50: In Sickness and in WHAT?!

i think that the flowers are from james! and what does jake want?!



Author's Response:

The flowers...ah, the flowers. We'll find out this next update. Look for one on Monday or Tuesday. And what does Jake want? He wants something. ;)

Thanks for the review. Hang onto that cliff.

-bannerday

 




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