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Penname: Looby Luscious [ Contact]
Real name: Sue Mansbridge
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I won't say how old I am - just to say I feel young at heart! After reading Twilight for the first time, I couldn't put it down - in fact I have read the books countless times! I think it took me back to that breathy, shaky torment of first love which we know can't last, but will always remember. I fell madly in love with Edward, and have never looked back!
I have a 21 year old son away at university and a lovely husband who tolerates my obsession with good grace - in fact he bought me my beautiful Twilight journals and a calendar last Christmas. He just wishes I could get paid for writing!
I have never thought about writing fanfic until reading "Dark Side of the Moon" by Blondie and coming across this site. I decided to have a go, and "Eclipse Missing Moments" is my first attempt.
I wasn't sure if I could write any original stories, but eventually had a go with Picking Up The Pieces. It almost didn't see the light of day when it was rejected, as I didn't see the tiny mark against grammer, and thought it was wholly unsuitable. Thankfully I went back and re-read the email, made some corrections and resubmitted it. It is to date the most successful story (as far as reviews are concerned) that I have done.
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Summary:   It's the late 1800s in the wild west. A lonely man seeks companionship; a woman restricted by convention seeks a future. Add those together and what do you get?
Banner by Kellyjaxn
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes
Word count: 96313
[Report This] Published: June 12, 2010 Updated: December 27, 2010
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: December 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 The Jackass
Damn! And I thought boy would be safe in the hay loft!!! Nice drama! Shame it's nearly over, as I've enjoyed it.
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: December 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 The End
Thanks for a lovely ride!
Summary: Edward Cullen is a man of routines. When a homeless girl distracts him from said routine, Edward finds it is time for a change.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes
Word count: 14405
[Report This] Published: June 19, 2010 Updated: August 02, 2010
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: August 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Precious little gems! Thank-you. Author's Response: Thank you.
Summary:
After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?
 
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Other Character
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes
Word count: 146076
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2010 Updated: February 03, 2011
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed 
Date: August 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13
I am so loving this story. I look forward to the next update eagerly. Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! Just in case you're unaware, the story updates every Friday on FFnet. I try to get it in the queue here on Thursdays, so it's hit or miss when it gets put up here! I post teasers on Mondays; the latest teases are up on the Parachute Blog as we speak!
My computer is having issues at the moment, but I don't anticipate any delays for Friday! I normally respond to reviews on Monday afternoons, but said computer issues kept me from it until today!
Hope you enjoy the teasers!
XoXo Shel
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The pair got lost in each other's eyes until they were interrupted by the pounding of feet on steps.
Jack skidded to a halt in the hallway at the top of the stairs. He looked between his parents curiously, not quite sure what to make of them standing so close to each other. He walked over to his mother's side and looked up at his father.
"Is everything okay here, Mom?" he asked Bella, while never taking his eyes off of Edward.
Bella suppressed a giggle at Jack's attempt at bravado. She placed a hand on her son's shoulder, which caused him to look up at her. She smiled at him and nodded.
"Everything is just fine, Jack. We were just about to head outside."
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: October 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22
So good - nice to see everyone making the effort despite the emotion.
Thanks for the update!! Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I'm so sorry that I wasn't able to hop on here sooner and get your review to you! I'll definitely try better! The next chapter should be up here soon!
A huge thank you to everyone who sent their birthday wishes and/or nominated Jack & Parachute in the Twilight Original Character Awards! If you'd like to jump up and nom an OC that you love, do eeet!
XoXo
Shel
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She watched her son carefully as he made his way downstairs, with Alice by his side. Something wasn't right. Sure, he was smiling and acting jovial, but there was something that was just off. Their gazes met and her worry increased exponentially. Jack's eyes were dull and missing his usual spark.
She pulled him quietly to the side and whispered in his ear.
"What's wrong, baby?"
He smiled genuinely at her and shook his head.
"Nothing, Mom. I'm just a little nervous."
She narrowed her eyes and nodded, although she wasn't convinced that he was telling the truth, but starting an argument right now wasn't really an option at the moment.
