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Penname: delilah69 [Contact]
Real name: kristin
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Member Since: February 16, 2010
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Leaves of Grass by nautical Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 579]
Summary: Feature

 

When Bella and Edward return home from Volterra in New Moon, she isn't sure if she can still love him after everything that has happened.  Their problems extend far beyond the vampire/human power imbalance, as she realizes that Edward will never allow them to be equal partners in the relationship.

The next morning, Bella awakens in a time and place she would have never imagined: Houston, 1862. Far from home, her family, and everything she has ever known, Bella must decide how far she is willing to go to follow her heart. (B/J)

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 89659
[Report This] Published: November 10, 2010 Updated: December 20, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

will jasper be around? when will they leave the area so she can become one of them? and i hope nothing terrible happened to the family!!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

i hope that alice finds her one soon! and that edward might take tanya up on her many offers! he really needs to get over bella! he left her!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

i hope that only good things are in that book about jasper's family!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

i kind of hoped that the land was still out there and able for jasper and bella to have ahome built on it... is that even possible?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

i am so freaking happy for jasper and bella!! such an awesome story!! i loved it all!!

 
Everlasting by SirenSongx Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 97]
Summary:

 

If it wasn’t for Victoria, life in Forks would be perfect. But no, the stubborn red-head has to interfere with our lives, again. Talk about the camping experience from hell! 1 crazed newborn+1wolf pup+1vengful nomad+1 protective vampire boyfriend+1 frightened human = blood and death. I never thought it would be my own.

Excerpt from chapter 1: I felt the fist pierce through my chest. I looked down at the bloody appendage stretching from the wound in my chest then my eyes slowly lifted to the ruby red orbs as they beamed down at me. A wicked and ecstatic smile curled her lip.

I gazed across the clearing to the pools of honey, they were traumatized and hurt. I felt the hand retract from my chest and I fell to the ground with a thump. My eyes drifted closed and I vaguely remember the enraged growl and the sound of metal being stretched beyond its limits.

I was dying, soon I would be dead and the red-headed bitch would have succeeded in her revenge and I would never see those loving topaz eyes again.

Thump, thump…thump……thump………

everlasting

A story of having your cake and eating it too.

Starts on chapter 24 of Eclipse. Alternating PoV between Bella and Edward.

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Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 34200
[Report This] Published: November 26, 2010 Updated: November 18, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: 6: Mood Swings From Hell

i wonder what bella is? will they ever find out what she is?



Author's Response:

Yep, they'll find out but not till chapter 11 or 12 so there is still plenty of time for them to go bald while thinking. Thanks for reviewing.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: 7: Changes

that car is too hot!! i wish i had one!!



Author's Response:

LOL, they were pretty rare, which is why I gave Edward one. Did Bella make a good selection though? Bella and I are a lot alike so if I liked the car I figured she would too. ^_^

 
Summary:

All Human.  Bella gets knocked up during her senior year of high school, but Edward doesn't believe her.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Angela, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 96724
[Report This] Published: December 14, 2010 Updated: September 09, 2012


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: March 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

i don't think that tanyas baby is edwards! and i hopet hat it isn''t! will they ever be able to get back together? will it ever get easier for bella? maybe a nice guy that doesn't care that she has kids. maybe that will get edwards jealous juices working and he'll try harder for bella and the twins

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

i do hope that they can get some of their relationship back! they deserve to be happy, and not walking around on eggshells all the time! and i hope renee gets the message! unwanted!



Author's Response:

I want them back together, too!  

Thanks so much for reading! My One Shot, Honor Thy Father (which is here and on ff) has been nominated at the Single shot Awards. I would love it if you would please read and vote for me. http://thesingleshotawards.blogspot.com/

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

im sure that edward will show he can be a real man and a good dad! they can work together to take care of the babies!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

tanya is crazy! i wonder if she'll be back? and will tanya's bad juju be gone from edwards junk and he'll be able to win bella back?



Author's Response:

Yes, tanya is crazy! No, she's won't be back - she's gone for good!! As for Bella and Edward - you'll hae to wait on that one. :)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

the housewas a very kind thought! i hope that bella and edward can start over!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

i really hope that edward has changed and that renee stays away and that bella can really trust edward to do the right thing!

 
Summary:

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Isabella Swan learns that she's been traded like chattle by her own father. She's sent to England and married off to one Edward Cullen, asshole extraordinaire, but there's a reason for his temper problem and Bella's determined to break down his walls.

They told me on my eighteenth birthday, after Jacob had left. They told me that in a month I would be moving away, to live with a man a decade older, and run a household that I had never seen half the world away from home. I was given a blank manila envelope. It contained two pieces of paper; one was a contract, the other was a letter.

Mostly Bella POV, but other POV's are given periodically.

NC-17 for language, violence, and sexual themes in later chapters.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 19893
[Report This] Published: December 23, 2010 Updated: June 27, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: January 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

knowing alice she'll either be straddiling bella or her face will be ultra close and she'll just be smiling and staring. creepy alice. what is edward doing?! going to tanya when hes supposed to be getting married to bella!!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

so bella is going to be kidnapped after edward has fallen for bella... will aro's plan work?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

im surprised by jakes out burst! did he really think it was going to work? will edward give up all other girls?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: January 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

im sure that esme will take pity on bella and just ignore renee! and were did edward go again? i feel so bad for bella! she doesn't even know that her fiance was out banging some other in the middle of the night! and he was just sneaking in!? what kind of person is he?!?! and i hope that maybe talking and getting to know bella will maybe help to change his outlook on this union? maybe bellas too?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

aro is a sick individual! i hope that edward quits being a jerk. and i think if anything rose hates her cause she knows that edward is still with tanya. how will the wedding night play out?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

who is after edward and bella? what do they want? will edward stop sleeping with tanya now?

 
Summary:

This story is based off the song What Do You Want From Me? by Jarrod Niemann.

Edward recieves a call from a person who has haunted his dreams. Can he forgive? Will he?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4713
[Report This] Published: December 24, 2010 Updated: December 29, 2010


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: March 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: What Do You Want From Me?

is she serious?! will they stay together? was it all just a dream?



Author's Response:

WHo knows? I guess it's up to you...haha! Not gonna lie, I wrote the following morning. I just like the idea of not giving all the answers! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Summary:

Edward was the one great "what-if" of Bella's life. Eight years after he left her  without a word, a crisis brings them face to face in an unexpected time and place.

A short-story written for the Fandom for Preemies Effort, 2010.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 41702
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2011 Updated: February 27, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: January 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

hes engaged!? what the hell!? and yet hes still going after other girls!? i hope that bella confronts him!!



Author's Response:

I know, I know... Poor Bella, WTH is right.  Next chapter will be up soon! :-)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: January 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

how did they get so close and then just break apart? did he end up having to plan something with rosealie? when will she meet his brother? why aren't edward and bella still together?



Author's Response:

I hope you got all your answers.  Sorry I missed this review, though I'm not sure I would have answered all of that since it all gets revealed in the next chapter. LOL!  Thanks for the reivew though!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

i wonder if charlie looked edward up and didn't want a possible psycho bothering his daughter? i hope they make iit work!! willthe baby be ok!?



Author's Response:

That is exactly what happened.  Charlie did a little research when his daughter came home broken hearted.  He didn't want her to know and face possibly further heart ache.  It was a mistake.  But a father's love knows no bounds.  I think Edward will understand one day soon! ;-)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

im so happy theyre together and getting their happliy ever after!!



Author's Response:

yeah!  thank you so much!!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue 1

i love them together! such a wonderful family!!



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I'm a little fond of them too. :)

 




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