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Penname: delilah69 [Contact]
Real name: kristin
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Member Since: February 16, 2010
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Summary:

Isabella is a handmaid to Princess Jessica, Daughter of King Aro. When a knight from a neighboring kingdom wins his choice of bride, Sir Edward bypasses the princess and claims the handmaid instead. Isabella suddenly finds herself married to a man she does not know, and is tossed into the middle of political plots and scheming nobles. Her life is further turned upside down when she is unable to give her husband the one thing he must have.

"This is the hour of Forks' revenge. Volterra will fall to us for Aro's actions against your Queen, and no one – no one – who fights for Volterra will survive. We will not stop until every wall, every tower, every single structure in all of Volterra has been razed."

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: Yes Word count: 229617
[Report This] Published: December 06, 2010 Updated: December 02, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Dolefully Struggle

i was terrified for edward and jasper! and all those men they lost!? how horrible?! im sure aro is getting help from someone.... who is it? and will forks be able to mount a better army? will bella finally be pregnant??

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24-Lamentably Arrange

what the hell!?!? she is coming because bella got chosen and not jessica!! i think that if i were bella i would die! i wouldn't stand for it!! not now, not ever!! how could they do that!?

 
Summary:

All Human.  Bella gets knocked up during her senior year of high school, but Edward doesn't believe her.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Angela, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 96724
[Report This] Published: December 13, 2010 Updated: September 09, 2012


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: March 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

i don't think that tanyas baby is edwards! and i hopet hat it isn''t! will they ever be able to get back together? will it ever get easier for bella? maybe a nice guy that doesn't care that she has kids. maybe that will get edwards jealous juices working and he'll try harder for bella and the twins

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

i do hope that they can get some of their relationship back! they deserve to be happy, and not walking around on eggshells all the time! and i hope renee gets the message! unwanted!



Author's Response:

I want them back together, too!  

Thanks so much for reading! My One Shot, Honor Thy Father (which is here and on ff) has been nominated at the Single shot Awards. I would love it if you would please read and vote for me. http://thesingleshotawards.blogspot.com/

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

im sure that edward will show he can be a real man and a good dad! they can work together to take care of the babies!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

tanya is crazy! i wonder if she'll be back? and will tanya's bad juju be gone from edwards junk and he'll be able to win bella back?



Author's Response:

Yes, tanya is crazy! No, she's won't be back - she's gone for good!! As for Bella and Edward - you'll hae to wait on that one. :)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

the housewas a very kind thought! i hope that bella and edward can start over!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

i really hope that edward has changed and that renee stays away and that bella can really trust edward to do the right thing!

 
Summary:

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Isabella Swan learns that she's been traded like chattle by her own father. She's sent to England and married off to one Edward Cullen, asshole extraordinaire, but there's a reason for his temper problem and Bella's determined to break down his walls.

They told me on my eighteenth birthday, after Jacob had left. They told me that in a month I would be moving away, to live with a man a decade older, and run a household that I had never seen half the world away from home. I was given a blank manila envelope. It contained two pieces of paper; one was a contract, the other was a letter.

Mostly Bella POV, but other POV's are given periodically.

NC-17 for language, violence, and sexual themes in later chapters.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 19893
[Report This] Published: December 22, 2010 Updated: June 27, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: January 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

knowing alice she'll either be straddiling bella or her face will be ultra close and she'll just be smiling and staring. creepy alice. what is edward doing?! going to tanya when hes supposed to be getting married to bella!!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

so bella is going to be kidnapped after edward has fallen for bella... will aro's plan work?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

im surprised by jakes out burst! did he really think it was going to work? will edward give up all other girls?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: January 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

im sure that esme will take pity on bella and just ignore renee! and were did edward go again? i feel so bad for bella! she doesn't even know that her fiance was out banging some other in the middle of the night! and he was just sneaking in!? what kind of person is he?!?! and i hope that maybe talking and getting to know bella will maybe help to change his outlook on this union? maybe bellas too?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

aro is a sick individual! i hope that edward quits being a jerk. and i think if anything rose hates her cause she knows that edward is still with tanya. how will the wedding night play out?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

who is after edward and bella? what do they want? will edward stop sleeping with tanya now?

