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Penname: edwards_forever [Contact]
Real name: Lizzy
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Member Since: January 23, 2009
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Let Me Ease You by flibbins Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 413]
Summary:

Edward realizes it is a struggle for Bella to deal with the physical boundaries in their relationship, so he enlists Jasper's help.  Set during Eclipse.  Edward/Bella and Jasper/Bella

Let Me Ease You


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 20931
[Report This] Published: October 24, 2008 Updated: July 03, 2009


Reviewer: edwards_forever Signed
Date: March 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Ignorance is Bella

please write more??

 
Mind Over Matter by SubtlePen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1378]
Summary:

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Bella challenges Edward's limits of self control by insisting that he build up his tolerance level to intimacy.

Set in the 6 week 'blank period' at the end of Eclipse / beginning of Breaking Dawn, between the battle, and the wedding.  Bella and Edward expand and deepen their physical relationship in preparation for their impending marriage.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 70976
[Report This] Published: November 26, 2008 Updated: August 16, 2009


Reviewer: edwards_forever Signed
Date: February 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: A boring afternoon

love the texting! write more of that!



Author's Response:

we do have a moratorium coming up....   hee hee!  thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: edwards_forever Signed
Date: July 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Moratorium

This was a good chapter! I loved it!



Author's Response:

thank you!  stay tuned!

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Oversight by TwilightFiction Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 273]
Summary: After their bargain at the end of Eclipse, Edward asks Emmett and Jasper for some advice regarding his wedding night.  What they tell him leads to a very uncomfortable conversation between Bella and Emmett, and leads Bella to ask a huge favor from Jacob--one that he is all to willing to grant.
Categories: Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 13198
[Report This] Published: November 26, 2008 Updated: July 10, 2009


Reviewer: edwards_forever Signed
Date: March 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Done

please write more. i'll give you a cookie...

 
Summary:

‘ While the Doctor’s away… ’

By Bec

Rating: Adult

Couples are as cannon… Alice/Jasper, Edward/Bella, Rosalie/Emmett, but be prepared for some surprises.
Bella discovers that her new family have the occasional tendency to get closer to each other than she ever dreamed, but will her and Edward participate? Various chapters written from varying POV's. LEMONS/SMUT.

AU All Vampire, No Jacob.

Set After Renesmee's birth and Bella’s transformation.

WARNING: Contains material of an explicit nature… please do not read if under aged or easily offended.


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 32926
[Report This] Published: December 19, 2008 Updated: May 14, 2009


Reviewer: edwards_forever Signed
Date: June 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Lots to Learn

will you please write more?? soon?



Author's Response:

Yes i will... i just HAVE to get unwanted finished first.  It's eating away at me and being very demanding.  As soon as its finished, i will pour all my energy into this fic. Gimme another couple of weeks, ok?

Thanks for your enthusiasm!  xoxox Bec

 
Reviewer: edwards_forever Signed
Date: June 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Ostentatious Part 2

will you PLEASE write more??? and soon!



Author's Response:

I will, I promise... as soon as i'm done with Unwanted. Only 3 chapters to go, then i'm WTDA all the way.  Thanks for your enthusiasm.  :)

 
Reviewer: edwards_forever Signed
Date: July 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Ostentatious Part 2

can you please write more?



Author's Response:

yes hon, i will, i promise.  I only have the epilogue of Unwanted to do now, then i'll be focussing on this fic.  I should (hopefully) have a new chapter of this for you in the next week or two, k?  :)

xoxox Bec

 
Summary:

Emily, Rachel and Kim prepare Claire for the sex-life of a wolf-girl!

Companion to my story "Enough With This Gravity Moving Already!" but not required reading. 


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Claire, Emily, Kim, Nessie, Renesmee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 14935
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2009 Updated: April 06, 2009


Reviewer: edwards_forever Signed
Date: March 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Wolf-Girls Only

love it!

