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Penname: Looby Luscious [Contact]
Real name: Sue Mansbridge
Status: Member
Member Since: February 14, 2010
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I won't say how old I am - just to say I feel young at heart! After reading Twilight for the first time, I couldn't put it down - in fact I have read the books countless times! I think it took me back to that breathy, shaky torment of first love which we know can't last, but will always remember. I fell madly in love with Edward, and have never looked back!


I have a 21 year old son away at university and a lovely husband who tolerates my obsession with good grace - in fact he bought me my beautiful Twilight journals and a calendar last Christmas. He just wishes I could get paid for writing!


I have never thought about writing fanfic until reading "Dark Side of the Moon" by Blondie and coming across this site. I decided to have a go, and "Eclipse Missing Moments" is my first attempt.


I wasn't sure if I could write any original stories, but eventually had a go with Picking Up The Pieces. It almost didn't see the light of day when it was rejected, as I didn't see the tiny mark against grammer, and thought it was wholly unsuitable. Thankfully I went back and re-read the email, made some corrections and resubmitted it. It is to date the most successful story (as far as reviews are concerned) that I have done.


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Reviews by Looby Luscious
 
Summary:

A dark angel visits Bella Swan in her dreams, filling her with lust and unparalleled pleasure, but what happens when the line between fantasy and reality starts to blur?  

Banner by @Miztrezboo

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: No Word count: 263309
[Report This] Published: August 22, 2010 Updated: August 16, 2011


Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: May 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Trying to Change

So glad to see you back!

I can't even imagine how the wolf blood will affect her, but I can't believe you won't give us a HEA. She's going to be something better than ever. Poor Edward.

 
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Plan B

Nice idea. I'm looking for a guarentee that it'll all work out, but I can't imagine you killing Edward off at this stage in the game!

It's time he had some peace - and the wolf blood could bring other unexpected benefits, like a vastly extended lifespan! :)

 
Summary:

Finally finding his peace in rural Forks, Edward makes a home. However, a beautiful stranger threatens the serenity of his sanctuary.

 

*Third Place Winner of There Will Be Blood Contest*

 

Banner by: Bellabee66 

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 8366
[Report This] Published: August 26, 2010 Updated: August 29, 2010


Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this story. Thanks for posting it.

 
Summary:

bannerVampire Edward meets human Bella when she is being attacked in a dark alley. Things get ugly and Edward is forced to take her to his house to save her.Not all great love stories start once upon a time and far far away; some begin down dark alleys.

Banner by Libby at thetwilightawards.com


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 45321
[Report This] Published: August 29, 2010 Updated: February 21, 2011


Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: October 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Tempers and other things you can't control

Happy Birthday! I'll give you a night off to celebrate and then you have to get writing the next update!

:)

 
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: January 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Life or death and other decisions

I'm wondering how long James will last when Aro finally finds out how he reads minds. Then, how long will it take for them to look for Edward? Bella is just going to have to be turned!



Author's Response:

You're right that there's no way this can last long. The Volturi aren't stupid, and they aren't nice about being fooled.

 
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: February 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Ever after and other things at stake

I have to admit, I thought James had killed the family, but when Edward said he had read his mind, I believed him. I just hope the Volturi catch up with James soon!!!

 
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: November 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Dead people and other uninvited guests

This doesn't entirely suck. lol

Aw - no Alice? Damn!

 
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: January 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Fairytales and other wake up calls

I love Rose too. I wonder how many foods you are going to list in this - it always makes me laugh. (Even though I have never heard of half of them!!)



Author's Response:

Glad you're liking it. Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: February 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Epilogue: The end and other beginnings

It may be short, but it was very sweet. So glad James got what was coming to him!

Well done on being a Mum - one of the hardest jobs in the world!Big Kudo's to you for that.

Hope to hear more from you in the future!

 
Summary:

Bella had been suffering from severe nightmares for months, but Jacob never realized just how bad they really were until he witnessed one for himself. One-shot, implied Jacob/Bella, implied Bella/Edward.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3647
[Report This] Published: September 06, 2010 Updated: October 13, 2010


Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: October 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm not a Jacob fan, but this was lovely! Nicely done!



Author's Response:

Not a Jacob fan?! :O lololol just kidding... That's perfectly okay!  Although I'm a die-hard Jacob fan, I can also see why some people don't like him. I'm glad you still liked this even though you're not a Jacob fan! :] Thank you so much for the review!

