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Penname: sparklymagpie [Contact]
Real name: Katalin Weisz
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Member Since: February 15, 2010
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Big reader,Not much of a write . Twilight only for the most part.


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Bright Like the Sun by Dryler Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 974]
Summary:

BLtS Banner 2

 

*Banner by time_lights over at Livejournal*

 

When Bella goes to live with her father in Forks, things go much better than she expected. At least until a slick parking lot, a careening van, a broken arm, and her weird lab partner from biology get in the way...


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 112401
[Report This] Published: January 23, 2009 Updated: December 17, 2011


Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Nun Applications and Magic Relationship Powers

So funny! I love the banter so much more when it's witty as you write it.

Merrily

Kat

 
Summary:

After her father dies, Bella Swan is thrown back into the arms of the family she believed she never really left. Sometimes the worst events become the best opportunties for change. AU-Human, BxE. Rated for language.

Nominated, Winter 2010 Eddies: Mid-Length Fiction. A million and a half thank yous!

Banner by nastey. Thank you!

All the Places that Matter


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 40066
[Report This] Published: January 27, 2009 Updated: May 27, 2009


Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Eggo waffles are the best ! Great with peanut butter but even better with the addition of strawberry preserve to go with the peanut butter . The perfect meal in one .

I am so enjoying your story! I love Bella and Edward as doctors .

merrily

Kat

 
Summary:

 

The madness of being an actor is certainly getting to Robert Pattinson.  He loves his job, but feels empty and alone.  After meeting a mysterious girl at his friend Sam’s show one night in Vancouver, he starts to wonder if he could ever have a normal relationship.  As fate would have it, Rob meets her again at a poetry reading later that night and gets a taste of the one who hopefully will not get away. 

 


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 98788
[Report This] Published: May 17, 2009 Updated: June 15, 2010


Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: June 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Signs and Serendipity

So glad to see you back on line and working on this story. Thank you.

merrily

Kat

 
Help Wanted by jaxon 22 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3038]
Summary:

Bella Swan applies for the job of PA to the rude, arrogant Hollywood film star Edward Cullen.

Can Bella keep her feelings for her boss in check so she can do her job?

A/H, OOC, luscious and graphic lemons and bad language.

A million and one thank yous to Rachel1313 for the spectacular banner! You are my hero, bb!!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 52 Completed: No Word count: 473901
[Report This] Published: May 26, 2009 Updated: March 28, 2011


Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: February 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Truth

Really enjoying the story but Bella is drinking Bud ? For real ? With all kinds of goodies from all over the world that's the best she could come up with ? Give her some taste for the good and exotic . How about Heinikens?

Merrily

Kat

 
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: March 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Italy Part One - Arrivals

Love the whole Italian scene.It really is to dye for.

Merrily

Kat

 
Ethan Church by Dryler Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 503]
Summary:

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*Banner by time_lights over at Livejournal*

After receiving an invitation to write the biography of the severely reclusive author Ethan Church, Bella develops a reluctant obsession with his novels and by extension him. When she accepts his offer, the old, dying man she's presented with and the young, too perfect man she comes across on the nearly empty estate have her convinced she's missing some very important parts of the story.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 36732
[Report This] Published: May 26, 2009 Updated: May 13, 2010


Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: June 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Epilogue - Swan Song

This was amazing ! I loved it and you told a terrific story. Well developed characters,great story line ,slowly evolving plot and a mystery.

Merrily

Kat



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

 
Summary: Feature

Bella, compulsive sketcher of wolves, has not dreamed in years. Unexpectedly, she begins to dream again the night tragedy takes away her first and greatest love. ExB, sort of.

Sleepers, Awake banner by Fats


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 119182
[Report This] Published: June 07, 2009 Updated: October 12, 2009


Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: March 19, 2010 Title: Sleepers, Awake (Wachet auf, ruft uns die Stimme)

I just started this story and I have to tell you that I love your writing style . I also love the dream within the story and I know I'll be up really late reading this . I am in awe !

