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Penname: HeToldMeBeSafe [ Contact]
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Summary:  
He's a young but jaded keyboard player writing lyrics for his band, Breaking Dawn, and she's a naive and frustrated poet looking to break out of her shell; their words collide on-line.
What happens when they meet in high school, unaware of their literary connection?
OOC, canon at heart.
Banner by FatApolloLove
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes
Word count: 146168
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: August 26, 2009
Reviewer: HeToldMeBeSafe Signed
Date: March 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue in Review
Loved this story! Have been reading it non-stop! You are so talented!
Summary: 
A look at the relationship & love of Edward and Bella, two self-aware teenagers who are forced to grow up quickly. Together, they battle problems and find their inner strength. No love triangles. Fluffy beginning, drama ensues, no dark themes. AH AU OOC All canon pairings E/B, J/A, Em/R, C/E
Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Word count: 32007
[Report This] Published: November 04, 2009 Updated: May 15, 2010
Reviewer: HeToldMeBeSafe Signed
Date: May 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Winter's Walk
Hi! I just wanted to tell you that I read this entire story over at FF.net and loved it! I'm now reading the sequel. You're really talented :D
Summary: 
He's 32, married and completely broken. She's 17 and a closet recluse. When Bella Swan finally breaks out of her isolation by getting a weekend job in a bakery and serves the broken man, they unexpectedly form a taboo yet beautiful relationship. ExB
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Word count: 69976
[Report This] Published: November 29, 2009 Updated: March 02, 2011
Reviewer: HeToldMeBeSafe Signed
Date: July 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: The Rude Awakening
Oh no... Charlie :( I know it's too much to ask for, but please let him accept it.. Maybe not at once, but gradually and not have a fit about it or forbid it completely!
He must see the changes in Bella?
Summary: 
The absolute last thing in Bella Swan's mind is uprooting her life, mid-semester of her senior year of High School, let alone move to Forks, the rainy, dreary town her homely father resides in. Yet the move brings her a sort of peace and optimism; things were definitely changing, and falling into a simple, easy routine. Enter the mysterious stranger Edward Cullen, who sweeps her off of her feet, exciting in her feelings of passion, hatred, and more importantly, passionate hate.
Will life ever be simple again?
AU / AH OOC
Based extremely loosely on Taylor Swift's "Love Story".
RATED NC-17 FOR LANGUAGE, ADULT THEMES AND CONTENT, AND LATER LEMONS!!!
amazingly, beautiful & fantastical banner by Ms. Ambrosia
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Word count: 54448
[Report This] Published: February 03, 2010 Updated: January 09, 2011
Reviewer: HeToldMeBeSafe Signed
Date: April 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5- Day 1: Cafeteria
Looking forward to next chapter! I love your story :D
Summary: Edward - hot high school hockey player. Bella - shy high school student. They've admired each other from afar, so what happens when they finally meet? Are they strong enough to handle a threat from his past? No good deed goes unpunished...
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes
Word count: 153840
[Report This] Published: March 03, 2010 Updated: July 17, 2010
Reviewer: HeToldMeBeSafe Signed 
Date: July 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35: Game On
I can't believe it's over!!!!
Best story ever!
I'm going to read your next story when that time comes ;)
Thank you for writing this amazing story! I truely loved and enjoyed it! :D Author's Response: Thank yo so much! I really appreciate all of your comments and reviews throughout the story, thanks for taking the time to let me know what you thought and that you liked!
Reviewer: HeToldMeBeSafe Signed
Date: May 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Screen
Gotta love Bella :D Stay away from her man! ;)
Glad they didn't show his face on TV, that would have been embarrassing! Edward is so sweet about waiting and not to rush her first time. I totally get that he wouldn't want Charlie to come in the door in the middle of it. Looking forward to the next chapter and Bella's bondage fantasies ;) Author's Response: B's got all kinds of feelings and emotions popping up - isn't that age so much fun? And yeah, Edward wants to give it up, but she matters to him, so he's a little nervous.
Reviewer: HeToldMeBeSafe Signed
Date: June 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: EPOV excerpt
I'm so glad we got the opportunity to read this. Thank you!
I loved EPOV, get a look inside his head ;)
Edward cares so much about her.
