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Penname: delilah69 [Contact]
Real name: kristin
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Member Since: February 16, 2010
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Summary: Feature

Seven years have passed since Edward and Bella last saw each other. They grew up as children and even became good friends. Once they entered high school, Edward became distant and eventually severed all ties with her. Confused and hurt, Bella moved on with her life in Seattle.Through it all, Bella had her older brother Emmett to get past the estrangement. Now, with Edward's imminent return to Seattle to help out with his sister Alice's wedding, Bella can't help wondering what drove away her brother's best friend all those years ago.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4369590/1/My_Brothers_Best_Friend

Nominated for Best Novel-Incomplete at the Eddie and Bellie Awards.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes Word count: 247400
[Report This] Published: July 14, 2008 Updated: February 28, 2010


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 15: Practical Part 2

they are so sweet! i hope that bella can get over her anger and they can be happy together!

 
Wishing Star by Mystic_Ice24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 4552]
Summary:

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After her parents are killed in a plane crash, a young girl is rejected again & again by foster families for being too old. She wishes on a star nightly, but will she find what she seeks? Will the Cullens be that family?

NC-17 for later chapters. Warning" Violence, and sexual aggresion may be part of this story.

Winning Summary:

"I wish I may, I wish I might, have the wish I make tonight."  With that one hope Isabella Swan faces life as best as she can.  The tragedy of her parents' death, leaves her alone in a system where her age leaves her undesirable for adoption.  That is until one day two people come into her life offering her a chance at hope.  The Cullen family takes to Bella like a long lost sister.  What happens when Bella is taken from the Cullens by a lost relative?  Will Bella's hopes be destroyed?  What happens when fate steps in years later to reunite Bella with the one's she loved and who loved her so long ago?

Bella knew what she would say, "Don't you want to be my sister?"

 

 

Thanks to Mrs C for the above Banner and my beta readergoof for the below Banner!Wishing Star Banner Readergoof

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 40 Completed: No Word count: 137752
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: April 12, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: December 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 37: We Agree

i wonder if edward will be around for spring break? or will he make plans? i hope that they finally get together! cause this is driving me crazy!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Just Duckie

they really need to get their heads out of their butts and just talk about it! maybe bella could talk to jasper about her feelings for edward. im sure he could help!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Christmas

that was awesome! i loved the second kiss even more! i cannot wait till they get their heads out of their butts and get together!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Revelations and Mornings After

it took them long enough!!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: New Beginnings

wow, ememt and rose can be so passionate! i like that bella sopke her mind and that they listened, mostly!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: March 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Truths Revealed

poor bella i hope that she and edward can get together soon, they are so perfect!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Lives Altered

i really hope that alice says yes! and then i hope that bella and edward can get their heads out of their butts!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Confrontations

alice and jasper can be so sweet and bella freaking emmet out was awesome!  loved it!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: To Europe

shell keep coming around wont she? when are edward and bella gonna get their heads out of their butts and get together!?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: January 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 38: France

does edward love her?! really? enough to lay it all on the line and tell her?! will they be together from now on?!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Wishes Fulfilled

im so happy for them!! they are so lucky to have chance to be happy together!

 
Summary:

After Edward leaves Bella, she can't pick herself up again. Jacob does it for her. But when she doesn't hear Edward's voice, she can let herself heal. She lets herself fall in love with Jacob only to have her world turned upside down again.

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 2513
[Report This] Published: August 26, 2008 Updated: September 07, 2008


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: The Night in the Park

man jake should'vew known this was coming! he is just too childish

 
Summary:

Click here to watch the video trailer created by lilabut.

At a pivotal moment in New Moon, a simple choice alters the course of Bella's future, and she is forced to endure several more weeks before Edward's eventual return to Forks.  Victoria, a pack of young werewolves, and the blossoming of an undeniable bond become the least of Bella's concerns as she undergoes her own supernatural transformation. It turns out vampires and werewolves aren’t the only things that go bump in the night.  Edward/Bella/Jacob

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A huge thank you to placeofthunder for the lovely banner!


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Kim, Leah, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 145984
[Report This] Published: August 30, 2008 Updated: August 30, 2010


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: They Fight

i feel for bella, i really do. but jake and edward have a point! she can't just go off half cocked hoping her hair brained scheem will work! i hope that she decides soon!



Author's Response:

Yeah, in her mind she had thought everything through, but her definition of "everything" is definitely not Jacob and Edward's definition. More preperation was necessary. More planning. More people involved.

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Epilogue

such an awesome amazing story! i loved it all, except for the jacob dying part, that kind of sucked! but it was so well written, i wouldn't have it any other way!!



Author's Response:

Thank you. It's one of the best compliments to say that even though you weren't happy about something happening, you wouldn't have changed it. That means a lot.

I'm happy you enjoyed reading this so much. :)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Paris Falls

that totally sucks! is jake dead, dead? doesn't he have any chance?



Author's Response:

Jacob was killed, yes. What kind of "chance" are you referring to? A chance to live?  A chance to be with Bella? Because you'll be given more food for thought on those things in the next chapter. :)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: August 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: The Beginning

poor bella! and a baby!? i hope that bella does what she needs to do to make sure it's protected!



Author's Response:

I think that is why Bella made the choice that she did. She had to do what was best for her child.

Thank you for reviewing!

