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Penname: sparklymagpie [ Contact]
Real name: Katalin Weisz
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Member Since: February 15, 2010
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Big reader,Not much of a write . Twilight only for the most part.
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Summary: After spending 7 years in prison, Edward gets a new start in the fishing village of Corea, Maine. Can a little girl and her mom, Bella, see beyond his past and can they all find love again...or will the ocean swallow them whole?
Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes
Word count: 290099
[Report This] Published: June 19, 2011 Updated: February 28, 2012
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed 
Date: November 07, 2011
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
WOW! That was sooo good. I love your story and I have to say I got a little misty during Wayne's story about his son. My nephew died of a drug over dose at 19 and it is devastating. You can't fix people when they are not ready and at that age they think that nothing bad will ever happen to them.The only positive thing that happened is that my children learned something about hard drugs that no school can teach them. Our family misses him still and it's been 10 years.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Merrily
Kat
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: November 28, 2011
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Thanks for the tissue warning up front. That chapter made me weepie but I loved the way you ended the chapter. Have fun on you trip and I have to tell you again that I love this story.
Merrily
Kat
Summary: 
New teacher and aspiring writer, Bella Swan, moves to Seattle. She finds fan-fiction-creation-inspiration in the attractive and surly playboy who lives in the upscale condo across from hers. As her newest on-line story, From Hate to Heat, develops so does a correspondence with a mysterious reader/reviewer of that story. Who, exactly is reading Bella's/bellybeans' fanfic? It's a case of art imitating life and life imitating art. A fan-fic within a fan-fic story with all the canon usuals. Hilarity/UST/Love and lemons.
Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 59 Completed: No
Word count: 399617
[Report This] Published: June 21, 2011 Updated: May 21, 2013
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: February 13, 2012
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Illuminating Events
OMG I almost snorted down my sidecar cocktail as I was reading this. I also almost fell out of my chair when Esme was talking about reading fan fic. That was the best laugh I had in a long time. Thank you!
Merrily
Kat Author's Response: Hi Kat!
I haven't had a sidecar cocktail in a zillion years. That sounds so yummy! Glad you got a good laugh out of Edward's extreme mortification with his mom reading "his" little story.
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: September 02, 2011
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Post Time
That was fun to read! Looking forward to the next chapter. Loved the reference to MOTU.
Merrily
Kat Author's Response: Hi Kat!
I thought chapter 12 was a way for us to see how Bella's perspective is changing. we've also got her backstory and why her life has taken the path it has. It's also the chapter that her readers will read and of course they will review and she will reply and there may be some PM's that follow as they discuss what's in there. ;)
I'm glad you like the little MotU references. they're fun to throw in there and it makes me feel closer to Fifty Shades. ;)
Edward's POV is up next chapter. ;) I'll post in a few days.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
-bannerday
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: October 18, 2011
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: True Confessions of Stealth Transgressions
Loed it! that was just so much fun to read. I had to stop myself from laughing out loud. Can't wait to read more.
Merrily
Kat
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: September 16, 2011
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
That was so much fun! Loved Alice and all her words to describe her brother. Looking forward to the next update. No reason to reply. Just write because I always know that it'll make my day and give me a good laugh!
Merrily
Kat
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: October 11, 2011
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Enlightenment
That was just so much fun to read ! Really loved the inner dialogueof the two of them. I think it's so funny that he is scared of Alice. Looking forward to more!
Merrily
Kat
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: July 22, 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Aide-de-Camp Black
That was so much fun to read! I had to laugh at all the clever names you used. Rawbone? Too funny.
Merrily
Kat
Summary: When Bella was three, she was found abandoned outside of a hospital in L.A. She was placed with Carlisle, Esme, and their twin boys, Emmett and Jasper. What happens when they move to Forks? NC-17/AH/Canon pairing.