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: October 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19
Yay!!! Date with Edward :) Lovely story. Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! I have it on good authority that it's a *squeal*-worthy one!
I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is so much freaking fun. Check it out if you get the chance! We had a bunch of new players this past week, so I figured I'd mention it one more time. I won't bring it up again for awhile.
=)
Shel
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Bella sighed and smiled, her eyes closed and facing the sky, as the classical notes of Tchaicovsky's 1812 Overture swirled around the air. She felt Edward's hand gently begin to play with her hair and she bit her lip to stifle a sigh. He had been nothing short of amazing today and she didn't want their date to come to a close any time soon.
She opened her eyes and turned her face slightly to the left.
Edward's fingers still held onto a strand of hair as he smiled down at her.
"Enjoying the concert?" he asked, in a low husky voice. She smiled widely and nodded happily.
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: November 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27
Finally!!! What a perfect solution. :)
Why would Bella not share the recording with her father at the very least? I'm sure it will come in useful during a court case anyway!!! Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! The next chapter is in the queue now as a special early update! Hopefully, it will be up soon! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
I just posted a O/S to my FFnet account called "I'm not that Girl." I'm proud to announce that it won one of the two First Place spots in the Public Vote for the FanFicAddicts Anon 100 Pictures contest!
Also peaking of oneshots, I have another one in the OSS Contest called "Misery Business." It's my second time writing a lemon, so consider it preparing for your Parachute one. ;-) Check it out - vote and leave some love for the authors, even it's not for me!
♥ Shel ♥
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"What has you smiling so beautifully?" Esme asked curiously, just before the flight attendants announced that they were free to exit the plane.
Bella wasn't sure exactly how to respond. Edward wanted to be the one to sit down and explain his desire to relocate to his parents. Plus, nothing was set in stone, like he himself has said. She decided to go with the partial truth.
"I was just thinking about Jack and Edward. I thought my life was complete with Jack, but Edward adds a whole other dimension. I can't picture our lives without him."
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: August 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9
At last! The Cullens'. I am so looking forward to the next update - please don't leave it too long! Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday (on Ffnet anyways, it has to wait to get validated here) and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak.
I have taken to calling you, my readers, "Verucas". A good number of you are so demanding and impatient, even though I update every week! It makes me feel so damned loved and I give you this moniker in adoration! You truly give me chills and warm my heart at the same time with every review you leave me! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review that is left for me because you guys rock my socks!
Parachute's 1000th reviewer On FFnet was given the option to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and she deferred the choice to my judgement, so I will continue to listen to ideas and then maybe post a poll to see what you guys as a whole would like to see. The 500th reviewers here and on TWCS will also be extended the same deal, since I want no one to feel left out!
Oh, and one more thing! An awesome Veruca named Phoebe started Parachute a thread on the Twilighted Forum! The link is up on the blog if you need it! In addition, thanks to many of you, Parachute was named as FanFic Addicts Fic of the Month! Super-freaking-yay!
I love you guys something fierce and I hope this next chapter lives up to your expectations of the first Cullen meeting!
XoXo
Shel
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Esme's gaze went back and forth between Bella and Jack. She could clearly see the love that wound between the two of them and a million questions started to swirl around her.
"How?" she asked, as tears started to trickle from her verdant eyes. "What happened? How did you find him? How long have you known we were his family?" Both she and Carlisle looked at Bella expectantly.
"It's very long story," Bella chuckled, humorlessly. "Let me start at the beginning."
Bella started to tell the Cullen her tale, starting with finding Jack in the alley and taking him to the police station. She didn't get very far. They were interrupted with the sound of the front door opening and a loud voice calling out of the foyer.
"Mom! We're here!"
Bella felt something tighten in her stomach as she prepared to come face to face with Jack's father. Her nerves were at an all-time high and she briefly wondered if Dr. Cullen could prescribe her something to help prevent an ulcer from forming.
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Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: August 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12
Aw, that was so lovely! I think this story is smashing. It'll be great for Jack and Edward to reconnect again, but I'm sure it's not going to be all roses all the time. And what's going to happen when they have to go back home? looking forward to finding out.
