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Penname: Looby Luscious [ Contact]
Real name: Sue Mansbridge
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Member Since: February 14, 2010
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I won't say how old I am - just to say I feel young at heart! After reading Twilight for the first time, I couldn't put it down - in fact I have read the books countless times! I think it took me back to that breathy, shaky torment of first love which we know can't last, but will always remember. I fell madly in love with Edward, and have never looked back!
I have a 21 year old son away at university and a lovely husband who tolerates my obsession with good grace - in fact he bought me my beautiful Twilight journals and a calendar last Christmas. He just wishes I could get paid for writing!
I have never thought about writing fanfic until reading "Dark Side of the Moon" by Blondie and coming across this site. I decided to have a go, and "Eclipse Missing Moments" is my first attempt.
I wasn't sure if I could write any original stories, but eventually had a go with Picking Up The Pieces. It almost didn't see the light of day when it was rejected, as I didn't see the tiny mark against grammer, and thought it was wholly unsuitable. Thankfully I went back and re-read the email, made some corrections and resubmitted it. It is to date the most successful story (as far as reviews are concerned) that I have done.
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Summary: 
Awesome banner created by Amber.
Bella is a newborn vampire that is unlike others of her kind. Changed by James, a centuries old vegetarian vampire who has an unhealthy obsession with making Bella his mate, she flees her life in small town Forks and heads to Chicago. Intent on using her new abilities to help people, she and her best friend Rosalie spend their nights walking the streets of Chicago, searching for people to save, find the missing, and bring criminals to justice. In a dark alley, she runs into Edward Cullen, a handsome, cocky, homicide detective who immediately is captivated by the supernatural beauty.
The two eventually come together to bring down a serial killer who is not human and Bella finds herself falling for the cop and his entire family, revealing her secret and putting them all in jeopardy. When tragedy strikes, Bella is faced with the difficult decision to bring others into her world or leave them to die, including the man she loves.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: No
Word count: 135869
[Report This] Published: April 20, 2011 Updated: September 14, 2012
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: August 04, 2011
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11
Damn! I suppose it would have been too easy to get rid of James already! Nice that Jane got her head ripped off. Bella should have done that in the beginning!
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: November 17, 2011
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17
Oh, well played!!!!!! What a delightful revelation. Love it.
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: October 10, 2011
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15
Oh dear - busted Bella!!! With Emmett looking the same way, they could probably blame it on a joint enterprise - maybe paintballing?? lol
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed 
Date: June 30, 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8
James warning Edward? I think Bella will certainly have something to say about that!!! I am really loving this story and looking forward to seeing how this pans out. Great job.
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: June 22, 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7
Aw! Nice to know that the wolves will be able to distinguish the good vamps from the bad - although James is still in need of a good slapping!
A Daddy huh? Jake and Leah?
And Daddy Cullen - Nice!
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: June 14, 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4
I really want to just keep reading, but I will stop for a minute. This is a fabulous story! I'm really liking what you've done with it. Definately one for a favourite!!
Please don't abandon this! I have seen so many stories disappear after a few chapters, and I really want to see this through to complation.
Anyway. That's enough reviewing! On to the next chapter!
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: June 14, 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6
Oh crap! Hopefully, they will be reasonable, but I think Jake is going to be pissed!!!
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: October 30, 2011
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16
I'm a little confused - did Carlisle do that deliberately? I certainly hope not!
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: July 24, 2011
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10
I shall try and be patient as I wait for the next chapter!!!
Summary: 
She washed up along the river near his secluded log cabin with no memories. He couldn't just leave her to fend for herself, could he?
Blinkie by the amazing Le Crepuscule
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No
Word count: 63057
[Report This] Published: May 03, 2011 Updated: August 31, 2011
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: June 28, 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Stubborn as Hell
Aw bless him! You have to love how he is looking after her. Nice to have a bit of background on Edward - now we just need to find some stuff about Petal!
