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Penname: delilah69 [Contact]
Real name: kristin
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Summary:

TAM bannerAfter years of surviving in her arranged marriage, Bella hears some news that shatters all of her hopes and dreams. Can she and Edward discover what it means to be together after all? Set in the modern day. ExB


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 220375
[Report This] Published: September 17, 2010 Updated: April 27, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Endings

im glad that the family is seeing tanya for who she truely is an not turning a blind eye to bellas suffering! im so sad its getting so close to the end! i wonder if any unexpected surprises will come from their honeymoon?



Author's Response:

Hmm. Tanya has shown what she values and now knows how badly she screwed up. As for surprises, you'll have to wait and see. 

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: One Step Back

i think that they need to finish getting to know each other and being together. so he just watched her sleep then? and i hope that tanya gets the hnt and backs off!



Author's Response:

They do have a long way to go in terms of getting to know each other. Edward came to bed and went to sleep with Bella--no watching her sleep yet. 

I will say that Tanya is rather clueless, so I wouldn't count on her getting the hint.

Thanks!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: March 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: The In-Laws: Part 1

grandma was fun! maybe they'll have to invite her out more?



Author's Response:

Yes, I definitely think there are some changes coming with Grandma. Maybe with that relationship improving, Renee's with Bella will too. 

I apologize that it took so long to reply. I've been trying to get the chapters out instead and I got behind. 

 

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: March 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Christmas

what in the world does he want with her? is it just a i want what someone else has thing? or is it i want what i can't have? i hope that he doesn't hurt her any further!!



Author's Response:

I'll let James tell you what he wants in the next chapter. How's that! Thank you!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: March 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: The In-Laws: Part 2

i wonder how james knew that they were headed homw to bellas for christmas? that kinda sounds like stalking to me! i hope he can keep her safe!



Author's Response:

He is stalking her and having her followed constantly. And when he heard that, he followed. 

 

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Trials and Tribulations

im glad that bella is so brave and strong! she is amazing! i hope that this little set back doesn't mess up their relationship!!



Author's Response:

She's really grown a lot stronger over the course of the story, but she's still a woman. LOL! Thank you!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: January 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Harsh Words

how does renee know about the separate rooms? will renee behave herself during dinner? or will charlie have to punish her?! im glad bella stood up for herself!



Author's Response:

Renee, for all her faults, is observant. She saw the decoration of Bella's room and noted that there was nothing of Edward there. CHarlie punish Renee? That's funny! Thank you!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Honeymoon

Im glad they were able to have a wedding that meant something to them! it was wonderful!!



Author's Response:

That's exactly what I wanted. I wanted it to be about them, for them. Thank you!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: December 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: A Trip Home

i wonder if something is going to happen soon? im sure that james isn't stupid and that hes going to be pulling something soon! will he use tanya for it?



Author's Response:

More with James is coming. Promise. And he will start to show his hand. Thank you!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: November 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Requests

i wonder who tanya is covering for? and im still so happy that edward is safe! and that bella and edward are getting along so well!



Author's Response:

Tanya definitely has her own motivations and they will come out. Thank you so much!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: January 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Introspection

i like the fact that they're going to a counselor! im so proud that they are working on getting on track! i can't wait to see if the counselor can help bella over come her fears and get jiggy with edward!



Author's Response:

That's the general idea! Thank you so much!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: November 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Determination

is she gonna go to italy?! om what if she goes it italy and tanya has the same idea and makes edward look bad again!?



Author's Response:

LOL! I'm not saying anything about Italy because I don't want to spoil the surprise! Thank you!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: December 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears

so, i wonder if they paid tanya to do all this crap to and with edward to get the marriage annuled? im glad that they're getting together and working out their problems! i hope it gets better!



Author's Response:

I love the supposition here. There is definitely something up. Thank you so much and here's a teaser for you:

“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”

 

“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”

 

Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.

 

“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”

 

I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.

 

“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”

 

Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: December 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Strides

they are so sweet! i hope that bella is able to help the girls more. however im sure that if i were james i would try to get bella at the party! no where would be better!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Bella is learning, just like they are. 

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: December 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Parties and Promises

they are so sweet together! and that guy hitting on bella! i wonder if anyone was scoping out the house to find evidence? they should just move into one room!



Author's Response:

LOL! Bella's thought about it. Demetri's still at the house though. No one is getting by him! Thank you!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: January 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Realizations

how did james know where they were? will bella be able to stay safe? does james want bella?



Author's Response:

James wants the land and Bella is in the way of that. He's been having her followed. I won't spoil the rest, though. Thank you!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: January 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Progress

im so glad that they are moving forward! and that bella is stepping up and taking control of  her life! go bella!



Author's Response:

Thank you! She's really growing up now!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Cruel and Unusual Punishment

i had a feeling that it was a good idea that edward and jasper went with them! what was james planning!?



Author's Response:

James is a conniving dude. That's all I can say. Thank you so much!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Confrontations

i hope that bella will get over this! isn't she kindof greiving? and aren't there 5 steps to it? i think anger is the step shes on! i hope that she doesn't give up on edward!!



Author's Response:

Bella's stronger than everyone is giving her credit for. She deserves her anger, too. She's kept it bottled up for far too long. 

Thank you very much! 

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Beginnings

what does james want? it must be more than just land... does he want bella? will she ever be safe?



Author's Response:

I won't leave the story until it is all resolved--promise! Meaning that she will eventually be safe. As for James' intentions, we will find out! 

 

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Fear

what does james really want? will edward be able to figure it out!?



Author's Response:

James isn't so subtle, so he'll reveal himself. Thank you!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: March 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Dinner

james is too smart to lay everything on the table! i think that edward should take their info to the cops and set up a raid!



Author's Response:

That would be nice, but technically, he still hasn't done anything illegal. Trying to take over for his father is a business issue, not a legal one and other than the insinuation, telling Edward he wants his wife isn't illegal either. 

 

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Epilogue

i am so sad to see the story end, but it was so FREAKING AWESOME!! you have such an awesome talent!! i LOVED every word! well done!!

 
To Save Us by eight_eleven Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 160]
Summary:

 

TSU2

 

Takes place During New Moon’s winter.  Convinced that Edward was lying, Bella sets out across the country to find the Cullens and confront Edward to gain the closure she needs.

 

Many thanks to Kaghanyou for the fantastic banner!

 

 


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 16441
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2010 Updated: January 03, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: November 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: An Overture, Neatly Wrapped

i really hope he likes the hoodie im sure my husband would enjoy it! and i can't wait for more! will she tell charlie that maybe she won something online and has to go pick it up? i hope that he doesn't freak out! will she find edward?



Author's Response:

I want that Hoodie for myself.  I promise, I will answer all your questions--and more!--over the course of this story.  Glad you're along for the ride!  

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: November 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Signs and Symptoms

poor bella and charlie! i wish that their relationship could be easier! so that's how blla is gonna find carlisle and the rest of the cullen's? a billboard about finding a doctor like the 1800 dentist thing? why did she have to go half way across the country for that?

 




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