 
Farewell by starcrossdlover Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 932]
Summary:

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It's Bella's 18th birthday, and what does she want more than immortality? Her darling Edward's loving company—minus the clothing. To her surprise, Edward caves and when Bella gets some, she gets WAY more than she bargained for. Cue Edward's standard self-sacrificing departure, a snarky, homicidal Victoria with some powerful connections, and a new Bella who grows a belly and a backbone and goes on her own little hunting trip in Denali to find answers.

Farewell is a twisted tale where everything is not always as it seems. There is an underlying current of betrayal that may knock your socks off on one or two occasions. A FRIENDLY WARNING: This story is not full of fluffy bunnies and rainbows and unicorns. It has the tendency to be very dark, in both drama and humor, on some occasions. If you choose to read, well, welcome to the dark side lovelies...

Special thanks to randigiles for helping me straighten out my synopsis. You rock, babe!

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Chelsea, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Irina, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Kate, Lauren, Marcus, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: No Word count: 214439
[Report This] Published: October 11, 2008 Updated: January 13, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: October 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Cosmic Love

what will happen when bella goes to find edward? will she be able to bring him back!?



Author's Response:

First, thank you so much for your review. I was happy to see that you are still reading :) As for your questions, all I can say is that you will see in the next chapter. Bella's thoughts are hyper-focused right now; her main desire is to get Edward home. But before she can leave, her family will be posing some questions that she may not like, questions that may indicate to her that her plan was not thought through. Those questions may include: how are you going to get there without risking the lives of thousands of airport patrons? If you do succeed in making it to Italy, how do you propose to get in with the Volturi and back out with both you and Edward still intact? What will become of your daughter if your quest leads to both of you being trapped in Italy? There are many other issues to be discussed prior to Bella embarcking on her journey; I hope that you will enjoy the coming chapters :)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: June 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Enemy

im so nervous that they'll let carlisle save jake but then kill the cullens! could emmalie's power tell the wolves the truth? i hope that edward can come home!



Author's Response:

that is an interesting theory you presented :) edward will be coming back into the picture quite soon; i hope you will enjoy when that happens. thank you very much for your review! i am very grateful that you took the time to leave it! :)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: July 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: The Rhythm of the War Drums

aro is a freaking monster! what will the cullen's do to get edward back and bring down the voturi!?



Author's Response:

that he is. he is a selfish creature with a thirst for power that surpasses even his thirst for blood and he will do ANYTHING in order to enhance his power. He may think that he is not a barbarian, but you will see in future chapters that he is exactly that. Once the Cullens deal with the problems they are currently facing in Forks, Edward's future will be an important part of their decisions. I can't give you more information about it right now, but I look forward to hearing your thoughts in the future once we get to that point. Thank you so much for your review! :)

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: January 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Taking Over Me

edward kills her!? what the hell is that about?! will they be able to change it!?



Author's Response:

yuppers, that's the way their futures are headed at the moment. But Alice's visions can change, and after all the hard work Bella has gone through trying to strengthen up to face the Volturi, and bring Edward home, she's not about to give up. Thanks for the review, as always :)

 
Summary:

Set during New Moon.  Bella didn't jump.  But a vision from Alice sends the Cullens running back to Forks.  What if Bella wasn't the only one who fell apart when she lost the love of her life?  What if Edward couldn't handle being apart?  What if he fell?  How far could he fall?  Who committed the murders at the Swan residence and what happened to Charlie?  Just how bad can it get? 

Read and find out!

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Thanks to the amazingly talented Anne Cullen for the Banner.

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Ben, Billy, Brady, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Garrett, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Kate, Kim, Lauren, Laurent, Leah, Marcus, Mike, Other Character, Phil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya, Tyler, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 77631
[Report This] Published: October 15, 2008 Updated: March 03, 2010


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: April 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Aftermath

poor bella! i hope that carlisle will be able to help charlie! will things get better from here?

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen made Bella Swan’s life a living hell from age ten to twelve. Finally fed up with the torment and teasing, she moved to Phoenix. Now she’s seventeen, beautiful, and has a new sense of confidence. When her mother sends her back to Forks for her senior year, she is determined to shake things up.

NC-17 for sexuality, underage drinking, and language. OOC, just to be safe. Some canon pairings, some absolutely the opposite.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 55461
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2008 Updated: August 21, 2009


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: February 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: The Snow Ball

i really hope that he doesn't walk in on something he won't like! will edward be a gentleman and not take advantage of a drunk bella? will bella and jasper finally be happy!?

 
Reviewer: delilah69 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: February 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: The Snow Ball

i really hope that he doesn't walk in on something he won't like! will edward be a gentleman and not take advantage of a drunk bella? will bella and jasper finally be happy!?

 
Summary:

Bella Swan was leading a pretty normal life. A couple months shy of her eighteenth birthday, she learns her parents made a deal with the king of England. Now she's forced to move there and to meet the prince, Edward Cullen. What's his secret?

Thank you to the fabulous heatherdawnc for this beautiful banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 96157
[Report This] Published: November 26, 2008 Updated: December 31, 2011


Reviewer: delilah69 Signed
Date: March 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Humpty Dumpty Together Again

i just stumbled across your story yesterday, and i LOVE it!! i can't wait to see if it worked! to see if edward can see! will they ever get rid of lauren?

 




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