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Penname: Looby Luscious [ Contact]
Real name: Sue Mansbridge
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Member Since: February 14, 2010
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I won't say how old I am - just to say I feel young at heart! After reading Twilight for the first time, I couldn't put it down - in fact I have read the books countless times! I think it took me back to that breathy, shaky torment of first love which we know can't last, but will always remember. I fell madly in love with Edward, and have never looked back!
I have a 21 year old son away at university and a lovely husband who tolerates my obsession with good grace - in fact he bought me my beautiful Twilight journals and a calendar last Christmas. He just wishes I could get paid for writing!
I have never thought about writing fanfic until reading "Dark Side of the Moon" by Blondie and coming across this site. I decided to have a go, and "Eclipse Missing Moments" is my first attempt.
I wasn't sure if I could write any original stories, but eventually had a go with Picking Up The Pieces. It almost didn't see the light of day when it was rejected, as I didn't see the tiny mark against grammer, and thought it was wholly unsuitable. Thankfully I went back and re-read the email, made some corrections and resubmitted it. It is to date the most successful story (as far as reviews are concerned) that I have done.
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Summary: My entry for the Pre-Twilight Round of the Canon Tour. Sacrifice is required in any great venture. Sometimes it's not what you would die for, it's what you will kill for. Aro, in his first centuries, sees a path to a great beginning.
Banner by the awesome Illicitwriter
Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Aro
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 4279
[Report This] Published: September 25, 2011 Updated: September 26, 2011
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: September 26, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: One- Shot
A nice take on the story. Well done. Author's Response: Thank you!
Summary: 
After Edward left in New Moon something changed in Bella. When faced with her past she decides to fight back against her own demons. Unfortunately, that catches the attention of the "agency". They recruit her and train her to hunt vampires. But when a familiar family is brought to the agency's attention Bella must make a choice.
How much would you risk to save the one you love?
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No
Word count: 63822
[Report This] Published: September 25, 2011 Updated: March 14, 2012
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: February 07, 2012
Title: Chapter 21: Going Home
Please don't be too hard on yourself. I know how hard it can be to get that story moving again, to get it to where you want it to be. Lets face it - short is always infinitely preferable to nothing!!! Thanks for the update :) Author's Response: Thank you. It's good to hear that type of encouragement from a fellow author. :)
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: November 30, 2011
Title: Chapter 15: Explanations and Experiments
“Okay, okay. My turn! Blow something up!”
lol. I LOVE EMMETT!!!!
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: November 30, 2011
Title: Chapter 16: Loving and Learning
If you haven't paid photobucket, you are only allowed so much time each month to display your pics. The more pics you have, the less time the free display lasts. They will come back at the beginning of dec, or you could give them some dosh and have them all year round!
The story is great too!!! Author's Response: Thanks. I had no idea they were doing that. I've only been using photobucket for about 6 months so I had no idea.
Summary: EAC: The Journal of Edward A. Cullen
FIRST PLACE WINNER in THE CANON TOUR CONTEST.
What if Edward, through Alice's visions, knew about Bella before he met her?
What if he had a chance to avoid the bloodlust? Would he take that chance?
PRE-Twi AU
Categories: Pre-Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: No
Word count: 44204
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2011 Updated: December 31, 2011
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: October 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 8: February 28, 2005
I think you should let Emmett loose! It would be good for the soul. :) Author's Response: Emmett LOOSE migh be scary!
Thanks for reading, sweetie...
Kathie
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: October 04, 2011
Title: Chapter 9: March 7, 2005
Fabulous solution. I can just imagine the excesses these vamps might have in keeping Bella safe. I imagine they will also be able to sort the rapists out before Bella wanders off too.
This way, there should be no need for Jacob to insinuate his big hairy arse into the mix either. Ha!!! Author's Response: Glad you like my sand and salt solution.
Ah...but Alice didn't SEE the rapist...!!!
And doesn't every fic need PUPPIES? LOL
BUT, I don't DO love triangles!
Thanks for reading, LL...I do appreciate your support!
Kathie
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: October 08, 2011
Title: Chapter 12: March 12, 2005 The Meadow
Lovely! Bella is so accepting of everything. I enjoyed this a lot. Author's Response: Thanks for reading, Looby Luscious!
SAGA Bella seemed to be accpepting too...and I think she would have had an easier time of it with a NICER Edward...no whiplash, you know!
Kathie
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: September 28, 2011
Title: Chapter 3: January 25, 1981
It's lovely that he has had so much time to anticipate this meeting. I'm wondering if knowing these futures is going to change the outcome. Surely Bella will love him regardless of the circumstances. Author's Response: Hi, LL!
TIME is key here...
I'm sure that she's going to be pretty impressed with out Mr. C too...as long as he doesn't eat her!
Thanks for reading!
Kathie
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: September 28, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: May 18, 1969
An intriguing thought. I'm keen to know more. Author's Response: More to come!
Kathie
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: September 28, 2011
Title: Chapter 2: June 20, 1976
Brilliant Emmett! You gotta love that man!!! Author's Response: Emmett is such a JOY to write...he gets LOTS of moments in this story!
Thanks, so much, for reading, LL!
Kathie
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: December 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 21: May 30, 2005 Prom
Glad you had a lovely time away. I did miss the updates, but now I can look forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you...we really did have a great time!
MORE updates to come!
Kathie
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: October 06, 2011
Title: Chapter 10: March 8, 2005 11:32 p.m.
Not thought about changing her? Tut tut Edward! I can't imagine that it hasn't crossed someone's mind! Emmett wouldn't be backwards about it, but then he wouldn't hide his thoughts either.
