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Penname: delilah69 [Contact]
Real name: kristin
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Member Since: February 16, 2010
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Summary:

Isabella Swan has lived too many lifetimes and made too many mistakes. So after her release from the Volturi, nearly 600 years of service later, she has gone in search of one of her mistakes: Carlisle.

She appears on the Cullens' doorstep with little expectation of what is to come.


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Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 69994
[Report This] Published: February 11, 2010 Updated: May 27, 2012


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Absent Rules

i wonder if acrlisle went to his office, or out for a run. mayeb a meeting with the wolves or even to work? i hope bella doesn't break the treaty!



Author's Response:

I'm already working on chapter 8, so you shouldn't have to wait too long. :)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: The Wolves

i wonder if she will say something out of the norm for 21st century school!



Author's Response:

Maybe, haha. I'm not giving anything away. ;P

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Moving On

i think that she will try to eat someone! i hope she doesnt!!



Author's Response:

Haha, I hope not. :P I think she's safe. Thank you for taking the time to read and review! Update is soon.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Somewhere between Hope and Happiness

i think that she should stand up to him! show him that shes strong! and her smell will linger! he'll smell her no matter what!



Author's Response:

Hmmm, we shall see. :) Thank you for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Confessions

i think that the denali coven need to back the eff off! what happened was only between them! i hope that bella gives them hell!



Author's Response:

lol, wow, I didn't expect a reaction like that! :P You're certainly right, the Denali coven shouldn't interfere... although Kate is Iago's mate; her input will be inescapable. Unfortunately. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Time To Tell Pt I

ah,alistair the hermit... i wonder how that meeting went. how will edward react hearing all of bellas past?

 



Author's Response:

Next chapter is in the queue, you won't have to wait very long. :D Thank you for reading and reviewing!

 
A Rough Start by itzmegan73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 877]
Summary:

Overnight, irresponsible Edward goes from bachelor to father of a 5 yr old boy. Meanwhile responsible, prepared Bella begins her first job as Kindergarten teacher at Forks Elementary. When irresponsible meets the epitome of responsible, sparks will fly!

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Completed: Yes Word count: 250550
[Report This] Published: February 11, 2010 Updated: August 31, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Girl Fight Tonight

ROSE IS AMAZING!!!! i loved that! vicki totally deserved it!! what a ho! i hope that the ride and back will be uneventful!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: September 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Caravan of Love

he should still ask her! they could have a house together! brady bunch style! im so glad that the visit went so well!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: December 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 Please Come Home for Christmas

i feel so bad for carlisle! i wonder who he thinks edward is? will he always be sick? will edward be able to get anthony out?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Crazy Love

thats so awesome! i hope that when he does ask her to marry him she says yes! will they move into that awesome house together? and alice taking notes! that was great!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Break Out

poor edward! i know hes trying. i think that maybe he should go see someone. but im so glad that hes trying for anthony! and poor rose is leaving and hes just getting used to her. i hope that it doesn't set him back!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: November 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Time After Time

they should elope! and get married!! that would be awesome! i hope christmas is awesome for them!!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: December 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - With This Ring

that was such an awesome idea!! it was so sweet! and anthony joining his dad! that was beyond cute! im glad she said yes! what will her mother think of that?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Our House

i hope that edward and esme can be ok with each other! they deserve to have some kind of relationship.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Love is a Battlefield

anthony is going to be heartbroken! i hope that bella and edward can make it easier for him!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - Tonight, I Celebrate My Love

i wish my husband liked 'that thing' like edward does! i can't wait to see what happens when they g back to the real world!

 
Hopeless by JanCullen86 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 805]
Summary:

Summary: In a world where every marriage is arranged Bella Swan grows up dreaming of romance. Can she find happiness and love in a marriage that she never wanted?

 

Set in modern times AU/AH.

 

Hopeless

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 49654
[Report This] Published: February 12, 2010 Updated: December 18, 2010


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: September 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

they are so sweet! i love it!  i do feel bad for bella, thinking one thing then finding out something different.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you love it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

omg! freaking renee! and how are they gonna tell his parents that they aren't!? this is a mess. i hope that edward isn't upset over the missunderstanding! i can't wait to see ho wthis turns out!



Author's Response:

Haha! Well I'm working on the next chapter now and  it's coming along pretty well. I hope that I can get it finished this week.

Thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

i think that they should talk to each other and be honest! and that if they kissed it would be awesome!



Author's Response:

There is a big talk in the next chapter.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

thats so awesome!!! im so happy for them! they are finally working it out! i love it!



Author's Response:

I'm glad to hear that! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: December 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

im glad that bella was able to have the guts to talk to her mom! and that her mom was honest! i hope that edward and bella have some kids sooner rather than later!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're glad. And as for kids my lips are sealed.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: December 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

freaking psycho mike!! i hope that they can convince whoever it is that they are meeting that they are a good match and that mike get s the tar beaten out of him!! emmet, jasper and edward would make ground beef out of him! and i hope that bella and edward get it on before anything happens!!

 
Summary:

What if the vampire family that embraced Bella was not the Cullen's but the Denali's. After a series of tragic events, Bella is led to Denali. Despite the unpleasantness that leads to her joining their family, she eagerly accepts all the love and sense of sisterhood the Denali's offer her. Bella finds herself happier than she's ever been. But how long will that happiness last? What happens when the Cullen's come to meet the newest addition to the Denali coven?

 This story has been beta'ed by the lovely and wonderful Mommakat!!!

 

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AU/ OOC

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes Word count: 94495
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2010 Updated: June 27, 2010


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

well, edward has created a monster! i hope that bella talk s to tanya soon. maybe they can fix their relationship!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! There willl be plenty of talking ahead.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

when will tanya tell the others whats going on?! im so excited for her!



Author's Response:

Hmmm. We'll see about Tanya soon. Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

so did tanya find an imprint to be with?



Author's Response:

We'll see...

 




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