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Real name: kristin
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The Transfer by bannerday Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3915]
Summary:

 

Bella transfers to the University of Washington and lives in a dorm with the Twilight usuals. The incredibly beautiful guy with the coppery-bronze hair is such a jerk when their lives first collide, but they cannot ignore the fact that they are drawn to each other. However, Bella has a boyfriend back home and Edward doesn't plan to get involved. A terrible experience has made him reluctant to form any attachments. But sometimes you find what you didn't even know you were looking for.

A little angst and lots of romance. Humor with a nosy Emmett, Rose, Jasper and Alice. Add a potential stalker. Top it all off with undeniable sexual tension and eventually some very hot sexy-times. BPOV and EPOV

Drooltastic banner by the lovely ZEE_21.  


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 73 Completed: Yes Word count: 511466
[Report This] Published: March 08, 2010 Updated: July 11, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Non-date? Nonsense!

that was an awesome 'non-date' i need to do that sometime! i hope that the guilt doesn't get to bella and let it ruin their relationship!



Author's Response: Nope! Bella is just about to cave. How can she not with that looking back at her? Edward is going to make his move soon. Thanks for the review -bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: November 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61: Orbitting Celestial Bodies

they are so good together! i love it! i wonder if anything is happening back at the dorms? is james still plotting?!



Author's Response:

Hey there delilah!

Glad you liked chapter 61. Ther ARE so good together. Two peas in a pod. Alice even made that comment long ago, she knew what she was talking about. Or maybe it was a vision. ;) We will find out shortly what's going on back at the dorm. E & B will head back in the next chapter. After a little more sexy! ;)

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40: Inquiring Minds Want to Know

their house sounds so awesome! and i wish i had one! and i love esme and carlisle and the reaction to bella's stampkini! that's too funny!



Author's Response:

I think the Cullens and their Cullen Compound are a lot of fun. Glad you liked the Postage Stampkini. Edward liked it too.

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47: Good Times Then and Now

the party sounded so awesome!! and the gifts were so great! but why is bella upset? does she feel like shes missing something?



Author's Response:

Glad you liked the party. I would have attended. And I would have accepted all of those gifts---well, the poetry book was a little sketchy. ;)

No, Bella isn't missing something...she's upset because the moment has caught her off guard---the song, the Edward in her arms, additional information she knows about him from this evening's banter. It's all just hit her hard. She's not angry-upset, she'd sad-upset.

Stay tuned for an all E & B chapter. 48 should be up today or tomorrow. Keep in touch.

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41: Heating Up the Pool

will there be clothes involved in this shower? or will there be some jasper style nudity? i hope that no one interrupts them!



Author's Response:

Hi delilah!

I can't remember who has already read and reviewed, so anyway....Clothing is optional in the shower. There may be nudity, there will probably be no poetry readings, limericks or haikus. Nope, no showerus interuptus. ;)

Get your read on if you haven't yet!!!

Let me know what you think. Keep in touch.

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71: Prepilogue: Same Window; New View Inside

i loved it!! it was so funny! and emmet is awesome and jasper and edward!



Author's Response:

Hi delilah!

Thanks for the Chapterlove! I'm glad you like awesome Emmett and his Potted-Plant-Of-Desire and Starving Students moving Company moving Pixie Alice out and Dashing Edward in. I'd happily come home to that. ;)

I'm so glad readers are still out there reading this. ;)

Thanks, bb!

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72: Epilogue: Seasons Part l: Fall Leaves

at christmas time will edward be asking bella to marry him? or at least asking charlie for his blessing?



Author's Response:

Hi delilah69!

O  M  G ! ! ! It's been a freakin' month! A MONTH! I have no idea what the hell happened with my EPIC FAIL on the replies to chapter 72 of The Transfer! I think between the school year ending and a new story continuing and having those stories on three different sites...I must have had some massive brain malfunction. I had no idea I never replied to so many reviews. That stinks! And now I've started another story...so I'll get even more behind because that one is so ridiculously absorbing because of its ridiculousness.

