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Penname: delilah69 [Contact]
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A Labor of Love by lizconno Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 761]
Summary:

2010 SHIMMER AWARD WINNER & 2010 INDIE TWIFIC FINALIST

Bella returns to Forks, WA to start her life over. Edward is a widower raising twin daughters. When Bella starts to work for Edward, the two develop a close bond that may be ruined by their secrets. LEMONS-- real & imagined Rated-M for a reason AH/OOC.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2417
[Report This] Published: February 07, 2010 Updated: October 14, 2010


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 06, 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

shes pregnant? thats so exciting! i had a feeling she was, but thats so exciting! what will edward think?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 09, 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

the sexting was hot! however, when will she tell edward? and what will he say? how will he react?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 16, 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

will edward be able to find bella? i think that either jake, leah, or emmet should tell him that shes pregnant with his kid!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 26, 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

bella is a selfish little girl and she needs to own up to everything! he has the right to know!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 15, 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

man i hate when guys say they need time, they don't! they need a good hot dinner some sex, and they're good! time..... BAH!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 16, 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

i had a feeling that they will be ok! i hope that edward is weary of sam, maybe he should hit on edward?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 04, 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

sam is a smart queer! im just kidding! hes a pretty awesome friend! i wish i had one of those!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 01, 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

i loved that they got an awesome wedding and some fun! thats so great!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 02, 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

they are so funny! i love that they still aren't tired of each other! they deserve to be happy!

 
A Brave New World by youngmei Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 993]
Summary:

Edward and Bella

“Bella, I’m going to give you some privacy. I won’t go far, but I won’t listen either. I know you don’t want an audience, no matter which way you decide to go.”

Three years after his mysterious disappearance, Edward’s final words to Bella still haunt her every waking moment. For her parents, Bella tries to put the past behind her and start a new life but one phone call shatters her fragile new world. Bella must then choose between her new life and the potential heartache of her past.

All canon pairings. NO CHARACTER DEATH. This is an Edward and Bella story.

I'd like to thank ms_ambrosia for the awesome banner!


Categories: Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: No Word count: 161685
[Report This] Published: February 09, 2010 Updated: May 06, 2013


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: March 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Battling Monsters

jasper is too cool! i hope that they can save the others!



Author's Response:

I know. I really love Jasper. I felt like he didn't get enough love in the books :)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: December 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Running

i think that if edward won't go back to the cullen's the cullen's should set up another place for them to go to. will bella get sick too? and if edward is the carrier shouldn't they be able to find a cure now?



Author's Response:

Edward ran away before finding the results of the blood tests. Carlisle is hoping that the results will tell him what is going on with Edward and also give him ideas on how to cure the disease.

Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Moving Forward

i think that carlisle had some proof them it would be easier for edward... i hope that carlisle can find a cure and save all those people!!



Author's Response:

Thanks. Yes, I think that Carlisle has to prove it if he wants Edward to believe him.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: December 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Home is Where the Heart is

so could it be that oscar and some friends are in forks? will bella become infected? will edward be ok?



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. Some of your questions will be answered in the next chapter. :)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: The Calm Before the Storm

i think that it could be dangerous if memories keep coming up out of no where he would be more upset that they didn't tell him about the mythical creatures around him!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. I think that it is dangerous not to tell him but also dangerous to tell him.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Healing

ive actually been thinking about taking my boys camping this summer! but im never about how edward will react to who im sure is emmet. and what will happen to them if the volturi find out?



Author's Response:

I really love camping. I have such fond memories of doing it when I was a little girl. You should definitely take your boys!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: January 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: The Message

who esle is watching edward and the swans? will he turn back into a vamp, or a werewolf? will bella and charlie be geting sick? if she does will carlisle be able to save her?



Author's Response:

The answers are coming! Thanks for the review :)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Strength

i don't think that she made a mistake telling him, because it could mean that he tries harder to get to know her and try to remember.



Author's Response:

I agree, but it could have really backfired on her too.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Family

it totally sucks that alice can't see anything! it might be easier if she could. i hope that edward will try and be with bella!



Author's Response:

I know. It would be a lot easier if Alice could see what is happening. Why do you think that she can't?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: September 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Aftermath

i wonder if they were trying to make a hybrid? could that be possible?



Author's Response:

You'll just have to wait and see. He he... ;)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: September 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: A Change is Gonna Come

so what is going on with edward? will he turn into a werewolf?



Author's Response:

I can't tell you, but stick with it. You'll find out in the next couple of chapters. Don't worry though, things will work themselves out in the end.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: November 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: The Awful Truth

im sure that bella will regain edward's trust. i bet he kind of feels like a girl who lost her virginity to a guy who only pretended to be interested in her. i hope that he can move past it!



Author's Response:

Actually, I kind of thought about that when I was writing Edward's anger towards Bella in this chapter. Of course he would blame Bella. He fell in love with her, but it was based on what he feels was all lies. The rest just seems so unbelievable that he hasn't even begun to process it. However, Bella's betrayal is the only thing that he can understand right now.

Thanks for the review!

 

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Loved Ones

will carlisle and esme be ok?! who does oscar have? will everyone be ok?!



Author's Response:

I love Carlisle and Esme, so they won`t be hurt, but I can`t answer the rest of your questions. ;) Y ou`ll just have to keep reading to find out!

 
Taken by BellaLovesEdward729 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1178]
Summary:

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Edward and Bella go to tell Charlie about their engagement when something happens that changes everything. Love is tested, friendships are torn, but how can Edward save Bella from someone they all trusted?


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 88773
[Report This] Published: February 10, 2010 Updated: August 31, 2010


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: September 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Epilogue

that was so great! im glad that billy got to see jake, and jake took im home!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

i feel so bad for bella! that she had to go through all of this and she lost her best friend! i hope she gets better!



Author's Response:

she will i promise :)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

i liked the fact that she is back that she was able to open up and talk to anyone! im so happy that they are getting back to where they want to be!



Author's Response:

it is better now isnt it??

 




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