 
Summary:

Kimmi

Kimmi Odell, a physically 17 year old vampire, is about to have her life changed forever. Once a poor girl living on the L.A streets, now a rich girl moving to Forks, Washington, to live with one of her Daddy's friends: Carlisle Cullen.

Seth

Seth Clearwater, a 21 year old werewolf, has his life figured out. That is, of course, until the new girl comes to town. Happy with his pack and his life, will he be able to admit the truth to his friends, as well as to himself, about what this girl means to him? This beautiful red headed girl he knows he can't have, or...maybe...he can have her after all.

 

"You didn't have to stand up for me like that," I persisted.

 

"Yes, I did," Seth replied, sounding frustrated and amused at the same time.

 

"Why?" I asked, stopping in my tracks.

 

He stopped as well, a few steps away from me, and turned around. He was smiling, that large goofy smile I love so much. "Because, silly girl, I love you." He leaned forward, placed his warm lips on my forehead for a soft kiss, then winked and walked backwards into the trees. Leaving me wide eyed and gaping mouthed where I stood.

Set five years after Breaking Dawn with cannon pairings, Seth/OC, Leah/OC. Will change point of views between Seth and Kimmi for most of the story.

Thank you, justalilcrush, for the wonderful banner. It's beautiful.

 


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Other Character, Seth
Challenges:
Series: A Little Thing Called Imprinting, Hey, Move The Damn Spotlight!
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 42778
[Report This] Published: March 12, 2009 Updated: December 28, 2009


Reviewer: edwards_forever Signed
Date: July 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: My Little Red Head

please write more. The story is amazing. I couldn't love it more.♥

 
Gossip by Ysar Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 33]
Summary:

Companion story to Breathe Again, written as a side to Chapter 23: Comfort


Bella skips lunch, and misses out on some very interesting conversation.


~ "Whatever," said Jessica, rolling her eyes. "You know Bella. She just has to have any guy I like." ~



But Angela's there to see and hear it all.


Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Angela, Bella, Ben, Jessica, Lauren, Mike
Challenges:
Series: A Blazing Sun
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1309
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2009 Updated: April 10, 2009


Reviewer: edwards_forever Signed
Date: July 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Gossip

Lauren and Jake. I really don't like it. Good story though...



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm assuming you're reading my series, so I won't say anything about how it turns out...but yeah, Lauren's not telling the whole truth.

 
Summary:

It only took death for him to realize how much he loved her.

For anyone who ever wondered "what-if" for Leah and Jacob. "What-if" Jacob had never broken away? "What-if" he hadn't imprinted? "What-if" life was completely different? NC-17 for extremely crude language.

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-Thanks to JaneJoke for the banner. I had to play around forever to get this up!


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Jacob, Leah
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 49 Completed: Yes Word count: 206365
[Report This] Published: May 08, 2009 Updated: August 30, 2009


Reviewer: edwards_forever Signed
Date: July 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 35: Drugs have killed the pain...and my brain

this chapter was amazing. and Leah's hilarious. This is probably the best fanfic i've ever read!



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks. Though I wouldn't say it's the best out there. I'm not a big reader, but I know there have to be a lot of other fanfic writers that are just as good, if not better, than I am. I write strictly for fun and I'm glad that you guys are enjoying my fun, insomniac craziness.

 
Reviewer: edwards_forever Signed
Date: June 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Ow

i read this entire story in one day. So please for the sake of me, write more. soon. and by soon, i mean now. please and thank you.



Author's Response:

I'm thoroughly impressed that you took it all in in one day. I can't sit still long enough to read anything. The next chapter should be up in the next couple of days.

 
Reviewer: edwards_forever Signed
Date: July 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: The moronic things we do for love

more please? i'm addicted.



Author's Response:

Definitely working on getting you your next fix. ;-P

 
Reviewer: edwards_forever Signed
Date: July 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Hot diggity damn, I'm free

more please!



