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Penname: delilah69 [Contact]
Real name: kristin
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Member Since: February 16, 2010
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Summary:

TAM bannerAfter years of surviving in her arranged marriage, Bella hears some news that shatters all of her hopes and dreams. Can she and Edward discover what it means to be together after all? Set in the modern day. ExB


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 220375
[Report This] Published: September 17, 2010 Updated: April 27, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: January 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Progress

im so glad that they are moving forward! and that bella is stepping up and taking control of  her life! go bella!



Author's Response:

Thank you! She's really growing up now!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Cruel and Unusual Punishment

i had a feeling that it was a good idea that edward and jasper went with them! what was james planning!?



Author's Response:

James is a conniving dude. That's all I can say. Thank you so much!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Confrontations

i hope that bella will get over this! isn't she kindof greiving? and aren't there 5 steps to it? i think anger is the step shes on! i hope that she doesn't give up on edward!!



Author's Response:

Bella's stronger than everyone is giving her credit for. She deserves her anger, too. She's kept it bottled up for far too long. 

Thank you very much! 

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Beginnings

what does james want? it must be more than just land... does he want bella? will she ever be safe?



Author's Response:

I won't leave the story until it is all resolved--promise! Meaning that she will eventually be safe. As for James' intentions, we will find out! 

 

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Fear

what does james really want? will edward be able to figure it out!?



Author's Response:

James isn't so subtle, so he'll reveal himself. Thank you!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: March 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Dinner

james is too smart to lay everything on the table! i think that edward should take their info to the cops and set up a raid!



Author's Response:

That would be nice, but technically, he still hasn't done anything illegal. Trying to take over for his father is a business issue, not a legal one and other than the insinuation, telling Edward he wants his wife isn't illegal either. 

 

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Epilogue

i am so sad to see the story end, but it was so FREAKING AWESOME!! you have such an awesome talent!! i LOVED every word! well done!!

 
To Save Us by eight_eleven Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 160]
Summary:

 

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Takes place During New Moon’s winter.  Convinced that Edward was lying, Bella sets out across the country to find the Cullens and confront Edward to gain the closure she needs.

 

Many thanks to Kaghanyou for the fantastic banner!

 

 


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 16441
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2010 Updated: January 03, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: November 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: An Overture, Neatly Wrapped

i really hope he likes the hoodie im sure my husband would enjoy it! and i can't wait for more! will she tell charlie that maybe she won something online and has to go pick it up? i hope that he doesn't freak out! will she find edward?



Author's Response:

I want that Hoodie for myself.  I promise, I will answer all your questions--and more!--over the course of this story.  Glad you're along for the ride!  

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: November 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Signs and Symptoms

poor bella and charlie! i wish that their relationship could be easier! so that's how blla is gonna find carlisle and the rest of the cullen's? a billboard about finding a doctor like the 1800 dentist thing? why did she have to go half way across the country for that?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: November 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Buoyancy

i can't wait to find out how the trip even starts! and what is going to happen with it! im so excited!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I hope you stick around for Bella's journey--it's going to be quite a ride!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: November 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Flight Plan

i can't wait to see if bellas plan actually works! it seems to be going ok for now! will bella meet up with any other cullens before she meets up with edward? where will she find him? i can't wait!! im so excited!



Author's Response:

Excellent questions--and hopefully you'll like the answers!  The next chapter has already been sent to beta.  Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: January 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Finding Doctor, Finding Patience

im so excited to see where bella goes next and if she finds the cullens!!

 
Pen Pals by wmr1601 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 769]
Summary: Feature

 

Bella and Edward have been pen pals (the traditional kind, pen and paper stuff) for over a decade, but they never met for reasons even they didn’t know. After fourteen years of “courting through the postal service” and not realizing it, Bella gets engaged to Emmett, a fellow lawyer at the prestigious firm of Ateara, Call, and Uley. They move fast, and a wedding is set for a mere four months after they get engaged. Bella invites Edward to the wedding, wanting to finally meet her longtime friend, and when things go sour the night of the rehearsal dinner, Bella, in her shock, ends up in Edward’s arms. And this is all just the tip of the iceberg for these two…

Rated NC-17 for mature sexual content. Little to no bad language.

*banner by enchanted-mind*


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Completed: Yes Word count: 239223
[Report This] Published: September 22, 2010 Updated: August 27, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: March 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Forgiveness

i think that because all of the girls have been friends for so long, it made sense to live and let live. they deserve to be happy and live as drama free as possible! and i really hope that kid is edwards!

