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Penname: sparklymagpie [Contact]
Real name: Katalin Weisz
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Member Since: February 15, 2010
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Big reader,Not much of a write . Twilight only for the most part.


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Flamenco Fire by lizzylillyrose Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 33]
Summary:

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Frustrated musician and composer, Bella Swan, travels to Spain to find inspiration. Will the heat of a holiday provide her with everything she wants or is it all down to the sensuous, passionate flamenco dancer who inspires her in ways she could never have imagined.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Esme, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 40892
[Report This] Published: September 11, 2011 Updated: October 17, 2011


Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Finale

That was just so much fun to read! Loved it

merrily

Kat

 
Summary:

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From the ashes of North America Volterran Empire has emerged. Divided into twelve districts, some of the horrors the opressed humans are forced to endure are universal, the weekly blood donations, the fear of being carted away for even a hint of treasonous behavior.

Others are unique to each District. In District 2, the children of the wealthy are given the best possible education money can buy. But they're educated for only one purpose: violence.

Violence they can use in the annual Morphing Games, in which two adolescents, sixteen through twenty, are sent to the capitol to fight for their lives and the ultimate prize: immortality.

My name is Bella Swan, and I'm a Prospective in the 100th Morphing Games. There's only one problem: I don't want to win.

Hunger Games/Twilight X-Over. Vamps galore!

For those curious about the Morphing Games:

more can be found here:

http://orringtonrose.wordpress.com/


Categories: AU, Crossover Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Ben, Bree, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emily, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Jacob, James, Jane, Jasper, Laurent, Marcus, Mike, Renee, Renesmee, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
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Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 38783
[Report This] Published: September 18, 2011 Updated: November 26, 2011


Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: [6]

I love that you sow seed of dicontent. I was going to just send you a note to say that my favorite line was where Bella says that she feels like her soul is being strip mined. That is just si perfect. Love the story and the way you write. Am eagerly waiting for more.

Merrily

Kat



Author's Response:

Aww I love that line too! I'm so glad you're enjoying.

-OR

 
Black Irish by Origami_Creature Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 35]
Summary:

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Isabella Swan is a 23-year-old Irish girl and aspiring editor leaving behind her beloved Dublin for the bright lights of New York city. Worn out by months of unemployment and disappointment, she arrives at Whitlock's International Hostel hoping for a new beginning.

In the end, New York will teach Isabella more about life and love then she ever expected.

E/B Canon pairings

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 33684
[Report This] Published: September 18, 2011 Updated: April 08, 2012


Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: November 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Love poor home sick Irish Bella! Can't wait to see where the first date will be.

Merrily

Kat

 
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: February 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Loved it. Making headway and talking. Liked her little talk with Jacob too.

Merrily

Kat



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it! We'll be seeing more of Jacob in the future :)

 
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Realy enjoying this story. Love your Bella and am excited to see where you go with it.

merrily

Kat

 
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I love your E&B! So sweet. And Lauren is just so ....I'm not sure I have a word for her except maybe bitch? looking forward to your next update.

Merrily

Kat

 
Summary:

When Bella Swan's typical teenage life is forever changed, she's forced to rely on a brother she barely knows and the makeshift family that surrounds him.  AH, OOC, ExB

"Darlin’, I have some bad news,” Wes began, and what he said next ripped my world apart.

I knew he was talking, trying to explain what happened, trying to lessen the blow. His lips were moving, but the pain was so loud I couldn’t hear him. My father was dead. Dad, the only family I really had, was gone, and I was…what?

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 17155
[Report This] Published: September 24, 2011 Updated: January 04, 2012


Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: January 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: House or Home

Thanks for the update. So she made it to the big city and got her truck. Am looking forward to meeting everyone else.

Merrily

Kat

 
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: October 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Facing the Past

Loved Getting the back story of Jasper and the rest of the folks in the story. Can't wait for the next update.

Merrily

Kat

 
Dark Innocence by Demonica Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 68]
Summary:

 

Edward Cullen had been alone for many decades. When a meddling pixie of a vampire convinces him to live with her "family," his life will never be the same. Then, just to shake things up, Isabella Swan enters his existance, smelling of innocence and with absolutely no memories of her past. What secrets lurk in her blank mind? Can Edward save her from more than just himself?

Lemons, angst, fluff, Darkward and lemons!


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 19237
[Report This] Published: October 17, 2011 Updated: December 14, 2011


Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: December 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5-- Reliving the Past

I am really enjoying it and can't to read more. Like Edward with teeth!

Merrily

Kat



Author's Response:

I am glad you are enjoying this! I like Edward with teeth as well =P

Thank you very much for taking the time to leave a review! I really appreciate it! The next chapter will be posted for validation tonight and hopefully it will be validated very soon!

~Demonica

 
Atlantic City by PhoenixRN Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 267]
Summary:

Bella and Japser have been best friends for years, and together fled a difficult home life.  For three years they have been making a living off the grid, rounding at casinos across the US and barely getting by.