Author's Response:

As always, working on it. Thanks for reading!!

 
Reviewer: edwards_forever Signed
Date: July 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Let me tell you how I really feel

this is by far the best fanfiction i've ever read. I've even got all my friends addicted to it. sooooo, you'll write more? soon?



Author's Response:

Thank you, and I hope my mind hasn't corrupted you or your friends too terribly much. And yes, I do intend on posting the entire story and a few outtakes as well.

 
Reviewer: edwards_forever Signed
Date: July 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Why can nothing work out in my life?

you can't end the chapter like that. it's just not fair.



Author's Response:

I know, I know. I'm horrible. I really don't like cliff-hangers, but it's almost impossible in this type of story to end a chapter any way else. Hopefully you'll be patient and not end up hating my guts over the next few chapters. But even if you do wind up hating me for it, I understand.

 
Reviewer: edwards_forever Signed
Date: July 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Waiting Sucks

This story is so amazing. I need chapters after chapters. non stop. Even though that probably won't happen. ♥



Author's Response:

Lol, and while I would love to continue writing chapters for this story forever and ever, I've already come up with an ending (and darn it, it's complete!). But you guys are helping me to decide which of the two endings I've written that I want to post as the actual ending.

 
Reviewer: edwards_forever Signed
Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 34: Waiting Still Sucks

amazing chapter. Sam is finally leaving. Ugh, i am so sick of him. But i feel bad at the same time. well, anyway write more?



Author's Response:

Thank you. And I also feel terrible for Sam...especially since I've made him such a jerk in this fic. I've got an outtake in his POV that will hopefully help the readers sympathize with him a bit.

 
Summary:

What if Edward never came back, Alice never saw Bella jump from the cliff, and Jacob had his fair chance with Bella? Bella and her werewolf friends are left to defend themselves against Victoria, and Bella's life lays in Jacob's hands, in more ways than she will ever know.

 

Created by me, antebellum.

 

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FYI: Bella x Jake. . . I have read some of the raunchier stories, and I see that many of them are OOC, majorly. Bella and Jake are two inexperienced teenagers. They don't use dirty language, they don't talk nasty to each other, they don't call each other "baby." They are clumsy, they are hormonal, they make mistakes. It is rated NC-17 because there is sex. However, the sexier scenes of this story will be free of vulgarity and nasty words, and will read more like a romance novel than a porn script. Please please please review and let me know what you think!

 

P.S. Like the banners? Want one, too? Contact me with details [who you want in it, what you want it to say, etc.] and emails! I will make it happen!

 

Project Team Beta Member

 

I am a member of Project Team Beta. If you would like to join or are seeking help, you can find the info at: http://community.livejournal.com/ptb_twilight/

 

Bella and Jacob Chronicles


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 29154
[Report This] Published: June 29, 2009 Updated: November 30, 2009


Reviewer: edwards_forever Signed
Date: July 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Control - Jacob

awesome! loved it!

 
Reviewer: edwards_forever Signed
Date: September 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Failure - Jacob

NOO!!! stop the anarchy!! jacob must LIVE!! LIVE, I SAY!

 
Reviewer: edwards_forever Signed
Date: July 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Victory or Victoria? - Bella

more please?



Author's Response:

hehe oh trust me, i have about 6 chapters backed up!!! =]

 
Reviewer: edwards_forever Signed
Date: July 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Victory or Victoria? - Jacob

this is such a great story! i really like the twist on Jake's imprinting and i love his face off with Victoria. more asap! ♥

 
Reviewer: edwards_forever Signed
Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Control - Bella

i really love this fanfiction. i like the parts when its just about Bella and Jacob being in love.

 
Reviewer: edwards_forever Signed
Date: August 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Failure - Bella

NOO!! you can't kill jacob!!! it's not fair!!

 
Reviewer: edwards_forever Signed
Date: October 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Heart and Soul - Bella

i. love. it. amazing. really.

 




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