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Garrett, Jasper, Kate, Marcus, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Word count: 11481
[Report This] Published: June 27, 2011 Updated: September 20, 2011
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: July 10, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I think that you have a real draw and I am looking forward to more. It is so sad that Bella is left by her parents or whoever . I'm sure it'll be a great story.
merrily
Kat Author's Response: Thank you, Kat:)
Summary: How do you love or trust someone else when you don’t love or trust yourself? Bella has been broken down & hurt emotionally more times than she cares to admit, and she believes she's destined to be alone...forever. Perhaps there’s still hope of changing her fate, though--starting with a birthday present to herself in the form of Edward!
AH, OOC, canon pairings (of main characters at least), E/BPOV, Romance/Humor/Angst (just enough to drive the story, nothing heavy), NC-17 for language & graphic sexual content.
Nominated for "Best Emmett" at The Sunflower Awards (2011)
Nominated for the "Bright Star Award" at The iSparkle Awards (May 2012)
Nominated for "Best Lemon (Full Fic)" at The Twilight Eclipse Awards (May 2012)
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No
Word count: 104746
[Report This] Published: July 02, 2011 Updated: December 20, 2012
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: October 24, 2011
Title: Chapter 7: The Devil Wears Brownies
I really enjoyed this chapter. The best part was her rant in the office. It was perfection and then when the only thing her therapist asked was about the mother of the kids it was just amazing. So I am looking forward to more. Jasper being part of the practice was fun too.
Merrily
Kat Author's Response: LOL...as I've said before, Carmen is based on my own therapist (he doesn't know...yet...lol) and he will often do this to me. I'll go off on some big rant & just ramble on for like 20 mins and when I'm done, he'll ask about some tiny little detail that I considered to be inconsequential and it'll suddenly click in my head, "Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh...wait...what!?" I'm telling ya, it's...it's...well, it's annoying is what it is! LMBO
I was almost sorry to let go of the Jasper/Bella mystery lol although I gave a clue in chapter 3....which a few people got....but it was time to let that one be & focus on the bigger questions...like, where did Bella get that wookie T cuz I want one!!!! ROFL
Thanks for the R&R...see ya next chapter! =D
~Artemis
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: September 15, 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Confessions of a Power Puff Fairy's Rifle
That was great progress for them! I loved Alice and I want to know about Jasper. Why was she quiet around him?
Merrily
Kat Author's Response: Bella's genuinely trying...but these things are never easy! I know it's cliche, trite, over-done, whatever LOL to have a hyper & perky Alice...but that's how I love her, so that's how I always write her. I just can't imagine her as a bad ass, a bitch, or a darker personality...she doesn't have it in her in my opinion! Questions about Jasper will be answered soon!! =)
Thank you so much for the review...they're truly like a little hit of crack for me LMBO I'm glad you're enjoying the story so much!
~Artemis
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: March 12, 2012
Title: Chapter 13: The Truth About Russians & Babies
That was excellent and now we know about him. Now we'll need more Bella. I think she handled it well . I was expecting her to get her freak on.
Merrily
Kat Author's Response: As in freak out? Or her "freak?" hehehehehe Yes, we know quite a bit more about dear Edward, and it DOES only seem fair that Miss Bella reciprocate, eh!? =D
Thanks for the R&R,
~Artemis
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: July 27, 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Too Sexy For My Barista, Baby
I'm really enjoying your story and amlooking forward to finding out more about them both. Love the Russian.
Merrily
Kat Author's Response: Thanks for the R&R!! I'm glad you're enjoying reading the story as much as I'm enjoying writing it. =) I love the Russian aspect as well. I'm currently learning to speak Russian, & when I'm learning something new I like to immerse myself in it...hence my Edward who is in love with Russian culture & it's language!!! hehehehe I hope I can continue to entertain you, and thanks again for the wonderful review! =D
~Artemis
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: December 09, 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Three Crazies & a Little Applesauce
Great update.They did talk a lot of things out which is good. I've been reading Music of the Heart since she started it and it is great. Love how it's moving along.