Merrily

Kat

 
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 23, 2010 Title: Sleepers, Awake (Wachet auf, ruft uns die Stimme)

Amazing ! I cried the whole time I was reading the  epilogue. Thank you for a really interesting and different story. I am a huge fantasy reader and this just was terrific. Thanks.

merrily

Kat

 
Summary: Feature

 Thank you, hellacullen, for the awesome banner!

Edward’s rebellious period didn’t last a few years; it lasted seventy.  A solitary hunter on the fringe of society, he stumbles across a young woman praying. Can he seduce her away from everything she's ever known? And will he be willing to fight for Bella instead of fighting against her?

AU, a bit OOC, canon couples.  Rated for lemons, violence and adult subject matter.

Banner by Zesty_T, awesome!

Banner by n7of9 Thank you!

Banner by readergoof, thank you!

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 129165
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2009 Updated: March 27, 2010


Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: March 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 This Is My Blood

This chapter was so good ! I liked the resolution to the problem. It was such a good way to bring the story together. Looking forward to see how it goes on.

I undrstand the feelings about your family . I have a tendancy to read too much fan fic. I try and not read any till after dinner and gave up TV for the most part. A good thing to give up I think . So anyway I really like your story and I think you are doing a great job .

Merrily

Kat

 
Need to Escape by lostluggage Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5731]
Summary:

 

 

When Robert Pattinson needs to escape the crazy life of stardom- he finds an unlikely ally to see him to safety- a quiet bookshop owner who is secretly infatuated with Twilight, and a certain young British actor.


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 97 Completed: Yes Word count: 829399
[Report This] Published: September 07, 2009 Updated: September 07, 2012


Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97- A Need to Escape

I can't believe it's done ! Loved every word,chapter, update, A/N just all of it. It does not seem like it's been three years. The ending was perfection. Thanks for a great epic read.

Merrily

Kat

 
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74-Remember Me?

So good to see you back! Another great chapter so well done.Hope you have a great new year writing more terrific fic for us.

No need to reply . Just keep doing what your doing.

Merrily

Kat



Author's Response:

thanks Kat! haha I did get some writing done! heehee. 

thanks so much! Happy New Year!

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: June 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54- Los Angeles

Great story ! Can't wait to see how it goes. I love the fact that you are doing Rob's pov too .



Author's Response:

thanks so much!

its a pretty grand undertaking... getting into the mind of a fictional, awkward and randy 23 year old brit boy.... but someone had to do it! LOL!

thanks so much my dear!

more soon!

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90- Ellen

I always read you chapter end notes and they are so much fun! I think that you are right about the triple play. Let's just hope we get to see all the movies first before the world ends because otherwise that would just be criminal!

I do love this story and feel it's like the never ending story so don't rush to bring it to and end because I do loveit.

Merrily

Kat

 
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: June 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56-Reality Crashing

I think you did a great job with a really hard topic. I can understand the pain, having gone through a miscarriage myself. I don't like the self blame/guilt at all. You can't assume that you are responsible for that ever happening. I do know that you have to do it in the story as a plot point and to move the story the way you need to.

But anyhoo you did a fine job and I've read your writting and I'm looking forward to seeing you move through this just as well as you did in the rest of the story.

merrily

Kat



Author's Response:

thanks kat so much. 

believe me i will address the self blame/guilt. she needs to work thru that, absolutely. she shouldn't blame herself. much of that comes from the fear she has of what rob's reaction will be (which if she had him there for her, it would make it so much easier...but alas... she has some silly notion that his job is so much more important....even i am frustrated by that...)

thank you so much Kat. your review means a so much to me. 

and thank you, you made me smile with your "merrily". i needed that today. i have been so overwhelmed today.

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: July 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58-Fall Seven Times

Finally ! You spin a great tale and I so love this story. I really like how you write Clare . You make her so warm .

Merrily

Kat



Author's Response:

Thanks so much my dear! So glad you like Clare. I love her. even if she is fictitious. 

a gift is on its way to you! 

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87-Oh, Oprah

Take your time writing . It's always a very good surprise to see an update from you and worth the wait. Almost like Christmas! Still loving your story.

Merrily

Kat

 
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89- Someone Like You

I had a feeling that was who you were bringing in. Loved it . I will wait peacefully till the next chapter. God know that I do have that.

Have a great holiday if we don't hear from you before.

