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Penname: Leah [ Contact]
Real name: Normal Larry
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Member Since: January 25, 2009
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[Report This] Published: September 27, 2008 Updated: January 21, 2009
Reviewer: Leah Signed  
Date: January 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
Sympathy is good! People aren't all bad or all good, so why should vampires be? EXCELLENT writing. You should consider ghostwriting or making your own stories. very well done!
Reviewer: Leah Signed
Date: January 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
Yours is my absolute favorite of all the stories here on Twilighted. I am waiting for your more than any other. You are VERY gifted. I hope to hear more and soon!
Summary: Everything in Twilight and New Moon happened... only difference is, Bella is deaf. This takes place during Eclipse and goes on from there. All Edward's Point-Of-View! 
Categories: Eclipse, Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Phil, Renee, Renesmee, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Word count: 4718
[Report This] Published: October 10, 2008 Updated: November 15, 2008
Reviewer: Leah Signed
Date: January 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Beautiful. Just beautiful. It would be interesting if Edward COULD hear Bella's thoughts, maybe only the ones she wated him to hear, so at least with him she could speak.
Great idea. My step mom is hard of hearing and reading Twilight now. I'll pass this along to her later.
Summary: What if Edward didn't get to Bella before Tyler's van hit her...what if he responded to her blood...? What if he bit her? Where would they be, how would their lives change...a view into an alternate Twilight.
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Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, James, Jasper, Kate, Laurent, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No
Word count: 57901
[Report This] Published: October 22, 2008 Updated: June 16, 2009
Reviewer: Leah Signed
Date: January 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Fathers
Hey, it's your story for now! You can do whatever you want! Great work so far! Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I'm glad you like it!
Not sure why you said that... but thanks! haha!
Summary:
"In a moment’s time, I’d be his, entirely. The one thing I’d wanted more than anything itself. The pain, the pleasure- it was worth it knowing I’d be able to claim to be his…at long last.
"The silence in the room was deafening. The intimacy of this moment made the world hold its breath in anticipation. Time ceased to exist; the only fathomable concepts were Edward and me."
For all of us who read Breaking Dawn, closed the back cover and said; "Yeah...not what I expected..."
This is my version, my ending of the Twilight Saga. In short, it's purpose is to show how Edward and Bella meet the trials and tribulations of being newlyweds, Bella being a newborn as well as other things life has to offer. It's meant to highlight their love, devotion, the strengthening of their bond as well as how they grow together emotionally and physically.
Rated NC-17 for Mature themes, language and adult and sexual content.
WARNING: quite a few lemons here ;]
ON HIATUS!! LOOK FOR MY NEWEST WORK AND THE FOCUS OF MY ATTENTION, "Love Story" !!
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Phil, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: The Beginning
Chapters: 20 Completed: No
Word count: 132794
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2008 Updated: November 15, 2009
Reviewer: Leah Signed
Date: February 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 9- Warmed By the Fire
Holy shit that was sexy.
Thank you thank you thank you.
Reviewer: Leah Signed
Date: February 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Preparations
This, by far, is the best story on Twilighted. I'm a 32 year old therapist, with a great husband, a masters degree. I love reading and I can't get enough of your damned stories.
I can't wait till you're published.
Summary:  You know those fics where Edward doesn't come back and Bella forgets about him and five seconds later she's in bed with Jacob and none of it makes any damn sense?
Yeah, this isn't one of them.
This story picks up from the moment in New Moon when Jacob has driven Bella home after the cliff diving incident, right before he catches the scent of Alice. Only in this telling, Alice wasn't looking, so there's no sudden appearance at Bella's house, no Rosalie calling Edward and sending him on a suicidal mission to Volterra, and no reason for Bella to do anything but believe that Edward didn't love her anymore. This is simply a story of what might have happened if everyone stayed mostly in character and Edward's return was delayed. Yes, delayed. Because we all know that he was "this close" to coming back on his own anyhow.
So what would have happened if Bella had tried to move on with her life? Would she have found happiness with Jacob? And would Edward be too late?