So...Christmastime in the Transferville...it's being written at the moment. You'll have to wait and see. Remember, they've only been together for three months at this point. and it's their junior year of college, so don't get your hopes up for wedding bells or wedding Bellas yet.

Thank you so much for the review, delilah and again, I'm so sorry I was soooooooo slooooooooooowwww.

xo

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: November 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60: Supernova

they are so sweet! i love them together! im just worried about their return to school, and james!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked the sweeties! They are cute together, aren't they? ;) I'm worried about their return to school too, James is a recurring nightmare, we've already established that fact, haven't we?  Hmmmmm.....

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: September 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52: The Gamut of Emotions

i didn't think about why james put his information in the card! so hes stalking her? i think that edward should tell the chief!!!



Author's Response:

Good---it was supposed to be a revelation when Edward realized...but they're going to discuss it more in the next chapter. And maybe Charlie should be brought into the loop. We'll see.

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Plunging Into the Deep End

i hope that she gets rid of jake and gets with edward!



Author's Response:

Oh, it's gonna happen. Just you wait and see. It just won't be neat and easy.

Thanks for the review, delilah,

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: This Might Be Working Out

will jake totally ruin her birthday? i think that she should spend sometime with him on saturday, but at the same time i think that it'll be harder for her if she waits too long. and maybe he is so worried about her cheating cause he's already done it?



Author's Response:

Hey there delilah....Well, we already know that Bella isn't that excited about her birthday rolling around because she doesn't like to be the focus. However, of course Jake will know that it's her birthday, and of course Edward knows that it's her birthday...although he promised her that he wouldn't say anything about it to the others. Still...he knows.

I can't tell you any Saturday specifics, however, they will spend time together, and Jake is just possessive, just like another Twilight character we've come to know and love and lust after. Hmmm.....could be interesting. Definitely interesting.

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'll update beginning of the week. Look for a somewhat yummy chapter 20.

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: The Movie Fades to Black

i think that she should just tell him now. hes already upset. i think that he should realize that things have changed. and that he needs to let go. i feel bad for him, but hes immature and has a lot of growing up to do! i hope bella is ok!!



Author's Response:

Stay tuned for chapter 21. Things will resolve the way you are hoping. And by the time he leaves, he will already have grown up somewhat. Bella is not going to be okay--well, physically she will be, but emotionally, not so much. But there's someone waiting to soothe her and protect her from her own thoughts.

Thanks for reading and reviewing again.

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: A Black Day For All

jake was pretty mature after he cooled off. and edward and even emmet. i hope that bella doesn't feel bad for too long! she deserves to be happy! i think that edward can make her happy!



Author's Response:

I didn't want Jake to come off like a total jerk. there was more to him than the irritating phone calls, and I wanted readers to feel that.  Bella will be able to move on slowly. how can you not move on if you're going on a non-date with Non-Dateward? And, I too, think Edward can make her happy!

thanks for taking the time to review.

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: A Jury of Our Peers

go bella! im so happy she was able to hold her own against those fools! and emmet is such a dork! i loved their ideas of studying! classic!



Author's Response:

Bella got backbone! Emmett has been stunned into submission. There's more coming down the road. Emmett is a dork, but he's a lovable man-child dork. Studying went right out the window, didn't it? At least they can be honest about their inability to stay focused on anything other than each other. ;)

More in a few. Thanks for the review, delilah

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: December 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63: Reality, For Better or Worse

i can't wait to see how james got in the dorm and if he gets bella and hurts her in anyway!



Author's Response:

I think you're going to get all that information in chapter 64...in an unusual way. It should post any day now, it's just waiting on validation.

Happy New Year!

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Everybody and His Brother

that was so funny! and mike and tyler, i womder if one of them is gonna say something to edward or bella and edward is gonna wail on them?! that would be awesome!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it delilah! It would be sort of rewarding to have Edward beat the shit out of Mike and Tyler because you know either one or both of them is fully capable of making some totally inappropriate comment to/regarding Bella. Hmmm. I'll have to think on that. ;) Then again, Edward is probably above them and their tiny minds.

