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Penname: Looby Luscious [Contact]
Real name: Sue Mansbridge
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Member Since: February 14, 2010
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I won't say how old I am - just to say I feel young at heart! After reading Twilight for the first time, I couldn't put it down - in fact I have read the books countless times! I think it took me back to that breathy, shaky torment of first love which we know can't last, but will always remember. I fell madly in love with Edward, and have never looked back!


I have a 21 year old son away at university and a lovely husband who tolerates my obsession with good grace - in fact he bought me my beautiful Twilight journals and a calendar last Christmas. He just wishes I could get paid for writing!


I have never thought about writing fanfic until reading "Dark Side of the Moon" by Blondie and coming across this site. I decided to have a go, and "Eclipse Missing Moments" is my first attempt.


I wasn't sure if I could write any original stories, but eventually had a go with Picking Up The Pieces. It almost didn't see the light of day when it was rejected, as I didn't see the tiny mark against grammer, and thought it was wholly unsuitable. Thankfully I went back and re-read the email, made some corrections and resubmitted it. It is to date the most successful story (as far as reviews are concerned) that I have done.


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Reviews by Looby Luscious
 
Where We Came From by pbear Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 226]
Summary:

Bella is beginning her first year as a doctoral student in biology at the University of Washington, in the lab of Dr. Carlisle Cullen.  She thinks she's going to identify how snake venom poisons prey, but as she delves deeper into her experiment she realizes that she's stumbled onto something far more sinister.

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 38412
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2010 Updated: May 16, 2011


Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: October 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Project Idea?

I have just read this in one sitting, and I like the way you are writing. I have to admit that the science bits go WAY over my head though!! I look forward to seeing where you go on this. :)



Author's Response:

Aw thanks!

 
Summary:

On Christmas Day, Carlisle makes his traditional vigil in search of redemption - with surprising results.


Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Carlisle
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4472
[Report This] Published: August 14, 2010 Updated: September 10, 2010


Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: September 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A Ray of Hope

A lovely story, and very much in keeping with Carlisle's character. IF such things as vampire's really existed, they would have as great a chance at salvation as any of God's creations. And as the reward is eternal life, then it just means that Carlisle is already one step ahead of us!!!



Author's Response:

Hello Looby Luscious,

so glad you liked Carlisle's characterisation! When I first attempted to portray him, he come off as a little wimpy and pathetic, which made me cringe so much I had to alter a lot of the fic. But I'm relieved that he now seems more in keeping with canon!

I definitely think Carlisle is one step ahead of us in salvation - but more so because he's a genuinely good person than because he's immortal - although that definitely helps *snigger*.

Thanks very much for R & R-ing,

Kara's Aunty ;)

 
The Assignment by nowforruin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

 

Bella's new photography assignment puts her in need of a nude male model. Bella's friends find her in need of a bit more. Written for the Through the Lens One-shot Contest

 

 

Thank you to MDealsWithIt for the fabulous banner =)


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 8452
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2010 Updated: August 18, 2010


Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: August 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

Loved this story!

 
Summary:

Edward and Bella consider a photo from their past. How did they get here, and will it be enough to bring them together again?  E/B AU-Human

Third place in the Judge's Selection Round for the Plot Bunny Contest.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jane
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5549
[Report This] Published: August 20, 2010 Updated: August 23, 2010


Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: August 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Memories of Us

Adorable! Loved it immensely. I just wonder why it took her so long to rip his clothes off when he appeared at the door!!!! lol.

 
Summary:

This was the outtake chapter of Last Tango in Forks that was auctioned off for the Fandom Gives Back. This was originally supposed to be just an outtake, but it ended up falling in line with the actual story line. If you have read the rest of it, this would actually occur after Chapter 13.

In this outtake, Edward takes his mystery woman out to a secluded meadow for a romantic picnic with hopes of more, but a heated argument sparks passionate revelations from the both of them.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5936
[Report This] Published: August 22, 2010 Updated: August 23, 2010


Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: August 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 14 of LTIF

Was desperate for an update from you, so I'm very happy for this posting. Of course, neither of them will admit the "L" word yet, but its so obvious. Sex in the meadow never looked so different!

Now get on with Chapter 14!!!!!!! lol

:D

 
Summary:

A dark angel visits Bella Swan in her dreams, filling her with lust and unparalleled pleasure, but what happens when the line between fantasy and reality starts to blur?  

