Your donations help keep this site running,
thank you very much for the support!
Penname: delilah69 [Contact]
Real name: kristin
Status: Member
Member Since: February 16, 2010
Website:
Beta-reader: No

[Report This]
 
 
Reviews by delilah69
 
The Alpha's Imprint by dorme99 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 185]
Summary:

From the first moment Bella and Jacob came in contact with each other there was never a choice. They were destined to be together forever. But is Bella really strong enough to fight in a battle between vampire and werewolf?

 

Banner Made by Soapy Mayhem

 

Banner Made By Soapy Mayhem


Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Completed: Yes Word count: 142468
[Report This] Published: October 31, 2010 Updated: May 26, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 The Love Of A Mother Pt One

will chase be all vamp? will bella bestrong enough to fight them?



Author's Response:

No, Chase will continue to be a hybrid. When Bella was in the library with Chase if Edward and Alice had not pulled them apart she would have rendered him powerless. Once she realizes how to tap into her slayer powers she should be just as deadly as the wolves.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 The Love of a Mother Pt Two

so what does renee have to dofor her family? and why? if i had to leave i think that i would just pack up some things and leave in the night. poor charlie....



Author's Response:

Renee will not leave  Charlie the way she did the first time. It will be several chapters before it will be revealed what Renee will have to do.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 Should Have Stayed Dead Part Two

i wonder if her blood will be poisonious to chase and he'll suffer and die?



Author's Response:

That's a good question. No one has thought to ask me that yet. Your answer will be next chapter.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 Balanced Part One

i knew it! i knew that she was luring him into a false sense of security and she would destroy him from the inside out!! i love it! what do the volturi want now?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 Balanced Part Two

im glad that the volturi are gone! and that they didn't cause any trouble! bella deserves to be happy!



Author's Response:

Yes, I agree but Bella would be a lot happier if the Volturi were dead instead. Thank you so much for reading!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 Epilogue

im glad that they are all so happy and so many good things are happening for them!



Author's Response:

Thank you and I'm thankful that you took the time to read this story!

 
Summary:

Edward broke Bella's heart the night she came home, wanting to share the happiest news of their lives. She leaves but stays in the marriage for appearances sake. After years apart Bella has decided that she finally wants to move on.

What will Edward do when he realizes that Bella intends to end their marriage? Fight for her? Or Set her free?

 


Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: No Word count: 234348
[Report This] Published: November 06, 2010 Updated: December 27, 2012


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Desperate Devotion

how will he react when she tells him?! is it the next chapter ot the one after?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Painful Poses and Pestering Posers Part Deux

when will she tell him!? it will only get worse when she does.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Whispering Truths and Facing Inevitability

was he really with victoria? will he freak out about the baby? what does the letter say? and when will we get more?!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: March 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Painful Poses and Pestering Posers

so vic is some tramp trying to get edward away from bella. im worried that after bella tells edward about the baby he'll go to her!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: You've Made Your Bed...

that is so terrible! i hope that emmet or jasper, maybe even jacob might be able to talk some sense into edward! thats so terrible! im so disappointed in edward. i hope that she doesn't run. she needs to stand up and face this all head on!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: March 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Reservation for Explanations

i hope that the interviewer isn't too harsh! and that edward doesn't freak out about the baby!! i would feel so bad if they decide to give this another shot and this piece of information breaks them

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: March 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Deception Unveiled

so how will edward react when he finds out that bella lost the baby? will he totally freak? and i think that jacob wants bella to leave edward and be with him. will they be able to save their marriage? and was the tanya incident a farce? did someone set it up?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Shattered Dream & Coal Black Curses

im glad that edward is talking to bella again! i hope that bella can let jake go and find his own love and his own family. will edward and bella work through their problems and make it all work?!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: When a Man Loves a Woman

will they be able to work on it together and come out stronger? i really hope so!!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Taking Care of Business

im worried jake will do something even stupider and upset bella even further! im glad that shes letting him go...

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Are You Still Mine?

im glad that they caught that guy! who is he and what does he want? im glad that bella and edward are together now...

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Playing The Part

i hope that bella can stop hiding and step and face everything with jake, edward and their lost baby

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapt 21 part 1 Tale of the Broken Hearted

poor charlie and bella! so much lost ime on stupidness! i hope that they can come back together and be family! will bella let aro know that she knows the truth?

 
Leaves of Grass by nautical Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 577]
Summary: Feature

 

When Bella and Edward return home from Volterra in New Moon, she isn't sure if she can still love him after everything that has happened.  Their problems extend far beyond the vampire/human power imbalance, as she realizes that Edward will never allow them to be equal partners in the relationship.

The next morning, Bella awakens in a time and place she would have never imagined: Houston, 1862. Far from home, her family, and everything she has ever known, Bella must decide how far she is willing to go to follow her heart. (B/J)

(Thank you to Ms_Ambrosia, Starnosy, and So_Unseelie for the fabulous banners.)

 

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 89659
[Report This] Published: November 10, 2010 Updated: December 19, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

i hope that bellas change goes well! and that the volturi don't cause any problems when they come through the neighborhood!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

thank heavens it was jasper!! and im surprised that she got down and dirty without thinking about any possibility of kids!



Author's Response:

She did think about it, and calculated that she was in a "safe" part of her cycle.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: March 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

will jasper be coming back? will he and bella be together? or will maria get him before he comes back for bella? what will bella do if that happens? i can't wait to find out!!!



Author's Response:

This isn't the end to Jasper in the story. I don't want to spoil it by saying what has or hasn't happened to him, but we will find out soon.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

i hope that its jasper coming home to visit! is it?! will bella be safe?!



Author's Response:

It wouldn't do to kill off our heroine and narrator, so I promise she'll be fine.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

that totally sucks! i feel so bad for bella! will she wake up in her own time? or will she wake up and try to go after jasper and maria?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

will this be the last time she sees jasper as a human? it breaks my heart to know that they're making all these plans and they won't be able to follow through with any of them....



Author's Response:

I'm afraid I'm going to have to keep mum.

 




Share/Save/Bookmark


© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved.
Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws.
Privacy Policy | Terms of Service

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.