Merrily
Kat Author's Response: I love her Edward! =)
Glad you loved the update...I should have another within a week or two! =D
Thanks for the R&R,
~Artemis
Summary: Competitive shooter Bella Swan had an Olympic gold medal and dreams of another before witnessing the brutal murder of both her parents. Now living under a new identity as a high school student in tiny Forks, Washington, she must learn to cope with the loss of both her family and her future. When she meets the local math teacher and her older "foster-brother", Edward Cullen, things are complicated by an instant and unexpected attraction.
Warning: Some scenes, including the opening chapter of this story, describe graphic events and gun violence which may be upsetting to sensitive readers. Please read with caution.
**Thank you so much for nominating Arms for Best Bella & Edward!!
**Arms was featured on the Lemonade Stand! For more info and other rec's, visit The Lemonade Stand by clicking the image above!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No
Word count: 108309
[Report This] Published: July 06, 2011 Updated: November 06, 2012
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: July 28, 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
This is so good. I am enjoying it so much. Your charecters are so well done. Looking forward to more.
Merrily
Kat
Summary:
One reckless night together lead to many years apart. A chance meeting rekindled a flame that sat smoldering all this time, but is it really possible to pick up where they left off? Continuation of o/s "The One that got Away", M for language and citrus
Hockeyward x Sportswriter Bella
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No
Word count: 42101
[Report This] Published: July 09, 2011 Updated: April 10, 2013
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: April 10, 2013
Title: Chapter 13: Primal
I feel torn having lived in Philly and kids living in Pittsburgh. My daughter who is now a world traveler made sure she took her Pens stuff with her. Loved how Bella is coming to terms with her feelings about Edward.
Merrily
Kat
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: June 28, 2012
Title: Chapter 10: Snooping
Loved it ! They are so cute. Can't wait to see what happens with Alice and how the game goes.
Merrily
Kat
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: September 06, 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Normal People Require Toothpaste
That was fun to read. Two of my children live in Pittsburgh and are now die hard Pens fans. So it's good to learn about hocky for me.
Merrily
Kat
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: June 22, 2012
Title: Chapter 9: The Newest Girlfriends
Loved it! My oldest daughter lives in Pittsburgh and she has become such a Pens fan. She has NEVER cared about sports before.
So I can't wait to see what evil plan Riley has cooked up.
Merrily
Kat
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: July 05, 2012
Title: Chapter 11: Girl Date
I just loved it. I like stories where I learn something and since I know nothing about hockey I am having fun getting some of the playing words. I enjoyed the Alice and Bella meeting too.
Merrily
Kat
Summary: It's October 23, 1929, and the gin is slick and the big band tight. In the wild parties of the twenties Edward and Bella meet for a night. The next day the world ends.
this fic is:
arty, dirty, depressing, sad, hopeful, realistic, somewhere between poetry and prose.
If you like twific as usual I have to advise you to steer you clear of it.
one-shot :)
Categories: AU, AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 3336
[Report This] Published: July 13, 2011 Updated: July 13, 2011
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: July 13, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Tomorrow is a Day for Maybes
I love the Depression era and I loved the way you wrote the first chapter so I guess I'm hooked.
merrily
Kat Author's Response: Ah now I feel terrible. I forgot to check the complete button. It's a one-shot :) .
Summary: After a business arrangement leads to marriage, Bella is shocked to find her husband wishes for her to give him an heir. Will Bella consent in hopes that he will return the love she has for him or will she leave before her heart is beyond repair?
Thank you to Cristag banner for this wonderful banner!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No
Word count: 65991
[Report This] Published: August 04, 2011 Updated: September 21, 2012
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: September 24, 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Good move Bella. That was brilliant. Can't wait to see what he does about it.
Merrily
Kat Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you like it :-)
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: September 21, 2012
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18
Great to see you back. That was funny in a sad kind of way. Hope that things have settled down for you in RL.
Merrily
Kat
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: October 11, 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
That was a great hangover story. Well done progress and a dinner date. How fun is that? Looking forward to the next installment.
Merrily
Kat
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: September 09, 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
That was great! I love how you went from all happy to not. Can't wait for the next chapter to see how things go at home.
Merrily
Kat
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