Edward is a reluctant casino manager, living to please his father.  When he discovers that something sinister is going on behind the scenes of Volterra, he finds himself in danger.  When he meets Bella at a bar one night, he becomes completely captivated by her, but unwittingly draws her in to the danger he faces.  Now they both must fight for thier lives as they figure out what's really going on in Volterra.

Rated NC-17 for violence, language, and maybe a lemon or two...

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 113577
[Report This] Published: October 22, 2011 Updated: March 07, 2012


Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: January 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 19: When You Need Me

Aro is like an evil spider manipulating all. So is he trying to take out Carlisle by poisoning him or is he faking? So much to know. So I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Merrily

Kat



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  Aro has his hands in everything, yes.  next chapter has more answers.  Thank you so much!

 
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: February 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Countin' on a Miracle

Hope that you have a great BD make up day as soon as hubby is all better. Loved the chapter and how we get to Aro and his mad take over plan.

Merrily

Kat



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  Glad you liked the chapter!!

 
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Brilliant Disguise

Love it so far and am looking forward to the next chapter.

Merrily

Kat



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  The next chapter should be out soon :)

 
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: February 26, 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Your Own Worst Enemy

Loved it ! Thanks for a really engaging read.

Merrily

Kat



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  Glad you enjoyed it!!

 
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: February 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 28: A Night with the Jersey Devil

Liked how thing are moving along. Aro does not seem to be redeamable. Bad seed all the way around.I love how evil you made him.

Merrily

Kat



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  I agree with you- no redemtion for Aro, he is truly evil.  Glad you're still with me!  thanks so much!

 
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: January 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Badlands

Loved it but now I can't wait to see what happens next ! Does he get to Bella on time or does Aro grab her ? So much to find out. And Alice should be able to get out legally right ?

Merrily

Kat



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  Earlier in the story, I had said that Alice agreed to let Carlisle be her guardian.  Since he signed her in, he'll need to sign her out.  As far as Bella, that answer coming soon!  Thanks for the review!!!

 
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Empty Sky

Loved this chapter and we get James gone ! So Alice and Bella will meet. Can't wait.

Merrily

Kat



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  James is down... the rest of the Volturi to go!  Glad you're still loving it!!

 
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: November 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Waitin' on a Sunny Day

Really loving it! Can't wait to see what happens with James. Always a scum bag.

Merrily

Kat



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  He certainly does make a great villian!  Glad you're loving it, and I'll post more soon :)

 
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: November 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Jungleland

That was so sad ! But I don't mind loosing Jasper and gettin Edward. I do want to see james suffer though. Can't wait to read more. Being an ex Philly girl it is always cool to read a fic that takes place in that part of the world.

Merrily

Kat



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  I grew up in New York, and am living in Baltimore now.  I thought it was time for some east coast representation :).  Edward coming right up :)

 
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Trouble River

I do love it but I suck at figuring out plots so I will happily sursrised as I continue to read.

Merrily

Kat



Author's Response:

It's ok, I'll keep giving plot hints along the way!  Thank you so much for the review!!

 
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: December 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Better Days

I am dying to find out what James wanted her book for and what Aro and his evil little helpers are up to.

Merrily

Kat



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  The reason for James' interest in Bella's journals will remain secret for the next few chapters, but as far as what Aro's up to, there will be hints along the way.  I have to keep you guys reading somehow, right?  Thanks so much!!!!

 
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: December 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: No Surrender

This is just so good. Love that she got some closure with her family and J's dad. Nice to see her and Edward are talking and moving forward.

Merrily

Kat



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  I think closure was definitely needed for her.  Now that she's released her demons, she can move forward.  Thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Secret Garden

That was great! I am glad that you didn't make them go to one of those honeymoon cabins with the heart shaped jacuzzi tubes. So sad about Alice. Can't wait to see her.

Merrily

Kat



Author's Response:

I would never be able to live with myself if I sent them to a cheesy honeymoon suite.  Thank you so much for the review!  Alice is coming within the next few chapters, don't worry.  I think you'll like her!  Thank you for the review!

 
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: March 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Alternate Ending: Long Walk Home

Thanks for a wonderful read. I did like the second ending too.

Merrily

Kat



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for all the reviews you've given me.  Your kind words and encouragment mean so much to me.  Thank you!

 
Summary:

What happens when you mix a history/archival management/creative writing major with a little magic and a special secret project? A Hands-On approach to history! AU-No vampires this time.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 57464
[Report This] Published: October 31, 2011 Updated: April 17, 2013


Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: April 18, 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Moving toward the goal

Nice to see you back. Hope you are well. I can't wait to see where this goes with them. Such a mystery.....

Merrily

Kat

 
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Ch-ch-ch-changes

That was a great chapter. Mike got what he deserved. Have a wonderful time in India.I am green with envy! Before I die I hope to get there and travel across that great country and get to sample all the food there. Update when you can.

Merrily

Kat

 




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