 
Summary:

This story is based off the song What Do You Want From Me? by Jarrod Niemann.

Edward recieves a call from a person who has haunted his dreams. Can he forgive? Will he?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4713
[Report This] Published: December 23, 2010 Updated: December 28, 2010


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: March 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: What Do You Want From Me?

is she serious?! will they stay together? was it all just a dream?



Author's Response:

WHo knows? I guess it's up to you...haha! Not gonna lie, I wrote the following morning. I just like the idea of not giving all the answers! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Unplanned Perfection by littlecat358 New! Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 522]
Summary:

Bella and Alice were best friends, which made Bella the only girl off limits to Alice's brother Edward. When a party the summer after graduation gets out of control, Bella's world is turned upside down. "He doesn't know. I don't want him to." 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Riley, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: No Word count: 354450
[Report This] Published: January 12, 2011 Updated: May 19, 2013


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: March 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: The Prodigal Son

some men are so dumb! if they only stopped and talked about things, everything would eb so much easier!



Author's Response:

Oh, there are so many miscommunications in this story it will make your head spin. LOL. 

Thanx for R & R. 

~lc~

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Baby Steps

i hope that whatever edward chooses its the best for the boy and bella!



Author's Response:

Me too. LOL. Next chapter is already submitted so should be up soon. :oD 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. 

~lc~

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Confessions

i feel so bad for bella! she doesn't deserve to have to go through all of this with edward acting like a colossal jerk! it depresses me! will he ever want to know charlie?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: March 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Parks and Recreation

i wonder how edward is going to respond to charlie? and bellafor that matter when he finds out! i hope that they can run interference for bella! will he try to take charlie away?



Author's Response:

There's all sorts of ups and downs coming up. The next chapter is with the validating beta right now. Hopefully will post soon. :o) 

Thank you for reading and reviewing. 

~lc~

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Small Town Gossip

hes going to freak when he finds out about charlie isn't he? i hope bella has a plan in place! like maybe he'll see jake playing with him and jump to conclusions?



Author's Response:

Hmmm, you'll find out very soon. Thank you for reading and reviewing. The next chapter is going to the Twi'd beta today. :oD 

~lc~

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: March 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Bar Fights and Barbecues

i hope that charlie will be ok!! was there a car accident? did he fall? allergic reaction?



Author's Response:

Oh, crap, this certainly isn't the chapter that it should have taken me so long to update. It's finished, but just needs a little tweaking. Will be with the beta this weekend, I promise. 

Thank you for reading and reviewing. 

~lc~

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Peace and Revenge

i hope that bella gives it to the chief good! it was funny for him, butim sure that bella was having a stroke!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Moving Forward

i hope that edward doesn't accuse her of anything else! and he treats her with some respect!



Author's Response:

Oh, oh, oh. There's still a lot of emotions at play here and neither one of them is thinking rationally at the moment. It's gonna take some time for them to hit even ground. It'll happen though. 

Thank you for reading and reviewing. The next chapter is already submitted and should be up soon. 

 

~lc~

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Reality Check

i have a feeling that the minute edward meets charlie he is going to fall in love and not want to leave him. he'll make mistakes, but every parent does!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Decisions Made

i hope that riley shows up and is obnoxious! and bella sends him on his way! im excited that edward wants to take a chance and know his son



Author's Response:

You'll get E's thought process in the next chapter and how he came to his conclusion. :oD 

As for Riley....Hmmmmm. LOL. 

Thank you for reading and for reviewing. Next chapter is submitted and shouldn't be too much longer. 

~lc~

 




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