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Penname: delilah69 [Contact]
Real name: kristin
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Member Since: February 16, 2010
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Summary:

There's a dusty old bookstore in Seattle where the proprietor keeps odd hours and knows the location of every book in his stock.  What surprises hide in its stacks?

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 48 Completed: Yes Word count: 122523
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2010 Updated: February 01, 2012


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: January 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

i think that was amazing! why did jake do that!? will esme hurt him? will she be hurt herself?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: January 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

i hope that esme stays safe! and that the wolves and the vamps can work something out!!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32

i hope that the girls don't try to start anything without back up! will they find esme? i feel so heartbroken for her! she lost her one and only!

 
Submit by cjmuehlb Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 83]
Summary:

How does Carlisle control a coven full of strong willed males?  A new take on coven dynamics.  It's possible.   Originally meant to be a oneshot, it has turned into a series of oneshots.  I will add more if I can come up with creative ideas including how dominant/submissive behaviors affect Edward and Bella. 

These oneshots are primarily SLASH, but will include hetro couplings. 

A reviewer described this as a National Geographic look at vampire covens.  That's about right.  

All canon couples. ;o)

WARNING: contains mature themes, sexual domination, violence and graphic sexual acts.  Please don't read if this offends you. 

Thank you annamorphos for this stunning banner!


Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 75191
[Report This] Published: August 13, 2010 Updated: April 13, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: January 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Submit

could it be one of the females who dominates? and i had a laugh about emmet makes jokes about edward and bellas amount of positions! what if bella was feeling adventuous and not only did all positions and places they could think of but what about them making a kama sutra of their own? and what if emmet got a hold of it! and it put rose and emmet to shame! that would be epic!



Author's Response:

Unfortunately I've said in previous chapters  that this dominant/submissive behavior does not carry over to the females...it's a guy thing, so I really can't go in that direction.  

And okay now you are talking porn....lol....this is suppose to be serious.  Very scientific. ;o)   Actually what you are describing I think has been done..have you read The List by Laura Cullen.  Hot!

Thanks for your comments. 

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: January 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Control

im not sure if emmet will ever give on being an obnoxious little boy!! and i feel like if the others weren't there edward would be dead! who will come out dominate? edward or emmet? brain over braun...



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comments.  Yes that is the question.  I have to feel it...and i'm still struggling with it.  I might go in another direction the next chapter.  A shocking direction.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Deception - PART TWO

i was worried for edward! im glad that they came out unharmed! im interested in a volturi perspective.



Author's Response:

  Carlisle was worried too. ;o)  Thank you for reading.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Deception - PART ONE

will edward be able to mount emmet? or will emmet's size be enough to win?



Author's Response:

Emmett's size and strength could be a problem, but we'll see.  ;o)  Thanks for the comment.

 
Fox Fire by Woodlily Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 231]
Summary:

"Bella Swan had become beautiful to me. The pain of that realization stung worse than venom ever could." NOMINATED FOR AN ETERNITY AWARD: Edward's Twilight, but not Midnight Sun. AU detours/missing moments. The slow burn begins with the flight to Alaska.    


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: No Word count: 145354
[Report This] Published: August 20, 2010 Updated: February 20, 2012


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Beloved

i think that they are so sweet! i love it!



Author's Response:

Aw, I'm glad you think they're sweet. It was important to me that it came across in the writing. "Edward in My Head"'s really adorable, even though he thinks he's a monster.

Thanks for keeping in touch.

All the best,

~W 

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Together Alone

i wonder whos thoughts he was picking up? were they his? will he try to eat her? if he does will the family be ale to stop him?



Author's Response:

Hey, those are all really good questions. The answers will be revealed in the next chapter.

I always thought that was the pivotal moment for him, though--when she leans in and gets close. She's basically offering herself to him, and he has to make the choice. I hope he makes the right one. :-)

Next chapter's in the works, and coming along nicely. I promise I won't make you wait as long between updates this time.

Thanks again, for taking the time to review.

~W

 
Summary:

Bella is a full time career woman, part time MBA student, and the man in her life is her dog, Sampson.    Her motto is that “Failure is not an option”.  But what happens when she is failing her Finance class with obnoxious Professor Cullen?  Will Bella admit that she needs him, not only for Finance but other parts of her life as well?