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: September 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15
Aw! Lovely Edward getting a cake with Dad on. Really loving this story so much. Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogpot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! Included this week are teasers for the next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco.
Also, today is the last day to vote in The Hidden Star Awards! Even if you decide not to vote for Parachute (Best Canon Category). stop by and support your favorite authors/stories that might be up for awards! Link is on my profile and up on the Blog!
XoXo
Shel
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"Good afternoon, Mr. Cullen," a beautiful brunette with ice blue eyes simpered, as she stood from her seat behind a large desk. "I was told you wouldn't be in the office for a few weeks."
Bella quirked an eyebrow at the girl's blatant flirtatiousness. She looked over at Edward and noticed that his posture immediately straightened and his voice took on a cooler tone.
"Gianna," he nodded to the woman. "I'm only stopping by to grab a few things and to show my family around a little bit."
Bella's eyes cut to his face, surprised to have herself included in that statement. He smiled gently at her before leading her and Jack towards the large corner office.
"Family?" Gianna asked, confused. She didn't spare Bella a second glance, but her jaw dropped as soon as she got a good look at Jack. "Oh my God," she whispered and sat down quickly. As soon as Edward's door closed behind them, she picked up her phone and dialed.
"Jane? You are not going to believe who just walked in here!"
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: September 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17
Woaw! What is going on here? Wonder what Marcus has in mind? And Jake? Methinks he is going to rock the boat at some point!
I am loving this story. Thanks for sharing it with us. :)
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: September 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17
Woaw! What is going on here? Wonder what Marcus has in mind? And Jake? Methinks he is going to rock the boat at some point!
I am loving this story. Thanks for sharing it with us. :)
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: September 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17
Woaw! What is going on here? Wonder what Marcus has in mind? And Jake? Methinks he is going to rock the boat at some point!
I am loving this story. Thanks for sharing it with us. :)
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: September 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17
Woaw! What is going on here? Wonder what Marcus has in mind? And Jake? Methinks he is going to rock the boat at some point!
I am loving this story. Thanks for sharing it with us. :)
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: September 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17
Woaw! What is going on here? Wonder what Marcus has in mind? And Jake? Methinks he is going to rock the boat at some point!
I am loving this story. Thanks for sharing it with us. :)
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: September 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17
Woaw! What is going on here? Wonder what Marcus has in mind? And Jake? Methinks he is going to rock the boat at some point!
I am loving this story. Thanks for sharing it with us. :) Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I hope to have this chapter into the queue by Thursday night, so after that is up to how fast the chapter gets approved!
<3 Shel
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Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.
'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'
His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.
The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: November 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24
I don't think I am making things up ( I read a lot of FF), but I'm sure you mentioned James was with Victoria when Jack went missing - that he was her dealer? Apart from re-reading the whole thing to check, maybe you could put me right?
Either way, I had a feeling she would turn up!
Boooo!!!! Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter is in the queue here and should be up soon! I hope you enjoyed the surprise update earlier this week, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well!
The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude!
♥ Shel ♥
{PS, you're on the right track. No one was specified by name, but she did meet up with someone in Seattle. He was assumed to be her dealer.}
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"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."
Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.
"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: November 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25
More secrets to keep from Edward? Don't know if that is a good thing. Tanya is right - honesty is everything in a relationship.
Ha! So knew it was James with Victoria! I really am glad that Carlisles lawyer sorted out the divorce - I was worried that James would have sneaked in an extra clause or not filled the forms in right on purpose.
Next! Don't just sit there! Write! lol Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! The next chapter is in the queue here now, so it shouldn't be too much longer! Teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
I know a lot of you get excited for updates and I want you to know that I get just as excited to post it for you, seriously! Your reviews make me smile, laugh and occasionally shed a tear. You guys mean so much to me and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving this story a chance in the first place!
Also of note, the Fandom for Preemies total has jumped to over $3,ooo raised for the March of Dimes! Freaking phenomenal! To those of who you won't be able to contribute, but still want to read the Jack Outtake, I'll be posting it on FFnet after Christmas sometime.