Merrily

Kat

 
Bedtime Story by love-tart Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 310]
Summary:

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Banner

 

Two strangers, one kiss.

Since this would probably be the only time I’d ever get to kiss this gorgeous creature, I decided to make the most of it... 

A chance meeting + a slightly devious plan =  Happily ever after?

Not your average bedtime story, this is the tale of Bella and Edward.

**Thank you so much to the amazing Readergoof for making both of those gorgeous banners up there! Perfection! **


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 98200
[Report This] Published: October 01, 2009 Updated: June 17, 2012


Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

That was so much fun to read ! Nice to see you back. know all about RL so write when you can . Thanks so much.

Wish I could still eat like Alice!

Merrily

Kat



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! And I wish I could too! LoL

 
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

That was just so sweet! Nicely done with Victoria. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Merrily

Kat



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Great chapter. love how Jake and Bella changed their relationship and stayed friends.

Just adore the Black Keys. Never had the chance to see them. I also like the New York Pony Club.

Looking forward to the next installment.

merrily

Kat



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! Yay, another Black Keys fan!!! They were AWESOME live :)

 
Summary:

 

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Kisses to sangrealfire for her beautiful banner!

Welcome to the city of Miami.  Where the days are hot & the nights are even hotter.  Beautiful beaches, beautiful bodies.  Fake tans.  Strong drinks.  The hottest clubs.  Fast cars, fast women.  The city where money buys you everything.  Where the divorce rate is high, silicone is a necessity & sex is a game.  Let's Play.

Bella Swan 'Newton' is living in Miami.  Her days are filled with her two best friends, sisters Alice and Cynthia Brandon, her boss Jake, and her pending divorce from her high school sweetheart Mike.  After a one night stand with  Miami playboy Edward Cullen, Bella is thrust into what Miami has to offer.  The most beautiful clubs, luxurious dinners, and more money than she could ever image.   There's only two problems.  One, Edward is married.  Two, he's Mike's lawyer.  What happens when the best sex of your life comes from a man who is wanting to destroy you?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Mike, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 60361
[Report This] Published: October 16, 2009 Updated: February 03, 2011


Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Ch. 7 - Spike

Go Bella!

Merrily

Kat

 
Summary:

 

Robert Pattinson is twenty five years old and a solid A-list international star. He is on the last leg of a European promotional tour for his latest film, when he meets a sexy much older woman who has been hired to serve as his language interpreter. What will develop during their travels throughout Spain, Italy, England, France and America? Will this older woman teach Rob about love and lust or will he have something to teach her? Lots of ripe, juicy, delicious lemons and possibly other fruit, I promise.

 

Finalist for best RPF in the 2010 Faithful Shipper Awards

Winner for Best Comedy—Reality Rebellion Awards 2010

Winner for Best First Kiss—Reality Rebellion Awards 2010

2nd Place for Best Original Character—Marisa, Most Original Plot, Best One Liner—“Your scent is still all over my fingers. It’s driving me to distraction.”

 

Finalist for best RPF in the 2011 Faithful Shipper Awards

 

Thanks so much to all those who voted for OTI!

 

Banner created by the wonderfully talented DreamySims1

 


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Completed: Yes Word count: 294618
[Report This] Published: October 25, 2009 Updated: March 25, 2014


Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40--Surrender

I just want to say how great it is to have you back and I am so excited to read more.Looking forward to the parents meeting.

Merrily

Kat

 
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42--Here Comes Trouble

Loved it and was so happy to see you update ! Can't wait for the meeting of the parents and what happens with the tabloids.

Merrily

Kat

 
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: May 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4--Lady in Red

Found out about your fic on the RAoR web site. Love your story and Jack cracks me up. I can see him acting like that. keep up the good work. I see you are swimming in reviews now.

Merrrily

Kat



Author's Response:

Hi Kat, so glad you found OTI. Please keep reading and reviewing. Thanks!

 
Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed
Date: June 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29--Trial By Fire

I am reading both  your story and the one by lostluggage and I like them both very much.

merrily

Kat



Author's Response:

Hi Kat, I'm glad we can both give you stories that you enjoy. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, please keep it up. Hugs.

 




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