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Leaves of Grass by nautical Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 578]
Summary: Feature

 

When Bella and Edward return home from Volterra in New Moon, she isn't sure if she can still love him after everything that has happened.  Their problems extend far beyond the vampire/human power imbalance, as she realizes that Edward will never allow them to be equal partners in the relationship.

The next morning, Bella awakens in a time and place she would have never imagined: Houston, 1862. Far from home, her family, and everything she has ever known, Bella must decide how far she is willing to go to follow her heart. (B/J)

(Thank you to Ms_Ambrosia, Starnosy, and So_Unseelie for the fabulous banners.)

 

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 89659
[Report This] Published: November 10, 2010 Updated: December 20, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

i hope that bellas change goes well! and that the volturi don't cause any problems when they come through the neighborhood!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

thank heavens it was jasper!! and im surprised that she got down and dirty without thinking about any possibility of kids!



Author's Response:

She did think about it, and calculated that she was in a "safe" part of her cycle.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: March 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

will jasper be coming back? will he and bella be together? or will maria get him before he comes back for bella? what will bella do if that happens? i can't wait to find out!!!



Author's Response:

This isn't the end to Jasper in the story. I don't want to spoil it by saying what has or hasn't happened to him, but we will find out soon.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

i hope that its jasper coming home to visit! is it?! will bella be safe?!



Author's Response:

It wouldn't do to kill off our heroine and narrator, so I promise she'll be fine.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

that totally sucks! i feel so bad for bella! will she wake up in her own time? or will she wake up and try to go after jasper and maria?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

will this be the last time she sees jasper as a human? it breaks my heart to know that they're making all these plans and they won't be able to follow through with any of them....



Author's Response:

I'm afraid I'm going to have to keep mum.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

i was thinking the same thing! did bella return with a mini jasper souvenir?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

i was hoping that it all wasnt just a dream!! will they be together?!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

will jasper and bella get married again? will he build that house for her on his families land?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

bella and jasper will explode if they have to wait too long! how will the family react when they get back?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

will jasper be around? when will they leave the area so she can become one of them? and i hope nothing terrible happened to the family!!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

i hope that alice finds her one soon! and that edward might take tanya up on her many offers! he really needs to get over bella! he left her!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

i hope that only good things are in that book about jasper's family!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

i kind of hoped that the land was still out there and able for jasper and bella to have ahome built on it... is that even possible?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

i am so freaking happy for jasper and bella!! such an awesome story!! i loved it all!!

 
Everlasting by SirenSongx Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 97]
Summary:

 

If it wasn’t for Victoria, life in Forks would be perfect. But no, the stubborn red-head has to interfere with our lives, again. Talk about the camping experience from hell! 1 crazed newborn+1wolf pup+1vengful nomad+1 protective vampire boyfriend+1 frightened human = blood and death. I never thought it would be my own.

Excerpt from chapter 1: I felt the fist pierce through my chest. I looked down at the bloody appendage stretching from the wound in my chest then my eyes slowly lifted to the ruby red orbs as they beamed down at me. A wicked and ecstatic smile curled her lip.

I gazed across the clearing to the pools of honey, they were traumatized and hurt. I felt the hand retract from my chest and I fell to the ground with a thump. My eyes drifted closed and I vaguely remember the enraged growl and the sound of metal being stretched beyond its limits.

I was dying, soon I would be dead and the red-headed bitch would have succeeded in her revenge and I would never see those loving topaz eyes again.

Thump, thump…thump……thump………

everlasting

A story of having your cake and eating it too.

Starts on chapter 24 of Eclipse. Alternating PoV between Bella and Edward.

everlastingButton made by MsRason for winning the Guess that Banner contest on TwiNetwork.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 34200
[Report This] Published: November 26, 2010 Updated: November 18, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: 6: Mood Swings From Hell

i wonder what bella is? will they ever find out what she is?



Author's Response:

Yep, they'll find out but not till chapter 11 or 12 so there is still plenty of time for them to go bald while thinking. Thanks for reviewing.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: 7: Changes

that car is too hot!! i wish i had one!!



Author's Response:

LOL, they were pretty rare, which is why I gave Edward one. Did Bella make a good selection though? Bella and I are a lot alike so if I liked the car I figured she would too. ^_^

 
Summary:

Isabella is a handmaid to Princess Jessica, Daughter of King Aro. When a knight from a neighboring kingdom wins his choice of bride, Sir Edward bypasses the princess and claims the handmaid instead. Isabella suddenly finds herself married to a man she does not know, and is tossed into the middle of political plots and scheming nobles. Her life is further turned upside down when she is unable to give her husband the one thing he must have.

"This is the hour of Forks' revenge. Volterra will fall to us for Aro's actions against your Queen, and no one – no one – who fights for Volterra will survive. We will not stop until every wall, every tower, every single structure in all of Volterra has been razed."

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: Yes Word count: 229617
[Report This] Published: December 06, 2010 Updated: December 02, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- Inelegantly Fail

is the girl rosealie? will bella save her? she does need a hand maiden! will edward be upset when he finds out what bella saw? will those knights get in any trouble?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: March 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16- Finally Consummate

i think that it was awesome!! im so happy for them!! did they start a baby? and was seth uncomfortable waiting outside their room while they were busy and making noise?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: March 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Regretfully Question

im nervous for bella and edward. i hope they can work together and get it all right! will the tournament be a spectacle as well. and what heppened to tanya and irina?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Abashedly Interrupted

they totally deserved what they got!! im sure it isn't the last we've seen of them is it?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Dutifully Sacrifice

i think that edward will think harder now and prepare for ruling as well. im not sure how bella will handle edward being gone! i know it kills me everytime i am away from my husband! will bella give him his gift before he leaves? will she be pregnant after all of the romps theyve had? i hope so!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Resolutely Surrender

maybe seth would be a good guard? i hope that whoever they choose they keep bella safe!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Reluctantly Wager

im glad bella is showing her husband what she wants! and that edward won! whether or not it was for his first horse, who cares... he won and jane im sure will work hard and be helpful to edward and bella!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Covertly Entice

i hoep that edward taking her over and over will producean heir!! or bella, edward, and the rest of the kingdom might go crazy!

 




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