Banner by @Miztrezboo

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: No Word count: 263309
[Report This] Published: August 22, 2010 Updated: August 16, 2011


Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: April 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Purgatory

Poor Edward. I'm hoping there's a nice cordon around Bella to stop Edward massacring her again! I'm glad they're meeting up again. It's time he had some happiness.

Glad you are not abandoning us! I'm always grateful for an update. :)

 
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Breathe Again (Part 1)

I would have read twice as much - this could never be too long for me. I love this story. Now give me my HEA!!!

 
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Mutual Animosity

You certainly know how to write a cliffie in more ways than one!! Can't wait to read the next part!

 
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: October 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Stormy Weather

I think the latter - I'm all for that!!!

 
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: March 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Coming Back

So sad! Wah! Come back Edward!

 
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: August 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Breathe Again (Part 2)

I knew you wouldn't disappoint me. I was sure you would give me my HEA and I'm so glad you did. I have adored this story, but I don't think a sequel is necessary. I just want Rose to have a baby :)

 
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Halloween Revisited

Edward - grab her, run with her, never let her go!!!

Oh, and flip Jacob a V on the way :)

 
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Freeze Frame

ew! Poor Edward. This is getting VERY interesting. I love your twisted mind!

 
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Last Resort

So, next chapter, Edward dies and Bella tops herself? How do I know that's not going to happen? I have loved this story and I shall be sad to see it end, but the HEA will be worth it.

Princess Bride AND Monty Python are both all timwe favs of mine too :)

 
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: First Contact

I absolutely love this story. I enjoyed your original one shot, and its fabulous that you are expanding it. Even better is Edward's POV, filling in the blanks and explaining his actions. Magic!

 
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: February 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Hidden Clues

Urgh, nasty! I hope they get to her :(

 
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: January 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner?

Surely you are not going to sully poor Charlie's mind by having him see the DVD? That's almost as bad as catching your parents at it!!!

 
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Edible Delights

I loved this chapter! I always wanted the Cullens to totally trash the wolves, especially Edward. Thanks for making it happen.

Incidently, do you think this lust thing seeps through computer screens, because I have a sudden urge to call my husband upstairs...!!!

 
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Prey

Wow! Poor Edward. I think either, Alice et al will intervene just in time or, hopefully, he will have the strength in himself to stop, because her forgiveness and acceptence will be felt by him. I'd prefer the second, but either would be good!!!

Fabulous chapter!

 
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: May 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Trying to Change

So glad to see you back!

I can't even imagine how the wolf blood will affect her, but I can't believe you won't give us a HEA. She's going to be something better than ever. Poor Edward.

 
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Plan B

Nice idea. I'm looking for a guarentee that it'll all work out, but I can't imagine you killing Edward off at this stage in the game!

It's time he had some peace - and the wolf blood could bring other unexpected benefits, like a vastly extended lifespan! :)

 
Summary:

Finally finding his peace in rural Forks, Edward makes a home. However, a beautiful stranger threatens the serenity of his sanctuary.

 

*Third Place Winner of There Will Be Blood Contest*

 

Banner by: Bellabee66 

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 8366
[Report This] Published: August 26, 2010 Updated: August 29, 2010


Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this story. Thanks for posting it.

 
Summary:

bannerVampire Edward meets human Bella when she is being attacked in a dark alley. Things get ugly and Edward is forced to take her to his house to save her.Not all great love stories start once upon a time and far far away; some begin down dark alleys.

Banner by Libby at thetwilightawards.com


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 45321
[Report This] Published: August 29, 2010 Updated: February 21, 2011


Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: October 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Tempers and other things you can't control

Happy Birthday! I'll give you a night off to celebrate and then you have to get writing the next update!

:)

 
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: January 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Life or death and other decisions

I'm wondering how long James will last when Aro finally finds out how he reads minds. Then, how long will it take for them to look for Edward? Bella is just going to have to be turned!



Author's Response:

You're right that there's no way this can last long. The Volturi aren't stupid, and they aren't nice about being fooled.

 
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: February 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Ever after and other things at stake

I have to admit, I thought James had killed the family, but when Edward said he had read his mind, I believed him. I just hope the Volturi catch up with James soon!!!

 




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