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Summary: Bella is a full-fledged grown-up. Well-traveled, accomplished, sophisticated, and trying to ignore the loneliness that keeps creeping up on her. When she meets a handsome, exciting, and significantly younger man, a new part of her awakens. But will their two drastically different places in life be too much to conquer?
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: No
Word count: 87430
[Report This] Published: September 28, 2010 Updated: December 05, 2011
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 28, 2011
Title: Chapter 28: Kibble
i can't wait fo esme to belittle bellain some fashion and then edward hears it and he and bella leave!! she is such a jerk!! i hate her aleady! the dogs room?! Author's Response: uugghh, the dog's room. Yes, Esme does leave quite a lot to be desired. Thanks so much for reading and for standing up for our Bella! I loved hearing from you! thanks for taking the time to read and leave me a note! Cheers!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 14, 2011
Title: Chapter 23: Pie
why would their mother want to let tanya know where edward was? and why would emmet let bella clean up before visiting?! what a dope! will tanya cause any problems between edward and bella? Author's Response: All good questions! We'll find out about mother's concerns soon. And Emmett was just super hungry, and she was just too tired to argue! :) We'll have to see about that Tanya....she is such a pain! Thanks for reading and for taking the time to drop a note!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 25: Overachiever
i love how bella realizes how carlisle's comment and edwards affinity for bella are going to mae esme hate her! i hope that bella can win them over! Author's Response: Girls understand girls, don't they? No matter how old we get, everything's a competition, whether we'll admit it or not. I hope she can win them over too! ;) Thanks so much for reading and for taking the time to drop me a note.
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 01, 2011
Title: Chapter 22: A Peek
naughty peter and char!! i hope that they can find james his own girl! Author's Response: I know! Our little Charlotte is a little kinky....thank for reading! And for your note!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 25, 2011
Title: Chapter 24: quick and quiet
when will mother be coming into the picture? and will she immediately not like bella? will she try to sabotage their relationship? and try to get edward back with tanya? Author's Response: Probably in 2-3 chapters we'll meet Esme... I can tell you she does have her reasons. Thanks so much for reading and for your note!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 08, 2011
Title: Chapter 26: Cigars and Rubies
its a vibrator! thats too funny! and hes a man, why does he need a flahlight?! what a pansy! is esme really going to hate bella? Author's Response: Hahaha!!!! I love it.... I really hope Esmeralda can see the light with Bella ;) thx for reading and your note!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 17, 2011
Title: Chapter 27: Boat House
i feel so bad for bella! i hate it when people already make up their minds not to like you and to make you feel so bad and not welcome.... i wonder who esme has invited from edwards past? Author's Response: I know, right? people make up their minds in advance all the time - and that is so hard to overcome! oooh, you think there are some more exes out there? Hmm, we'll see! thanks so much for reading and for your note!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 07, 2011
Title: Chapter 29: A Spell
i think that esme needs to stop actin like a child and grow up. if she doesn't like something say something! if she's uncomfortable she should say, hey this makes me uncomfortabl, this other thing might make me more comfortable.... and bella needs to man up, sit down with the old crazy lady and talk to her. if she knew bella she would love her!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 22, 2011
Title: Chapter 30: Maybe It Will Go Away
angela is so freaking funny! im glad that esme is getting help! she is sucha psycho! will her human side end? will edward propose to bella soon? Author's Response: sorry for the delay in my response, but I'm so happy you are enjoying Angela? As far as the other stuff....we'll just have to seeeeee :) thanks for reading and for your note!
Summary: Bella is Alice's adoptive mother. Edward is her science teacher. What happens when Edward notices something strange about Alice's doodling and calls Bella into a meeting to discuss it? Rated for future chapters and language. 
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Word count: 36020
[Report This] Published: October 01, 2010 Updated: April 11, 2013
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: March 18, 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- A heart to heart, a Party and a Goodbye
i love your story! i can't wait to read more!! will edward realize that alice is psychic and hes not dreaming! and when will bella and edward get to kiss?! im so excited! Author's Response: awww thank you x next chapter will be up soon 4 u :)
Summary: 

When Edward & Bella's son, Nathan, goes missing it turns their lives upside down. This is the journey they take to find him, & in the process realize everything isn't what it seems. M for language, themes, & future lemons EPOV E/B Eventually NO CHEATING!
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes
Word count: 152943
[Report This] Published: October 10, 2010 Updated: April 12, 2011
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 07, 2011
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28
i can't wait to see what the baby is!! wouldn't it be funny if a twin was hiding? Author's Response: LOL! Funny for us, not so much for Edward and Bella!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 14, 2011
Title: Chapter 31: Futuretake Two
that was awesome!! i loved the look at their future!!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: March 16, 2011
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25
im nervous that charlie is going to open his mouth and insert his foot! and upset bella further! i wouldn't want their relationship to be ruined because of it!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 10, 2011
Title: Chapter 30: Futuretake One
i had had 2 high-risk births, fun for me! i really liked this chapter! i liked the view into the future and getting rid of esme! it took long enough!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 05, 2011
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27
im so excited for them! i had a feeling that the guy in the rocker and the very last house would be important! im so happy for them!!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: March 29, 2011
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26
im so happy for them! im glad they are moving on together. i hope nathan adjusts to it all well too! Author's Response: Woo Hoo! They did it---exciting right? Not nearly as exciting as you are for reviewing :) Seriously, you’re amazing and thank you!
