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Penname: delilah69 [Contact]
Real name: kristin
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Member Since: February 16, 2010
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Summary:

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Isabella Swan learns that she's been traded like chattle by her own father. She's sent to England and married off to one Edward Cullen, asshole extraordinaire, but there's a reason for his temper problem and Bella's determined to break down his walls.

They told me on my eighteenth birthday, after Jacob had left. They told me that in a month I would be moving away, to live with a man a decade older, and run a household that I had never seen half the world away from home. I was given a blank manila envelope. It contained two pieces of paper; one was a contract, the other was a letter.

Mostly Bella POV, but other POV's are given periodically.

NC-17 for language, violence, and sexual themes in later chapters.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 19893
[Report This] Published: December 23, 2010 Updated: June 27, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: January 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

im sure that esme will take pity on bella and just ignore renee! and were did edward go again? i feel so bad for bella! she doesn't even know that her fiance was out banging some other in the middle of the night! and he was just sneaking in!? what kind of person is he?!?! and i hope that maybe talking and getting to know bella will maybe help to change his outlook on this union? maybe bellas too?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

aro is a sick individual! i hope that edward quits being a jerk. and i think if anything rose hates her cause she knows that edward is still with tanya. how will the wedding night play out?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

who is after edward and bella? what do they want? will edward stop sleeping with tanya now?

 
Summary:

This story is based off the song What Do You Want From Me? by Jarrod Niemann.

Edward recieves a call from a person who has haunted his dreams. Can he forgive? Will he?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4713
[Report This] Published: December 24, 2010 Updated: December 29, 2010


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: March 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: What Do You Want From Me?

is she serious?! will they stay together? was it all just a dream?



Author's Response:

WHo knows? I guess it's up to you...haha! Not gonna lie, I wrote the following morning. I just like the idea of not giving all the answers! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Summary:

Edward was the one great "what-if" of Bella's life. Eight years after he left her  without a word, a crisis brings them face to face in an unexpected time and place.

A short-story written for the Fandom for Preemies Effort, 2010.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 41702
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2011 Updated: February 27, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: January 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

hes engaged!? what the hell!? and yet hes still going after other girls!? i hope that bella confronts him!!



Author's Response:

I know, I know... Poor Bella, WTH is right.  Next chapter will be up soon! :-)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: January 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

how did they get so close and then just break apart? did he end up having to plan something with rosealie? when will she meet his brother? why aren't edward and bella still together?



Author's Response:

I hope you got all your answers.  Sorry I missed this review, though I'm not sure I would have answered all of that since it all gets revealed in the next chapter. LOL!  Thanks for the reivew though!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

i wonder if charlie looked edward up and didn't want a possible psycho bothering his daughter? i hope they make iit work!! willthe baby be ok!?



Author's Response:

That is exactly what happened.  Charlie did a little research when his daughter came home broken hearted.  He didn't want her to know and face possibly further heart ache.  It was a mistake.  But a father's love knows no bounds.  I think Edward will understand one day soon! ;-)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

im so happy theyre together and getting their happliy ever after!!



Author's Response:

yeah!  thank you so much!!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue 1

i love them together! such a wonderful family!!



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I'm a little fond of them too. :)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Epilogue 2

they are so sweet! im so happy that they got their happily ever after!

 
Summerboy by Little Miss Mionie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 94]
Summary:

Every summer, Edward was Bella's secret escape from wintry Forks. Her worlds collide after "the incident" occurs, and Bella can't hide from the whispers at school saying she deserved what happened.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 44689
[Report This] Published: January 17, 2011 Updated: October 31, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Blue Skies

im glad that bella is getting better! and that she and edward are getting better too! i hope that bella doesn't let all of the high school drama get to her!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 06, 2011 Title: Summerboy

i think that rose will make an awesome friend for bella! a take no crap kind of person!! however will bella ever make up with edward? is he really ready to give up and go out with the likes of jessica and lauren?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Lightning Strike

i hope that bella does get help! and that if edward loves her he just needs to say it!! or bella needs to learn to be strong and not let those people get her down!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Howling Wind

that totally sucks for bella! i hope that edward doesn't abandon bella too! alice is awesome!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Storm Clouds

i hope bella doesn't get into trouble for missing her detention. is edward really interested in being more than friends with bella?



Author's Response:

Hi delilah69 :) Thanks for reviewing. Edward is TOTALLY interested in being more than friends with Bella. xx ily LMM

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Rising Humidity

will bella and edward ever be together without any weirdness?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Heavy Downpour

i hope that rose becomes a good friend to bella!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Cool Breeze

i hope that bella gets back to her happy place and that she and edward can be together without all the crap and drama!!

 
dark sun by SirenSongx Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 80]
Summary:

Love, vampires, wolves, compromises, war…how much more can one human take?! When the past comes back to kill Bella how does everyone react? Can there be peace between the Cullen’s and Quileutes long enough to protect the one human everyone adores.

 

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Set in 2007/08 – Forks, Washington

 

Book 3 in Saga. Read Daybreak first then Full Moon before starting this or you'll be confused.


Categories: Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: The Daybreak Saga
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 42386
[Report This] Published: January 20, 2011 Updated: April 20, 2013


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: March 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: 5: Suggestions

they are so awesome together! i have something like that with my husband! it actually hurts when hes gone. i hope that they can get victoria before she causes anymore damage!



Author's Response:

I have the same with my hubs, I hate it when he's at work all day. We know they get Victoria but I'm not guaranteeing no damage will be done first.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: 7: SINGS

miss congenitality, pure awesomeness!! im glad that bella whipped mike! he had it coming!



Author's Response:

Correct about the movie. I agree, he had it coming. Thanks for reviewing.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: 6: Switzerland Takes a Stand

freaking emmet! i bet he did that on purpose! they are so cute! and im glad to see the dog is still giving edward a hard time!!  i love that dog!



Author's Response:

LOL, leave it to Emmett to mess things up. I love the dog too. She adds a level of humor to the story that Emmett can't.

 
Coincidental Major by m7707 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 723]
Summary:

A tale about a hockey-playing boy who loves his girl. This is Edward's story from Major Misconduct.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 185715
[Report This] Published: January 25, 2011 Updated: July 05, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Ringing The Pipe

i love kate teasing edward! he will be able to play again right?!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: March 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Breakaway

edward is too funny! and cute!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Delay Of Game

poor edward! i hope he wakes up soon!

 

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: March 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Odd Man Rush

i love reading this from edwards pov! hes just as clueless as she is!! its too good!



Author's Response:

Thank you - so glad you're enjoying his story!

 




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