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Penname: delilah69 [Contact]
Real name: kristin
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Member Since: February 16, 2010
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full moon by SirenSongx Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 468]
Summary:

“He left me! Am I really just a pet?” was the only thing Bella could think of as she watched her true love leap out his bedroom window. Will she ever be the same again? Will Edward return, when? How can he be so close yet unreachable? Not even a pack of wolves or a coven of vampires can answer that question but they will sure try.

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Sequel to daybreak, read it first.

Set during summer of 2006.

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: The Daybreak Saga
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 92552
[Report This] Published: November 03, 2009 Updated: August 26, 2010


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: 21: Breakable

i hope that edward gets his head out of his butt and changes her!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: 23: Outnumbered

i hate that edward is so stubborn and pigheaded! he needs to just do it and get it over with! then it will be ok!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: 24: What Have I Done?

i love jasper and bella's friendship! its too funny, he makes an amazing brother!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Epilogue: Soiree

this was soooo good! i loved it! i really liked the different view! and i can't wait to see what bella's answer is!

 
Numb by Tyranny Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 655]
Summary:

Numb by Tyranny

 

Bella has spent her life abused and betrayed. Now she feels nothing. When she meets the new boy in school she starts to feel again. But is the pain worth the possibility of something better? NC-17 for violence, language, possible lemons in later chapters.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: No Word count: 113960
[Report This] Published: November 10, 2009 Updated: August 12, 2013


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

im glad that rose and emmet are helping bella! im sure she could use the back up!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

that was so awesome! they should have a party! and celebrate getting rid of charlie! i hope that he doesn't do anything stupider and someone gets hurt!



Author's Response:

Let's have a party for them. Lord knows Bella could use it. Thanks for the review.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: September 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Outtake 2

charlie is completely out of his ever-loving mind! i hope that they can keep him away from bella and the cullens!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

i really hope that the cullens can save bella! what will her dad do to her? will she be ok?! im totally on the edge of my seat! what happens next?!



Author's Response:

You'll be finding out soon enough. Thanks.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

i feel so horrible for bella! she shouldn't have to suffer like this! and i hope that they don't find her mother. and that she can stay with the cullens forever!



Author's Response:

Not giving anything away, but closure is important to healing. That's all I'm gonna say. Thanks.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

i hope that she can let edward in and that he can help her and she can feel better!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Outtake 1

jasper and alice are beyond adorable! i love it!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: December 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 21

what does charlie want? will he shoot emmet to get to bella? will he be able to keep her safe?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: December 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 22

so her mom is finally contacting her? after everything? abandoning her with that monster?!

 
Summary:

Marriage first, then kids. That's how it goes for most people. Bella Swan isn't most people, though.

She mothered his daughter, unbeknownst to him. Now she's a small town teacher with a bestseller and a broken heart, hiding her true feelings from the rest of the world. He's America's hottest actor, cheerful for the cameras, but he doesn't have his family fooled.

She can't go anywhere without seeing his face and he can't go one second without thinking about her. They've both made mistakes, and they've both screwed up. They both wish that they could move on, but neither of them is ready to give up on the past, no matter how much pain is caused in the process.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Other Character, Rosalie, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 52575
[Report This] Published: November 11, 2009 Updated: January 27, 2012


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: January 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Baily

poor edward im sure that hes thinking what has he got himself into!? and poor lilly! cps usually has more tact than that!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: September 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Home

so edward is barging in after being an absentee dad?! tell him to get out! and i hope that he begs and grovwls for forgiveness!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Missing

holy crap what is going on with the little girls at her school and where is she?! what will edward think about all of this?! will they find her? will she be ok?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Known

i wonder if they are having a party or going somewhere fun for a goodbye to their friend? i hope that they are safe!!!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Amazing

what does edward want exactly? does he still love bella? does he want to be in their lives? will he want to take lilly away to spend time with him?

 
Loner by Nilla Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9906]
Summary:

Edward Cullen was a loner, an outcast. He clearly hated everybody, including himself. He was not a nice person. So, why was I so drawn to him? And why did I get the crazy feeling he felt the same way?

WARNING: This story will deal with the aftermath of child abuse and rape. If that bothers you too much, I strongly recommend that you don’t read.

 

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 115 Completed: Yes Word count: 365612
[Report This] Published: November 13, 2009 Updated: July 06, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: January 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

i hope that bella's sickness isn't anything too serious! will she get better soon? and will edward get sick too?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

yeah mushrooms are mushy enough as it is! im worried about edward and the days bella will be gone. i hope that he doesn't push her away!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

is bella hurt? will she be ok? im glad edward is getting better! will edward go to arizona to help bella?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

i hope that jake doesn't come back to cause more problems!! why did bella call edward crying?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

i wonder if maybe edward would go with her? i hope that he can help her!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: January 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

emmet can be pretty awesome! i hope that maybe his words have helped edward some! hes totally right! and even trying to convince yourself that they are the right person so that you can push throught it isn't right either!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

i was really worried he would do something stupid and leave bella! im glad that he isn't!

 




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