A few asked what I meant by traditional epi---it means I won’t be having one chapter to wrap their future up. The story has an ending point, and once it’s there it’s done---however, I do have 2 futuretakes planned `so you’ll see the future, just not in the traditionally done way.
For those who missed it, I did post an outtakes recently called ‘Three Days Later’ and I do have a current outtake in the Fandom Gives Back: Autism Awareness.
I’ll be busting out the next chapter as soon as I can, until then, a teaser.
"Bella, are you okay?" I asked, worried. She'd been looking a little green since we'd landed, and I was beginning to worry she'd caught a bug in North Carolina.
"I'm fine," she brushed off. "I've just never been a fan of flying."
"If you're sure," I replied. "Still, why don't you go lie down, and I'll get Nathan settled. I can start unpacking, fix some dinner, and work on laundry."
"Fix dinner?" Bella raised her eyebrow, amused.
"Order dinner," I corrected sheepishly. She chuckled before walking off to bed.
See you soon!
Kelly (SLM)
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 07, 2011
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22
im so happy that they re working together! and moving forward! will they be happy together? will esme, carlisle, and grannie continue to be a problem? tanys is really dead right?! Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much for your review! Interesting response this week...pretty much one spectrum or the other, so I’m going to do a brief clarification for all. The reason why I’m doing such an in-depth mass review reply to all is simply because my time is short this week, but I want everyone to get the teasers in a timely matter! If you have anymore questions, concerns, comments...etc, feel free to PM me, tweet me, or post in the Twi’d thread! I will get to your messages ASAP!
When Bella spoke about her arrangement with Jane, it was purely for sex. She drank, wound up in bed with her agent, who happened to be a woman, and then felt guilty, by her own admission. Though the arrangement continued, it wasn’t about love or commitment, it was about sex. Bella’s greatest fear had been to turn into her mother---sex with Jane ensured that wouldn’t and couldn’t happen. She was never in a committed relationship, and she didn’t turn Edward down because he was a guy. She did it because she commanded more respect. Bella with Jane was simply a friends with benefits type of deal, and really, no different than if she’d chosen a friends with benefits arrangement with a guy. She only called herself “maybe bi”, because she willingly had sex with a member of the opposite sex. However, I can tell you, in her head, she sees marriage, commitment, family...etc, with a man. Edward stood a chance until he showed himself to be a mama’s boy, and why, he now stands a chance again. She saw Jane as a means to “get off”, not introduce to her son and settle down with...that is Edward’s territory.
Sorry if this chapter wasn’t as clear as I had intended to be, and why, Bella’s confession was pretty low key. It’ll be talk about slightly more in coming chapters, but overall, it is simply what it is. I chose very specific words for a reason, and have heard/seen several people assume things I never intended, which is why I’m writing this out to all. This will end as a Edward and Bella story, this is just the story of how they get there. A few have wondered if there will be any femslash exploration in BI, the answer is no. If enough people want a B&Jane outtake I’ll consider it, but it’ll be an old school outtake from several years prior!
Now, onto the good stuff, I’m around, busy getting RL stuff done and then I’ll be hard core into writing. We’re actually slowly coming to the end of BI, and though that makes me sad, I’m excited too. It’s time for our favorite family of three to have some happiness in their lives!
Voting is still going on for the Shimmer Awards and BI is up for Best Tear Jerker.
I wrote a KPOV of Tanya’s death for the Floods for Australia, more info next update about how to buy their compilation, but here is a small teaser:
“It starts with a fidget and then a pull. A pull turns to a blink as she becomes aware.
“Hello, Tanya,” I sneer as she comes to.
“What are you doing here?” she whispers hoarsely.
“I came to, decompress,” I reply...my voice a honey sweet sound.
“Why am I tied up?” She began to panic. She pulls, but it’s no use. I did grow up in Alaska, camping and fishing were my thing, and nothing she could do was going to pull them loose.
“So you can’t run away,” I answer with a duh expression to my face.
“What do you want?” she asks once she’s done pulling.”
Now, onto the Chapter 23 teaser, update in a week or so :)
“What do we tell him?” she asks after Nathan walks away.
“The truth?” I question back with a shrug.
Bella and I, had spent too much time agonizing about how to break the news to Nathan. We weren’t sure how he would react, and the last thing either one of us wanted to see, was the re-appearance of Jimmy...who, thus far, had been kept at bay since Christmas.
