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Penname: delilah69 [Contact]
Real name: kristin
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Member Since: February 16, 2010
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A Rough Start by itzmegan73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 877]
Summary:

Overnight, irresponsible Edward goes from bachelor to father of a 5 yr old boy. Meanwhile responsible, prepared Bella begins her first job as Kindergarten teacher at Forks Elementary. When irresponsible meets the epitome of responsible, sparks will fly!

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Completed: Yes Word count: 250550
[Report This] Published: February 12, 2010 Updated: August 31, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: September 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Caravan of Love

he should still ask her! they could have a house together! brady bunch style! im so glad that the visit went so well!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: December 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 Please Come Home for Christmas

i feel so bad for carlisle! i wonder who he thinks edward is? will he always be sick? will edward be able to get anthony out?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Crazy Love

thats so awesome! i hope that when he does ask her to marry him she says yes! will they move into that awesome house together? and alice taking notes! that was great!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Break Out

poor edward! i know hes trying. i think that maybe he should go see someone. but im so glad that hes trying for anthony! and poor rose is leaving and hes just getting used to her. i hope that it doesn't set him back!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: November 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Time After Time

they should elope! and get married!! that would be awesome! i hope christmas is awesome for them!!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: December 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - With This Ring

that was such an awesome idea!! it was so sweet! and anthony joining his dad! that was beyond cute! im glad she said yes! what will her mother think of that?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Our House

i hope that edward and esme can be ok with each other! they deserve to have some kind of relationship.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Love is a Battlefield

anthony is going to be heartbroken! i hope that bella and edward can make it easier for him!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - Tonight, I Celebrate My Love

i wish my husband liked 'that thing' like edward does! i can't wait to see what happens when they g back to the real world!

 
Hopeless by JanCullen86 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 805]
Summary:

Summary: In a world where every marriage is arranged Bella Swan grows up dreaming of romance. Can she find happiness and love in a marriage that she never wanted?

 

Set in modern times AU/AH.

 

Hopeless

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 49654
[Report This] Published: February 12, 2010 Updated: December 19, 2010


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: September 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

they are so sweet! i love it!  i do feel bad for bella, thinking one thing then finding out something different.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you love it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

omg! freaking renee! and how are they gonna tell his parents that they aren't!? this is a mess. i hope that edward isn't upset over the missunderstanding! i can't wait to see ho wthis turns out!



Author's Response:

Haha! Well I'm working on the next chapter now and  it's coming along pretty well. I hope that I can get it finished this week.

Thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

i think that they should talk to each other and be honest! and that if they kissed it would be awesome!



Author's Response:

There is a big talk in the next chapter.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

thats so awesome!!! im so happy for them! they are finally working it out! i love it!



Author's Response:

I'm glad to hear that! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: December 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

im glad that bella was able to have the guts to talk to her mom! and that her mom was honest! i hope that edward and bella have some kids sooner rather than later!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're glad. And as for kids my lips are sealed.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: December 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

freaking psycho mike!! i hope that they can convince whoever it is that they are meeting that they are a good match and that mike get s the tar beaten out of him!! emmet, jasper and edward would make ground beef out of him! and i hope that bella and edward get it on before anything happens!!

 
Summary:

What if the vampire family that embraced Bella was not the Cullen's but the Denali's. After a series of tragic events, Bella is led to Denali. Despite the unpleasantness that leads to her joining their family, she eagerly accepts all the love and sense of sisterhood the Denali's offer her. Bella finds herself happier than she's ever been. But how long will that happiness last? What happens when the Cullen's come to meet the newest addition to the Denali coven?

 This story has been beta'ed by the lovely and wonderful Mommakat!!!

 

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AU/ OOC

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes Word count: 94495
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2010 Updated: June 28, 2010


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

well, edward has created a monster! i hope that bella talk s to tanya soon. maybe they can fix their relationship!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! There willl be plenty of talking ahead.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

when will tanya tell the others whats going on?! im so excited for her!



Author's Response:

Hmmm. We'll see about Tanya soon. Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

so did tanya find an imprint to be with?



Author's Response:

We'll see...

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

holy hell poor bella! i hope that the family can help her! what is she gonna do?! and what about edward? why don't they just talk about it?! they'll be upset, but they'll get over it! they are easily distracted right?



Author's Response:

Lol you'll have to wait and see! Next chapter will be up soon!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

i hope that tanya gets over it and isn't too upset! i wonder if anyone followed them and know what's going on! especially tanya!



Author's Response:

We'll see...

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

poor bella, i hope that the guilt doesn't stop her from being with edward!



Author's Response:

Lol probably not...

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

i wonder who will go and who will stay? im glad tanya is ok and getting better! maybe she can find someone too?



Author's Response:

We'll see...Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

lucky tanya! i hope that everything goes well with his change! and i hope that tanya tells everyone soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

im nervous for bella, she won't be able to completely get away from that wolf unharmed. will tanya be able to help her? will she be ok? what about the wolf? who is it?



Author's Response:

The Bella and wolf fight will be a tough one. The other questions will be answered in the next chapter. Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

i hope that the others don't maim tanya for being a dork! and that the wolves don't declare war!



Author's Response:

Lol We'll see what happns...

 




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