Making the Grade


Special thanks to FrozenSoldier for the amazing banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 24160
[Report This] Published: September 06, 2010 Updated: November 25, 2010


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

edward deserves to be happy after everything hes gone through!! will the morning after be akward?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

i hope that her dog is going to be ok! and edward is too sweet thinking of bella and sampson like he is! i wish i had one!!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

how many levels of obnoxious does alice have!? she has loud hyper excited and crazy loud drunk! and she told jasper all about bella and her crush on edward?! i would kick her! the next thing you know she's given bellas number to jake and hes going to call for a date or something?! it was pretty funny though!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

he really digs her! will they be able to be friends or will edward's hormones take over? will bella have to switch classes? and what was edward thinking?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

i feel for the two of them! they are both struggling to find a niche in the world. and edward's problem is so unfortunate! i hope that he can open up to bella and be with her!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

im glad that we got to see what edward is thinking. will they be able to just be friends for the next 13 weeks? or will they end up crossing boundaries?



Author's Response:

I promise it won't take us ten chapters to get through each week of the semester, but I can't comment on what will happen between B&E as they progress. :)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

i think that alice is right! i think that edward is confused and a little lost as to what he should do.... i hope that they can figure it out!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: November 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

i hope that she does launch herself at him! that would be awesome!! will he be able to be with her?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: November 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

i hope that this revelation doesn't scare im away and that she stays and that he doesn't feel too vunerable

 
Life As I Know It by ginger1983 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 98]
Summary:

*THIS STORY WAS PREVIOUSLY NAMED "BOILER UP."*

My beautiful banner was made by Mehek18 for www.thetwilightawards.com. THANKS GIRL!!! I LOVE IT!!!

 

Leaving the embrassment of her stepfather's secrets being revealed to her small town gossip pool, Bella moves to California to attend UCLA and start fresh.

A family tragedy brings her back to her small-town Indiana home. While attending Purdue, Bella tries to deal with the crap life has thrown her way. Will meeting Edward Cullen help or hinder her progression through life? Have they met before, though? Will he still want her after he knows all her family's secrets?

Rated for language, brief mention of drug use in later chapters, possible lemons in later chapters (i'm working up the courage!), and mention of alternate lifestyles and a slash paring (nothing kinky, promise! If you're into BDSM, this is not a story for you!). Slightly OOC characters...Bella's got more balls in my world.

*** Life As I Know It was featured as an Under The Radar fic at Twilight Awards 2/28/11! Thanks, ladies! ***

 

                               

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Bree, Carlisle, Charles, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Mike, Phil, Renee, Riley, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya, Tyler, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 92747
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2010 Updated: March 08, 2012


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: March 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 - Happy Birthday To Me

why didn't bella's sister or mom call for her birthday? i hope bree doesn't get into too much trouble!



Author's Response: i was wondering if anyone would catch that renee didn't call. great job! that will be answered next chapter. thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 - Catch Me

it think that bree is upset that she got caught, not that she was doing anything wrong. will renee blame all this on the fact that bella moved so far away? i mean renee is bree's mom not bella!



Author's Response:

the chapter is fixed now, and is all there. as for renee, she's a flake, and sometimes it's easier to blame othrers for our mistakes, ya know? thanks for reading and reviewing!! :)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 - Simply Irresistible

that was too funny! i loved bellas attitude about just laughing it off,and not letting anything ruin her mood! im glad that they finally got together. if i were bella i think i would try to make it work with her mom and sister one more time before i just washed my hands of them till they got their heads out of their butts!



Author's Response:

thanksgiving will be interresting, for sure. thanks for readsing, and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 14 - Thanksgiving

good luck with your moce and job!! i can't wait to see what bree thinks of professional help? i hope that it helps!



Author's Response:

thanks! we move on saturday! *eek!*

 

yeah, we'll have to see what bree does with the help, huh? ;)

 

thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Summary:

TAM bannerAfter years of surviving in her arranged marriage, Bella hears some news that shatters all of her hopes and dreams. Can she and Edward discover what it means to be together after all? Set in the modern day. ExB


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 220375
[Report This] Published: September 17, 2010 Updated: April 26, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: December 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Confession

i feel like bella is torturing herself with all of this information! how long will it take for her and edward to get it on?! and what is the deal with tanya?



Author's Response:

Ah, Tanya will be back . . . in all her glory . . . or not. This was a big turning point for E and B. She needed to know the truth behind his infidelity and has to make her decisions based on that. We have a little while to wait for a full lemon, sorry, but things will start to change for them from here on out. 

 

thanks!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: November 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Changes

i love it! i never wouldve guessed that!! it was perfect!! so good! what does tanya want exactly? and will edward still be there when she wakes up? i think that this situation should tell bella everything she needs to know about working things out!!



Author's Response:

Bella has had a lot of things made clear to her over the last couple of days. She's finally ready to make some decisions. Tanya has her own motivations which will become clear eventually. 

Thanks!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Firsts

i was hoping that edward and bella would present a united front. and they did! im so glad that they decided to give it an honest chance! bella deserves to be cherished and loved. will tanya keep at it? and will edward figure out where their money is going?



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing. They really do still have a long way to go, but it is a good start for them.

 




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