 
Summary:

Bella  is a full-fledged grown-up. Well-traveled, accomplished, sophisticated, and trying to ignore the loneliness that keeps creeping up on her. When she meets a handsome, exciting, and significantly younger man, a new part of her awakens. But will their two drastically different places in life be too much to conquer?

Many hearty thanks to SoapyMayhem for the amazing banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: No Word count: 87430
[Report This] Published: September 28, 2010 Updated: December 05, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Kibble

i can't wait fo esme to belittle bellain some fashion and then edward hears it and he and bella leave!! she is such a jerk!! i hate her aleady! the dogs room?!



Author's Response:

uugghh, the dog's room. Yes, Esme does leave quite a lot to be desired. Thanks so much for reading and for standing up for our Bella! I loved hearing from you! thanks for taking the time to read and leave me a note! Cheers!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Pie

why would their mother want to let tanya know where edward was? and why would emmet let bella clean up before visiting?! what a dope! will tanya cause any problems between edward and bella?



Author's Response: All good questions! We'll find out about mother's concerns soon. And Emmett was just super hungry, and she was just too tired to argue! :) We'll have to see about that Tanya....she is such a pain! Thanks for reading and for taking the time to drop a note!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: May 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Overachiever

i love how bella realizes how carlisle's comment and edwards affinity for bella are going to mae esme hate her! i hope that bella can win them over!



Author's Response:

Girls understand girls, don't they?  No matter how old we get, everything's a competition, whether we'll admit it or not. I hope she can win them over too! ;) Thanks so much for reading and for taking the time to drop me a note.

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: A Peek

naughty peter and char!! i hope that they can find james his own girl!



Author's Response: I know! Our little Charlotte is a little kinky....thank for reading! And for your note!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 24: quick and quiet

when will mother be coming into the picture? and will she immediately not like bella? will she try to sabotage their relationship? and try to get edward back with tanya?



Author's Response: Probably in 2-3 chapters we'll meet Esme... I can tell you she does have her reasons. Thanks so much for reading and for your note!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Cigars and Rubies

its a vibrator! thats too funny! and hes a man, why does he need a flahlight?! what a pansy! is esme really going to hate bella?



Author's Response: Hahaha!!!! I love it.... I really hope Esmeralda can see the light with Bella ;) thx for reading and your note!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Boat House

i feel so bad for bella! i hate it when people already make up their minds not to like you and to make you feel so bad and not welcome.... i wonder who esme has invited from edwards past?



Author's Response:

I know, right? people make up their minds in advance all the time - and that is so hard to overcome! oooh, you think there are some more exes out there? Hmm, we'll see! thanks so much for reading and for your note!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 29: A Spell

i think that esme needs to stop actin like a child and grow up. if she doesn't like something say something! if she's uncomfortable she should say, hey this makes me uncomfortabl, this other thing might make me more comfortable.... and bella needs to man up, sit down with the old crazy lady and talk to her. if she knew bella she would love her!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Maybe It Will Go Away

angela is so freaking funny! im glad that esme is getting help! she is sucha  psycho! will her human side end? will edward propose to bella soon?



Author's Response:

sorry for the delay in my response, but I'm so happy you are enjoying Angela? As far as the other stuff....we'll just have to seeeeee :) thanks for reading and for your note!

 
Summary:

Bella is Alice's adoptive mother. Edward is her science teacher. What happens when Edward notices something strange about Alice's doodling and calls Bella into a meeting to discuss it? Rated for future chapters and language.



Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 36020
[Report This] Published: October 01, 2010 Updated: April 11, 2013


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: March 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- A heart to heart, a Party and a Goodbye

i love your story! i can't wait to read more!! will edward realize that alice is psychic and hes not dreaming! and when will bella and edward get to kiss?! im so excited!



Author's Response:

awww thank you x next chapter will be up soon 4 u :)

 
Summary:

 

 

When Edward & Bella's son, Nathan, goes missing it turns their lives upside down. This is the journey they take to find him, & in the process realize everything isn't what it seems. M for language, themes, & future lemons EPOV E/B Eventually NO CHEATING!

 

Banners by ange_de_l'aube


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 152943
[Report This] Published: October 11, 2010 Updated: April 12, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

i can't wait to see what the baby is!! wouldn't it be funny if a twin was hiding?



Author's Response:

LOL! Funny for us, not so much for Edward and Bella!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Futuretake Two

that was awesome!! i loved the look at their future!!

 




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