I hope everyone has a relaxing week and see you next update! Kelly (SLM)
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 21, 2011
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23
they are so sweet! i hope that they will be able to get their happily ever after!! what will nathan think of them dating? Author's Response: WOO HOO! Another chapter down, and I’m starting on Chapter 24 soon! I’m actually really excited about the area we’re in the story now, so it’s been flowing out quickly and easily!
A few people have asked how I plan on wrapping this up in the next 3-4 chapters. On paper it works out, but if an extra chapter is needed I’ll write it. I don’t generally outline because I never stick to it, but I do want BI wrapped up by April...so we’ll see!
I do have submissions in the Fight for the Floods, Fandom Against Domestic Violence, and Fandom Against Parkinson’s Disease! I am also signed up for the Fandom Gives Back compilation, and will begin working on that outtake soon. As of right now, I have no plans to sign up for anymore charities. Not that I don’t want to, it’s just coming down to a matter of time.
Enough of my rambling. As always, thank you for your support and reviews! I do cherish them all!
Teaser: “Bella, are you sure?” I asked tentatively while my hand stalled on her shoulder.
“What did I tell you about asking?” She sighed and looked up at me with her deep brown eyes.
“That was for kissing. This...Well, this is something more than kissing,” I stammered. My hand burned from the heat radiating from Bella’s skin, and though this wasn’t my first time, it sure felt like it.
“Edward, if you plan on asking me every single time you want to touch me, I think we need to re-evaluate our relationship,” she deadpanned. The look on her face was priceless, but it was enough for my hands to begin moving. My fingertips trailed under the strap of her dress while I brought my lips down to her neck. Bella’s head fell to the side, and a small moan escaped her lips, egging me on to push forward.
Lots of love! Kelly (SLM)
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: March 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24
im so happy that things are going good for them! they deserve happy things! Author's Response: Thank you all so much for taking the time to review! Not only do reviews make me smile, but they do help me learn...which is awesome! I’ll be starting Chapter 25 soon, and if my loving family gives me about a 3 ish hour break I should be able to get it down quickly...I have it all in my head.
I really don’t have much to say this week---check my a/n if you have any major questions, otherwise I’ll be around on twitter if you need me! @SammieLynnsMom
As promised the teaser for Chapter 25: “What do you mean you’re moving?” Charlie asked. His face went rigid and his shoulders tensed.
“Dad, I know this may be upsetting, but we need to do this,” Bella pleaded with him to understand. If either one of us could see rebuilding our lives here in Forks, we’d do it in a heartbeat, but the truth was we needed a clean start.
“Did I do this?” Charlie muttered under his breath. His eyes looked lost as he stared at Bella, and for the first time ever, I felt bad for him.
Lots of love! Kelly (SLM)
Summary: When Charlie threatens to send Bella for mental help, he doesn't back down - but moving on is far from what Bella wants to do. As she ignores the help of others, she sinks deeper. That is until someone in the shape of Alice comes to tell her everything Bella needs to know in order to heal; Edward's love wasn't a lie.

Charlie's hands grasped my shoulders, shaking slightly.
"I can't watch you like this anymore."
It hurt to care so much, it ached to feel; I just wanted to be numb.
"Fine. Take me," I whispered with my voice hardly audible.

“Why, Edward? Why did you leave?” I noticed the shaking of my quiet voice.
“I thought you’d be okay.”
“I could stand here and waste my pathetic mortal life naming every possible name I could think of to describe how stupid you are, Edward Cullen,” I hissed, my bottom lip trembling. “I could stand here and call you every name under the sun. Alice has already used some of the ones on the very long list. But I’ll just use some, shall I?”
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: Yes
Word count: 143946
[Report This] Published: October 14, 2010 Updated: November 08, 2011
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: March 14, 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
i hope that jake doesn't cause too many new problems while visiting!! and what is the next list say? Author's Response: The list is the same one throughout. Bella hasn't completed this one yet - but she's working on it!
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 30, 2011
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
i hope that edward doesn't flip when she asks for roever again. and when will rose stop being the devil? Author's Response: I have a soft spot for Rose. I know she's pretty mean but... I kinda like that about her :)
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 05, 2011
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
thank heavens they were able to save bella!! i hope edward pulls his head out of his butt soon!! how much more work till bella can offically leave the nutfarm? Author's Response: The adolescent unit? Things move very quickly from this chapter onwards, she will be leaving in the next chapter or so :)
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 18, 2011
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
im so happy for bella! she got out! will she stay out? will alice be around? and what is edward doing?! Author's Response: She did get out! Yes, she's staying out. Alice is sticking around - and we'll find out about Edward really soon :)
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 07, 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
will alice be able to help bella out fot he looney bin? will edward be coming back soon? Author's Response: The adolescent unit? Sure, she'll help. Bella isn't crazy, she just has some issues that need dealing with. Edward will be returning... I can't say when though :P
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 15, 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
poor charlie! he must feel like a failure as a dad! i hope that bella gets better and that she can help charlie to know he is loved! Author's Response: He's feeling a little inadaquate, a little put-out. But he's also relieved that Bella is getting better :)
Thanks! x
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