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Penname: delilah69 [Contact]
Real name: kristin
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Encore by Oleander Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 959]
Summary:

 

 

Edward pulls a Forrest Gump and runs at a most inappropriate time. When he and Bella reconnect five years later, can Bella forgive him enough to give him a chance or is it too late? Canon pairings, NC-17 for future lemons and mature subject matter.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Completed: Yes Word count: 248313
[Report This] Published: February 20, 2010 Updated: August 16, 2010


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

poor bella, i hope that she feels better soon! that poor thing!



Author's Response:

Bella will always have struggles, but she's tough and she'll figure things out.  :)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

that was the best! i loved it! i even made me feel better! i hope that bella and edward will have a good vacation, when will alice and jasper share their news?



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that it made you feel better.  :)  I guess we needed a little more sweetness.  

Alice and Jasper will reveal their secret in due time.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

i hope that this is the starting of something amazing for everyone!



Author's Response:

They are getting there...step by step.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

i think that bella could give their house to alice and jasper, and bella moves in with edward into a different house. i hope that alice doesn't have anything bad happen to her!



Author's Response:

There is something in the works about the housing situation.  ;)  Have no fears.  

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

that was the greatest christmas ever!!! i loved it!



Author's Response:

Thanks, delilah.  :)  I'm glad you loved it...I had fun writing it.  :)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

that was so moving! i loved it! i hope that they are able to move on and be togerther without all the guilt and sadness! it was so good, and sad, but i still loved it!



Author's Response: I'm glad you survived it, and you'll be happy to know that this is the last really hard chapter of the story. You're right that they can move on now unfettered by the past. :)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

that was so great! alice's parents are too much and man i would've run over jazz's mother like 50 times given the chance! what a douchenozzle!



Author's Response:

Get in line...there are a lot of us who think that Mama Hale surpasses the status of douchenozzle and would love to run her over.  :)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

this is such an awesome holiday! i wish mine were like that! i wonder when edward will ask bella to marry him?



Author's Response:

Well, I think it's safe to say that Edward won't be proposing in Encore... ;)  They still have stuff to work out before they can really look at getting married.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

i hope that el capitan gets rose pregnant! and then we'll see emmet freak out and faint! that would be too funny! i hope that edward and bella get another chance at a family!



Author's Response: There's all kinds of craziness, twists, turns, and tears to come in the sequel. I can't wait to start posting it.

 
Summary:

When Bella has a tragic accident, it turns her entire world upsidedown and forces Edward to come to terms with her change sooner than he'd hoped.  As Bella says goodbye to friends and family, the Cullens are faced with coming up with a plan to get Bella out of the hospital without drawing unwanted suspicion on their family. Not to mention they have to talk the Quileutes into allowing an exception to the decades old treaty. On top of everything else, Victoria threatens to turn the hospital in Seattle into a killing ground. Can the vampires and the wolves come to an agreement before the Volturi descend on the Olympic pennisula?


Categories: Eclipse, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 60739
[Report This] Published: February 21, 2010 Updated: October 21, 2010


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Immediate Family

i think that it might make charlie accept their relationship more when he sees how serious they are. i hope that jake will let her go and that nothing too bad will happen when she decides to go



Author's Response:

Yeah, I always hated how much Bella had to hide from Charlie. It always painted the Cullens in a bad light and he needs to see that things aren't always as they seem. As for Jake...well, I'm currently writing that particular bit of story and its not coming easily. We'll see.  :) Thanks for the review!!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Goodbye, Hello

i  am so happy for jake! will he give up the approval for bella to be changed? i hope it won't be too bad.



Author's Response:

Thank you. :) Jacob is halfway to acceptance for Bella's change, but there are still events that need to happen for him to be willing to say 'Okay' to the Cullens.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Interlude: Jake's Epiphany

will carrie not want to be near jake now? will she reject him? how much worse will it get before it gets better?



Author's Response:

Hmm...we don't really get to see much more about Carrie and Jake until later, but I promise things will work out. Thank you for the review!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Out of the Ashes (shabbyapple)

im so happy it all ended well! the family is safe and everyone is awesome! im so glad! good story!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Mama's Little Girl

im so excited! i feel bad for jake. i hope that he can find something else in the gift shop like, an imprint? then leaving bella wouldn't be so bad! i hope that they can get victoria!



Author's Response:

You, surprisingly, are the first person to hint at an imprint for Jake. Heheh...you might actually enjoy the next chapter.

Thank you for the review!!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Ready, Too

i hope that he gives in and lets her change! he needs to get rid of jake!



Author's Response:

LOL. Don't worry about Jake.  He'll get his goodbye but it won't be too bad and Bella won't have to worry about him anymore. Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Disturbing News

will they be able to ask the wolves to help get rid of victoria while they are visiting?



Author's Response:

We shall see. :) Thanks for the review!!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Something Wrong

so who is at her door? and where did edward go? will they be able to save her?



Author's Response:

Hmmm...who, oh who could it be? Edward is busy at the moment. ;) And comeon...Esme is in mother bear mode. Nothing bad could happen...right? Right?  Hmm....

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Suspicions Confirmed

so will victoria bite her and try to kill her only to have edward stop her, but bella starts the change anyway?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Climbing the Walls

edward just needs to grow a pair and change her! his morals are getting old!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. :) Edward is 105 years old. He'll always be a little old fashioned. Heh.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: At Peace

i can't wait to see what happens with jake and the newborn army!



Author's Response:

Things will get crazy, that's for sure. :) Thank you for the review!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: On Your Mark...

i really hope that they can get rid of all of the newborns and victoria! and that emily can talk to jakes imprint and that she'll love him back

 

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Three Seconds Too Late

will they be able to save bella? i hope that he isn't too late!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. :) I don't think he'll be too late...

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Interlude: Charlie's Determination

just go with a mini bella pov im sure that the only things shes seeing or thinking of are pretty colors, pain, and then the fire! i hope that edward is able to help her and make it not too bad for her!



Author's Response:

Thanks, hun. :) I hope you enjoy the next chapter!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Something to Cling To

i hope that edward can play his part well, and divert any attention. and i hope that the wolves stay away while the volturi are in the area!



Author's Response:

You and me both, delilah. I hope I can do him justice. As for the wolves, I'm hoping they'll be too busy trying to help Jacob win Carrie's trust back and running patrol on their lands that they'll keep out of trouble.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Counting Down

i hope that she doesn't freak out too much! and what about the wolves? how are they doing?



Author's Response:

Hope not. :) As for the wolves, we'll get a glimpse at how that's going in a chapter or three. Thank you for the review, delilah!

 




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