Thank God he told Tanya off! :D Author's Response: Thank you for wanting to read it - the response was great, and I'm just so happy you guys are interested!
Reviewer: HeToldMeBeSafe Signed
Date: May 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Score
They are sooo cute together!! I can't wait "to meet" Emmett.
Edward is such a sweetheart :) Author's Response: Thanks - so glad to know you're loving Edward in this adventure, too! Em and Rose up next chappie...
Reviewer: HeToldMeBeSafe Signed
Date: May 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Long Bomb
I love Emmett and Edward's brotherly love! And what a naughty boy Edward is! I really like Carlisle, he is a GREAT dad! He lets them do their thing ;) Looking forward to the next chapter :) Author's Response: Naughty Sofaward - yum! Carlisel and Esme raised those boys well, so they're comfortable enought to give them some leeway. More adventures in CA coming up next - thank you!
Reviewer: HeToldMeBeSafe Signed
Date: July 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve
OMG! This is so emotional written, I really feel for these characters. I hope everything will be okey, and that they find Victoria! Edward is truly a hero and I really hope he will be able to play hockey again. See you on Tuesday :D Author's Response: I know it's been hard, but I am glad to know the emotions are coming through. Next chappie is in queue, so it will be up soon! Thanks
Reviewer: HeToldMeBeSafe Signed
Date: May 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
Finally! I'm smiling like an idiot :D They are so cute together :)
Bree Tanner, fudge you!! I have a feeling we will hear more from her :( And that teaser you left us.. Not fair! Why are he showing it to the world? :S Author's Response: So glad you liked the refreshing little citrus! Lots more fun of all kinds to come.
Reviewer: HeToldMeBeSafe Signed
Date: May 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Home Ice
I love this story.. I catch myself smiling everytime I see you have updated :D Can't get enough. Poor Bella, a half naked Edward... It's a hard life ;P Author's Response: Aw, I love that it makes you smile - makes my day to hear it! I know - I figured Bella deserved some fun for all the UST I've put her through...
Reviewer: HeToldMeBeSafe Signed
Date: May 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: The Point
HockeyWard is HOT!! I liked the way you wrote the "I love you's" And when they stopped to help the old couple I was terrified someone was going to get hurt, like some kind of an serial killer was on the loose! Looking forward to the next chapter :D And I wish Bella good luck with getting her virgin status changed ;) Author's Response: Hockeyward is hot - oh, the visuals...love them! SOrry to scare you with the little do-gooder scene - but they came out okay...These two are ready for some parent-free time, and they'll get that and more next chapter! Thanks!
Reviewer: HeToldMeBeSafe Signed
Date: May 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Dropping The Gloves
Hahahaha, my stomach hurts! I absolutely LOVE Emmett :D
I'm sooo glad you didn't make Rosalie a bitch.. God Emmett cracks me up! Can't wait for next update on Saturday. I'm completely addicted to your story :) And i LOVE Edward's inner musings. I'm glad he gets the opportunity to act it out ;) Author's Response: Love hearing their antics made you laugh - thanks! And yep - Edward's got plans for their sleepover... ;)
Reviewer: HeToldMeBeSafe Signed
Date: June 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Clutch and Grab
Edward singing and playing guitar, HOT! I'm glad he liked Bella's bra and panties ;) Rose and Emmett are the best! :D
Yeah, you totally have international readers, I'm from Norway.
Awesome chapter(as always) Looking forward to HockeyWard on Saturday. Author's Response: Hi to Norway! I think it's great that we can share our interests around the world - so amazing! Glad you liked - and yes, there will be hockey next chapter!
Reviewer: HeToldMeBeSafe Signed
Date: June 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Dump and Chase
Tanya...*shudder*
I'm glad your Bella isn't insecure, and that she looks at the facts and don't go all apeshit! :D
And what's up with number 12?! I already hate that guy!
Looking forward to next chapter on Tuesday and Protectiveward! It makes me think of Rob in the clip from Eclipse with Taylor..Yummy ;)
And yes, I would like to see the scene with Tanya from EPOV. Author's Response: Glad you liked Bella's reactions - she knows her boy well and trusts him - plus she's seen enough of his turned-on face to recognize it whenshe sees it - or not! There will be more about the history between Edward and Lucar din upcoming chapters.
