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Hopeless by JanCullen86 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 805]
Summary:

Summary: In a world where every marriage is arranged Bella Swan grows up dreaming of romance. Can she find happiness and love in a marriage that she never wanted?

 

Set in modern times AU/AH.

 

Hopeless

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 49654
[Report This] Published: February 12, 2010 Updated: December 19, 2010


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: December 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

im glad that bella was able to have the guts to talk to her mom! and that her mom was honest! i hope that edward and bella have some kids sooner rather than later!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're glad. And as for kids my lips are sealed.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: December 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

freaking psycho mike!! i hope that they can convince whoever it is that they are meeting that they are a good match and that mike get s the tar beaten out of him!! emmet, jasper and edward would make ground beef out of him! and i hope that bella and edward get it on before anything happens!!

 
Summary:

What if the vampire family that embraced Bella was not the Cullen's but the Denali's. After a series of tragic events, Bella is led to Denali. Despite the unpleasantness that leads to her joining their family, she eagerly accepts all the love and sense of sisterhood the Denali's offer her. Bella finds herself happier than she's ever been. But how long will that happiness last? What happens when the Cullen's come to meet the newest addition to the Denali coven?

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AU/ OOC

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes Word count: 94495
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2010 Updated: June 28, 2010


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

well, edward has created a monster! i hope that bella talk s to tanya soon. maybe they can fix their relationship!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! There willl be plenty of talking ahead.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

when will tanya tell the others whats going on?! im so excited for her!



Author's Response:

Hmmm. We'll see about Tanya soon. Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

so did tanya find an imprint to be with?



Author's Response:

We'll see...

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

holy hell poor bella! i hope that the family can help her! what is she gonna do?! and what about edward? why don't they just talk about it?! they'll be upset, but they'll get over it! they are easily distracted right?



Author's Response:

Lol you'll have to wait and see! Next chapter will be up soon!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

i hope that tanya gets over it and isn't too upset! i wonder if anyone followed them and know what's going on! especially tanya!



Author's Response:

We'll see...

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

poor bella, i hope that the guilt doesn't stop her from being with edward!



Author's Response:

Lol probably not...

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

i wonder who will go and who will stay? im glad tanya is ok and getting better! maybe she can find someone too?



Author's Response:

We'll see...Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

lucky tanya! i hope that everything goes well with his change! and i hope that tanya tells everyone soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

im nervous for bella, she won't be able to completely get away from that wolf unharmed. will tanya be able to help her? will she be ok? what about the wolf? who is it?



Author's Response:

The Bella and wolf fight will be a tough one. The other questions will be answered in the next chapter. Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

i hope that the others don't maim tanya for being a dork! and that the wolves don't declare war!



Author's Response:

Lol We'll see what happns...

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

time for war? or will the wolves listen to reason? i hope that no one dies!



Author's Response:

We'll see.... Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

well, that went better than i thought it would. i hope that they can get everything together and leave, maybe they can all go to russia.



Author's Response:

We'll see...Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

i hope that they are ok when they go to russia. they won't ever be able to return to forks, will they?



Author's Response:

We'll see...

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Epilogue

oh bella is so naughty! im so happy for tanya and the whole family! they deserve it!

 
Summary:

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 Having escaped to Forks, will Bella find solace in dark Edward Cullen? How hard will Edward have to fight to keep that which he longs to claim? Rated MA for lemons, language, drug and alcohol references. Tattoo's, piercings- all manners of fun bad-boy goodness. For those of you who prefer a more Canon Edward, be forewarned.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Completed: No Word count: 350733
[Report This] Published: February 18, 2010 Updated: May 28, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Deep Inside of You

the dance and after was so hot! i love edward in leather pants!! nothing better!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Love Addict

that sounds like an awesome party! i can't wait to see what edward thinks about bella's second costume!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: September 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Boots and Boys

this was so awesome! zorro? freaking cool! i love it. and she loves him! i wonder what he'll think of bella's other outfit?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Position Of Power

freaking paul! i hope that bella and edward get home safely and that jakes 'friends' don't try to pull anything later!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: She's Not Innocent

they are so awesome! i can't wait to see what happens at the dance! if another chick tries to butt in! im so excited to see if something happens on the bike!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Built For Pleasure

that was hot! i have to admit ive thought of doing something like that when i was in school! it  was awesome! i hope that bella gets her just desserts later, and edward wearing guy liner and other gay stuff, i could totally see it in my mind i laughed out loud! i love it!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: December 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Amazed

alice and jasper are on another level all together! they just fit, like puzzle piecesat the corner, if they were missing th picture would still look ok, but they would look weird without each other. they are so great!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Memories

i LOVED the banter between the kids when the old people were listening! that was too awesome! i can't wait for more!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Say You'll Haunt Me

im excited about their ink,it sounds awesome!i love how they are on the same wave length, its so cool!

 




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