 
Cold Case File by i-was-broken Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 83]
Summary:

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Bella is investigating a rash of serial killings in Rochester, NY when Edward Cullen crosses her path and raises her suspicion. Is there more to Edward than meets the eye? Can Bella fight her attraction to a man who might be her suspect?


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 52255
[Report This] Published: September 08, 2010 Updated: November 27, 2011


Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Unfulfilled

I decided to give this one a go, and I'm very glad I did. I'm really enjoying your take on Twilight. I'm glad to hear that you will be updating frequently, as I hate having to wait too long!!

I'm very much looking forward to reading more.

 
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: September 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: 10. Reservations

Always nice to see an update!

So Bella's Dad was killed by naighty vampires. I wonder if James(?) has been watching her all these years and waiting for her to grow up?

I sincerely hope that Edward is keeping watch!

 
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: November 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: 11 Just Bella

Thanks for the update - I've missed you!!!

So she has finally thought the "V" word, although no connection with the wolves as yet. It's a shame Billy couldn't have been a bit more supportive.

Looking forward to this adult relationship getting off the ground!

 
Summary:

*NOW COMPLETE*


Bella wanted Mr. Perfect, but he didn’t want her. When Mr. Imperfect comes along, can she look close enough to see just who is more perfect for her?

A story about falling in love with the imperfections.

 

Blinkie by the uber talented RoseArcadia


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 153293
[Report This] Published: September 09, 2010 Updated: May 12, 2011


Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: January 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: He Moved on from Me

I know all is not as it seems, but - it seems pretty bad!!! I'd love to know what's going through Edward's head right now. I hope you are not going to keep them apart much more.

 
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: December 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: He Fought with Me

"I promise. You have absolutely nothing to worry about."

HAHAHAHHAHA!!!

Famous last words?

 
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: January 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 21: He Vied for Me: Part One

Team Edward all the way! Jasper is just trying to buy her back, whereas Edward is giving her a good time (with a bit of hot sex thrown in for good measure)!!!

 
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: February 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: He Introduced Me

Fabulous - Mrs Masen is a lovely lady. I know she's not going to be around much longer, but at least Bella is there to help Edward recover.

 
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: February 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 24: He was Perfect for Me

Thanks for writing it. I did enjoy this immensely. A good ending too. :)

 
Summary:

TAM bannerAfter years of surviving in her arranged marriage, Bella hears some news that shatters all of her hopes and dreams. Can she and Edward discover what it means to be together after all? Set in the modern day. ExB


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 220375
[Report This] Published: September 17, 2010 Updated: April 26, 2011


Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: October 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Conversations

Yes - he is a stupid man. Yes he deserves to be lashed. He should crawl on his knees for the rest of his life and treat Bella like a princess. One indiscretion I could cope with, but not a year of it, with a flimsy excuse. Celibacy is not hard, if he was so keen to wait.

I will keep reading, to see how he makes things work between them. But he's not my favourite version of Edward!!! lol



Author's Response:

He has his issues, that is for sure. I just wrote the chapter where he tells them all to Bella and I think many will be surprised. 

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: March 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Crime and Punishment

I'm so glad that James has finally been caught. I look forward to the rest of the HEA!!!

 
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: March 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Crime and Punishment

I'm so glad that James has finally been caught. I look forward to the rest of the HEA!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! It's coming along!

 
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: April 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Epilogue

It's so sad when you finish a story, especially when you have built up a relationship with your reviewers - it leaves a big hole!

I think the ending was perfect! I just wish someone had said similar things to me when I had my saggy stomach and huge boobs! Maybe thats why we ended in divorce lol.

I still have a saggy stomach and boobs, but it's age now, not babies! Still, hubby number two seems to like them! :)

Look forward to seeing what else you might cook up!

 
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: February 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Beginnings

At last! No-one can get them on the no consummation rule at least!!! Very nice.

Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I am glad that you enjoyed it!

 
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: April 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Endings

So justice is served! Fabulous!

Looking forward to some lemony Jamaican nights!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Summary:

Mystery writer, Edward Cullen stumbles upon a mystery greater than the ones he writes: Isabella Swan. Life happens as he unravels the mystery.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 180176
[Report This] Published: September 21, 2010 Updated: August 08, 2011


Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: June 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - He Is My Strength

Hurrah! Everything is going to work out fine. :)

 




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