I hadn't thought of that clip, but...oh, yeah. Mmm, Angryward...
EPOV will be posted soon - thank you!
Reviewer: HeToldMeBeSafe Signed
Date: June 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: Face Off
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James Lucard is a lunatic!! I don't like this at all! He needs to see a shrink!
Looking forward to the next chapter, as always ;)
Author's Response: He's a nasty piece of work - big bully. Love knowing you're looking forward to more - thanks!
Reviewer: HeToldMeBeSafe Signed
Date: June 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25: Backchecking
Lucard.. He's nasty! I've always found it hot to get pinned to a car.. But not this time.. Nothing hot about it at all! He is a freak with mental problems!!!
I love Edward and Bella's hot sex!
And I'm glad Bella told Edward.. I hate reading those stories where she keeps stuff to herself, it never ends well!!
See you on Tuesday! :D Author's Response: Edward will tell Bella the story about nasty James next chapter, he's a scary creeper...Thanks!
Reviewer: HeToldMeBeSafe Signed
Date: June 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26: Slapshot
James is even more crazy than I thought! I hope you aren't going to be too angsty, I just can't handle it. Now I'm sitting here totally scared for what's going to happen next. Thank God Bella got Edward to change his mind! He's so dramtic sometimes. Author's Response: Edward and his overprotective overreactions - but Bella won't let him get away with it, she'll talk him down! And yeah, James is all kinds of crazy...
Reviewer: HeToldMeBeSafe Signed
Date: June 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27: Hip Check
Awww, he is such a sweetheart! And the meadow *melts*
And he wants to marry her *wipe tears*
I loved this chapter! Edward has everything planned out :D
I'm completely in love with your story! It's just getting better and better!
Keep up the good work! I've never reviewed a story chapter by chapter before, this is my first :) And I'm not going to stop;)
Author's Response: I love knowing you're enjoying so much it has inspried you to review each chapter - I can't tell you how much I appreciate the comments, and you telling me what you like about each update. Thank you - I love reading each and every one!
Reviewer: HeToldMeBeSafe Signed
Date: June 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28: Goal
Wow. A beautiful chapter :) Edward knows how to make a girl feel loved!
What a wonderful way to have sex without a condom for the first time :)
It really shows how much Edward loves her :)
I think Edward will get it right the first time ;)
I'm looking forward to the next chapter, as always. Author's Response: Thank you - love that you got what it meant to Edward. He'll do his best to get it right the first time - and his best is pretty darn good!
Reviewer: HeToldMeBeSafe Signed
Date: June 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl
Nooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!! What have you done!?!? No, no, no, no, no, no!!!
You can't kill him! Poor Edward!! James deserves to die!! Not Edward! :'(
Fix this!!! Now!!!! :'( They were so happy together:) This can't be happening! Author's Response: The next update should be coming very soon - I know, this was a tough chapter...but hang int here!
Reviewer: HeToldMeBeSafe Signed
Date: June 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30: Body Check
Thank GOD he is alive!!! I HATE James!! He needs to be locked up! I want him dead.. But I don't want it to be because Edward did it.. That would be too much for him.. So I hope James goes to jail and never comes out!! Haha!!
Looking forward to the next chapter ;) And I'm finally a bit relaxed. Author's Response: Gald it helped with the anxiety - next chappie, bella learns more about Edward's injuries - up on Saturday!
Reviewer: HeToldMeBeSafe Signed
Date: July 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32: Plus-Minus
I'm so glad his going to be better! :D
And I'm so relieved that his going to wake up next chapter!
I hope everything is going to be okey! Author's Response: I know - we'll get a little Edward - finally! - next chapter. Thanks!
Reviewer: HeToldMeBeSafe Signed
Date: July 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33: Off-Sides
Thank God!! Finally! Edward is going to be fine :D
I loved that he asked for a kiss, always so sweet! :)
And I'm glad he remembered the meadow :)
I'm glad things are getting back to normal next chapter :)
She deserves to molest him! Author's Response: So Edward to want a smoochie from his girl first thing...Thanks!
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