Thanks for the review,

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Points of View

sorry no essays from me, i just wouldn't know when to quit! but it was so funny! i hopet that bella goes with them for the birthday. i can't wait to see what happens with that!



Author's Response:

Well, okay, delilah. One less essay from you means one less paper for me to grade. :)  Glad that you enjoyed the chapter. Of course Bella will be going to the Cullen Homestead. You can't wait to see what happens there? Oh, delilah, soooooo much will happen there. ;p

Thanks for reviewing once again

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Comparing Notes

so bella has let alice un her ragged. will there be anymore drunk dialing or anything of the sort from jake? i hope that they will be happy together, not too much drama...

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Weekend Plans

i can't wait to see what happens with the brithday! im so excited and happy for them! young love is so wonderful!



Author's Response:

Hey there delilah! You sound awfully excited. You weren't recently making out with Edward on the sexually predisposed bed, were you? The b-day will be fun, but we've got to get from Sunday to Friday. Lots of stuff will happen in between. ;) Young love is pretty damn wonderful!

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Mood Lighting and Ambiance

that dinner wsa so sweet! i loved it! i wish my husband wasn't such an asshat!



Author's Response:

Glad you loved the dinner-date in the dining hall. I got a similar review from another reader. Let's just say you and she and I need to go out on a triple date with our hubs and make them read chapter 29. Actually they need to read the whole story, maybe the whole frickin' fandom of stories. There, I feel better. At least we have THIS romance, right? And we'll always have each other. ;)

Thanks for the review and the giggle.

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Leave Them Wanting More

i hope that she knocks his socks off! and they talk about labels? gf/bf labels



Author's Response:

Hi there delilah,

labels are coming up in the next chapter. Well, at least one chapter. Edward spills it inadvertantly. Bella goes shopping for sock-knocking world-rocking clothing. Oh...and there's an evening bed situation with Bedward. Things are getting out of hand and I love me an unravelling Edward. ;)

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Expect the Unexpected

i wonder what will happen with james, and how the date will go? im so excited to see his reaction to bella's outfit!!



Author's Response:

James doesn't seem gone, does he, delilah? Nope, he just doesn't. Hmmm. The date? It will be a good one. it's with Edward Cullen for goodness' sake! You will adore his reaction to her outfit. I hope. ;)

Thanks for reviewing again,

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Rocking His World

i loved it! edward is such a cheesy goony guy! i love it! i wish my husband would bring me flowers!



Author's Response:

I love cheesy goony Edward. I'd send him orange roses by the dozens. Yeah...the husband thing... I have an idea: you send me orange roses, I'll do the same for you. We'll both pretend they're from Edward. Our husbands will suspect we have secret admirers/lovers and will try harder to win back our love, or end things in divorce in which case we'll be available for Edward. It's a bold plan, but it's the only one I could come up with on the spur of the moment. Let me know what you think; I could run to the florist's later today.

;)

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Rocking Her World

so are they going to his room or her's and what will they be doing? will alice have horrible timing and bust in on them?



Author's Response:

The first question you ask will be addressed by edward in one of his stream-of-consciousness, overly-analytical, over-thinking moments in the next chapter. The answer to your second question is "No". But you question does have some merit.

Can't/won't say more. Thanks for the review. Next update on the weekend.

-bannerday

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34: A Change in Plans

man, jake can really ruin an evening! i hope that he wasn't drinking and driving! i wish that it was alice! but im sure that they'll get their chance to get busy. are jake or billy going to die?



Author's Response:

Apparently Jake's job in life is to make Bella upset, annoy and irritate all readers of fan-fictiondom, and make Edward's life just a little more anxiety-filled. I wonder what the pay scale is?

When you wrote: "I wish that it was Alice" I thought you meant that you wished that Alice had been in the accident. Boy was I confused for a moment. There are some readers who can't take a whole lot of Alice, but I thought that was going a little overboard. Then I snapped out of it and realized that you meant you wished it had been her on the phone. LOL

Relax, delilah. No one will die. But it will be life-changing. (Just to make you anxious like Edward.)

I'll post again soon. Thanks for the review and the giggles.

-bannerday

 




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