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: June 14, 2011
Title: Chapter 7: You Bold-Faced Lied to Me
Poor Petal. I have to say, this story has me intrigued. At least I've stopped singing Duelling Banjoes every time I read about Edward now! Are we going to be getting some clues soon?
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: July 05, 2011
Title: Chapter 9: This and That
At least with some money she can buy some new clothes. Maybe she should leave the tank and shorts for inside the cabin :D
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: July 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Just Someone You Saved
"Come home." How sweet is that?
I feel a bit aggrieved that you would ditch us for Harry Potter - I could understand if it was Breaking Dawn!!! Make sure you make the wait worth it!! lol
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: July 26, 2011
Title: Chapter 11: Treat You Nice
The plot thickens!!!
Surely someone else would have seen the news item though? Mike Newton for one!
Well, at least we have some idea as to why someone might want her out of the way - an heiress no less!
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: August 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 15: A Whistling Woman
I'm wondering if poor old hubby hasn't put a contract out on her so he could get her money. That would get rid of him nicely!!! ???
I know you won't tell me :)
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: August 31, 2011
Title: Chapter 16: One More Day
Poor Edward! Please don't leave him alone too long!!!
I can't wait for part two!
Summary: 
Edward is a single father and CEO of Cullen Corporation. He's emotionally closed off and doesn't want a romantic relationship. A couple of chance meetings with Bella, a part time entertainment journalist and one of Cullen Corporation's new employees, and that could all change. Everyone has a past, but can love be enough to build a future? Bella is willing to try, but Edward's self imposed rules on no dating make it difficult.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 36 Completed: No
Word count: 204014
[Report This] Published: May 05, 2011 Updated: July 08, 2012
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: September 11, 2011
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
It's nice to know that Renee wasn't a total cow, and that there were underlying reasons for her leaving. Now both Charlie and Bella can get some closure. Author's Response: I wanted Bella to at least get some kind of answers. Her and Charlie never really talked about her mom after she left them, so it was hard for her to remember much about her. I think this trip did her some good. Thank you for reviewing.
Summary: 
Banner by ChildOfSummer!! THANK YOU!!
If someone gave you three wishes, would you use them? That's the question Bella Swan, practical psychology major, has to decide when her grandmother presents her with a story that she can't believe, and a blue sapphire ring that she's always coveted. If you could go to any time in your future would you make the wish?
AU-Human. Told in Bella's POV. Cannon Couples. OOC. Not angsty, but a few tissues may be necessary in places. Language, Lemons (of course...you know me). It's different than anything else I've written. Interested in a little magic?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes
Word count: 72733
[Report This] Published: May 10, 2011 Updated: August 03, 2011
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: August 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
That was lovely. Life isn't perfect, but the love we have for our family and friends transends everything. Thanks for this!!
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: July 29, 2011
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
You did say it was a Novella! To be honest, leading a full, happy life is pretty boring as far as stories go, so unless you were going to introduce some major angst, then I think your decision is just right!
So, I imagine the next chapter will be the last wish and it's fulfillment. Nice.
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: June 22, 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Of course Marie told him! hehe
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: May 17, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
So sweet! I'm sure the "he" will be Edward, who was waiting for her to complete her last wish! I'm keen to know what her first wish will be!
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: June 06, 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Time for some kissing next I think!
I have to say, it would have been nice to see further into the relationship rather than a few months worth, but, hey, they're not my wishes!!!
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: July 04, 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
"It would just get me a cell mate named Big Bertha."
Laughed out loud at that one! Yep - Bella definately needs to tear her Dad a new one!
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: July 08, 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Oh, please let it be Edward! hehe
Summary: Edward Cullen's life revolved around his casino. He thought he had it all. She would prove him wrong.
Banner by the amazing xrxdanixrx!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No
Word count: 38379
[Report This] Published: May 11, 2011 Updated: May 05, 2012
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: June 27, 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
It'll take him forever to get back home! lol.
I hope he enjoys the ride :)
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