♥ Shel ♥
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Tanya sighed. "What happened after we left last night?"
Emmett's lips quirked, trying to fight a smile. "Mom sucker punched Victoria when she started running her mouth again."
"Esme!" Bella gasped and glanced at Esme, who looked proud of herself.
"What? She deserved it. I only regret not doing it sooner."
Bella shook her head and tried to hide her giddy smile at the thought of Victoria spread out on the ballroom floor.
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: December 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30
In the words of Star Wars - I've got a really bad feeling about this!!! Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) It ties in with this one nicely. I'll try and get this into the queue here as soon as possible, but between the holidays and school, BD (our validation beta here) has had her hands full! So, please have a little patience with us for the next couple of weeks! The next chapter will be up on Friday on FFnet if you don't feel like waiting.
Voting for the Original Character Awards ends today! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough!
Make sure you leave your pitchforks at the door before reading the teaser! This chapter's drama skyrockets, but I think it's necessary to complete our journey and it's the way that I've always pictured it heading.
♥ Shel ♥
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"Call Tanya and give her this info. She'll know what to do."
"Yes, ma'am. I'll keep my ear to the ground. If I find anything else out, I'll let you know."
Bella pocketed her iPhone and her hands curled into fists. The anger that she had experienced minutes earlier paled in comparison to the rage that coursed through her. The proof that James was a part of Jack's abandonment was black and white in front of her face. She fully planned on marching back into that office and tearing a new asshole into anyone who dared to get in her way. When the elevator reached the final floor, she was alone.
The doors opened and before she could step out, she found herself once again face to face with James Brooks. His eye widened in shock and her fist flew without thought. He swiftly caught her hand and pushed her back into the elevator with his body weight. "
What the hell are you doing?" he hissed angrily.
"You- you-" she stuttered. "You piece of shit! I'm not leaving here until I talk to Edward. I know who you are and what you did to Jack. You're a miserable excuse for a human being!" she shouted in her fury.
Quicker than she could blink, one of his forearms was pressed against her throat menacingly while the other hand gripped her by the hair.
"You couldn't just leave, could you?" he ground out. "No, you had to be Miss High-And-Mighty. From the first moment I laid eyes on you, I knew you'd be a challenge."
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: January 21, 2011
Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36
I love a HEA! Thanks so much for writing this. I have really enjoyed it. Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm so sad that this will be the last chapter of Parachute, but I'm happy with where we're leaving them! The Monday teasers are up on the up on the Blog Sunday now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
My next fic, Rabbit Heart will start posting on FFnet on February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. I'll do my best to have it in the queue here so that it posts close as possible! =)
♥ Shel ♥
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"You're grounded until you're thirty," she murmured against his hair.
"Understood," he chuckled softly.
"I'm serious," she yawned. "Wait until your father gets home."
Jack gulped audibly and nodded. "I know."
Soon, Bella's breathing evened out and soft snores filled the air. Jack's heart clenched and he truly felt horrible for lashing out at his mother. He had no idea what made him say the things he had. She had never been anything but good to him and proved her love over and over again. The phone chirped next to him and he answered it quickly, not wanting to wake her up just yet.
"Hello?" he asked softly.
"JACKSON CHARLES CULLEN! What is wrong with you, boy? Why would say something like that to your mother?" his father's voice boomed from the phone's speaker.
"Shh, Dad, please quiet down," he replied in a hushed voice.
"Quiet down?" Edward yelled. "Are you seriously telling me to be quiet? Boy, have you lost your mind?"
"No, Dad, please," Jack whispered, "Mom is sleeping next to me."
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: February 04, 2011
Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue
A fabulous story. I have really enjoyed it, and I look forward to seeing what your new one is like!