Looking forward to seeing what happens next. Author's Response: I know! Poor dear had no thought about it...he was just focused on the thought that a HUMAN would love him enough to marry him...
Also...Alice has been hiding a vision...or ten...!!!
The next bit is in the queue right now!
Thanks for your support, LL!~ I do appreciate it!
Kathie
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: October 11, 2011
Title: Chapter 15: March 14, 2005 Let's Play Ball
I like your version of events very much! Although, I have to say, if Stephenie had done that, we would only have had two books!!!
I don't mind longer chapters either ;) Author's Response: LOL...true! ONLY TWO BOOKS!!!
Glad you enjoyed this!
Kathie
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: October 17, 2011
Title: Chapter 17: March 15, 2005 Dinner at the Reservation
Ha!! You tell them, Bella!
I really love this take on those pesky dogs. Someone should have told them what for a long time ago! Author's Response: Glad you liked that, LL!
Some thought they might have been a bit aggressive...but I think they may behave a bit more now...lol
Thanks for reading!
Kathie
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: October 02, 2011
Title: Chapter 7: January 18, 2005
This is lovely. So nice not to have the whole "I want to kill you" thing going on. I love that Rose is totally on board too. Author's Response: LOL....yes, none of the I VANT TO SUCK YOUR BLOOD...thing...lol
Rose surprised me here too...I like that!
Thanks for reading, dear LL~
Kathie
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: October 02, 2011
Title: Chapter 4: September 13, 1987 & March 7, 1989
I have some catching up to do! So sad about Charlie.It must be hard to watch your wife take your child away from you. Author's Response: It's fun to have more chapters to read, isn't it?
Ah, Charlie...wish HE could have known that Bella would be back at some point.
Thanks for reading, more to come!
Kathie
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: October 02, 2011
Title: Chapter 5: January 18, 2001
I like the idea that Rose would have come round. I could never quite understand her reasonings - certainly not the way she reacted to Bella even before she made the decision to become a vampire. Author's Response: Rose really surprised me as I wrote this...I like it when that happens.
Thanks for your support!
Kathie
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: October 02, 2011
Title: Chapter 6: January 1, 2005
Really looking forward to that first meeting. How can it be stalkerish? It's Edward!!! Author's Response: We do forgive Edward a lot of things, don't we? LOL
BUT, he's NOT in her room...!!!
Thanks for reading!
Kathie
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: November 02, 2011
Title: Chapter 19: April 3, 2005 What Does Alice Know?
Nice to know that we won't have Bella running off to be with Jacob anytime soon. I am looking forward to the dinner - it should be very interesting. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Nope, no running off with the puppies!
Thanks for reading!
Kathie
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: November 10, 2011
Title: Chapter 20: April 11, 2005 Dinner with the Blacks
I expect she's hiding the fact that Bella is going to be a vampire one day :) Author's Response: That's one thing!
Thanks for reading, LL!
Kathie
Summary:
Overwhelmed with grief, Edward is drifting when a new family moves in next door. Bella hides her own heartache and guilt as she struggles to raise her son. If they can see past their sorrow, they might find the missing pieces they need...in each other.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 8869
[Report This] Published: October 05, 2011 Updated: October 09, 2011
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: October 10, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Noises
A lovely one-shot. Thanks so much for sharing it with us. Author's Response:
Summary: One Shot: Edward is a homeless man in the streets of Chicago mesmererized by a kind beautiful stranger who passes him daily.
All Human, Rated G
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 2728
[Report This] Published: October 14, 2011 Updated: November 04, 2011
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: November 04, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - one shot
Aw! I like a happy ending, and I didn't see this one coming! Very nice. I hope you get the courage to post some more. Author's Response: I'm glad you didn't see the end coming =) And yes, I love a happy ending as well! Thanks for reading and reviewing, and after the positive response I've been getting, I just might post more!
-Kate
Summary:
Banner by the very talented Forthelongestday!
Bella Swan, petite brown haired and brown eyed daughter of a police officer, protected by a coven of gifted vampires, beloved of My Alice, who’d forsaken me. Whose eyes were windows to a soul that cried to be released, to die. I’d just been handed my most exciting game ever. James’ story.
Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, James
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 13091
[Report This] Published: October 29, 2011 Updated: October 29, 2011
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: October 30, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Modus Operandi
Really interesting. It's always nice to get a back story on a character. Even better when we know the ending!
Summary: What if Alice saw the nomads coming to the vampire baseball game? How might her visions affect her and the events of that day? My entry to The Canon Tour, Twilight Round.
Categories: AU, Twilight Characters: Alice
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 2730
[Report This] Published: November 07, 2011 Updated: November 07, 2011
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: November 08, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
A great idea! Playing was the lesser of the evils. Author's Response: Good morning!
Sorry I am SO FAIL with replies to this site! Let's hear it for a dying laptop...
So! Thank you. :) I'm glad you enjoyed this story. Playing was a lesser evil. In my head, they decide to go AFTER the nomads, though... Carlisle is less than pleased. Alas.
Sometimes, you can't please everyone!
Thank you for reading!
LJ
Summary: WINNER The Canon Tour-Twilight Round
Awesome banner by Emilymarie 15
There was a sea change in Edward's attitude toward Bella between the time he'd left after that first disastrous Biology class and when he returned to Forks. It was on a dark highway to Alaska that things changed. Incredibly, something new and tender was awakened from a place he'd long thought dead.
Categories: Twilight Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 4617
[Report This] Published: November 10, 2011 Updated: November 10, 2011
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed 
Date: November 11, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
What a fabulous one shot. I loved the descriptions of his feelings. Very well done.
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