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Penname: delilah69 [Contact]
Real name: kristin
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Member Since: February 16, 2010
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Summary:

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 Having escaped to Forks, will Bella find solace in dark Edward Cullen? How hard will Edward have to fight to keep that which he longs to claim? Rated MA for lemons, language, drug and alcohol references. Tattoo's, piercings- all manners of fun bad-boy goodness. For those of you who prefer a more Canon Edward, be forewarned.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Completed: No Word count: 350733
[Report This] Published: February 18, 2010 Updated: May 28, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Stronger

well, i am happy that they didn't have to kill mike, however i can't believe that he is so stupid! i mean really!! thats so crazy! i liked that part of it though. and the part in the girls bathroom, i hope that those girls are scared! they should be!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Wild One

i really hope that the rez guys aren't planning anything stupid! and i hope that they can all get along and play nice! charlie is an interesting guy. very observant, but simle, i like him!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: A Cigarette Is All You Get

i really wonder if jake is going to try and pull something stupid? i really hope not! will there be a fight? whats going to happen with them!? i really hope that jake isn't trying to get with bella!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: All The Things She Said

what will they dress up as for the party!? i can't wait! and im a little embarassed to say, but car sex has always been my favorite!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Girlscout

i think that edward should get a padlock on his door and some kind of motion sensor for the night of the party! it would be safer! and i don't think that esme and carlisle shoud freak out too much. maybe he could use their safe?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: December 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 38: This Is Halloween

i wonder what she has in store for our boy? i can't wait!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: January 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 39: I' A Pirate, You're a Princess

i can't wait till valentines day when i get to do something like this!! i got some good ideas! thanks!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: January 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Drive

i feel like bella is going to freak and push edward away.... his he pushing too much too hard?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 41: You're Gonna Go Far, Kid

will charlie freak when he hears the news? will alice move to texas? i hope that nothing comes back to bite them!

 
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Edward pulls a Forrest Gump and runs at a most inappropriate time. When he and Bella reconnect five years later, can Bella forgive him enough to give him a chance or is it too late? Canon pairings, NC-17 for future lemons and mature subject matter.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Completed: Yes Word count: 248313
[Report This] Published: February 20, 2010 Updated: August 16, 2010


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

i won't get to see eclispe for like anothe week, so i hope you enjoy fo me too till i get to go too! i liked this chapter, that bella was able to pull back from raging. however what happened to her happy ending? is it the medicine? my meds used to do that to me! it was awful!



Author's Response:

I had meds do that too...made me horny as hell but no chance of getting off.  TMI, I know...

Glad you enjoyed the chapter.  Bella is making progress, bit by bit.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

they are so cute, i hope the something happens and edward is there but alice figures out she's being a butt and gives edward a chance. i hpoe that they do get their happily ever after!



Author's Response:

Alice will redeem herself soon, delilah, and although there is a bumpy road ahead of them, I think that Bella and Edward are slowly on their way to their HEA.  :)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

that song was awesome! my kids taught it was so funny! of course they are little boys........



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it.  :)  Little boys are wild and fun and when they're not stinking or making weird noises, they're kind of cute, too. 

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

emmet is just emmet! i really hope that bella doesn't freak out about alice and jasper moving and them having a baby! i hope that they don't go too far!



Author's Response:

God bless Emmett.  ;)  I can assure you that Alice and Jasper won't be going far when they do move.  :)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

poor bella, i hope that she feels better soon! that poor thing!



Author's Response:

Bella will always have struggles, but she's tough and she'll figure things out.  :)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

that was the best! i loved it! i even made me feel better! i hope that bella and edward will have a good vacation, when will alice and jasper share their news?



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that it made you feel better.  :)  I guess we needed a little more sweetness.  

Alice and Jasper will reveal their secret in due time.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

i hope that this is the starting of something amazing for everyone!



Author's Response:

They are getting there...step by step.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

i think that bella could give their house to alice and jasper, and bella moves in with edward into a different house. i hope that alice doesn't have anything bad happen to her!



Author's Response:

There is something in the works about the housing situation.  ;)  Have no fears.  

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

that was the greatest christmas ever!!! i loved it!



Author's Response:

Thanks, delilah.  :)  I'm glad you loved it...I had fun writing it.  :)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

that was so moving! i loved it! i hope that they are able to move on and be togerther without all the guilt and sadness! it was so good, and sad, but i still loved it!



Author's Response: I'm glad you survived it, and you'll be happy to know that this is the last really hard chapter of the story. You're right that they can move on now unfettered by the past. :)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

that was so great! alice's parents are too much and man i would've run over jazz's mother like 50 times given the chance! what a douchenozzle!



Author's Response:

Get in line...there are a lot of us who think that Mama Hale surpasses the status of douchenozzle and would love to run her over.  :)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

this is such an awesome holiday! i wish mine were like that! i wonder when edward will ask bella to marry him?



Author's Response:

Well, I think it's safe to say that Edward won't be proposing in Encore... ;)  They still have stuff to work out before they can really look at getting married.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

i hope that el capitan gets rose pregnant! and then we'll see emmet freak out and faint! that would be too funny! i hope that edward and bella get another chance at a family!



Author's Response: There's all kinds of craziness, twists, turns, and tears to come in the sequel. I can't wait to start posting it.

 
Summary:

When Bella has a tragic accident, it turns her entire world upsidedown and forces Edward to come to terms with her change sooner than he'd hoped.  As Bella says goodbye to friends and family, the Cullens are faced with coming up with a plan to get Bella out of the hospital without drawing unwanted suspicion on their family. Not to mention they have to talk the Quileutes into allowing an exception to the decades old treaty. On top of everything else, Victoria threatens to turn the hospital in Seattle into a killing ground. Can the vampires and the wolves come to an agreement before the Volturi descend on the Olympic pennisula?


Categories: Eclipse, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 60739
[Report This] Published: February 21, 2010 Updated: October 21, 2010


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Immediate Family

i think that it might make charlie accept their relationship more when he sees how serious they are. i hope that jake will let her go and that nothing too bad will happen when she decides to go



Author's Response:

Yeah, I always hated how much Bella had to hide from Charlie. It always painted the Cullens in a bad light and he needs to see that things aren't always as they seem. As for Jake...well, I'm currently writing that particular bit of story and its not coming easily. We'll see.  :) Thanks for the review!!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Goodbye, Hello

i  am so happy for jake! will he give up the approval for bella to be changed? i hope it won't be too bad.



Author's Response:

Thank you. :) Jacob is halfway to acceptance for Bella's change, but there are still events that need to happen for him to be willing to say 'Okay' to the Cullens.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Interlude: Jake's Epiphany

will carrie not want to be near jake now? will she reject him? how much worse will it get before it gets better?



Author's Response:

Hmm...we don't really get to see much more about Carrie and Jake until later, but I promise things will work out. Thank you for the review!

 




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