Incidently, I always read the AN's. It's nice to see people being appreciated and also to see a bit of the personality of the author too! Author's Response: Once again, I want to say thank you so much for all of the love and adoration that you guys have given to me and Parachute! People are going to get tired of hearing me say how much in awe I am of my readers and their giant hearts, but it's so very true! This story wouldn't have been nowhere near as good as it was nor had the kind of response that it had without my loyal and fuckawesome Verucas! (Heh, haven't heard that in awhile, have we?) I am prostrate at your feet. (Not to be confused with prostate, lol) I owe you all so very much!
The blogs have undergone some work over the past two weeks. KitsuShel.blogspot.com will now be used as a hub for everything that I write, with links to actual story blogs. Parachute's will remain up, just under a different name. Parachuteff.blogspot.com My next fic, Rabbit Heart's blog is up as well. There are a few pictures and teasers up there as well. =) RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
Rabbit Heart will start posting this Friday, February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. The story has already been in the queue here for a couple of weeks, so we should be good to go! I hope that you guys decide to continue on that journey with me as well. =)
♥ Shel ♥
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Teaser from Rabbit Heart Chapter 1:
The streets were eerily empty as the girl stealthily slipped out of the Beverly Hills house, although one could quite easily exchange the term mansion in its stead. Her shoulders were hunched as she made sure her hood was firmly covering her blond hair, her back laden with only an over-stuffed backpack and a guitar case. She needed to escape quickly, unseen, and today was the best time to make that happen. It was just after eleven pm, on Christmas Eve and there was practically no movement on Santa Monica Boulevard. She traveled on foot for almost three miles before coming across a cab running on the desolate streets.
She quickly stowed her meager possessions in the backseat before climbing inside.
"The nearest Greyhound station, please," she requested as softly as she could, but still within the driver's hearing range.
The older man glanced at her in the rear view mirror. If he thought anything was off about the way she kept her face hidden, he made no mention of it.
"Heading home for the holiday, sweetie?"
"Something like that," she murmured, staring out of the window and watching the lights pass by. They reached their destination in just under fifteen minutes and she handed him a $50 bill.
Summary: 
Waking up naked in a strange bed is bad enough. Waking up naked and tied up in a strange bed is worse. Even worse than that? Waking up naked and tied up in the bed of the vampire who wants to eat you. WARNING: DARK SEXUAL THEMES, VIOLENCE, GORE.
1st Place Readers' Choice winner in the "There Will Be Blood" contest.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Word count: 80475
[Report This] Published: July 01, 2010 Updated: February 21, 2012
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: October 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Fabulous story. I look forward to the conclusion.
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: August 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Wow! That was incredibly powerful. I read your original story and thought that it was good, but I am so glad that you have added to it. Very nicely done.
Summary: 
Nurse Swan vows to never date a doctor, presuming them all to be egotistical jerks. But will she change her mind when she starts a new job and meets the handsome Dr. Cullen, or will his advances only strengthen her resolve? AH, OOC, Rated NC-17 for adult content
Beautiful banner courtesy of ms-ambrosia.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No
Word count: 106485
[Report This] Published: July 03, 2010 Updated: June 19, 2011
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: August 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - Paging Dr. Dick
Nurses can be undervalued, but they can also save a drs ass if they are trusted. I remember a locum prescribing morphine to a child, and when we checked the dose it was an adult dose. He was more than grateful (after working 36 hrs straight) that we had noticed his error. I also remember calling a Dr to see one of my patients because he didn't seem right - thats exactly what I said, but he trusted my instincts to come straight over. The patient was bleeding from a hole in his heart.
Bella is right - nurses and doctors make up a great team as long as the ego doesn't get in the way.
Summary: Edward Cullen, silently waiting in longing for Bella to accept his proposal, has a nice quiet evening planned for he and Bella to relax and celebrate their love. But Bella has a surprise in store for him...
Edward POV of the infamous "Compromise" scene of Eclipse. Canon Edward/Bella. Oneshot.
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 9125
[Report This] Published: July 04, 2010 Updated: July 13, 2010
Reviewer: Looby Luscious Signed
Date: July 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Uxorious
This is lovely. I have always loved Edward's POV and this fits beautifully. Thank-you for sharing it. Author's Response: Thank you. I'm very glad you enjoyed it. xx
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