* First in a series of stories
~I thought of Jacob’s warm arms wrapped around me, his infectious laughter, and his ability to keep me from falling to pieces again… The pain choking my heart relaxed and I could breathe.~
~“More than anything,” I whispered, not caring what I'd just agreed to. When it came to Bella, it didn't matter what the question was. I just wanted.~
Winner of:
Best Author, Most Romantic, Favorite Jacob, Most Suspenseful, & Best WIP in the Wolfpack Awards | Best Non-Canon Pairing (Incomplete) and Best WIP in the Moonlight Awards | Best During the Series in the Razzle Dazzle Awards | The Storyteller Award in the Shimmer Awards | Best JacobxBella in the Silent Tear Awards
Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges: Series: A Blazing Sun
Chapters: 76 Completed: No
Word count: 164405
[Report This] Published: December 07, 2008 Updated: September 11, 2010
Reviewer: Leah Signed
Date: February 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Revelation: Bella's POV
This is EXCEELLENT. It reminds me why I love Jacob.
I'm too old to be reading Twilight too, but I feel my 15 year old self come alive again while I read it. Excellent Job. You are a very good writer, highly stylized and very creative. Can't wait to read more from you! Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad I'm not the only one! My little sister got me into the books, and I have to say I love pretending to be a teen again!
Summary: Edward is a lonely vampire who has been waiting for over eighty years to find his soul mate. His sister Alice has never been able to see his true love, but for good reason--she hadn't been born yet. When Alice finally sees her, plans are made to finally make Edward's dream come true.
This is a different version of Twilight, and it's told from Edward's point of view.
A little lemony, but not too graphic. Rated NC-17 for mature themes and language, and possibly for violence in later chapters.
Thanks to Evilangel6714 for the awesome banner!
Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Laurent, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya, Tyler
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes
Word count: 157222
[Report This] Published: January 06, 2009 Updated: May 21, 2009
Reviewer: Leah Signed
Date: January 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Thwarting Mike
Genius. Totally Genius. This could be a whole novel by itself. PULEASE keep writing! I'm falling in love with Edward all over again (and I'm a die-hard team Jacob!)
Can't wait for the rest :) Author's Response: What kind things to say. Thank you. It's a nice way to wake up in the morning. I do hope to someday write a novel, and this is just me getting my feet wet for that eventuality.
I will warn you. I am definitely not team Jacob, and I don't really paint him and his father in the best light in this. Sorry if that offends you, but you don't sound like it will.
Thank you for reading and giving my story a chance.
Summary:
"It was my fault, my decision, my resignation, and my destruction."
The evening immediately after Edward leaves Bella in "New Moon."
Categories: New Moon Characters: Carlisle, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 2101
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2009 Updated: January 09, 2009
Reviewer: Leah Signed
Date: January 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Detach (one-shot)
Beautiful. Absolutley beautiful. The best thing I have read here so far.
Very VERY well done! Author's Response: Many thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Summary: Edward has moved on but reflects back over his love for Bella. AU- Set during New Moon, after he left her in the woods. Inspired by the John Mayer song, Comfortable. One-shot. AU/original character
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1776
[Report This] Published: February 08, 2009 Updated: February 09, 2009
Reviewer: Leah Signed
Date: February 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot
Well done. I LoVE that song. This is likely what would have happened had Edward stayed away. Thanks for writing! Author's Response: Thank you for R+R!
Summary: EPOV. Takes place one week before the wedding in Breaking Dawn. One evening in Bella's bed. What if she wanted Edward to drink her blood? I always thought that would be erotic but never got to see that in any of the books. Rated M for sensuality. Oneshot.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 2718
[Report This] Published: March 16, 2009 Updated: March 27, 2009
Reviewer: Leah Signed
Date: July 18, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Holy crap that was great! I never thought of this. What a great story idea and very very well written.
Reviewer: Leah Signed
Date: July 20, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Holy crap that was great! I never thought of this. What a great story idea and very very well written.
Summary: 
Leah Clearwater has lost the love of her life and her humanity due to the existence of vampires, werewolves and the magic of imprinting. She doesn't mean to be jealous of her friends, family and immortal "acquaintances", but when everyone else is paired off she can't help feeling bitter. When she finally imprints it should be a blessing, a chance for her to finally start over and live a happy life.
But apparently Edward and Bella aren't the only star-crossed lovers in Forks...
He stared at me then. Half confused, half furious. But not as furious as I was, as I stared back into his beautiful, blazing, blood red eyes.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Leah, Other Character, Paul, Quil, Renesmee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth
Challenges: Series: Leah in Love
Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Word count: 62127
[Report This] Published: November 05, 2009 Updated: November 15, 2011
Reviewer: Leah Signed
Date: July 26, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Imprint
This is a GREAT stroy. Way to do Leah justice.
I wanted to read your story because you reviewed my story 'I remember you" and I'm so glad I did. I can't wait to read more. This is the most excited I've been about a story on Twilighted in a looong time. You're very very talented.
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